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Pride
Pride
Dangerous
Double-edged sword
It slices deep
Mine has
I've writhed in agony
Endless nights of self-imposed
Exile
Guilt
And pride
Ahhh...
To never make mistakes
As much as that sounds
Desirable
It's not. So not.
I learn the most from my errors
I earn my education
I'll take my flaws
My humanity
Strive
To be better than myself
O'er and o'er
So
Alas
Alack
Here I am
Please
forgive
me
For I cannot remain away
It is like to remove the heart of me to continue thus
Bereft...
Dangerous
Double-edged sword
It slices deep
Mine has
I've writhed in agony
Endless nights of self-imposed
Exile
Guilt
And pride
Ahhh...
To never make mistakes
As much as that sounds
Desirable
It's not. So not.
I learn the most from my errors
I earn my education
I'll take my flaws
My humanity
Strive
To be better than myself
O'er and o'er
So
Alas
Alack
Here I am
Please
forgive
me
For I cannot remain away
It is like to remove the heart of me to continue thus
Bereft...
Published 17th May 2015
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17th May 2015 8:03pm
19th May 2015 9:21am
Thank you, Rose, luv ~ :-*
I feel rather more complete than I've felt in a while; there is something quite, quite extraordinary about Deep Underground Poetry.
You've all been writing these incredible pieces of surpassing beauty, marvelous art. :-*
Thank you, luv, for your kindness to me speaking of poetry returns, flow, and style... :-*
I feel rather more complete than I've felt in a while; there is something quite, quite extraordinary about Deep Underground Poetry.
You've all been writing these incredible pieces of surpassing beauty, marvelous art. :-*
Thank you, luv, for your kindness to me speaking of poetry returns, flow, and style... :-*
17th May 2015 11:05pm
if one never returns
one is doomed to
go on
wondering...
(I really like the poem,
by the way..:)
one is doomed to
go on
wondering...
(I really like the poem,
by the way..:)
19th May 2015 9:31am
Ahhh, dartford, luv ~ :-*
Every single Anglophilic cell within me rejoices at your wondrous and wonderful never-ending phrases...
Would that I had your talent for this, luv - alas! I do not. No matter, though. I shall come and peruse and be mystified betimes by some of your various acutely clever offerings.
You keep me humble, luv. You and Pishashee. ;-D
And, truth be told, myriad others...
Every single Anglophilic cell within me rejoices at your wondrous and wonderful never-ending phrases...
Would that I had your talent for this, luv - alas! I do not. No matter, though. I shall come and peruse and be mystified betimes by some of your various acutely clever offerings.
You keep me humble, luv. You and Pishashee. ;-D
And, truth be told, myriad others...
18th May 2015 2:02pm
19th May 2015 9:38am
Granite, luv ~ :-*
I have missed you greatly, oh Visionary.
You have given me a Masterful welcome, indeed. Thank you, luv. ;-*
I have missed you greatly, oh Visionary.
You have given me a Masterful welcome, indeed. Thank you, luv. ;-*
18th May 2015 6:14pm
Savaja, you have masterfully illustrated one of the the key principles of success in life. We have to make mistakes to learn. We have to be vulnerable to master life. Bravisima bella poeta!
19th May 2015 9:54am
Gahddess_Worship, luv ~ :-*
Thank you.
You are so profoundly insightful. I am oft-times so blessed by this gift of yours, by you.:-*
I have learned much of strength and grace from you, luv.
Again, thank you so very much.
Thank you.
You are so profoundly insightful. I am oft-times so blessed by this gift of yours, by you.:-*
I have learned much of strength and grace from you, luv.
Again, thank you so very much.
20th May 2015 6:43am
Thank you Savaja...I don't know that I'm worthy of such praise. I do know that I am blessed by your talent and the grace and love that, in abundance, is in you.
18th May 2015 11:33pm
Welcome back Savaja....
Love this one for its humbleness and gentle flow...
I look forward to more... :)
Love this one for its humbleness and gentle flow...
I look forward to more... :)
19th May 2015 10:02am
Genius Girl, luv ~ :-*
Thank you so very, very much for the welcome back. (I'm taking this to heart from you since you're my resident super-power - did you think I'd forgotten?!)
Thank you, again, luv, for loving the humility here - I rather love YOU for THAT.
It's wonderful to see you, luv... :-*
Thank you so very, very much for the welcome back. (I'm taking this to heart from you since you're my resident super-power - did you think I'd forgotten?!)
Thank you, again, luv, for loving the humility here - I rather love YOU for THAT.
It's wonderful to see you, luv... :-*
19th May 2015 3:17pm
If one never leaves
one can never come back!
Welcome back with your new found richness
one can never come back!
Welcome back with your new found richness
21st May 2015 1:22pm
Rabbitquest, luv ~ :-*
You do have a point. I had not considered that. ;-p
Thank you for your lovely and warm welcome back, luv.
You do have a point. I had not considered that. ;-p
Thank you for your lovely and warm welcome back, luv.
20th May 2015 00:59am
21st May 2015 6:52pm
Blackhyde, luv ~ :-*
You are kind and generous to me.
Thank you for your lovely and warm welcome back, darling man. I've rather missed you with your sweet, naughty, raunchy self, you know. ;-*
You are kind and generous to me.
Thank you for your lovely and warm welcome back, darling man. I've rather missed you with your sweet, naughty, raunchy self, you know. ;-*
20th May 2015 4:30am
21st May 2015 7:05pm
Ahhh, JohnFeddeler, luv ~ :-*
How I have missed you, your pithy, insightful, wisdom-filled comments, your keen and eductive writing, you. (Inner dacryphiliac, indeed! I have some tears for you, luv...)
Hmmm...
I seem to be juxtaposing my poem responses - no matter. ;-*
I have a secret about tears for you, luv...
How I have missed you, your pithy, insightful, wisdom-filled comments, your keen and eductive writing, you. (Inner dacryphiliac, indeed! I have some tears for you, luv...)
Hmmm...
I seem to be juxtaposing my poem responses - no matter. ;-*
I have a secret about tears for you, luv...
21st May 2015 11:38pm
i've learn so much from my mistakes...thinking of making a few more (nice to see you back) :)
24th May 2015 4:17am
Hashman, luv ~ :-*
Mistakes can be the very best teachers, I've found. ;-p
Figures, eh?
Thinking of making a few more, heh. I just seem to make them no thought involved. :-p
'Tis good to be back. I've rather missed your sweet, sweet self, luv... :-*
Mistakes can be the very best teachers, I've found. ;-p
Figures, eh?
Thinking of making a few more, heh. I just seem to make them no thought involved. :-p
'Tis good to be back. I've rather missed your sweet, sweet self, luv... :-*
