Upbeat Inspirational Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Happy, positive, motivational and inspirational poetry
Poems written by Top Critiquers
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 4:26am
25th Feb 2025 4:26am
Upbeat
You want to help?
Stop breathing!
All the things that I hate,
Think their hearts have meaning.
But I'm tired,
And they keep believing.
So let's play a game.
It's called " No More Hearts Beating"
Stop breathing!
All the things that I hate,
Think their hearts have meaning.
But I'm tired,
And they keep believing.
So let's play a game.
It's called " No More Hearts Beating"
#MyInspiration
68 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
11th Feb 2025 11:49am
11th Feb 2025 11:49am
Purrs and Snores
Deep into the night,
there they are,
side by side
on the mattress.
The cat purrs
a miniature thunder.
The husband snores
a coral of immensity.
The sound dispute
is pure beauty.
The feline, master
of the vibrant whisper,
with its "purr-purr"
packs light dreams.
The husband, tenor
from the incessant snoring.
Their symphony
is music to the heavens.
The cat says,
with an air of superiority:
"My snoring is art,
a heavenly sound."
The husband retorts, ...
there they are,
side by side
on the mattress.
The cat purrs
a miniature thunder.
The husband snores
a coral of immensity.
The sound dispute
is pure beauty.
The feline, master
of the vibrant whisper,
with its "purr-purr"
packs light dreams.
The husband, tenor
from the incessant snoring.
Their symphony
is music to the heavens.
The cat says,
with an air of superiority:
"My snoring is art,
a heavenly sound."
The husband retorts, ...
#cats
#dreams
#husband
#love
#passion
121 reads
14 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 00:39am
5th Mar 2025 00:39am
Sights Aloft
Fourth I Marched today, for the freshest air,
into the blue, white, and gray intermix
blasting transpiration through my hair
as Zephyr got his atmospheric kicks
step by obstreperous step to the fore,
as a proud Zephyr won't blow in reverse
to mark some bootless barometric score
in the fluxion dynamic universe
where inspiration is the first to flow...
...in myriad crepuscularities...
perceived as a most ethereal show
in thermic air current disparities,
as uplifting to a vernal feather...
as the forthwith march of...
into the blue, white, and gray intermix
blasting transpiration through my hair
as Zephyr got his atmospheric kicks
step by obstreperous step to the fore,
as a proud Zephyr won't blow in reverse
to mark some bootless barometric score
in the fluxion dynamic universe
where inspiration is the first to flow...
...in myriad crepuscularities...
perceived as a most ethereal show
in thermic air current disparities,
as uplifting to a vernal feather...
as the forthwith march of...
#clouds
#sky
#wind
127 reads
6 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
Today 10:37am
Today 10:37am
Home
the walls
cradling my screams
as revelations ripped through me
teaching me...
to be stronger...if not better
amplifying laughter
that I might better hear it
through the anguish of haunting memory
a silent reminder...
there will be light
all the brighter
...having survived the night
the pillow
where I whispered of love
{& lust}
in equal measure
saturated
with the sweat of passion's endeavors
stained
by the tears of hopes that walked away
leaving me desolate
clutched to my...
cradling my screams
as revelations ripped through me
teaching me...
to be stronger...if not better
amplifying laughter
that I might better hear it
through the anguish of haunting memory
a silent reminder...
there will be light
all the brighter
...having survived the night
the pillow
where I whispered of love
{& lust}
in equal measure
saturated
with the sweat of passion's endeavors
stained
by the tears of hopes that walked away
leaving me desolate
clutched to my...
#confessional
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#gratitude
64 reads
4 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:26pm
Yesterday 5:26pm
DON'T f**k WITH US ! ! ! WORLD TOUR 2025
We're the new force
Headin' out ON TOUR
Hittin' the dance floor
Don't fuck with us!
We'll leave you in a trance
Always takin' a chance
Writing sublime verse
No point in rehearse
You wanna be like us
Attitude a total must
Full of lust -
It's shit or bust!
Let us take you higher
Feelin' totally wired
Somethin' to admire
Find us in a flyer
We're puttin' on a show
It'll be worth it so
This joint will be bangin'
Don't dare leave us hangin'
COS we're goin' out on tour...
...
Headin' out ON TOUR
Hittin' the dance floor
Don't fuck with us!
We'll leave you in a trance
Always takin' a chance
Writing sublime verse
No point in rehearse
You wanna be like us
Attitude a total must
Full of lust -
It's shit or bust!
Let us take you higher
Feelin' totally wired
Somethin' to admire
Find us in a flyer
We're puttin' on a show
It'll be worth it so
This joint will be bangin'
Don't dare leave us hangin'
COS we're goin' out on tour...
...
