Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Erotica and sex poetry
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wallyroo92
Poem Published
4th Oct 2019 11:50pm
4th Oct 2019 11:50pm
Jez
#lust
#erotic
#evil #scary
#evil #scary
789 reads
4 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 4:30am
27th Feb 2025 4:30am
Go To Bed
I do not want to sleep
You have no choice
I want to stay up and see
See what? Get in the bed
How about we have a chat
Enough stalling do you understand that
You're no fun at all
If you get in the bed we can have a ball
Oh you don't say
I do feel sleepy
Good I know you would see it my way
If I didn't what would you have done?
I have several instruments and I would choose one.
But I am being good...
You have no choice
I want to stay up and see
See what? Get in the bed
How about we have a chat
Enough stalling do you understand that
You're no fun at all
If you get in the bed we can have a ball
Oh you don't say
I do feel sleepy
Good I know you would see it my way
If I didn't what would you have done?
I have several instruments and I would choose one.
But I am being good...
#happiness
#sexy
216 reads
24 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 2:12am
27th Feb 2025 2:12am
One Result Of Helen's Parties
Faye woke up so hungover.
She saw herself naked in the mirror.
One result of Helen's parties.
She saw herself naked in the mirror.
One result of Helen's parties.
#alcohol
#corruption
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
114 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
27th Feb 2025 1:03am
27th Feb 2025 1:03am
My desperate pleas in rhyme
#erotic
#lust
#seductive
#sensual
#sexy
140 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 9:10pm
26th Feb 2025 9:10pm
Was Just Performing A Special Service
Richard went to the roof.
He spotted Tricia soaking in the jacuzzi.
She truly was enjoying it.
That was before Richard approached.
Tricia felt his hand and looked up.
She became shocked by Richard.
Then, another figure popped up.
It was their next door neighbor Tom.
They put their robes on.
Tricia tried to explain herself.
That was before Jodie walked towards Richard.
She said it was okay.
Tom was just performing a special service.
Just like on the TV show Satisfaction.
He spotted Tricia soaking in the jacuzzi.
She truly was enjoying it.
That was before Richard approached.
Tricia felt his hand and looked up.
She became shocked by Richard.
Then, another figure popped up.
It was their next door neighbor Tom.
They put their robes on.
Tricia tried to explain herself.
That was before Jodie walked towards Richard.
She said it was okay.
Tom was just performing a special service.
Just like on the TV show Satisfaction.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
#water
96 reads
0 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 1:25pm
26th Feb 2025 1:25pm
The New Woman
I envy her, the new woman,
Whose lips you now taste,
Gently, tenderly, like a secret
Whispered between breaths.
Her body is a temple that chains,
A captor of your soul I could not hold,
A purveyor of the sweetest euphoria.
She now lies beside you in darkness,
Her warmth, a stark reminder
Of the stranger now hold in my bed.
Forgive me, for I covet
The sinful thrill of your touch,
A remnant of longing for the forbidden,
A delight that dances with shadows.
I praise the new woman, this stranger,
The new keeper...
Whose lips you now taste,
Gently, tenderly, like a secret
Whispered between breaths.
Her body is a temple that chains,
A captor of your soul I could not hold,
A purveyor of the sweetest euphoria.
She now lies beside you in darkness,
Her warmth, a stark reminder
Of the stranger now hold in my bed.
Forgive me, for I covet
The sinful thrill of your touch,
A remnant of longing for the forbidden,
A delight that dances with shadows.
I praise the new woman, this stranger,
The new keeper...
#betrayal
#breakup
#sex
138 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 1:25pm
26th Feb 2025 1:25pm
Feeding time at the zoo
#animals
#fiction
#sex
#ShortStory
#violence
117 reads
9 Comments
Her
Poem Published
19th Jun 2022 8:20pm
19th Jun 2022 8:20pm
What's the Matter Daddy? - A MashUp with a Friend
#lust
#dark
#dirty
#orgasm
#collaboration
373 reads
8 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 8:06am
26th Feb 2025 8:06am
J.D
#dirty
#erotic
#passion
#seductive
#temptation
184 reads
10 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 7:49am
26th Feb 2025 7:49am
Mouth Organ
#orgasm
207 reads
8 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2019 10:44pm
3rd Oct 2019 10:44pm
Her Hungry Eyes
Late in the evening by the pale moonlight,
Her hunger strikes again,
She sees him, like he’s waiting for her,
Her feast is about to begin.
He doesn’t know it but she’s watching him,
The light shows her hungry eyes,
She wants him completely, all to herself,
Bring him to an unexpected demise.
Suddenly he knows and pauses and freezes,
He feels her warmth so close,
His heart begins to race, she’s so near,
She’s content with who she chose.
Their eyes meet, with lust and expectation,
For the ravaging about to take place,
She...
Her hunger strikes again,
She sees him, like he’s waiting for her,
Her feast is about to begin.
He doesn’t know it but she’s watching him,
The light shows her hungry eyes,
She wants him completely, all to herself,
Bring him to an unexpected demise.
Suddenly he knows and pauses and freezes,
He feels her warmth so close,
His heart begins to race, she’s so near,
She’s content with who she chose.
Their eyes meet, with lust and expectation,
For the ravaging about to take place,
She...
#lust
#evil
898 reads
11 Comments
BlkLyrycE
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 3:56am
26th Feb 2025 3:56am
Taste
#bisexual
#orgasm
#passion
#sex
#sexy
172 reads
0 Comments
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