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nutbuster
D C
D C
Published
Today 2:29pm
Today 2:29pm
The Great Escape Chapter 13, Part 6 of 8
#anxiety
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeStruggles #passion
#LifeStruggles #passion
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TheOralizer
Published
Today 2:12pm
Today 2:12pm
LOVING WHAT YOU DON'T LIKE
OH
my amazing friend
and lover I want you
to know again as I've
confesses before that
I know there are things
YOU
don't like about yourself
such as your weight, but
I love, adore, and am thankful
that YOU are real and all YOU.
YOU
don't like the sound of your
voice and lack of perfect speech;
but my love every word you
speak is music and magic
in my ears.
OH
my love the list could go on
about the negatives you express
about yourself, but each one
is what I love, adore, and worship ...
my amazing friend
and lover I want you
to know again as I've
confesses before that
I know there are things
YOU
don't like about yourself
such as your weight, but
I love, adore, and am thankful
that YOU are real and all YOU.
YOU
don't like the sound of your
voice and lack of perfect speech;
but my love every word you
speak is music and magic
in my ears.
OH
my love the list could go on
about the negatives you express
about yourself, but each one
is what I love, adore, and worship ...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
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3 Comments
DetectiveOGasm
Published
Today 1:36pm
Today 1:36pm
Candy Cane Kisses
The candy cane
and that hook
you thought it was quite inventive
how he used it on you
dragging it along the skin
pushing it a little bit in
tasting a little sample
of mint and you
And it certainly worked
to impress,
only amplifying
how you felt
in that short Christmas dress
Of course, it was only the start.
and that hook
you thought it was quite inventive
how he used it on you
dragging it along the skin
pushing it a little bit in
tasting a little sample
of mint and you
And it certainly worked
to impress,
only amplifying
how you felt
in that short Christmas dress
Of course, it was only the start.
#Christmas
#erotic
#sex
31 reads
2 Comments
Kaden_Malis
Kaden Malis
Kaden Malis
Published
Today 11:18am
Today 11:18am
Lust
We melted into thick fog
Hand in hand
Watching the moon
Slowly rise and wane
Eyes fixed on each other
Spinning our web
Of selfish lust
Desiring to be fed
Unaware our creation
Was a poisonous parasite
And would slowly eat away
Until our desire would die
Hand in hand
Watching the moon
Slowly rise and wane
Eyes fixed on each other
Spinning our web
Of selfish lust
Desiring to be fed
Unaware our creation
Was a poisonous parasite
And would slowly eat away
Until our desire would die
#dark
#greed
#heartbroken
#lust
#sadness
24 reads
2 Comments
Zazzles
Broomie
Broomie
Published
Today 10:41am
Today 10:41am
The closure
There was still a part of me that felt connected,
but connected to what I thought, I am unsure at this time…
Perhaps my dysfunctional way of thinking?
or the power of attraction? Or both
Well whatever is was I found myself in new skin
for the first time in like forever and I spoke
without thinking about the consequences
of my own words and let it rip how I really feel,
“I am a woman hear me roar!” was my intent
After our “meeting, over lunch,” I came home alone
I opened the door to my apartment and looked around. ...
but connected to what I thought, I am unsure at this time…
Perhaps my dysfunctional way of thinking?
or the power of attraction? Or both
Well whatever is was I found myself in new skin
for the first time in like forever and I spoke
without thinking about the consequences
of my own words and let it rip how I really feel,
“I am a woman hear me roar!” was my intent
After our “meeting, over lunch,” I came home alone
I opened the door to my apartment and looked around. ...
#PowerOfWords
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Her
Published
Today 10:39am
Today 10:39am
Queen Bee (LibraSoul96)
Don’t mess with a woman
Who knows who she is
‘Cuz my girl does
Her lyrical liasons
Poetical persuasions
Rhythmic gyrations
Are unapologetically her
Determined
Sexy
Confident
Authentic
Creative
Sassy
I wanna hear her words someday
I imagine her poems
Rolling off her tongue
Like sweet honey
Tinged with
The heat
Of habanero
I’ll be the first to buy a ticket
When she hits the big...
Who knows who she is
‘Cuz my girl does
Her lyrical liasons
Poetical persuasions
Rhythmic gyrations
Are unapologetically her
Determined
Sexy
Confident
Authentic
Creative
Sassy
I wanna hear her words someday
I imagine her poems
Rolling off her tongue
Like sweet honey
Tinged with
The heat
Of habanero
I’ll be the first to buy a ticket
When she hits the big...
