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Eminem with a beard
Just me,
at 08:30,
still drunk,
throwing some words
to Wax Tailor's
Go Without Me.
at 08:30,
still drunk,
throwing some words
to Wax Tailor's
Go Without Me.
Published 14th Jul 2014
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14th Jul 2014 3:22pm
I actually really enjoyed this! a few lines that were absolutely perfect!!! keep it up please!
14th Jul 2014 3:55pm
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- Edited 14th Jul 2014 8:22pm
14th Jul 2014 8:15pm
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16th Jul 2014 10:58am
Hey buddy. I'm sitting here with Brandy (ELL30) and I was trying to concentrate on your talents but she was getting all horny and shit whilst watching you which fucked me all up...yup, my girl wants to bone you. Anyway, thanks for getting her in the mood.
Gemini
Seriously though, that was really fucking good.
Gemini
Seriously though, that was really fucking good.
27th Jul 2014 9:29pm
I see you've worked out how to deal the ultimate two-part compliment!
13th Sep 2014 8:36pm
I need to do some work on my own spoken word presentation so I drifted to this side of the DUP banks ... I'm glad I did ...
Loved your delivery ... "whiskey tears" ... "I want to call but she wont answer ... " perfection
Loved your delivery ... "whiskey tears" ... "I want to call but she wont answer ... " perfection
You're one hell of a talent Cruel one coming down off whiskey and all with respect Crim
16th Apr 2019 6:20pm
