The Road Less Traveled
Ahavati
Tams
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Tams
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th Apr 2015Forum Posts: 16944
Stars
( after Robert Frost )
I saw them once, at first light
glistening upon water --
drifting aimlessly, shooting ducks
ignorant of slaughter --
Their light-force dwindling rapidly;
I wanted to warn them, Run! --
Sunrise will assimilate you!
But, my heart held back words
They appeared content, trusting fate;
I could do no more than watch --
suddenly realizing Death
is full payment for Life
What was it I wished for
( while ignorant of sorrow )
as they plummeted earthward;
Wisdom, wasn't it . . .
~
I saw them once, at first light
glistening upon water --
drifting aimlessly, shooting ducks
ignorant of slaughter --
Their light-force dwindling rapidly;
I wanted to warn them, Run! --
Sunrise will assimilate you!
But, my heart held back words
They appeared content, trusting fate;
I could do no more than watch --
suddenly realizing Death
is full payment for Life
What was it I wished for
( while ignorant of sorrow )
as they plummeted earthward;
Wisdom, wasn't it . . .
~
Written by Ahavati
(Tams)
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jemac
Forum Posts: 237
Dangerous Mind
4
Joined 25th Jan 2013Forum Posts: 237
Winter In a Room
thin curtains adorned with leaves hang from tall windows, slightly folding against the chill.
trees now bare remain still, there is no more rustling of leaves in the wind, just a crackling of boughs adjusting to the falling temperatures
sun splinters through bare branches casting yellow light that remains cold to the touch, outer limbs stretch steeley fingers grappling for warmth
heat in the room rises, billowing the golden curtains to rustling the leaves against framed glass where trees can only look on and see what they once had is now locked inside
"Made the great tree seem as a little bird
Before the mystery of glass!"
#RobertFrost
trees now bare remain still, there is no more rustling of leaves in the wind, just a crackling of boughs adjusting to the falling temperatures
sun splinters through bare branches casting yellow light that remains cold to the touch, outer limbs stretch steeley fingers grappling for warmth
heat in the room rises, billowing the golden curtains to rustling the leaves against framed glass where trees can only look on and see what they once had is now locked inside
"Made the great tree seem as a little bird
Before the mystery of glass!"
#RobertFrost
Written by jemac
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Amorous_tryst
Forum Posts: 945
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 12th June 2017Forum Posts: 945
Collateral Damage?
seeking solace within the bar
thinking money's now their test
and gazing at the bare tip jar
sans the beating on their breasts
gone their jobs, their livelihood
how long they've missed that factory whistle
remembering of where it stood
for the making of iron pipes and nipples
"another round", they call to Doug
as creaks the stool upon they sit
watch the flow from tap to mug
killing time by smaller sips
yet, cross an ocean or maybe sea
distant brothers now have a chance
new hopes that lives will better be
for it's different from where we glance
some wish to blame those greedy men
chasing profits, the bottom line
but if one thinks far deeper in
truer reasons may come to mind
money, like water, ebbs and flows
'til stilled by a level field
supply and demand is how it goes
and some will be forced to yield
an entwined world is being reached
global commerce is what's been chose
so pray some day it will lead to peace
for what country cuts off it's nose
#Robert Frost
Dedicated to Josh for his never ending prompts for world peace
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mcjay
Forum Posts: 514
Fire of Insight
6
Joined 11th Mar 2015 Forum Posts: 514
Anacampserote
Silvicultrix
Just random moves
with
The heart taken out
My love
My eyes
My passion
My respect
All gone
We moan.
Capernoited
Seeds of love
along
The alone tree
with
a lot yet to happen
our love
was divine
was pure
Where are you ?
are you listening ?
My words
My ideals
My love
...................Come soon.........................
Just random moves
with
The heart taken out
My love
My eyes
My passion
My respect
All gone
We moan.
Capernoited
Seeds of love
along
The alone tree
with
a lot yet to happen
our love
was divine
was pure
Where are you ?
are you listening ?
My words
My ideals
My love
...................Come soon.........................
Written by mcjay
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uma
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uma
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd Feb 2012Forum Posts: 1343
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PoetsRevenge
Forum Posts: 749
Dangerous Mind
29
Joined 30th June 2016Forum Posts: 749
The Road Not Taken (Autumn Woods: A Poet’s Road)
Deep in the woods I saw a clearing ever winding into its depths.
Pulled, I was to walk untoward, leveling each untrodden dirt mound.
I wondered what secrets could it hold, for what could I resist it without regret.
I had not seen all I desired to see and would by evening yet,
My resistance to my own curiosity fell in haste to the ground.
