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IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Poetry Contest

Have you ever been miserable? How did you get out of it?
A bend in the road is not the end of the road... unless you fail to make the turn. ~Author Unknown
Have you ever been miserable? Why? How did you snap out of it?
Poem, any length, two entries per poet, no collaboration, must be new work only. And title your poem..

Trixareforkids
Dangerous Mind
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FYI, The quote is widely attributed to Hellen Keller.

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IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Trixareforkids said:FYI, The quote is widely attributed to Hellen Keller.
Thanks for the information, Trixareforkids! Wow I didn't know that.
There you go, Poets all...  

Trixareforkids
Dangerous Mind
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Indeed :)

Jadedembers
Starving demons
Fire of Insight
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SamiBmuse
Thought Provoker
United Kingdom
Joined 9th July 2017
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Ok I will try again....

SamiBmuse
Thought Provoker
United Kingdom
Joined 9th July 2017
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Drowning Without You

Tears flow, dripping endlessly
Onto my pillow
My sight blurred
Being without you
Rips my soul to shreds
I can't breathe

Hoping beyond hope
That this love will be
Returned
But deep down knowing
You are outside my reach

My chest spasms
As I clutch my heart
It breaks into a
Million pieces
Excruciating

Wanting but never
Being wanted in return
So I wallow
In my own
Self
Pity

Darkness is all I see
No way out
No light
At the end
Of
My
Tunnel

Demons clawing
At my skin
Shredding me
Into a bloody pulp
No room to let
The
Light
In

Without you
I am lost in the maze
Of my own
Self destruction
Cutting my hair
Cutting my skin
The scars deep
Within me

Hold me
Just one more time
Let your lips linger
Over mine
Just for a moment
Just to stop
These tears
From
Drowning
Me
Please
Written by SamiBmuse
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IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Jadedembers and SamiBmuse, thank you for your respective entries.

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IDryad
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Misery's woman

hands washed and dried
on her apron
tied to the sink
the children's needy screams
her companion

he never brought flowers
for her chapped hands
never flashed a thank you smile
for all her sacrifices
she was board


-not an entry-

David_Macleod
14397816
Tyrant of Words
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Misery

Misery like a shadow, slowly creeps over me
It just happens to be my own shadow

It presses down on me, shoulder and head
Pushing them into the pit of my stomach

It doesn’t always come with its ally of tears
But when it does, oh how they flow

Sometimes it manifests is nightmares and flashbacks
Other times my mood is very low to the ground

I can stare out of the window for hours, night or day
There is nothing I see, recognise or remember

They say ‘Misery loves company.’ I, however, do not
I pretend for others, then, the low is even lower

Sometimes the descent is fast, deep and very dark
The whole atmosphere is oppressive, maybe evil?

I can be in the sunniest of rooms, bathed in sunlight
It still feels like a dark, dank and musty cellar

Suicidal thoughts of morbidity sometimes pay a visit
I am thankful for logic and reason: I’m not that brave

It is not something I can snap myself out of: I’ve tried
Human encouragement like the drugs, don’t work

A nagging partner and a moaning child doesn’t help
Friends now choose to avoid melancholic interactions

Misery is something you own; it’s just a gift for you
A gift wrapped in black tissue paper, you give to yourself

However one morning your face meets the sunrise and smiles
The downward pressure has disappeared, you relax and sigh

You become yourself again, starting to take an interest in things
Life returns to normal, whatever normal really is?

If I could really bottle the thing that brings me out of misery
I would never be miserable ever again

My therapist concludes Bi-polar, I conclude melancholia
It’s some thing you can just choose to live with, drug free

There’s a strangeness; I can write comedic poetry in misery
And write miserable poetry whilst relatively happy

I think creativity is silently harvested from the sub conscious
It is, or can be, harvested regardless of mood

Maybe there is nothing wrong with being in misery
Maybe it’s just as natural as being happy

Maybe trying hard to get out of misery is counter productive
Maybe chilling out with misery is the answer?

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IDryad
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Thank you for your entry, David.

Jadedembers
Starving demons
Fire of Insight
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IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Thank you Jadedembers for your entry.

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IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Misery's

misery
sweat streaming down
from her hairline
her rounded bum
on the folding chair

she won't
hated
but she succumbed
much to her misery

as her spoon dug
on the moist chocolate
cake.

-not an entry-

eswaller
Dangerous Mind
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Overcoming Misery

I miss your face, your voice and everything about you,
But there is nothing I can do to get it all back. I wish that
I can scream until my voice is gone and my throat is blue.
Sometimes I wish my heart would give up and get a flat
Line. I wish I can punch a wall until there is no more of it
Left. I want to feel bloodied, bruised, empty and numb
Rather than feeling every single emotion that will hit
Me all at once. Darling, I know that there will be some
Parts of me that are missing because you have them,
But I do not want them back and now they are a part
Of you. It is like the flower that blossoms and grows
Like a weed on the sidewalk. I thought I would be smart
And wise enough to not play with fire, but the shadows
Are creeping up on me. I have succumbed to the misery
Trying to weigh me down, but I have to think of the other
Flowers that bloom in the darkness and light. The mystery
Of escaping the inner turmoil and things that smother
Me like a pillow are no longer trying to make its way
To the surface. Misery is no longer a friend of mine as
It sneaks in like a poison and cancer. It attempts to stay
And manifest into dreams that go to die. It has
Become despair and hopelessness. The best thing to
Do is to fight it and fight it again until there is only you.
Written by eswaller
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