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word whore
depression is sticking to me
like the sweat on a worn out whore
the darkness seeps into the cracks & crevices
some things can't be made clean
no matter how much you scrub
you see I can't stop this feeling
this obsession
i'm a word prostitute
tricking out my feelings
pry my mind's cunt open
& splay it on the page for all to see
sometimes it's juicy and wet
others dry like an overworked hole
feeling like the latter these days
fucked dry
the words don't come so easy lately
I search for them in the dirtiest of metaphors
It's comes naturally
beauty evades me at times
that's when I go back to the alleys
& give my words a good blow job
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 23rd Feb 2017
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23rd Feb 2017 12:05pm
expressive, Crim;
those alleys, it's where we go for it -
poetry &, you know, other things...
those alleys, it's where we go for it -
poetry &, you know, other things...
23rd Feb 2017 12:24pm
23rd Feb 2017 12:13pm
This made me laugh, was it supposed to do that ?
I'm the same way actually .....
Should we have a road show ?
Awesome ink luv
Xo
I'm the same way actually .....
Should we have a road show ?
Awesome ink luv
Xo
23rd Feb 2017 12:26pm
lol it is funny when you think about it happy to make laugh Poet.. thank you for the add you made my morning :) a road show i'm up for it ;) love Brenda
23rd Feb 2017 1:04pm
Great poetry is like great sex, some times when you want it done write, you gotta do it yourself!
It's just the right thing to do...
As always Brenda, you write it like nobody else!
JJ
It's just the right thing to do...
As always Brenda, you write it like nobody else!
JJ
24th Feb 2017 00:07am
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24th Feb 2017 00:09am
A good blow job, receiving or getting, is a natural cure for many ills. Enjoyed this kickass poem, Brenda.
24th Feb 2017 00:09am
23rd Feb 2017 6:47pm
Although I must admit I've never thought to put it quite like this before, I completely understand your sentiment in this one, Brenda. Part of my mind was nodding in recognition and the other part was giggling like a fool. So much love for you... :)
Willow
Willow
24th Feb 2017 00:10am
thank you lovely Willow your comment in kind gave me the giggles so happy I am this write affected you like this :) love Brenda
23rd Feb 2017 7:00pm
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Anonymous
24th Feb 2017 3:32am
We can't create all the time. Sometimes we need some time off to live a little & try getting out of the bubble we find ourselves in. It sounds easy but it is hard.
24th Feb 2017 3:47am
24th Feb 2017 7:40am
Well all poems can't be winners but this is one in my opinion... hehe 😁
I feel the same. Although I would like to think of it as I make the words my bitch, lol.
I feel the same. Although I would like to think of it as I make the words my bitch, lol.
24th Feb 2017 5:53pm
thank you yeah you can't win them all.. I appreciate you liking this one :) also I giggled at you making words your bitch :) love Crim
24th Feb 2017 9:15am
Depression kills creativity, yet you remain to spill brilliant ink, dear Crim!
"my mind's cunt" > now that's something unique (lol)
Love, Duende
"my mind's cunt" > now that's something unique (lol)
Love, Duende
24th Feb 2017 5:54pm
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24th Feb 2017 5:55pm
Anonymous
24th Feb 2017 6:51pm
brenda, i'd give my left tit
to write about not being able to write
half as fecking brilliantly as you do
gods this is amazing
each and every line of it
loved!!!
to write about not being able to write
half as fecking brilliantly as you do
gods this is amazing
each and every line of it
loved!!!
3rd Mar 2017 6:58pm
thank you beautiful one I absolutely adore your comments :) yeah that's exactly what this was about being obsessed with writing and not being able to lol :) love Brenda
25th Feb 2017 8:53am
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25th Feb 2017 2:35pm
Brenda.. this is fucking brilliant.. bowing to poetic genius.. into the reading list it goes.. love..
Dave
Dave
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25th Feb 2017 8:32pm
Your back alley efforts have paid off Lady Crim. This is raw writing, but eloquent. And thrilling! Your words are worth any price, and the whore deserves a place in the list.
3rd Mar 2017 7:00pm
Anonymous
25th Feb 2017 9:27pm
GOD!
If this isn't fucking epic,
then I don't know what is?!
Gotta love you for this ...
~Devlin
3rd Mar 2017 7:01pm
26th Feb 2017 3:23am
You know a quick game of scrabble or a crossword could be considered foreplay... just the thing to get you in the mood. Cool poem, Crim!
3rd Mar 2017 7:02pm
26th Feb 2017 10:09pm
I'm gonna snatch this away
From you real soon.. love it
And aren't we all?
-Howlings
From you real soon.. love it
And aren't we all?
-Howlings
3rd Mar 2017 7:03pm
26th Feb 2017 11:26pm
Really clever, I like ' the words don't come so easily lately, I search for them in the dirtiest of metaphors ' ....
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17th Mar 2017 9:13am
I thought it was written from the heart and from experience well done I thought..🍻
23rd Mar 2017 6:21am
8th Apr 2017 9:26pm
wow...that was fantastic!
'like the sweat on a worn out whore' - very nice!
'that's when I go back to the alleys
& give my words a good blow job' - oh i just love where you have taken us, a lascivious soup made of a musty lusty imagery. nice job.
'like the sweat on a worn out whore' - very nice!
'that's when I go back to the alleys
& give my words a good blow job' - oh i just love where you have taken us, a lascivious soup made of a musty lusty imagery. nice job.
9th Apr 2017 10:50am