I felt a chill come over me, a crisp Autumn pang I imbibed,
I knew if I did not go forth the snow would bury truths undiscovered, unfound.
I wondered what was under each leaf, what had I yet not greeted alive.
To acknowledge this place, only I could, only in this way would I so arrive:
To greet the magic before a snow would cloak the blanket of leaves so brown.
I knew a road lie beneath it all for the way was open and still,
As I took each careful step into a world where no one had recently been,
I saw a way to go ahead, branches were parted, unbroken of will.
I had ventured forth well beyond my comforting homesteaders mill.
A tranquility donned, I heard the leaves speaking all in refrain,
Their language uncoded by a swift and lofty breeze;
My feet gave them voices to amplify theirs, so lowly and spent,
Intuitions the trees had shed became mine in surpassing their color peak.
I chose a path on which to tread, into my own heart not quite out of reach,
where no soul had yet opened eyes with full vision to plumb its depths.
.....
#RobertFrost
Pulled, I was to walk untoward, leveling each untrodden dirt mound.
I wondered what secrets could it hold, for what could I resist it without regret.
I had not seen all I desired to see and would by evening yet,
My resistance to my own curiosity fell in haste to the ground.
I felt a chill come over me, a crisp Autumn pang I imbibed,
I knew if I did not go forth the snow would bury truths undiscovered, unfound.
I wondered what was under each leaf, what had I yet not greeted alive.
To acknowledge this place, only I could, only in this way would I so arrive:
To greet the magic before a snow would cloak the blanket of leaves so brown.
I knew a road lie beneath it all for the way was open and still,
As I took each careful step into a world where no one had recently been,
I saw a way to go ahead, branches were parted, unbroken of will.
I had ventured forth well beyond my comforting homesteaders mill.
A tranquility donned, I heard the leaves speaking all in refrain,
Their language uncoded by a swift and lofty breeze;
My feet gave them voices to amplify theirs, so lowly and spent,
Intuitions the trees had shed became mine in surpassing their color peak.
I chose a path on which to tread, into my own heart not quite out of reach,
where no soul had yet opened eyes with full vision to plumb its depths.
.....
#RobertFrost
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wallyroo92
Forum Posts: 1871
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1871
Promises to Keep
I. December
The clouds came over the valley,
Bringing the much needed winter rain,
And though we needed it so badly,
I didn’t realize the conditions sadly,
Would also bring me a bit of pain.
The path between the mountains
Had been closed due to snow,
And so I found myself surrounded,
By weary travelers also grounded,
Who had to wait until tomorrow.
But I had made a promise to my son,
That I would there in the morning,
Some of them turned back one by one,
But I could not sit still or wait for the sun
The pass was under a weather warning
II. Under the Stars
As I waited there by the road it seemed
The hours were so slow,
I could not wait for the first morning light,
But still the path was under snow.
It felt as if all this I had previously dreamed,
Waiting there by the road
That this long night held me still,
My heart carried a heavy load.
And for hours my soul cried and screamed,
I needed to go see my son,
I had a promise to keep but still,
Mother Nature’s fury had won.
III. The Road Not Taken
When the night finally became clear,
It revealed a sky full of bright stars,
All weary travelers began to cheer,
After the weather had been severe,
We could soon start driving our cars.
But still the mountain was dangerous,
Under that heavy blanket of snow,
It was going to be very treacherous,
Even if I wasn’t being adventurous,
But I had a promise, so I drove very slow.
At first I thought I was mistaken,
When halfway through the pass I got lost,
Then I remembered and became shaken,
There was a safer road I could have taken,
Now I’m in the path of a serious Frost.
#RobertFrost
The clouds came over the valley,
Bringing the much needed winter rain,
And though we needed it so badly,
I didn’t realize the conditions sadly,
Would also bring me a bit of pain.
The path between the mountains
Had been closed due to snow,
And so I found myself surrounded,
By weary travelers also grounded,
Who had to wait until tomorrow.
But I had made a promise to my son,
That I would there in the morning,
Some of them turned back one by one,
But I could not sit still or wait for the sun
The pass was under a weather warning
II. Under the Stars
As I waited there by the road it seemed
The hours were so slow,
I could not wait for the first morning light,
But still the path was under snow.
It felt as if all this I had previously dreamed,
Waiting there by the road
That this long night held me still,
My heart carried a heavy load.
And for hours my soul cried and screamed,
I needed to go see my son,
I had a promise to keep but still,
Mother Nature’s fury had won.
