What Makes a Poem A Poem?
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
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oops...
see below
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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
Dear Kindred Writer
Perfection means there's nowhere else to go,
And if you think you've reached its lofty ranks
You'll need to daily prove as time will show.
Within our minds we hear a different song,
I'll want to dance a heady waltz with you
And twirl you off the page we stand upon.
Embrace a spell or faith, destroy a curse;
A poet writes to die and live again,
This process brought about within a verse.
It all depends on how you will express,
To be an Epoch tale or Senryu;
Be sure to use the form that says it best.
This humble sage to share my kindred side,
With thanks I here conclude in cordial bow
Your pen's salute & love with ink supply xo
April 30 ( NaPoWriMo 20017 )
And if you think you've reached its lofty ranks
You'll need to daily prove as time will show.
Within our minds we hear a different song,
I'll want to dance a heady waltz with you
And twirl you off the page we stand upon.
Embrace a spell or faith, destroy a curse;
A poet writes to die and live again,
This process brought about within a verse.
It all depends on how you will express,
To be an Epoch tale or Senryu;
Be sure to use the form that says it best.
This humble sage to share my kindred side,
With thanks I here conclude in cordial bow
Your pen's salute & love with ink supply xo
April 30 ( NaPoWriMo 20017 )
Written by Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
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Fizzle
Ammiture
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Ammiture
Twisted Dreamer
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Thanks for your entries Arch, Wally and Jade!
walker
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111
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the delivery
a poem
is but a bunch
of words hangin' out
that's what is
obviously observed
them hangin out
said emily*
is democratic
what ever it is
it is
the sum of their whole
rather than
the hole of their sum
is what actually
makes that bunch
a poem
what they deliver
how they deliver
matters
but not that much
that
it delivers
those emotions
those effects
those personal effects
we all carry
in the pockets
called
our hearts
after all
poetry is
but stains on paper
and
on some
heart
is but a bunch
of words hangin' out
that's what is
obviously observed
them hangin out
said emily*
is democratic
what ever it is
it is
the sum of their whole
rather than
the hole of their sum
is what actually
makes that bunch
a poem
what they deliver
how they deliver
matters
but not that much
that
it delivers
those emotions
those effects
those personal effects
we all carry
in the pockets
called
our hearts
after all
poetry is
but stains on paper
and
on some
heart
Written by walker
(111)
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Fizzle
Ammiture
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Ammiture
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Thanks for your entry, walker!
Fizzle
Ammiture
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Ammiture
Twisted Dreamer
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Thank you all for your magnificent entries! It was truly difficult to pick a winner, so many great writes!
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
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Hi host Fizzle, and thanks so much for the opportunity of being able to address a theme that's always been very close to my heart! I'm honored to be a runner-up along with the talents of Tim, and winner of the cup Wally! Congratulations, I'm thrilled to have been able to join in and share the podium with you both! Such a wonderful harvest of entries by all on board!
walker
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congratulations. tho a couldn' even sniff the podium, it was sure some fun. inspired me into writin a pome.
wallyroo92
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Congratulations to Tim and Jade for standing here on the stage. To the other entrant who had intriguing pieces. Thank you to Fizzle for hosting this comp. It's an honor.