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A Kiss Of Magic
deep in the forest
among the fair fey
my heart takes leave
deep magic hidden
amongst the trees
an ancient kind
my lovely ones are here
playing hide and seek
under the thick canopy
they're balm to my soul
with singing that causes healing
torn and left hurting in the mortal realm
my wings left in shreds
are now mighty and strong
sweet kisses from their powerful potion
have made me whole
I dance among them
frolicking freely in this magical kingdom
oppression taken from my shoulders
by the Master of this beautiful place
he tenderly touches my mind
takes the darkness from my thoughts
gently tells me you must go back
you are needed in the world of men
your magic powerful
I'm with you always in the shadows
fighting for what is worthy
take your sword for this journey
there are some treacherous paths ahead
the forests your home
i'll always be here
for you to draw energy from
my beloved Queen
show me what you have
make my heart swell with pride
one day I will come for you permanently my lady
Published 4th Nov 2015
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9th Nov 2015 4:21pm
thank you beautiful one you warmed my heart with your comment :)
I love you so much you are definitely one who keeps me in the fey kingdom..
xoxoxo Brenda
I love you so much you are definitely one who keeps me in the fey kingdom..
xoxoxo Brenda
4th Nov 2015 8:50pm
"your magic powerful
I'm with you always in the shadows
fighting for what is worthy" ..
- You're armed with a powerful quill. Your steps become silent within this ethereal enchantment. Lovey words that are worthy. Kisses with magic, blue angel
I'm with you always in the shadows
fighting for what is worthy" ..
- You're armed with a powerful quill. Your steps become silent within this ethereal enchantment. Lovey words that are worthy. Kisses with magic, blue angel
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Anonymous
4th Nov 2015 10:44pm
Miss Crim. . .it wouldn't be "Magic" with out your poetic "Kiss". . .so stunning, and vivid; not your usual dark write which only shows how versatile a poet you can be. . .My pen's off to you, Woman. . .xo, Devlin.
9th Nov 2015 4:25pm
thank you Lady Devlin Queen of Darkness I needed a little faerie magic :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
4th Nov 2015 10:50pm
Brenda, this is simply beautiful.. a magical feeling in your words.. like when you expose your softer side.. into my list it goes.. with love..
Dave
Dave
9th Nov 2015 4:25pm
5th Nov 2015 00:27am
Magic
To unlock the mighty lock with no keys
Wondrous thoughts
Strength will always bring you back
To the place that never leaves
To unlock the mighty lock with no keys
Wondrous thoughts
Strength will always bring you back
To the place that never leaves
9th Nov 2015 4:27pm
Anonymous
5th Nov 2015 1:22am
Such a beautifully written piece my dear. Its a wondrous display of your versatility and creativity.
9th Nov 2015 4:28pm
5th Nov 2015 2:06am
so much beauty in your enchanting realm, Crim.
if wishes could make dreams come true...
if wishes could make dreams come true...
9th Nov 2015 4:29pm
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5th Nov 2015 3:16am
Wow! This is a beautiful write tht drips with sweat and blood from the sacrifice to bared your soul for all to see this awesome journey
9th Nov 2015 4:30pm
5th Nov 2015 9:51am
Wish I was a man with more than a few words, lol. Just wanted to say I love your more lighthearted poems. Shows a side of you that is happy and beautiful.
9th Nov 2015 4:32pm
5th Nov 2015 3:44pm
What a beautiful balming write, ladyluvs!.. missed sweet hell outta your pen & so did my coffees..
"my lovely ones are here
playing hide and seek
under the thick canopy"
"my wings left in shreds
are now mighty and strong
sweet kisses from their powerful potion"
love your powerful word potions of heart, always.. can feel the Special of this one..;)
*penluvs-- large, wicked n witchy-like..
mwahs Brenda..love you!
~d
"my lovely ones are here
playing hide and seek
under the thick canopy"
"my wings left in shreds
are now mighty and strong
sweet kisses from their powerful potion"
love your powerful word potions of heart, always.. can feel the Special of this one..;)
*penluvs-- large, wicked n witchy-like..
mwahs Brenda..love you!
~d
9th Nov 2015 4:33pm
lovely d~ sending love and many thanks your way for the love you showed me and this write :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
5th Nov 2015 4:31pm
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6th Nov 2015 4:42am
Brenda always love to read what is given birth by you pen. I especially like what Brenda writes. So beautiful and lovely.
Enjoyed this immensely.
Keith
Enjoyed this immensely.
Keith
9th Nov 2015 4:37pm
6th Nov 2015 11:06am
The magic is so alive in this. The sense of wonder and woodland fairies, beauty and mystery all cloaked in the menacing shadow of the Master. Fucking brilliant writing!
9th Nov 2015 4:48pm
6th Nov 2015 2:34pm
if only such a vision existed I would give myself to it unquestionably :-)
a simply beautiful write and easy add :-)
a simply beautiful write and easy add :-)
9th Nov 2015 4:50pm
6th Nov 2015 8:15pm
Gorgeous writing Crim! I've had many a fantasy along these lines, but I'm usually acting as satyr.
" my lovely ones are here
playing hide and seek
under the thick canopy
they're balm to my soul
with singing that causes healing
torn and left hurting in the mortal realm "
The mortal realm can be cruel beyond belief. I'd rather stay in your forest, heal and feel that kiss of magic. All will be well....
" my lovely ones are here
playing hide and seek
under the thick canopy
they're balm to my soul
with singing that causes healing
torn and left hurting in the mortal realm "
The mortal realm can be cruel beyond belief. I'd rather stay in your forest, heal and feel that kiss of magic. All will be well....
9th Nov 2015 4:51pm
10th Nov 2015 10:36am
brenda, beautiful one, you are a true poetic enchantress...
"my lovely ones are here
playing hide and seek
under the thick canopy
they're balm to my soul
with singing that causes healing"
... spell-binding ink
xoxox
"my lovely ones are here
playing hide and seek
under the thick canopy
they're balm to my soul
with singing that causes healing"
... spell-binding ink
xoxox
10th Nov 2015 8:41pm
