Poetry competition CLOSED 10th August 2013 3:51am
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shaunda
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RUNNERS-UP: Kou_Indigo and LobodeSanPedro

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Crush Your Enemies

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Deleted because you're not worth shit.

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yiyi
Tyrant of Words
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Brandon said:sure i do i am a fucked up person and i see it fit into a hateful disturbing feel. of course you dont like it and thats what makes it great.

for the love of God will you just STFU??? Seriously, everything you say is just damn stupid. Stop trying so hard to be flippant in your desperate attempts to fit in.
Ek is nou al net mooi fokken gatvol.

johnrot
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is that kid related to oblivion's paradox??????got to be.....

lepperochan
CraicDealer
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wow,  just when you think this place can't produce another fucktard with the brains of a slug, he makes a comment like that.

sorry for your troubles Missy. this muppet is beyond any words I could come up with.

EngrVV
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Miss_Sub said:Well, ladies and gentlemen. Our little friend Life here, AKA Vivid AKA Elyon has been hating me for two years now for absolutely no reason what so ever other than I once left him a comment on a poem he didn't like. If you look at his poems he writes about me every other god damn day and is what as known as 'a creepy motherfucker'. Martin Torres - I give you the king of the trolls.

So, you wanna get poetic? lets respond to this shit shall we.

The Truth

Most people can coincide,
Apart from the inconvienient few who
Read the words I have written and
Take one look and their
Impulses begin to crave. Their cocks twitch
Nervously, because this girl is a better grade
 
Than you.
Hiding behind abusive words with as much
Insightment as a
Soiled tissue.
 
Is that all you can manage? Your illiterate wank
Stains I am seen to be included in?
 
My spit, hot on your tongue because
You can't stop saying my name?
 
Truth. Now there's something you know
Relatively little about. Maybe I could make you
Understand this shit you do -
Truth doesn't come from rhyming 'you' with 'glue'
Here, it comes from the depths inside of you.
 
This i'm sure, is something you know nothing about.
Each day I
Live the words I say, and
Love this way, because I fucking choose to.

 
Missy logs on to here
Every day, and for the record is not afraid of you.
 
You will get your comeuppance I'm sure,
Our words are stronger than yours, and
Until you learn this, there
Really is no salvation for you, I'm
Sure.



Nice acrostic Missy! Is this the same guy that Lep mentioned who proclaimed himself the winner if his own competition? (He entered in his own comp using a different pseudonym...how low could he get?)

EngrVV
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johnrot said:is that kid related to oblivion's paradox??????got to be.....

Finally I heard from you...seems like you were missed a lot! How are you doing John?

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EngrVV
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OOOOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPSSS...my apologies to the host of this comp, DarkerHalf...I did not realize this was a comp. because of the above precedent post. I thought this was just a regular forum. Sorry!

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