Upbeat Inspirational Poems by Top Critiquers
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Happy, positive, motivational and inspirational poetry
Poems written by Top Critiquers
Pete_25
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 8:11am
22nd Jan 2025 8:11am
Walls
Take your
Judgement
Let it rest
My heart
On sleeve
Represents
Drink my flaws
Here right now
I'll break
These walls
Someway
Somehow
Judgement
Let it rest
My heart
On sleeve
Represents
Drink my flaws
Here right now
I'll break
These walls
Someway
Somehow
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
63 reads
12 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 8:40am
29th Nov 2024 8:40am
Capstone
I destroy all around me.
I seek and always find.
I'm not always who I used to be.
I like to wander through my mind
The ends are always beginnings.
The day of death; I celebrate .
I'm betting on the winnings.
It was foretold straight from the gate .
I'm missing like the capstone.
Yet, a pyre in the midst.
An ancient echoing microphone.
A collection of all my wits.
The tourists all around me,
They question as I amuse.
I mock them as I folly.
I like to torture and abuse.
I destroy them with...
I seek and always find.
I'm not always who I used to be.
I like to wander through my mind
The ends are always beginnings.
The day of death; I celebrate .
I'm betting on the winnings.
It was foretold straight from the gate .
I'm missing like the capstone.
Yet, a pyre in the midst.
An ancient echoing microphone.
A collection of all my wits.
The tourists all around me,
They question as I amuse.
I mock them as I folly.
I like to torture and abuse.
I destroy them with...
#betrayal
#prison
#utopia
107 reads
12 Comments
Numer90
Numer0-un0
Numer0-un0
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 12:42pm
18th Jan 2025 12:42pm
Single
The sight of this pretty little girl swinging
It's Simple pendulum
My bicycle bell jingles
Look up, don't cry,.
Giggle a little,
Twinkle!..
We together in this so lets face the race and get through with these hurdles
Don't turn or look back we have got enough problems
We are part of the deadliest royal rumble
I am a lost noble
Who got himself into many troubles
Behind me is this herd of word cattle
To take on any battle
Suddenly, even time shuffles
Sit up don't let this beat...
It's Simple pendulum
My bicycle bell jingles
Look up, don't cry,.
Giggle a little,
Twinkle!..
We together in this so lets face the race and get through with these hurdles
Don't turn or look back we have got enough problems
We are part of the deadliest royal rumble
I am a lost noble
Who got himself into many troubles
Behind me is this herd of word cattle
To take on any battle
Suddenly, even time shuffles
Sit up don't let this beat...
#courage
#hope
#inspirational
#respect
#strength
71 reads
6 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
13th Dec 2018 5:00pm
13th Dec 2018 5:00pm
Coddiwomple ( after Theodor [Dr] Seuss Geisel )
Oh, The Places You’ll Go!
Despite what you don’t know!
Don't worry now -
it's impossible to lose!
Hello! Hello!
It’s time to go – don’t doubt yourself!
Jump right up and step on out!
You may not know
which road to trust - but
Oh, The Places You’ll Go!
You’re Coddiwomple-confused!
Being so little so long!
But time has come to choose!
Is “Right” the greater arrow?
Or “Left” the lesser narrow?!
Oh, The Places You’ll Go!
Hello! Hello!
This is...
Despite what you don’t know!
Don't worry now -
it's impossible to lose!
Hello! Hello!
It’s time to go – don’t doubt yourself!
Jump right up and step on out!
You may not know
which road to trust - but
Oh, The Places You’ll Go!
You’re Coddiwomple-confused!
Being so little so long!
But time has come to choose!
Is “Right” the greater arrow?
Or “Left” the lesser narrow?!
Oh, The Places You’ll Go!
Hello! Hello!
This is...
#children
#childhood
#LifeGoals
#learning
#DrSeuss
1140 reads
5 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 7:47pm
18th Nov 2024 7:47pm
little sister mine
I'm struck by the juxtaposition
between the darkness haunting you
and the flood of light
radiating from your smile
I think it's why you were designed
brightening an all too often shadowy world
with the brilliance
of your inner being
it breaks my heart...this existence
so badly beating your burnished shine
battering the sheer intensity
of your glow
I feel much blessed
being a recipient
of such a precious gift
perhaps the glory of its beauty
might have been sorely undervalued
without the...
between the darkness haunting you
and the flood of light
radiating from your smile
I think it's why you were designed
brightening an all too often shadowy world
with the brilliance
of your inner being
it breaks my heart...this existence
so badly beating your burnished shine
battering the sheer intensity
of your glow
I feel much blessed
being a recipient
of such a precious gift
perhaps the glory of its beauty
might have been sorely undervalued
without the...
