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hurt me like Plath
I won't fade away
into nothingness
the way you want
with your cracked ideas
of poetic bliss
i'll piss in your face
with warped thoughts of my own
vomit out each line
shit every verse
a filthy beast in me loosed
I don't want poetic correctness
preferring chaos
let it reign supreme
love it hardcore
you beat me about the head
with a limp dick
I can't take it
come at me with a raging boner
a hard-on for poetry
the likes that have yet to be seen
fuck me like Bukowski
hurt me like Plath
feed my soul dead roses
their dying sorrow
melody to a heart broken
Published 12th Nov 2016
| Edited 14th Nov 2016
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12th Nov 2016 8:18pm
15th Nov 2016 5:27am
12th Nov 2016 9:32pm
Very powerful, Brenda. Such a testament to in-your-face poetry
that refuses to go gently into that good night as many would have it do.
Rage, my lady. Rage.
that refuses to go gently into that good night as many would have it do.
Rage, my lady. Rage.
15th Nov 2016 5:27am
One of your best acid fueled smack downs
Perfect length
This is currency I can believe in ....
Like
Perfect length
This is currency I can believe in ....
Like
15th Nov 2016 5:28am
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Anonymous
13th Nov 2016 3:43am
*Pow!* just ricocheting
Dejure
My ladyloves, woman of
my heart alike Plath.
Im just stunned here
Dejure
My ladyloves, woman of
my heart alike Plath.
Im just stunned here
15th Nov 2016 5:30am
13th Nov 2016 3:51am
I echo Dejure a bit... BAM!
vomit out each line
shit every verse > great lines, dear Crim!
You master the hardcore poetry, if only I could...
Love, Duende
vomit out each line
shit every verse > great lines, dear Crim!
You master the hardcore poetry, if only I could...
Love, Duende
15th Nov 2016 5:31am
13th Nov 2016 5:01am
15th Nov 2016 5:32am
scream till someone somewhere feels something
all else is a fools farce
Bang it like a criminal - u done did that
all else is a fools farce
Bang it like a criminal - u done did that
15th Nov 2016 5:33am
Anonymous
13th Nov 2016 4:47pm
Powerful poem Brenda..wow, totally left me speechless, how raw and real it felt.
15th Nov 2016 5:34am
thank you lovely Rina was just trying to evoke emotion with this one glad you felt it..
love Brenda
love Brenda
13th Nov 2016 6:33pm
There she is! I've missed my favorite fireball lately. Good to see you back and feisty. Beautiful! ☺
Willow
Willow
15th Nov 2016 5:35am
thank you beautiful Willow for seeing me as such just fighting a feeling with this one..
love Brenda
love Brenda
13th Nov 2016 10:04pm
15th Nov 2016 5:35am
14th Nov 2016 6:20am
wow! Brenda such fierceness really got me going, I don't think I'll look at poetry in the same way again (lol) :-)
brilliant write :-)
brilliant write :-)
15th Nov 2016 5:37am
aw thank you David I think in poetry we should have complete artistic expression so happy you received something from this..
love Brenda
love Brenda
14th Nov 2016 6:39am
golden title, Crim
you & Sylvia know the meaning of hurt.
hardcore verses, ready for whatever it takes...
you & Sylvia know the meaning of hurt.
hardcore verses, ready for whatever it takes...
15th Nov 2016 5:38am
15th Nov 2016 1:45am
"feed my soul dead roses" . . . vintage visual with a seductive title.. love it, blue angel
15th Nov 2016 5:38am
19th Nov 2016 1:17am
Brenda, this simply kicks ass.. i fucking love it.. into the list it goes.. i love you!!
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
19th Nov 2016 1:52pm
Truly adore this fierce write. 💓
So very bold and passionate.
A kick ass piece, indeed.
So very bold and passionate.
A kick ass piece, indeed.
