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Hell's Rage
my demons are in straightjackets
demented and insane
in a vicious rage at being caged and restrained
tearing at their binds
with biting and gnashing of teeth
a curdled chorus
smashes against my skull
legion will march
even if it crosses it's own host's flesh
starved, carnivorous eating the rotten meat
oozing from the wounds that still fester
writhing in torment they scream
I hear them making my ears bleed
cum to me in the blackened night
brutalize my soul's cherry
branding me as the Devil's own
Lucifer's concubine not to be crossed
minions chained to me while I walk the Earth
all hell within me spitting venom on the page
doing the bidding of their Master
the Great Dragon of Old
my demons are in straightjackets
demented and insane
in a vicious rage at being caged and restrained
tearing at their binds
with biting and gnashing of teeth
a curdled chorus
smashes against my skull
legion will march
even if it crosses it's own host's flesh
hear me now this woman speaks to you
from her place of torment
drinking from your devil's cup
hissing out demonic code
burning, slashing all in her wake
feel the ground shake beneath you
as she steps into your court
we are one my Dark Lord
cum to me in the blackened night
brutalize my soul's cherry
branding me as the Devil's own
Lucifer's concubine not to be crossed
Published 19th Aug 2016
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19th Aug 2016 4:36am
19th Aug 2016 5:32am
thank you dearest Willow for showing love to my darkest of writes :)
love Crim
love Crim
19th Aug 2016 4:40am
Dearest Crim, I have to say, this is a fucking masterpiece\,,/ Horns up! Deeply enjoyed!
19th Aug 2016 5:33am
smiling wickedly at you thank you Darkest Lord for inspiring me tonight..
love Crim
love Crim
19th Aug 2016 6:17am
Anonymous
19th Aug 2016 7:21am
Yeah baby!! You do it and you do it evil!
👅😈Trish
👅😈Trish
19th Aug 2016 7:31am
Anonymous
19th Aug 2016 9:37am
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19th Aug 2016 12:09pm
19th Aug 2016 9:42am
19th Aug 2016 12:09pm
19th Aug 2016 2:05pm
Loved the rage within the lines of this shit-kicking piece of poetry,
Brenda. There are so many worthy excerpts I could quote, but if I
did I would have to quote the whole poem . . . Kickass write!
Brenda. There are so many worthy excerpts I could quote, but if I
did I would have to quote the whole poem . . . Kickass write!
19th Aug 2016 2:09pm
Anonymous
19th Aug 2016 4:29pm
Truly love this dark...intense..passionate write! 💓
No one can do you like you, Crim.
Your talent continues to blow me away.
Brilliant ink.
No one can do you like you, Crim.
Your talent continues to blow me away.
Brilliant ink.
21st Aug 2016 8:32am
19th Aug 2016 6:45pm
This is devastating, Lady Crim. You're the queen of the underground far as I'm concerned, and Hell hath no fury like yours. Vibrantly written, and the repeat stanzas suggest choruses, a song. Will you or anyone else be recording this? Just reading it blows me away...............
21st Aug 2016 8:33am
aw thank you dearest Sir Crow I won't be recording it as I have a tough time with readings but would love if someone else wanted to :)
love Crim
love Crim
19th Aug 2016 9:17pm
Brenda.. god damn!! this should be a metal song.. if feels and flows like song lyrics.. i can hear aggressive guitars, crawling bass lines, and thunderous drums.. that should accompany the lyrical gold you have.. i fucking loved these lines..
a curdled chorus
smashes against my skull
legion will march
even if it crosses it's own host's flesh
bloody brilliant.. to quote Hades.. "Horns Up" on this one.. love you!!
Dave
a curdled chorus
smashes against my skull
legion will march
even if it crosses it's own host's flesh
bloody brilliant.. to quote Hades.. "Horns Up" on this one.. love you!!
Dave
21st Aug 2016 8:34am
that would be fucking fantastic if this was sung in a with a metal thrash to it thank you Dave :)
love you my friend..
xo Brenda
love you my friend..
xo Brenda
Anonymous
20th Aug 2016 12:24pm
Great job capturing the brutality and torment of this dark gem Crim.
21st Aug 2016 8:35am
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2016 5:39am
My Beautiful Brenda, your dark side shines her brightly lovely one. Echoing our Dark Lord....a masterpiece.
I love you so much!
All my love
Taryn xoxoxo
I love you so much!
All my love
Taryn xoxoxo
22nd Aug 2016 11:45am
22nd Aug 2016 5:59am
You keep amazing me with your talent to captivate your Darkness and Demons in your words!
I don't think I can ever do that... I truly admire you, Crim!
Love, Duende
I don't think I can ever do that... I truly admire you, Crim!
Love, Duende
22nd Aug 2016 11:46am
29th Aug 2016 11:20pm
I'm soaking up your imagery here. These are out of the norm for me, so i have the utmost value for what i'm learning from them. Thanks for sharing.
30th Aug 2016 11:29am