#gratitude
#love
#sister #strength
#sister #strength
132 reads
14 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
18th May 2024 6:16am
18th May 2024 6:16am
Snail Mom?
She loves fiercely and with abandon
No favorites, they’re all adored
Big or small each one has their own special place in her heart
Treading lovingly, collecting shells
Natures fuel and healing power
Earth mother gently nourishing her offspring with such tenderness
Wait!
What?
She said, “I’m a Snail mom”
I said, “Huh?”
🐌
No favorites, they’re all adored
Big or small each one has their own special place in her heart
Treading lovingly, collecting shells
Natures fuel and healing power
Earth mother gently nourishing her offspring with such tenderness
Wait!
What?
She said, “I’m a Snail mom”
I said, “Huh?”
🐌
#friendship
#healing
#love #nature
#love #nature
387 reads
38 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 1:09pm
4th Jan 2025 1:09pm
Great Catch! (Lapping it up)
What a great catch,
As you fall into my lap!
It could be a trap,
But I ain't takin' that!
You're a great match,
A really amazing snatch.
Forget about that nap,
Till I've read you like a map!
We're on the right track,
Takin' up the slack,
Never goin' back -
Filling that sweet crack!
As you fall into my lap!
It could be a trap,
But I ain't takin' that!
You're a great match,
A really amazing snatch.
Forget about that nap,
Till I've read you like a map!
We're on the right track,
Takin' up the slack,
Never goin' back -
Filling that sweet crack!
#admiration
#lust
#seductive
#temptation
#romantic
190 reads
17 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 3:28am
1st Jan 2025 3:28am
New Years
Happy New Years DUP!!!!!
#NewYear
73 reads
6 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 3:32pm
23rd Dec 2024 3:32pm
Plenum Dominium
I saw the crescent moon quite clear
and did not think I would
since brume of late had been severe
and forecast not so good.
And so it was with great surprise
when no clouds could be seen
when my wet weather jaded eyes
met beams from Queen Selene!
It was a double take I took
through sight in disbelief
at what I felt the Earth forsook
when clouds where gushing grief.
But by the moonlight I was blest
from Luna's sickle shape
apex clipping toward the west...
and heaven stunned agape!
and did not think I would
since brume of late had been severe
and forecast not so good.
And so it was with great surprise
when no clouds could be seen
when my wet weather jaded eyes
met beams from Queen Selene!
It was a double take I took
through sight in disbelief
at what I felt the Earth forsook
when clouds where gushing grief.
But by the moonlight I was blest
from Luna's sickle shape
apex clipping toward the west...
and heaven stunned agape!
#moon
104 reads
12 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 4:28pm
16th Jan 2025 4:28pm
A triad of landscapes
While I can't draw maps,
let's imagine an alternate world where
Paraguay, Angola and Romania share borders.
Picture a landmass reshaped
by a mystical force, bringing together
diverse landscapes and cultures.
Angola's western coastline,
with its rich African heritage,
now meets the vibrant heart
of South America's Paraguay.
Together, they are connected
to Romania, bringing in the charm
of Eastern Europe.
This fictional world creates
a tapestry of unique traditions,
languages and histories...
let's imagine an alternate world where
Paraguay, Angola and Romania share borders.
Picture a landmass reshaped
by a mystical force, bringing together
diverse landscapes and cultures.
Angola's western coastline,
with its rich African heritage,
now meets the vibrant heart
of South America's Paraguay.
Together, they are connected
to Romania, bringing in the charm
of Eastern Europe.
This fictional world creates
a tapestry of unique traditions,
languages and histories...
#culture
#evolution
#power
#PowerOfWords
#tradition
54 reads
10 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 11:14am
11th Dec 2024 11:14am
~the du alchemist
viz the du alchemist
#admiration
#friendship
#love
#magic
#WritingPoetry
214 reads
8 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
8th Feb 2023 00:53am
8th Feb 2023 00:53am
Peace
I seek the peaceable things
Love and friendship
And the quiet places
Where only nature speaks
The wonder of stars and moonlight's glow
Early morning mists rising above the river
And lowlands soft covered
By threadbare wisps of white
Dew silvered lawns and fields
Now covered in winters frosty sheen
That pregnant breath between night and day
When stillness lies
The sun warm and up on high
Glimpsed between the trees
Still waiting for their leaves
A good book or the good book ...
Love and friendship
And the quiet places
Where only nature speaks
The wonder of stars and moonlight's glow
Early morning mists rising above the river
And lowlands soft covered
By threadbare wisps of white
Dew silvered lawns and fields
Now covered in winters frosty sheen
That pregnant breath between night and day
When stillness lies
The sun warm and up on high
Glimpsed between the trees
Still waiting for their leaves
A good book or the good book ...
#peace
#uplifting
437 reads
8 Comments
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