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Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Poetry Contest

Poetry & Music

Go outside your comfort zone and challenge yourself, write a poem while listening to music at the same time you write, with or without lyrics.
Write about how this picture makes you feel and what you think is happening as it would relate to you or not.


One week
New poem ONLY
1.Poem/ prose
2.Grammar matters 😊
3.Name your entry
4. Include the music link you selected at the top of your poem.
5. Collaborations allowed



Listen to the music links, pick one and write along while crafting your poem.
Make sure you include the music link as the first line in your poem. These links should be hyperlinks so u should be able to copy and paste em.



This is a list of different types of music
Some have lyrics some do not

Vance Joy: Georgia
https://youtube.com/watch?v=mOxt2UiDeDY

Paper kite: Bloom
https://youtube.com/watch?v=8inJtTG_DuU

Beethoven’s: Moonlight Sonata
https://youtu.be/4Tr0otuiQuU

Boston: Long Time
https://youtu.be/TnwqUEelQjE

The Theory of Everything
https://youtube.com/watch?v=55885Qnt7Ps

Led Zepplin : Stair way to Heaven
https://youtube.com/watch?v=qnpZCB9BUIw

Creed: my sacrifice
https://youtube.com/watch?v=O-fyNgHdmLI

Hollow Coves : When we were young
https://youtube.com/watch?v=5J-tXfM2YO8

Disturbed : Hold on to your memories https://youtube.com/watch?v=8SCCqC-u-9o



Zazzles
Broomie
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013
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For those that have no music app download this app down here it’s free and safe.

https://apps.apple.com/us/app/musi-simple-music-streaming/id591560124

This is a great app, in that unlike YouTube, U can move around while using this app to listen to music.

UODATE: I will the night before this comp ends read each poem twice. Combined with the music and the vibe I shall pick the winner. To all who can make me cry I’ll make u a personalized graphic for your profile. Details to the winner/ winners at that time
Peek my profile to get an idea of what I’m talking about

wallyroo92
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Joined 11th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1874

The Wanderer

  
I am often filled with nostalgia  
 for something that always made me ponder  
The years seem to pass by in a flash  
 fondly remembering the paths I used to wander  
The games and places left me breathless  
 my young fragile heart sought so many chances  
The names and faces now seem ageless  
 as my old agile soul reminisces on romances  
In many of those sleepless nights  
 I felt like the new dawn would never come  
But as the star rose with delight  
 the new day brought hope under the sun  
And there I’d find some comfort  
 as the chance to love had come again  
But when the sun set in the west  
 the lonely night seemed to never end  
Sorry, I don’t mean to ramble on  
 but I walked a long road of debris and dust  
The everlasting longing and yearning  
 made me submit to my wonder and my lust  
Now I listen with vague memory  
 for the years spent empty and torn asunder  
Remembering with bitter melancholy  
 those strange nights when I used to wander
Written by wallyroo92
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slipalong
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 1st Jan 2018
Forum Posts: 861

Music of the night

Beethoven's - Moonlight sonata  
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Tr0otuiQuU&feature=youtu.be
 
The clouds that move in slow procession    
remember, never to the earth be tied.
Pensive, waiting for the moon's progression  
reflect the glow, whatever side.  
As the stars small, glitter. humbly,  
in major and in minor all combine,  
a chorus in the lunar summary  
as each day, at end, begin its prelude.  
Settled twilight as the bird set down to roost  
a timpani, a feather falling on the coup.  
 In the dimming, each mischievous sprite    
see the looming shadows lengthen,  
laughing, dancing in delight.  
The orb begins its vernal transit  
Earth, its child forever tied  
in gestation rise and fall, glowing, rising,  
ebbing, failing in each month, wax and wane.  
To be reborn, in the show of that proclaim.  
Plucking at the heartstrings, shinning brass  
reflection warm yet ever cold.  
In its snowy iridescence, some to slumber in its pass  
others pulling down their dreams, do you suppose?  
ray's so bound in pensive meanings,  
the wings of romance all unfold.  
Gather all the simmered angst,  
benign the climb in its conduct  
and to the gods we give our thanks.  
Satisfy all wishes, in mystery we stand dumbstruck.  
Yours and mine, a satellite that shines so bright  
the encore that repeats forever  
bring the music of the night  
   
   
   
   
   
     
 
Written by slipalong
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Bluevelvete
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Joined 21st July 2020
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PoetsRevenge
Dangerous Mind
United States 29awards
Joined 30th June 2016
Forum Posts: 749

Wallpaper Dreams

Creed: my sacrifice

https://youtube.com/watch?v=O-fyNgHdmLI
 
She cracks through  
a crepe-paper husk of fragile memory;  
her fragments scatter  
where glass water shatters,
every color in her image.
 
My one true eye sees her --
recalls in an instant coming alight
and how she was my candle drowning
in a dream as the band played on
all the while to her tribute.
 
I never left her there where
she broke through my fractured skin
to remain; burned, branded
as I grew old --
I am only young where she still is.
 
I give myself up in pale patinas
on crevaced blank pages uncrinkled,
the story never penned there --
but I can be relinquished in her
to stay buoyant;
partly obscured, partly ending,
never believed.
I rise with her sloshing tide
and in her wake, I'm free.
 
