The Melting Of An Ice Queen

This is a brave and beautiful write.  You don't look at all crushed to me, just open, honest and a lot of fun.  So many hide behind carefully constructed facades, demonic or otherwise, and write about fantasies and elaborate role play.  Reality intrudes here and there but usually under the cover of darkness and eroticism.  Thanks for this Crim.  It's an honor to get to know you better!    

thank you Sir Crow I apologize for removing the pic of me it left me feeling too vulnerable as I'm sure my dominant side will rise again..

thank you also for such a beautiful comment..

with love Crim

thank you beautiful one for such a loving and insightful comment..

yes in all of our diversities it is all a part of who we are thank you for pointing that out

love you Taryn :)

with love Brenda

 
"is a beauty in her own right    
curvaceous, gentle of soul    
easily broken if handled too rough
Written by crimsin (Unveiling)"

Beautiful. I love when you are brazen temptress. But i really dig when you get down with Brenda. Shes obviously an awesome human being.

Love u doll.
💜Jennifer

thank you lovely Jennifer for showing love to all sides of me :)

with love Brenda

thank you Gabriel :)

with love Crim

I only submit when I know I can't win...

oh, but to know that I could,

and then
submit anyway, now that would be

good...

thank you for your thoughts Paul can't win with cocaine.. so I've set aside it for the moment.. hopefully the Dominant bitch in me will reappear ;)   with love and respect Crim

Miss Crim, Miss Crim. . .[shaking my head in absolute awe]. . .you've outdone yourself with this piece of poetry. . .a Masterpiece, if I may be permitted to say. . .

You know Lep/Craic started a discussion about or something to the effect of "What Defines Poetry". . .and this poem pretty much sums it up for me. . .Maybe I'll indicate that. . .

xoxo, Devlin;)

Lady Devlin a better compliment I can't imagine I thank you humbly..

with love and the deepest respect Crim

To know yourself so completely is profoundly impressing. And to openly share that with others is a gift. Your honesty is invigorating.

thank you kindly :)

with love Crim

"Brenda is emerging
crushed butterfly wings in hand          
laid bare for all to see"
~just powerfully beautiful. You, all parts, all ways, Always.      

"is a beauty in her own right          
curvaceous, gentle of soul          
easily broken if handled too rough"
~you are bold raw strength in these lines darlin.

The emergence of that gentle you will temper your day, I do so *prey it for you.
Bowing to the courage of your fine pure pen, loves you Brenda!
great title that I must purr upon also ;)
~d  
         

lovely d~ so in love with the way you see me thank you kind soul..

now I need to get to know myself thank you for the love you've shown me..

with love Brenda :)

I have said it before, it's strange to say something positive about someone else's pain but few others express it quite like you, Crim. Superb ink!

thank you Sir Hades for showing me and this ink love..

with love Crim

Brenda, this is beautiful.. i love the letting go.. Crim is your protector, always has been.. but you've grown so much.. let Brenda rise out of the shadows.. you're beautiful, the true you.. don't erase Crim she's there for a reason.. but open yourself to new experiences, and love.. you owe that to yourself.. i love the whole you.. i want you to be happy... into the list it goes..


Dave

thank you Dave for the deep and insightful comment :)

with love Brenda

A lot of people would take the term "the submissive in me" to be one of weakness, but I think it take extraordinary strength to make such a declaration. It's a strength you can only know by allowing your real self to show. An intriguing write, Crim.

Thank you for the read.

thank you Missy for giving me courage to allow my softer side to show through..

with love and respect Crim

Such beauty laces your words. Your poem truly speaks to me.

thank you most graciously :)

with love Crim

all the parts of you are formidable. stay royal, Crim...

thank you John I will :)

with love Crim

Wow this piece is just beautiful. On so few words you tell us volume about yourself.

Thanks for sharing

thank you graciously Sir :)

with love Crimsin

Wow this piece is just beautiful. On so few words you tell us volume about yourself.

Thanks for sharing

Only strength comes from letting the true you out, it is strength in and of itself.  The internet gives us the ability to wear a mask and sometimes that can be a healing tool until we feel ready to spread our wings and fly... from chrysalis to butterfly.  Beautiful writting Crim :) x

beautifully spoken insight thank you Magdalena :)

with love Crim

ohhh brenda, you are such a perfect dichotomy... a balance of grit & strength; yet more fragile than anyone would give you credit for
*sigh*
love this & you, beautiful lady
xoxox

thank you beautiful Katja for seeing me and loving me I love you too..

with love Brenda :)

It sounds like the rebirth of something beautiful. The old must die and new must takes its place. The metamorphosis of the caterpillar into the butterfly. I am excited to meet the new you.

thank you most graciously Xmar..

with love Crim