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Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Published
Today 9:17am
Today 9:17am
you could make me so wet...
Fuck you and your pretty words
break the forth wall
and step through my headphones
and into my heart
You rip my ribcage right open
like the parts of me that beat
aren't surrounded by rusty hinges
that don't know how to let anyone in
You're just one king of many
in this twisted fairytale
and you edge me with your reluctance
to be anything less than a gentleman
Stop being such a fucking gentleman!
Fuck me with your pretty words
be the erotica you know I need to hear
while I fuck someone else...
break the forth wall
and step through my headphones
and into my heart
You rip my ribcage right open
like the parts of me that beat
aren't surrounded by rusty hinges
that don't know how to let anyone in
You're just one king of many
in this twisted fairytale
and you edge me with your reluctance
to be anything less than a gentleman
Stop being such a fucking gentleman!
Fuck me with your pretty words
be the erotica you know I need to hear
while I fuck someone else...
#dirty
#erotic
#lust #sexy
#lust #sexy
5 reads
1 Comment
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Published
Today 8:17am
Today 8:17am
storms never last
what walls
can
oppression,
intolerance
build
uninterrupted,
those willing
to sell
their values,
boundaries
set by
the minds
of ignorance,
but, there
are some
that can
see scenes
further away,
strength
in their
convictions,
one voice
can begin
to change
many, and
then change
can happen.
can
oppression,
intolerance
build
uninterrupted,
those willing
to sell
their values,
boundaries
set by
the minds
of ignorance,
but, there
are some
that can
see scenes
further away,
strength
in their
convictions,
one voice
can begin
to change
many, and
then change
can happen.
#culture
#freedom
#identity
#morality
#politics
19 reads
0 Comments
backdeckbenny
Published
Today 7:46am
Today 7:46am
Hmmmm!!!
It's hard.....very very hard.
It's wet......very very wet.
I know what your thinking while i'm hosing my driveway..
It's wet......very very wet.
I know what your thinking while i'm hosing my driveway..
#sex
13 reads
0 Comments
backdeckbenny
Published
Today 4:45am
Today 4:45am
Sleep is Death is Sleep
Went to bed to die
Slept through the whole damn darkness
Alive i write this
Je suis toujours en vie!
How wonderful.
Slept through the whole damn darkness
Alive i write this
Je suis toujours en vie!
How wonderful.
#gratitude
#happiness
#hope
14 reads
0 Comments
moon_bather
Published
Today 3:30am
Today 3:30am
the Tao
Horton got it right
We are a mere speck
Of a speck
Of a speck, et cetera
We can’t begin to fathom
Why we can’t fathom
What we can’t fathom
A million miles up there
Does not even begin
To touch the surface
Of the surface
The sun and the moon
Barely (in)significant
In its course
No comparison, immeasurable
There are no boundary lines
It does not break nor bend
There is no pre-emptive design
There is no end
You have no answers
There is no end
We are a mere speck
Of a speck
Of a speck, et cetera
We can’t begin to fathom
Why we can’t fathom
What we can’t fathom
A million miles up there
Does not even begin
To touch the surface
Of the surface
The sun and the moon
Barely (in)significant
In its course
No comparison, immeasurable
There are no boundary lines
It does not break nor bend
There is no pre-emptive design
There is no end
You have no answers
There is no end
#moon
#philosophical
#spiritual
#Taoism
#universe
24 reads
3 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Published
Today 3:10am
Today 3:10am
I'm happy just to know you're there
On occasion, our paths cross:
fragments of interaction
encouragement
kindness
laughter
Even more infrequently, a conversation:
immediately comfortable
close and vulnerable
deep support
understanding
more laughter
I won't tell you
how these connections light up my heart
To say it aloud
would bring a weight of expectation
I don't care
if it's mutual or not
I'm happy just to know you're there
When we are nothing but starlight
I'm...
fragments of interaction
encouragement
kindness
laughter
Even more infrequently, a conversation:
immediately comfortable
close and vulnerable
deep support
understanding
more laughter
I won't tell you
how these connections light up my heart
To say it aloud
would bring a weight of expectation
I don't care
if it's mutual or not
I'm happy just to know you're there
When we are nothing but starlight
I'm...
#crush
#friendship
#respect #support
#respect #support
24 reads
2 Comments
goldenmyst
Published
Today 2:07am
Today 2:07am
My Lioness Flickers Between Serengeti Moonbeams
My Lioness Flickers Between Serengeti Moonbeams
Our African vacation starts at a luxury hotel in Nairobi. But I pine for a photographic safari into the Serengeti. Over breakfast, I break some news for Jane. “Hey let’s try this on for size. Jane, I want to take you on a safari into Tanzania. Maybe we’ll have an adventure like in a J.G. Ballard novel.”