III. The Road Not Taken
When the night finally became clear,
It revealed a sky full of bright stars,
All weary travelers began to cheer,
After the weather had been severe,
We could soon start driving our cars.
But still the mountain was dangerous,
Under that heavy blanket of snow,
It was going to be very treacherous,
Even if I wasn’t being adventurous,
But I had a promise, so I drove very slow.
At first I thought I was mistaken,
When halfway through the pass I got lost,
Then I remembered and became shaken,
There was a safer road I could have taken,
Now I’m in the path of a serious Frost.
#RobertFrost
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Selosa67
Forum Posts: 53
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 9th Dec 2018Forum Posts: 53
If I Followed You Home
A cute little look
A cute little stare
I hope to make your heart go aflare
Would you say you love me
Would you say you care
Wouldn't you say we make a cute little pair
Although you may have such a handsome tone
I do prefer more than the phone
Would you, could you keep me
If followed you home
A cute little stare
I hope to make your heart go aflare
Would you say you love me
Would you say you care
Wouldn't you say we make a cute little pair
Although you may have such a handsome tone
I do prefer more than the phone
Would you, could you keep me
If followed you home
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gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Forum Posts: 188
Daniel Long
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The Tears Not Raining
Two tear-rivers diverged in a dark wood,
And sorry I could not dam it both
And be it I’ve longed to change; I should,
And with parting eyelids, as far as I could
To where I tear in the rain;
Then locked both the eyelids, as just as teary,
And quench perhaps their better cry,
Because it was thundery, and wanted misery;
Though as for that within the passing the rain I was sly
Had falling tear-showers really be from the sinking sky,
And both his eyes on the world equally keen
In rain no tears had trodden seen.
Oh, sorrowed storms hid his bursting poetic-stream!
Yet knowing how sobbing leads onto wandering,
If ever should come back the sun, he’d be gone.
I shall be telling this with a hesitance
But somewhere ages and ages ago he died:
Two tear-rivers diverged in his poetic, blizzardy-mind,
Succumbing to the one less sufferance
And that has solaced all the difference.
#RobertFrost
And sorry I could not dam it both
And be it I’ve longed to change; I should,
And with parting eyelids, as far as I could
To where I tear in the rain;
Then locked both the eyelids, as just as teary,
And quench perhaps their better cry,
Because it was thundery, and wanted misery;
Though as for that within the passing the rain I was sly
Had falling tear-showers really be from the sinking sky,
And both his eyes on the world equally keen
In rain no tears had trodden seen.
Oh, sorrowed storms hid his bursting poetic-stream!
Yet knowing how sobbing leads onto wandering,
If ever should come back the sun, he’d be gone.
I shall be telling this with a hesitance
But somewhere ages and ages ago he died:
Two tear-rivers diverged in his poetic, blizzardy-mind,
Succumbing to the one less sufferance
And that has solaced all the difference.
#RobertFrost
Written by gothicsurrealism
(Daniel Long)
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PoetsRevenge
Forum Posts: 749
Dangerous Mind
29
Joined 30th June 2016Forum Posts: 749
Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening (Endless Winter: A Poet's Heart)
Whereby each flake of downy transience
Aloof, finds not earthly sense,
But to land, it is recieved:
Conforms to its ground on a patchworked fence.
A farmhouse afar is a block enshrouded
Never moving to find us of it clouded,
Housing each protected hay-bale and beast to serve us
It waits so unmoved and ever so grounded.
As my steps sink ever lower to reach
A half-frozen sod to soak my feet
I think of how well the barn keeps dry,
I wonder how much like us, its woodwork is incomplete.
A crystalline scene, I blink back the cold
Eyelashes frosted, of the shelter be told:
Let me be out here instead,
I need not anywhere yet to lay my head.
.....
#RobertFrost
(A second entry/non-entry)
Aloof, finds not earthly sense,
But to land, it is recieved:
Conforms to its ground on a patchworked fence.
A farmhouse afar is a block enshrouded
Never moving to find us of it clouded,
Housing each protected hay-bale and beast to serve us
It waits so unmoved and ever so grounded.
As my steps sink ever lower to reach
A half-frozen sod to soak my feet
I think of how well the barn keeps dry,
I wonder how much like us, its woodwork is incomplete.
A crystalline scene, I blink back the cold
Eyelashes frosted, of the shelter be told:
Let me be out here instead,
I need not anywhere yet to lay my head.
.....
#RobertFrost
(A second entry/non-entry)
Written by PoetsRevenge
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Ahavati
Tams
Forum Posts: 16944
Tams
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th Apr 2015Forum Posts: 16944
PoetsRevenge, which would you like judged? It's your choice.