    .....
Written by PoetsRevenge
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Zazzles
Broomie
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1797

Anonymous said:<< post removed >>

Hi Rew, sorry it took so long to get back to you the picture & the music coincide I felt. Which is why I put the music links up. pick a song that you feel you can relate with while writing about the picture. So in short one and the same. 👍🏻
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Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1797

The Wanderer

  
I am often filled with nostalgia  
 for something that always made me ponder  
The years seem to pass by in a flash  
 fondly remembering the paths I used to wander  
The games and places left me breathless  
 my young fragile heart sought so many chances  
The names and faces now seem ageless  
 as my old agile soul reminisces on romances  
In many of those sleepless nights  
 I felt like the new dawn would never come  
But as the star rose with delight  
 the new day brought hope under the sun  
And there I’d find some comfort  
 as the chance to love had come again  
But when the sun set in the west  
 the lonely night seemed to never end  
Sorry, I don’t mean to ramble on  
 but I walked a long road of debris and dust  
The everlasting longing and yearning  
 made me submit to my wonder and my lust  
Now I listen with vague memory  
 for the years spent empty and torn asunder  
Remembering with bitter melancholy  
 those strange nights when I used to wander
Written by wallyroo92
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wallyroo92 said:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qnpZCB9BUIw


Thanks you for your entry wallyroo
Good luck 👍🏻🍀

Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1797

Music of the night

Beethoven's - Moonlight sonata  
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Tr0otuiQuU&feature=youtu.be
 
The clouds that move in slow procession    
remember, never to the earth be tied.
Pensive, waiting for the moon's progression  
reflect the glow, whatever side.  
As the stars small, glitter. humbly,  
in major and in minor all combine,  
a chorus in the lunar summary  
as each day, at end, begin its prelude.  
Settled twilight as the bird set down to roost  
a timpani, a feather falling on the coup.  
 In the dimming, each mischievous sprite    
see the looming shadows lengthen,  
laughing, dancing in delight.  
The orb begins its vernal transit  
Earth, its child forever tied  
in gestation rise and fall, glowing, rising,  
ebbing, failing in each month, wax and wane.  
To be reborn, in the show of that proclaim.  
Plucking at the heartstrings, shinning brass  
reflection warm yet ever cold.  
In its snowy iridescence, some to slumber in its pass  
others pulling down their dreams, do you suppose?  
ray's so bound in pensive meanings,  
the wings of romance all unfold.  
Gather all the simmered angst,  
benign the climb in its conduct  
and to the gods we give our thanks.  
Satisfy all wishes, in mystery we stand dumbstruck.  
Yours and mine, a satellite that shines so bright  
the encore that repeats forever  
bring the music of the night  
   
   
   
   
   
     
 
Written by slipalong
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slipalong said:

Thank you for your entry Slipalong
Good luck 👍🏻🍀

Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1797

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Bluevelvete said:

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/402473-the-duality-of-lost-love-and/


Thanks for your entry
Good luck 👍🏻🍀

Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1797

Wallpaper Dreams

Creed: my sacrifice

https://youtube.com/watch?v=O-fyNgHdmLI
 
She cracks through  
a crepe-paper husk of fragile memory;  
her fragments scatter  
where glass water shatters,
every color in her image.
 
My one true eye sees her --
recalls in an instant coming alight
and how she was my candle drowning
in a dream as the band played on
all the while to her tribute.
 
I never left her there where
she broke through my fractured skin
to remain; burned, branded
as I grew old --
I am only young where she still is.
 
I give myself up in pale patinas
on crevaced blank pages uncrinkled,
the story never penned there --
but I can be relinquished in her
to stay buoyant;
partly obscured, partly ending,
never believed.
I rise with her sloshing tide
and in her wake, I'm free.
 
    .....
Written by PoetsRevenge
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PoetsRevenge said:
Thanks for your entry
Good luck 👍🏻🍀

Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1797

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Ahavati
Tams
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Joined 11th Apr 2015
Forum Posts: 17066

The Theory of Everything

https://youtube.com/watch?v=55885Qnt7Ps
  
"I think we have a good chance of surviving    
long enough to colonize the solar system."
 
~ Stephen Hawking    
   
The alchemy of    
modern physics rests  
in general relativity—  
   
the gravity of understanding  
a Universe at large:    
galaxies, clusters, stars  
all holding position;  
   
and, quantum mechanics—  
smaller scale being:    
sub-particles, atoms, molecules  
electromagnetic forces  
occupying form    
   
The two are incompatible    
within a diminutive scale—  
planckions of tiny black holes;  
and an initial Big Bang    
   
Deeper frameworks of reality    
must be discovered    
to harmoniously integrate    
both into a unifying    
Theory of Everything  
   
Stardust drifts in our bones—  
atoms, sub-atomic particles:  
neutrons, protons, electrons    
vibrating musical strings    
of gravitational mergings—  
   
creating, and re-creating    
our bodies over and again  
throughout lifetimes  
until fully fused as ONE—  
   
tearing assunder the veil  
we so long believed separated
infinite and unknown
dimensions between us    
~
Written by Ahavati (Tams)
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