Uplifting Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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uplifting seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Apr 2025 10:37am
12th Apr 2025 10:37am
The Undertow of Life
There will be many things in our lives that we have to seriously question sometimes, for sure we feel like we are drowning in the undertone of life. Floating in a Undertow of the belly of the beast of darkness 🕳️ that has created morbid thoughts of death ☠️ in the shadows of our own personal thoughts. YET it seems to know what we need and want, but yet at what cost as we question, that scenario in retrospect is it testing our strength and perseverance. For sure does it see the truth of what our thoughts, are trying to hide behind the mask as a disguise 😞...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
8th Apr 2025 10:58am
8th Apr 2025 10:58am
Sacrifice Or Gift?
The difference between a sacrifice and a gift.
Is that one of them could end up fire lit.
A gift is something you give out of kindness.
Something you put a lot of thought onto.
And something that can come late.
But once you see the joy on their faces,you can both relate.
A gift is handled and made with care.
And it has a red ribbon,very fair.
A sacrifice is like cutting your own hair.
And they say hair holds memories.
It's like cutting off a memory you held onto.
And doing something you might later regret.
...
Is that one of them could end up fire lit.
A gift is something you give out of kindness.
Something you put a lot of thought onto.
And something that can come late.
But once you see the joy on their faces,you can both relate.
A gift is handled and made with care.
And it has a red ribbon,very fair.
A sacrifice is like cutting your own hair.
And they say hair holds memories.
It's like cutting off a memory you held onto.
And doing something you might later regret.
...
#dark
#hope
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 10:59am
7th Apr 2025 10:59am
Memories
It was almost buried in the sand.
I remember the sunny sky and his hand.
It feels like I took so many things for granted.
All the memories I had above.
I was a kid and had almost all I wanted.
And yearned for the things I never had.
Like he smell of sand in the air.
And my long,dark brown hair.
I remember just having fun.
No stress,and no need to run.
But sometimes,you don't miss something until you lose it.
If only I could be a kid once again.
I would feel better than a changed man.
I remember the way we...
I remember the sunny sky and his hand.
It feels like I took so many things for granted.
All the memories I had above.
I was a kid and had almost all I wanted.
And yearned for the things I never had.
Like he smell of sand in the air.
And my long,dark brown hair.
I remember just having fun.
No stress,and no need to run.
But sometimes,you don't miss something until you lose it.
If only I could be a kid once again.
I would feel better than a changed man.
I remember the way we...
#hope
#memorial
#nostalgia #uplifting
#nostalgia #uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Apr 2025 7:41pm
6th Apr 2025 7:41pm
Giving myself to you
When we meet for the first time I knew that you were the one for me, as I was for you for sure, we had a sacred deep connection, from the beginning.Yet it went deeper than that in retrospect of more details with understanding. For sure we felt differently then we ever felt before, as there was no negativity, just good vibes and positive energy for sure it felt simply Hypnotic, in a way as though we were walking up a flight of stairs, you on one side and me on the other side, going through the portal of miracles.
💕...
💕...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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2 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 11:15am
4th Apr 2025 11:15am
The Perfect World
Can you imagine a world with butterflies?
A world empty of pretty lies?
With light blue,sparkly skies?
Could you imagine the ground we stand?
Where justice and happiness defend?
A world empty of sadness or woe.
And empty of war and foe.
Where wind sways and flowers grow.
And there is one thing that everybody know.
A world where everything is bright and happy.
Maybe even wholesome or sappy.
A world where nobody cries.
Where sadness dies.
Nobody feels lonely and nobody denies.
Maybe a world of sunshine...
A world empty of pretty lies?
With light blue,sparkly skies?
Could you imagine the ground we stand?
Where justice and happiness defend?
A world empty of sadness or woe.
And empty of war and foe.
Where wind sways and flowers grow.
And there is one thing that everybody know.
A world where everything is bright and happy.
Maybe even wholesome or sappy.
A world where nobody cries.
Where sadness dies.
Nobody feels lonely and nobody denies.
Maybe a world of sunshine...
#hope
#motivational
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 11:05am
3rd Apr 2025 11:05am
Playing The Piano
The piano's keys made a noise.
That sounded like a lullaby,a voice.
As the hand went through the piano.
And it played their own song.
The melody was serene.
Peaceful,and very long.
Everyone clapped as they began to play.
Everybody listened and began to sway.
May I play with you,if I may?
Or hear your song someday?
Figures began to dance in your mind.
Your stress disappear as you unwind.
And the music became images,illusions.
Real,or in your head.
They become stories,that people will tell when you are...
That sounded like a lullaby,a voice.
As the hand went through the piano.
And it played their own song.
The melody was serene.
Peaceful,and very long.
Everyone clapped as they began to play.
Everybody listened and began to sway.
May I play with you,if I may?
Or hear your song someday?
Figures began to dance in your mind.
Your stress disappear as you unwind.
And the music became images,illusions.
Real,or in your head.
They become stories,that people will tell when you are...
#dance
#happiness
#hope
#music
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 11:00am
29th Mar 2025 11:00am
Loving Eyes
What happens underneath someone's eyes?