She says, “You’re so crazy, but truly we could face off with a pride of lions looking for supper. The signs ain’t good darling. The continental breakfast bar at this hotel is more than enough for me. We can go to the...
Our African vacation starts at a luxury hotel in Nairobi. But I pine for a photographic safari into the Serengeti. Over breakfast, I break some news for Jane. “Hey let’s try this on for size. Jane, I want to take you on a safari into Tanzania. Maybe we’ll have an adventure like in a J.G. Ballard novel.”
She says, “You’re so crazy, but truly we could face off with a pride of lions looking for supper. The signs ain’t good darling. The continental breakfast bar at this hotel is more than enough for me. We can go to the...
#Africa
#lion
#love
#marriage
#sensual
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SweetKittyCat5
Published
Today 1:23am
Today 1:23am
Impacted Heart
Upper Eastside
New York, New York
The Present 2024
Okay let me see how this story continues on
I have to recommend this book to my Book Club see if they can place it aside, its good enough for me to have been reading it all night long
Let me see here, oh yes, I was right here, she has been having nightmare
The Dragon King and The Bear King trying to find her lair
Oh, this Panther Queen bitch is on a spacecraft about to go down
Running from three dicks, and moving at the speed of sound
...
New York, New York
The Present 2024
Okay let me see how this story continues on
I have to recommend this book to my Book Club see if they can place it aside, its good enough for me to have been reading it all night long
Let me see here, oh yes, I was right here, she has been having nightmare
The Dragon King and The Bear King trying to find her lair
Oh, this Panther Queen bitch is on a spacecraft about to go down
Running from three dicks, and moving at the speed of sound
...
#seductive
#sensual
#sexy #mythology
#sexy #mythology
71 reads
1 Comment
DarkPopPrincess
Published
Yesterday 11:28pm
Yesterday 11:28pm
My One Wish
I don't ask for bravery like Paul.
Nor brute strength like David.
Nor wisdom like Solomon.
I asked to know
the suffering of Jesus Christ,
so we could be
deeply connected.
My spiritual brother,
Jesus.
Nor brute strength like David.
Nor wisdom like Solomon.
I asked to know
the suffering of Jesus Christ,
so we could be
deeply connected.
My spiritual brother,
Jesus.
#Christian
26 reads
1 Comment
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Published
Yesterday 11:03pm
Yesterday 11:03pm
out of place
sometimes
i may
seem
out
of place,
but i
feel
comfortable
where
i am.
i may
seem
out
of place,
but i
feel
comfortable
where
i am.
#freedom
#hope
#kindness
#passion
#strength
24 reads
0 Comments
adagio
Published
Yesterday 10:34pm
Yesterday 10:34pm
Twilight's Beguine - with Everavalon
Garments of nature woven by the winds
Fading into shadows of twilight's beguine
Unveiling sins haunting echoes of the night
Of the macabre's poetic brine
This cloth binds the envy of the whisperer
Fleeting unto chains with its breath
The moon glances lowly at these shadows
And measures the depth of its flesh
Fading into shadows of twilight's beguine
Unveiling sins haunting echoes of the night
Of the macabre's poetic brine
This cloth binds the envy of the whisperer
Fleeting unto chains with its breath
The moon glances lowly at these shadows
And measures the depth of its flesh
#collaboration
#dark
34 reads
2 Comments
Samnash
Sam Nash
Sam Nash
Published
Yesterday 10:18pm
Yesterday 10:18pm
B e l o v e d
B e l o v e d ”
I read the word chiseled on that headstone. I have always wondered if that was meant to be the noun “Beloved” or the adjective. Or maybe it was intended to be “Be-Loved.” One or two words, different meanings, different pronunciations, I can never tell.
I kneel on the damp ground on that cold December day, the same day of every year for the past eleven years. The day I lay my wreath and wait.
After sunset she comes on exactly that single day of the year. She kneels next to me holding one single rose in her hand and lays it next...
I read the word chiseled on that headstone. I have always wondered if that was meant to be the noun “Beloved” or the adjective. Or maybe it was intended to be “Be-Loved.” One or two words, different meanings, different pronunciations, I can never tell.
I kneel on the damp ground on that cold December day, the same day of every year for the past eleven years. The day I lay my wreath and wait.
After sunset she comes on exactly that single day of the year. She kneels next to me holding one single rose in her hand and lays it next...
#dark
#death
#dreams
#lover
#memories
38 reads
2 Comments
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