Poetry competition CLOSED 2nd May 2012 6:37pm
WINNER
raorrick (Rachel O.)
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RUNNER-UP: kriticool

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Riddle me this

Whitewand6
Dangerous Mind
India 16awards
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goodest said:what is always warm but often cold
it is freely given but often stole
it is true blue but only seen as red
it win championships for some & put others to bed
it coulds so many thoughts yet its always plain & clear
& even more it is why we are all here....





My guess: Love


Ah! I had thought heart but chose to go with love. Mr. A!

Cinny
Fire of Insight
United States 4awards
Joined 21st Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 983

Shedding skin and praying for love,
but paying with the naivety of a heart.
Not sure how to respond
when the lights go on.
Mixed with tequila,
I'll watch and get lost in you.
That's your job after all,
It's what your paid to do.

Cinny
Fire of Insight
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Joined 21st Feb 2012
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Touch me again
with your invading fingers.
They're everywhere,
and they're tainting my flesh.
You were too strong and I too young,
Any means of escape from your body was impossible.
So I smiled through tears and said
'You've finally destroyed me'.

Cinny
Fire of Insight
United States 4awards
Joined 21st Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 983

The IV and the bruises
lost in the hospital bed
and the loss of hair,
how can you react you derange?
Sit back and relapse,
because it's all you know.
The pain won't save you,
and you're lost, withering from this disease.

kriticool
Fire of Insight
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Joined 1st Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 596

Cinny said:Touch me again
with your invading fingers.
They're everywhere,
and they're tainting my flesh.
You were too strong and I too young,
Any means of escape from your body was impossible.
So I smiled through tears and said
'You've finally destroyed me'.


Dental visit for a toothache?...that's right, Right?

.
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Cinny
Fire of Insight
United States 4awards
Joined 21st Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 983

kriticool said:[quote-79036-Cinny]Touch me again
with your invading fingers.
They're everywhere,
and they're tainting my flesh.
You were too strong and I too young,
Any means of escape from your body was impossible.
So I smiled through tears and said
'You've finally destroyed me'.


Dental visit for a toothache?...that's right, Right?

.
.[/quote]

LOL, not in the slightest. xD

ThorneTheRed
Thought Provoker
United States 2awards
Joined 19th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 193

A man stands before two identical speaking statues
One always lies, one always speaks the truth
In this room are two doorways, one leads to heaven, one leads to hell
He can only ask one statue one question
What question could he ask to insure that the door he chooses shall lead to heaven?

Indie
Miss Indie
Tyrant of Words
Australia 38awards
Joined 3rd Sep 2011
Forum Posts: 3271

raorrick said:Unknown

building; no one can hold it

exploding; tears all inside us

growling; we know its presence

escaping; to make everyone scatter

ensuring; the airs hard to breathe

spreading; all around quick and freely

controlling; the life of all who let it


Death?

drogedarain
CriticalMass
Thought Provoker
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Joined 26th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 93

Rachel Stress or perhaps tension?

poet Anonymous

Cinny said:Shedding skin and praying for love,
but paying with the naivety of a heart.
Not sure how to respond
when the lights go on.
Mixed with tequila,
I'll watch and get lost in you.
That's your job after all,
It's what your paid to do.


Strippers?

Indie
Miss Indie
Tyrant of Words
Australia 38awards
Joined 3rd Sep 2011
Forum Posts: 3271

Trapped in metal for vanity
Strung up, link upon link
Cold and meaningless
Full of hope and symbolism
Enclosed around cylindricals
To fall and rest at attention

lepperochan
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
Yemen 67awards
Joined 1st Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 14593

Indie , Diamonds ?

Indie
Miss Indie
Tyrant of Words
Australia 38awards
Joined 3rd Sep 2011
Forum Posts: 3271

Hmm... not actually what I was going for.

opheliac
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 29th Aug 2009
Forum Posts: 2122

Indie said:Trapped in metal for vanity
Strung up, link upon link
Cold and meaningless
Full of hope and symbolism
Enclosed around cylindricals
To fall and rest at attention



Hollywood movie stars?

Indie
Miss Indie
Tyrant of Words
Australia 38awards
Joined 3rd Sep 2011
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opheliac said:
Hollywood movie stars?


Love your answer but no.

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