Poetry competition CLOSED 5th October 2018 6:00am
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Obsessed
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IDryad
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Poetry Contest Description
You are obsessed with someone or something
You are obsessed with someone or something and want to get rid of the feeling. What did you do?
two poems per poet
any genre any length
please title your poem
no collaborations.
two poems per poet
any genre any length
please title your poem
no collaborations.
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IDryad
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Obsessed
the breath from his mouth
breathed life to my being
his steps away from me
like razors cutting my heart
his absence threw me in a limbo
that wouldn't go away
until he came through the door
his nearness was my aura of heat
obsessed with him his body
his thoughts, his words
his presence
I tethered him to my desire
he cut the string one day
and never retied it
never returned
he just disappeared
getting over him was hell
there was nothing to hold on to anymore
my obsession with him died
all on its natural self.
-Not an Entry-
the breath from his mouth
breathed life to my being
his steps away from me
like razors cutting my heart
his absence threw me in a limbo
that wouldn't go away
until he came through the door
his nearness was my aura of heat
obsessed with him his body
his thoughts, his words
his presence
I tethered him to my desire
he cut the string one day
and never retied it
never returned
he just disappeared
getting over him was hell
there was nothing to hold on to anymore
my obsession with him died
all on its natural self.
-Not an Entry-
EdibleWords
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Fixation
Foot on the gas
Monkery's hand in the jar
Don't get to pass
You just went too damn far
What is holding your will power?
Everyone's seen it
Been the picture of it
Break your gaze
Change your pace
Hand on the ticket
Trapped by fixation
Don't think you get it
You're on your way
Beyond your self-control
Is it inspired
Or a mere fixation
So if your mired
Ask your golden Angels
If you can bear to listen
Monkery's hand in the jar
Don't get to pass
You just went too damn far
What is holding your will power?
Everyone's seen it
Been the picture of it
Break your gaze
Change your pace
Hand on the ticket
Trapped by fixation
Don't think you get it
You're on your way
Beyond your self-control
Is it inspired
Or a mere fixation
So if your mired
Ask your golden Angels
If you can bear to listen
Written by EdibleWords
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EdibleWords, thank you for kick starting the competition.
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Thank you ReggiePoet for your entry.
Medinda
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Strawman
On Cyprus Hill
I stand and build
The man I love
And love to kill
He's got no brains
Man's insane
But he's all mine
Strawman
Carefully, each wispy strand
Collected by my loving hand
Stuffed in his chest
Down in his pants
Now I'll make him sing and dance
A frolic in his step for hours
He picks a rainbow full of flowers
To wash away my pain
With the pyre that is growing
Soon our hearts will be a'glowing
If it only doesn't rain
On Cyprus Hill
I stand and build
An effigy
To burn all night
He's now complete
Part of me
Yeah, he's all mine
Strawman
Instantly, each wispy strand
Ignited by my loving hand
Bursts into flame
At my command
Now it's time for our last dance
Oh I, could tell you why
My desires burn no more
I could think of things
You never thunk before
Then watch you crash
Down to the floor
On Cyprus Hill
I'm standing still
Ashes blow
To feed the fields
He's gone away
Could not stay
But he's all mine
Strawman
Cautiously, each wispy strand
Planted by my loving hand
Returns to life
Throughout the land
Now soon again, we shall dance
I stand and build
The man I love
And love to kill
He's got no brains
Man's insane
But he's all mine
Strawman
Carefully, each wispy strand
Collected by my loving hand
Stuffed in his chest
Down in his pants
Now I'll make him sing and dance
A frolic in his step for hours
He picks a rainbow full of flowers
To wash away my pain
With the pyre that is growing
Soon our hearts will be a'glowing
If it only doesn't rain
On Cyprus Hill
I stand and build
An effigy
To burn all night
He's now complete
Part of me
Yeah, he's all mine
Strawman
Instantly, each wispy strand
Ignited by my loving hand
Bursts into flame
At my command
Now it's time for our last dance
Oh I, could tell you why
My desires burn no more
I could think of things
You never thunk before
Then watch you crash
Down to the floor
On Cyprus Hill
I'm standing still
Ashes blow
To feed the fields
He's gone away
Could not stay
But he's all mine
Strawman
Cautiously, each wispy strand
Planted by my loving hand
Returns to life
Throughout the land
Now soon again, we shall dance
Written by Medinda
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Cemetary Drunk
It's just down the road a few miles
from the hospital, that hospital
But they tried, So I can't be mad
It's in a place just outside Chicago
A very nice suburb to me
McDonald's world headquarters
Ray Croc would be proud, maybe not
Can't assume what a dead man thinks
I'm thinking about this on my way
Traffic, stop go. Stop go. Stop go.
