finite

I love this. I know the feel of this one.

thank you lovely one for feeling me.. love Crim

This is a heartbreaker, Lady Crim.  He's a fool to seek "the beauty of a lass" when he could enjoy a ravishing poet.  He'll grow old, get bored and realize what a fool he's been.  Then he'll hang himself on the words of Crim.  Just call it poetic justice....

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, but love is best blind, and crowfly said it best to begin with!

thank you Sir Crow though he really is a good fellow it just isn't meant to be between us.. that's why I said he would find a beautiful lass & I will remain unsatisfied do to my lust for him, choices i've made.. love Crim

thank you Lord Viddax I love how you put it.. love Brenda

My comment was a bit too harsh.  I should weigh my words more carefully.  Thanks for setting me straight Lady Crim.

aw now I feel horrible I love all interpretations of my writes could be you see something I didn't.. love you my friend.. xo Crim

crowfly said it better than I ever could, Brenda.

thank you dearest Jerry though like I told Sir Crow he is a good guy i'm just a bad girl ;) love Brenda

Excellent release dear Crim

thank you Tim.. love Crim

Damn... I hate that this one had you, has you forever in this turmoil... really need to
let someone unworthy of U go...be the fuck gone.... he sounds to me like a truly pompous ass...

thank you Poe though he really is a good guy.. it's just not meant to be between us though I linger in my lust.. love Crim

the feels in this piece, though....

"I still linger here  
& hang myself  
on your final words"

Wow...what an ending

thank you most graciously I like the ending best too :) love Crim

You make me swell and speechless. I feel threaded and euphoric , Goodss woman!

thank you graciously beautiful one I get so happy when you visit my pages :) love you.. xo Crim

A portrait of melancholy, longing, perhaps a tinge of disdain.
I very much enjoyed the ending as well.
Very good write crim.

- Void.

thank you Void I think you picked up on the heart of this write.. I struggled with the ending you know it always needs bite.. I deeply appreciate your thoughts on this write.. love Crim

Brenda, you're the best, my favorite writer.. i just always connect to your words.. love this..







Dave

thank you Dave for always showing me love.. xo Brenda

Dear Crim, how I felt this one...

Smashing last stanza!

You never know who will cross your path one day,
though it probably doesn't feel that way (same here)

Love, Duende

thank you graciously lovely Duende.. love Crim

this is how love can be Brenda - really how it an be caught and hung by you for all to see
Fine write

thank you Whale indeed it can be this way at times.. love Brenda

My Beautiful Brenda, the loss of poetic verses which touched or most delicate parts is a void which is very hard to fill...at times as much as I wish there was a way, I then think perhaps those holes are to remain for the times when our souls need a moment to pause; for when we travel back in our memories, we fall into them as reminders to what was once felt and meant so much and that alone will give us the bit of soul food we need. Stunning write lovely one, I love you!

Love Taryn xoxo

thank you beautiful one yes I miss this poetic voice but others come forth to fill the void.. then again each being unique it's tough.. you have such insight and it's deeply appreciated.. I love you.. xo Brenda