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Dear Kindred Writer
Perfection means there's nowhere else to go,
And if you think you've reached its lofty ranks
You'll need to daily prove as time will show.
Within our minds we hear a different song,
I'll want to dance a heady waltz with you
And twirl you off the page we stand upon.
Embrace a spell or faith, destroy a curse;
A poet writes to die and live again,
This process brought about within a verse.
It all depends on how you will express,
To be an Epoch tale or Senryu;
Be sure to use the form that says it best.
This humble sage to share my kindred side,
With thanks I here conclude in cordial bow
Your pen's salute & love with ink supply xo
April 30 ( NaPoWriMo 20017 )
And if you think you've reached its lofty ranks
You'll need to daily prove as time will show.
Within our minds we hear a different song,
I'll want to dance a heady waltz with you
And twirl you off the page we stand upon.
Embrace a spell or faith, destroy a curse;
A poet writes to die and live again,
This process brought about within a verse.
It all depends on how you will express,
To be an Epoch tale or Senryu;
Be sure to use the form that says it best.
This humble sage to share my kindred side,
With thanks I here conclude in cordial bow
Your pen's salute & love with ink supply xo
April 30 ( NaPoWriMo 20017 )
Published 30th Apr 2017
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30th Apr 2017 12:40pm
I really felt this poem
Perfection is totally overrated. It's lonely at the top of your game
All the bumps and bruises along the way are your success in the making and that's the celebration, that you are doing the work .....
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Perfection is totally overrated. It's lonely at the top of your game
All the bumps and bruises along the way are your success in the making and that's the celebration, that you are doing the work .....
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30th Apr 2017 1:37pm
Thank you most kindly, sir, with the honor of having you visit for a read, insightful reflect, and the recommend. ~Jade
30th Apr 2017 1:50pm
I've died a thousand deaths and live to run again with the bulls... Excellent pen my dearest poet
30th Apr 2017 3:21pm
30th Apr 2017 3:40pm
Embrace a spell or faith, destroy a curse;
A poet writes to die and live again,
This process brought about within a verse.
It all depends on how you will express,
To be an Epoch tale or Senryu;
Be sure to use the form that says it best.
I love that this is the last of your WriMo entries...
Rather than giving us a convocation, you give invocation - I am reminded of the end of the Episcopal services I attended as a child - "Now go in peace to love and serve the Lord" to which the congregation responded "Thanks be to god!"
What a great run it's been, glad we both crossed the finish line...
thomas
A poet writes to die and live again,
This process brought about within a verse.
It all depends on how you will express,
To be an Epoch tale or Senryu;
Be sure to use the form that says it best.
I love that this is the last of your WriMo entries...
Rather than giving us a convocation, you give invocation - I am reminded of the end of the Episcopal services I attended as a child - "Now go in peace to love and serve the Lord" to which the congregation responded "Thanks be to god!"
What a great run it's been, glad we both crossed the finish line...
thomas
30th Apr 2017 4:10pm
Many thanks, dear thomas, for sharing such a reminisce with me, that helps me see even more clearly the effect of the spin I took for my outgoing entry. I love getting such feedback. And yes, crossing the line together at the end, both of us stronger for it as it was last year. ~queen T
Anonymous
30th Apr 2017 6:27pm
gah! who needs to be perfect when there's so much learning to do?
a great write jadey
xo
a great write jadey
xo
30th Apr 2017 9:37pm
*warm hug* Ohh thank you so much, dear Katja! And yes, those who think they've arrived will never learn to grow. I've never believed in perfection because I want to always strive to be better, and one can't learn how when they think they've reached it. xo
30th Apr 2017 11:10pm
What a great poem with which to end NaPoWriMo; and congrats for making it. "The ceremony is over, and a new one is about to begin". :)
Thank you so very much, dear Josh, for your kind words & appreciation! You were incredible in the NaPo, being one of only two who stuck to one specific poetic form. My personal congratulations...
~warmest
Jade
~warmest
Jade
2nd May 2017 8:23am
Impressive work, Jade, your poetry has so many shades.
'Die to live again,' a poet's creed...
'Die to live again,' a poet's creed...
Thank you so much, dear Kasai. You honor & bring that creed to life often in your own beautiful works.
9th Jun 2017 5:08am
Jade, I really enjoyed this write.
"It all depends on how you will express,
To be an Epoch tale or Senryu;
Be sure to use the form that says it best"
This stanza resonates. Form is so important in how one chooses to express their thoughts on the page to best represent to the reader the emotion, image, or even conclusion they wish to convey. Much of poetry is about interpretation of the reader/listener, but there is a real significance that is often overlooked: the intention of the writer, and how well that is communicated.
Thumbs up.
"It all depends on how you will express,
To be an Epoch tale or Senryu;
Be sure to use the form that says it best"
This stanza resonates. Form is so important in how one chooses to express their thoughts on the page to best represent to the reader the emotion, image, or even conclusion they wish to convey. Much of poetry is about interpretation of the reader/listener, but there is a real significance that is often overlooked: the intention of the writer, and how well that is communicated.
Thumbs up.
9th Jun 2017 1:20pm
Thank you so very much, Fizzle, I really appreciate you stopping by to embrace, share & express - it's really made my morning. And yes to everything else you stated about how it should be between writer/poet and reader/listener, because I know of the association so well. All the best to you, dear reader!
