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Under the Radar
I fly under the radar
Sure I'd like to be discovered
A little bit of fame
Some money
Cash validates creation
Not why I do it
I create out of need
If they discover me
That's when it get freaky
Change this
Tweak that
Make it longer
Make it shorter
I'll stay where I am
Just below the surface
Low flying clouds
My pillow
My town
Secrets close to the vest
Names changed to protect the innocent
Sure I'd like to be discovered
A little bit of fame
Some money
Cash validates creation
Not why I do it
I create out of need
If they discover me
That's when it get freaky
Change this
Tweak that
Make it longer
Make it shorter
I'll stay where I am
Just below the surface
Low flying clouds
My pillow
My town
Secrets close to the vest
Names changed to protect the innocent
Published 20th Aug 2020
Author's Note
Stay humble
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20th Aug 2020 1:39pm
20th Aug 2020 1:54pm
20th Aug 2020 1:48pm
When passion turns into a job, it can take a toll. But it can be done.
But flying under the radar can be more fun!
But flying under the radar can be more fun!
20th Aug 2020 1:56pm
20th Aug 2020 2:32pm
punkrock
self made man
cowboy code
incognito art
learned the ropes
knows the deal
stealth
proud
yet grounded
brutal honesty beauty
whiskey is on me for happy hour...
🥃
like
self made man
cowboy code
incognito art
learned the ropes
knows the deal
stealth
proud
yet grounded
brutal honesty beauty
whiskey is on me for happy hour...
🥃
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Yeah, it's been my way
You make money working for the Man
You make art working for yourself
It's when you go full Monty
and expose yourself you start to lose yourself ....
Call an Uber, let the whiskey flow ....
Thx b
You make money working for the Man
You make art working for yourself
It's when you go full Monty
and expose yourself you start to lose yourself ....
Call an Uber, let the whiskey flow ....
Thx b
20th Aug 2020 2:37pm
20th Aug 2020 2:39pm
A little peek inside your mind...revealing and amusing all the same. I relate quite well however, I myself have done the impossible (or nearly so) doing it my way! No, more like insisting on it. I'm very stubborn that way with my writing. Yes, PS, to thine own self be true. You write the rules. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! Great job!
20th Aug 2020 5:58pm
21st Aug 2020 7:30am
20th Aug 2020 8:30pm
It was freaky enough when I briefly opened up my poetry to close friends... can't imagine giving everyone that window into my mess.
I quickly hid again, and (for the most part) am hoping they've all forgotten I even write...
So, amen to flying under the radar!
I quickly hid again, and (for the most part) am hoping they've all forgotten I even write...
So, amen to flying under the radar!
20th Aug 2020 8:49pm
I'm sure they haven't forgotten
You might have some secret street going
Be proud of who you are k
You might have some secret street going
Be proud of who you are k
20th Aug 2020 8:56pm
20th Aug 2020 10:49pm
We share the same sentiment here. I mean, who wouldn't like to be discovered and make a little of what we love to do. Then again fame carries so many consequences.
Nice write sir.
Nice write sir.
20th Aug 2020 11:04pm
I’m a little fish in a big pond
That said just a few minutes a friend is starting to work on a website for me. I’ve done hundreds of images, I think I have to dip my toes in the water at some point. I’m sure fane is a long ways away ...
Thank you always for the reads and support !!
That said just a few minutes a friend is starting to work on a website for me. I’ve done hundreds of images, I think I have to dip my toes in the water at some point. I’m sure fane is a long ways away ...
Thank you always for the reads and support !!
20th Aug 2020 11:09pm
I work at a community college and one of the professors gave a lecture on how to start a website (using WIX). It's not that difficult, it's just time consuming. And of course with practice...
Would love to see all your digital images in a gallery.
Would love to see all your digital images in a gallery.
21st Aug 2020 00:28am
My friend is good at this
He was in publishing and marketing g mist if his career
He just did a site for his wife using Word Press
Looks pretty straight forward and not very expensive
He was in publishing and marketing g mist if his career
He just did a site for his wife using Word Press
Looks pretty straight forward and not very expensive
21st Aug 2020 00:31am
I'd like to watch you teach if that is indeed what you do.
I think you're one of the most insightful people on this site.
I very much like reading your work and hearing your take on raising kids and family
I think you're one of the most insightful people on this site.
I very much like reading your work and hearing your take on raising kids and family
21st Aug 2020 1:50am
Speak.. this is pure truth, amongst us rebels.. who do this for the purity, not to be edited or told how to do it.. we do what feels right.. A shot of bourbon, cheers..
Dave
Dave
21st Aug 2020 1:53am
That’s right Dr. D
I don’t do well wit people messing with my art, get your own I say
Thx
I don’t do well wit people messing with my art, get your own I say
Thx
22nd Aug 2020 1:45am
22nd Aug 2020 2:06am