#admiration
#WritingPoetry
#gratitude
#inspirational
#support
42 reads
2 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 3:23am
31st Oct 2024 3:23am
Some Drive By Poetry
Some Drive By Poetry
#funny
#WritingPoetry
135 reads
4 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 2:40pm
9th Mar 2025 2:40pm
Buds of Renewal
The buds anxiously wait to burst through
warmer, softer ground.
They sprout like a secret lacking sound.
First signs of spring and the excited joy they bring.
Accompanied by joyous melodies the birds do sing.
Robin's, dressed in their red breast, hop everywhere.
A sky saturated blue, provokes a happy hypnotic stare.
The sun's soft spring heat shines on the thick, smooth buds.
Sometimes what is fragile is at the same time tough.
And renewal of earth and heart is abundantly enough.
warmer, softer ground.
They sprout like a secret lacking sound.
First signs of spring and the excited joy they bring.
Accompanied by joyous melodies the birds do sing.
Robin's, dressed in their red breast, hop everywhere.
A sky saturated blue, provokes a happy hypnotic stare.
The sun's soft spring heat shines on the thick, smooth buds.
Sometimes what is fragile is at the same time tough.
And renewal of earth and heart is abundantly enough.
#flowers
#nature
#spring
59 reads
8 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
8th Mar 2025 2:56am
8th Mar 2025 2:56am
Crying During Crazy on You
There are a bunch of songs by Heart
I don't particularly like
How Can I Get You Alone
sounds like a bank commercial
The Dog and the Butterfly
is dopey and boring
Alone
is too repetitive for me
But the Heart songs I like...
Well, I really heart those Heart songs
I'm mad for Magic Man,
and crazy for Crazy on You
Our seats are super steep
in the basketball arena
Our backs are literally against the wall
in the very last row.
Looking down
makes me quietly queasy.
And it's a work night ...
I don't particularly like
How Can I Get You Alone
sounds like a bank commercial
The Dog and the Butterfly
is dopey and boring
Alone
is too repetitive for me
But the Heart songs I like...
Well, I really heart those Heart songs
I'm mad for Magic Man,
and crazy for Crazy on You
Our seats are super steep
in the basketball arena
Our backs are literally against the wall
in the very last row.
Looking down
makes me quietly queasy.
And it's a work night ...
#happiness
#music
94 reads
13 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 8:11pm
10th Mar 2025 8:11pm
My Links
First of all I'd like to express my sadness that this site will no longer be in a couple of months.
I've met some great writers and folk on here since joining last year, if any of you's are on any of the following apps it would be great to stay in touch and likewise send me yours, I'll leave them in the 'about me' section too.
Yourquote ~ pete_25
Writco ~ Pete_writes
Poetizer ~ Pete_writes
Anyways love to you all ♥️
I've met some great writers and folk on here since joining last year, if any of you's are on any of the following apps it would be great to stay in touch and likewise send me yours, I'll leave them in the 'about me' section too.
Yourquote ~ pete_25
Writco ~ Pete_writes
Poetizer ~ Pete_writes
Anyways love to you all ♥️
#gratitude
#respect
80 reads
6 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
6th Sep 2022 9:00pm
6th Sep 2022 9:00pm
You make me smile
You make me smile.
My smile hides so much.
But it shows even more.
And I hope it shines for you.
Caressing the soul.
Still I will always dare.
Welcoming the spirit.
And ever so quirky.
A lover's smile is best.
Every smile means so much.
But that one special smile...
It embodies them all.
It embodies you.
My smile hides so much.
But it shows even more.
And I hope it shines for you.
Caressing the soul.
Still I will always dare.
Welcoming the spirit.
And ever so quirky.
A lover's smile is best.
Every smile means so much.
But that one special smile...
It embodies them all.
It embodies you.
#happiness
#love
#girlfriend #inspirational
#girlfriend #inspirational
1136 reads
41 Comments
Numer90
Numer0-un0
Numer0-un0
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 6:10pm
25th Jan 2025 6:10pm
Simple Pendulum
What in the name of a wee man is this?
I just want to feel this cool breeze as I freeze due to..
Me, sitting here with some very few who don't go by #Me too..
Even though I am a rebel, I won't lose my fate I need a single or two schedules for each an every date
I have lived for years, decades counting my days
I will only survive those days calculating everything I can say
And since my deeds I must pay
While the Sunshines I guess I have to make my hay..
On a very cool surface at...
I just want to feel this cool breeze as I freeze due to..
Me, sitting here with some very few who don't go by #Me too..
Even though I am a rebel, I won't lose my fate I need a single or two schedules for each an every date
I have lived for years, decades counting my days
I will only survive those days calculating everything I can say
And since my deeds I must pay
While the Sunshines I guess I have to make my hay..
On a very cool surface at...
#strength
183 reads
9 Comments
Styxian
Poem Published
Today 1:29am
Today 1:29am
Pinnacle
Perhaps we were but small.
Yet when we had the tree-house
The giants looked up to us.
Yet when we had the tree-house
The giants looked up to us.
#motivational
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