#admiration
#respect
#strength
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dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Published
Today 9:47am
Today 9:47am
beautiful moments
looking at the proud sun with yellow light
in a mix of daylight and deep shadow
under the cool breeze,
the waving sea and the soft sunshine
i am lying on the crumbling sand
some stories of life,
which are imprisoned in the new moon
i am making the full moon shine on them
look... today some waves
have taken over my bare skin
like i am wearing royal white-blue gown
hey!!!come close to me and
fall on me like a pile of morning
as you know naa,
...
in a mix of daylight and deep shadow
under the cool breeze,
the waving sea and the soft sunshine
i am lying on the crumbling sand
some stories of life,
which are imprisoned in the new moon
i am making the full moon shine on them
look... today some waves
have taken over my bare skin
like i am wearing royal white-blue gown
hey!!!come close to me and
fall on me like a pile of morning
as you know naa,
...
#emotions
#inspirational
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11 Comments
Her
Published
Today 9:31am
Today 9:31am
She’s Arrived! (fianaturie8)
She tip toed in
Quietly
Then
SHOWED UP
Her unique style
Attractive
Bold
Sassy
Sexy
Determined
Her poetry draws you in
My day is complete
When I read
Fia’s poetry and stories
She’s no slouch
She has aspirations
Goals
Her own poetry magazine
(Hypo Frost)
With plans for another
A published author
(Check out her work!)
A loving mother
A superb human being
I am wondering…
Where the heck
Do I get me some ...
Quietly
Then
SHOWED UP
Her unique style
Attractive
Bold
Sassy
Sexy
Determined
Her poetry draws you in
My day is complete
When I read
Fia’s poetry and stories
She’s no slouch
She has aspirations
Goals
Her own poetry magazine
(Hypo Frost)
With plans for another
A published author
(Check out her work!)
A loving mother
A superb human being
I am wondering…
Where the heck
Do I get me some ...
#admiration
#LifeAsAWriter
#respect
46 reads
5 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Published
Today 8:45am
Today 8:45am
dreams
people
i want
to
be with.
places
i want
to
go to.
things
i want
to do.
i want
to
be with.
places
i want
to
go to.
things
i want
to do.
#choices
#courage
#dreams
#hope
#strength
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AspergerPoet56
Published
Today 7:43am
Today 7:43am
Positivitly Blind Chasing Ghosts
there’s no
finishing line
up ahead
The road
is never ending
with teeth bared
the hounds are chasing
In the distance
there’s a storm
and a burning bridge
just another obstacle
i find in my way
how do I say
goodbye
to the doubts
hhey have become
old friends
each whisper
has me second guessing
every step
i make towards
a happy ending
so my actions
end up being
worthless
who’s gonna
catch my fall
who thinks
I’m worthy...
finishing line
up ahead
The road
is never ending
with teeth bared
the hounds are chasing
In the distance
there’s a storm
and a burning bridge
just another obstacle
i find in my way
how do I say
goodbye
to the doubts
hhey have become
old friends
each whisper
has me second guessing
every step
i make towards
a happy ending
so my actions
end up being
worthless
who’s gonna
catch my fall
who thinks
I’m worthy...
#apathy
#depression
#emptiness
#MentalHealth
#SelfWorth
31 reads
2 Comments
Anne-Ri999
Published
Today 6:46am
Today 6:46am
Yule
It is yester evening
a promise is given
earth is lifted
sun tilts solstice eyed
I virago
daughter of Spica and Vesta
my sable fur whirls
damp from my quill
in swan necked light
awoken from the belly of Draco
where I witnessed these worlds again
held by my ancestors
as a soul I chose
this gift of life
beholden to this chalice
please drink from it
sip, dance, sing
while you may
copyrights © owned by Rianne 2024
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a promise is given
earth is lifted
sun tilts solstice eyed
I virago
daughter of Spica and Vesta
my sable fur whirls
damp from my quill
in swan necked light
awoken from the belly of Draco
where I witnessed these worlds again
held by my ancestors
as a soul I chose
this gift of life
beholden to this chalice
please drink from it
sip, dance, sing
while you may
copyrights © owned by Rianne 2024
all rights reserved
#spiritual
#uplifting
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1 Comment
APissPoorShaman
Ryszard
Ryszard
Published
Today 5:34am
Today 5:34am
Wolves Mate for Life
Flickering
again
like god playing with a light switch
there, gone, there
unsure, doubts prevail
shaking my head
what did I actually see?
A beautiful face
a feral wolf
two images unite
and I just stare
into a dare
from blue/grey eyes
hearing a snarl in my mind
She writes something
slips it under my coffee at the counter
a phone number
with a missing digit
games
fuck, not going to call
But haunting eyes possess
three wrong numbers
on the forth got lucky, or did I? ...
again
like god playing with a light switch
there, gone, there
unsure, doubts prevail
shaking my head
what did I actually see?
A beautiful face
a feral wolf
two images unite
and I just stare
into a dare
from blue/grey eyes
hearing a snarl in my mind
She writes something
slips it under my coffee at the counter
a phone number
with a missing digit
games
fuck, not going to call
But haunting eyes possess
three wrong numbers
on the forth got lucky, or did I? ...
#dating
#FirstLove
#LookingForLove
#love
#werewolves
19 reads
0 Comments
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