When they fall inlove and realize?
Does their life appear in front of their eyes?
Do they feel flutters in their stomach?
Or fantasize?
Is it like a shimmer in their eyes?
Or letting out dreamy sighs?
Let's go and swim in them together.
Imagine a person who's inlove,however.
The magic happening behind their eyes.
It's deeper than an ocean,you realize.
Maybe if you swim in it,it's like a red rose garden.
With roses,without any thorns.
Maybe it's magic,like a...
When they fall inlove and realize?
Does their life appear in front of their eyes?
Do they feel flutters in their stomach?
Or fantasize?
Is it like a shimmer in their eyes?
Or letting out dreamy sighs?
Let's go and swim in them together.
Imagine a person who's inlove,however.
The magic happening behind their eyes.
It's deeper than an ocean,you realize.
Maybe if you swim in it,it's like a red rose garden.
With roses,without any thorns.
Maybe it's magic,like a...
#FallingInLove
#happiness
#hope
#motivational
#uplifting
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
27th Mar 2025 10:56pm
27th Mar 2025 10:56pm
flower
in the sacrosanct disturbia
wandering through unsolicted
my soul breaks the surface of doubt
gentle need takes hold
and I know I want
my greed beholds beauty
with a deep exhale, I appreciate life
depressed states come and go
but my fascination with life only grows
pain makes me disassociate
still I cling to faith in something
even if it is a flower
who had the power to bloom today
turning her happy face to the sunshine
my disposition is lifted
and I get in sync with the rhythm of life ...
wandering through unsolicted
my soul breaks the surface of doubt
gentle need takes hold
and I know I want
my greed beholds beauty
with a deep exhale, I appreciate life
depressed states come and go
but my fascination with life only grows
pain makes me disassociate
still I cling to faith in something
even if it is a flower
who had the power to bloom today
turning her happy face to the sunshine
my disposition is lifted
and I get in sync with the rhythm of life ...
#uplifting
116 reads
5 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Mar 2025 3:54am
27th Mar 2025 3:54am
Your eyes are the key
From the very beginning of time it is said, that our eyes are the key 🗝️ to the deepness of our soul. For even now as I look into your eyes, I see the hurt and pain that you've had to endure in your life time. YET beneath the hurt and pain, 😞 you have a feeling of deepness that goes deeper than deep. Into the depths of your heart 💓 as it pours your sorrow, and hurt and confusion, into a pot of negativity. That has prevented you from seeing your true, growth and maturity, of your strength and courage and perseverance. For sure it's necessary, for you to analyze...
#dreams
#happiness
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
#uplifting
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 9:19pm
25th Mar 2025 9:19pm
Door to a new world
Open the door to a new world and set yourself free
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
A closed door will never allow you to reach your fullest potential
When you least expect it, someone considers you influential
Don't close your mind to people who may inspire
Create a bond amongst others, no need for barbwire
Open the door to a new world and set yourself free
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
A closed door will never allow you to reach your fullest potential
When you least expect it, someone considers you influential
Don't close your mind to people who may inspire
Create a bond amongst others, no need for barbwire
Open the door to a new world and set yourself free
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
136 reads
10 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 7:40pm
24th Mar 2025 7:40pm
I deserve it all
Twice the peace; twice the grace... Sound mind; steady pace
All the heights; I’m meant to chase... Man; I deserve it all.
Fewer foes; sharpest plans... Golden stocks and bigger brands
Built it up with my own hands... Yea; I deserve it all.
Shining stones; my wrist aglow... Seats reclined; the engines roar
Waves that kiss my private shore... I deserve it all.
Respect my name; let praises ring... Islands where the palm trees swing
Every blessing wealth can bring... I deserve it all.
For the my sister who left too...
All the heights; I’m meant to chase... Man; I deserve it all.
Fewer foes; sharpest plans... Golden stocks and bigger brands
Built it up with my own hands... Yea; I deserve it all.
Shining stones; my wrist aglow... Seats reclined; the engines roar
Waves that kiss my private shore... I deserve it all.
Respect my name; let praises ring... Islands where the palm trees swing
Every blessing wealth can bring... I deserve it all.
For the my sister who left too...
#faith
#hope
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 11:00am
21st Mar 2025 11:00am
Time Passing Through
Can't the future just wait?
Can't we pass the obstacles we await?
Could we fool and dodge fate?
They say the future is happy and bright.
But I can't help but worry at night.
Life is like an endless fight.
You fight to live and survive.
Or just sleep peacefully through the night.
Which one you get is not under your control.
We just want to savour the moment.
And not let the bad thoughts of the future take toll.
When you suddenly see the red lights.
When you went through all the struggles and fights.
I...
Can't we pass the obstacles we await?
Could we fool and dodge fate?
They say the future is happy and bright.
But I can't help but worry at night.
Life is like an endless fight.
You fight to live and survive.
Or just sleep peacefully through the night.
Which one you get is not under your control.
We just want to savour the moment.
And not let the bad thoughts of the future take toll.
When you suddenly see the red lights.
When you went through all the struggles and fights.
I...
#hope
#motivational
#MovingOn
#TimeHeals
#uplifting
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