Just want to get to you. In a hurry.
Finally, the gates that lead me there
Little winding paths for cars
Third one on the right
That's where you're waiting for me
So sweet, you're always waiting for me
I park, look around. See kids running
They don't see me, thank God
I pull out the paper bag and walk
We're having drinks tonight baby
I finally see the outline up ahead
Of the headboards of your neighbors
Yours lays flat with your name inscribed
Perfect for me to put my face against
As I lay on top of you whispering
You don't whisper back to me
Always so quiet these days even though
Sometimes we fight and I scream
And beg for you to speak to me
Say something, anything please!
But tonight we don't fight. Just love
I drink from the bottle, give you some
Not much, alcohol has always been
A weakness of yours you tried to hide
But I'm not telling anyone. Just us
We drink until I start crying again
I've always been one of those drunks
You let me lay with you counting stars
Unusual so close to the city, but
Tonight they shine for us, twinkling
I kiss your name. My lips on cold marble
Oh I love you so much my beautiful man
It's almost time for me to go home
I have to pick up the kids from a friend
Yeah, I'm an asshole because I was
Drinking and now I'm going to drive
But it was cheap wine not very strong
I don't want to leave you ever
Wish I could have a bed just like yours
Right now I can't afford that luxury
Raising kids gets expensive, one income
I leave without a word till I reach the car
Turning around to face you again
I yell at the top of my lungs I Love You!!!
Then I laugh because every time
It reminds me of the day I fell for you
You left the hotel where I worked
Just stopped for a quick lunch
When you went out to the car
me watching you from the lobby,
You yelled at the top of your lungs
I Love You!!! so loud I heard it inside
I still hear it inside. Every day and night.
from the hospital, that hospital
But they tried, So I can't be mad
It's in a place just outside Chicago
A very nice suburb to me
McDonald's world headquarters
Ray Croc would be proud, maybe not
Can't assume what a dead man thinks
I'm thinking about this on my way
Traffic, stop go. Stop go. Stop go.
Just want to get to you. In a hurry.
Finally, the gates that lead me there
Little winding paths for cars
Third one on the right
That's where you're waiting for me
So sweet, you're always waiting for me
I park, look around. See kids running
They don't see me, thank God
I pull out the paper bag and walk
We're having drinks tonight baby
I finally see the outline up ahead
Of the headboards of your neighbors
Yours lays flat with your name inscribed
Perfect for me to put my face against
As I lay on top of you whispering
You don't whisper back to me
Always so quiet these days even though
Sometimes we fight and I scream
And beg for you to speak to me
Say something, anything please!
But tonight we don't fight. Just love
I drink from the bottle, give you some
Not much, alcohol has always been
A weakness of yours you tried to hide
But I'm not telling anyone. Just us
We drink until I start crying again
I've always been one of those drunks
You let me lay with you counting stars
Unusual so close to the city, but
Tonight they shine for us, twinkling
I kiss your name. My lips on cold marble
Oh I love you so much my beautiful man
It's almost time for me to go home
I have to pick up the kids from a friend
Yeah, I'm an asshole because I was
Drinking and now I'm going to drive
But it was cheap wine not very strong
I don't want to leave you ever
Wish I could have a bed just like yours
Right now I can't afford that luxury
Raising kids gets expensive, one income
I leave without a word till I reach the car
Turning around to face you again
I yell at the top of my lungs I Love You!!!
Then I laugh because every time
It reminds me of the day I fell for you
You left the hotel where I worked
Just stopped for a quick lunch
When you went out to the car
me watching you from the lobby,
You yelled at the top of your lungs
I Love You!!! so loud I heard it inside
I still hear it inside. Every day and night.
Written by Medinda
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AEMelia564 and Medinda, thank you for your entry.
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Thanks again, Reggie:)
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Him
I feel myself slipping
With only him to hold me down
Slipping away from life
Trying to hold on
He holds me together
Giving me life with every touch
When he’s away
I feel myself slipping even more
Falling further into darkness
When he returns
My heart skips a beat
He gives me life and he doesn’t even know it
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Satansperm and stargazed thank you for participating.