Uplifting Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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uplifting seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 11:15am
4th Apr 2025 11:15am
The Perfect World
Can you imagine a world with butterflies?
A world empty of pretty lies?
With light blue,sparkly skies?
Could you imagine the ground we stand?
Where justice and happiness defend?
A world empty of sadness or woe.
And empty of war and foe.
Where wind sways and flowers grow.
And there is one thing that everybody know.
A world where everything is bright and happy.
Maybe even wholesome or sappy.
A world where nobody cries.
Where sadness dies.
Nobody feels lonely and nobody denies.
Maybe a world of sunshine...
A world empty of pretty lies?
With light blue,sparkly skies?
Could you imagine the ground we stand?
Where justice and happiness defend?
A world empty of sadness or woe.
And empty of war and foe.
Where wind sways and flowers grow.
And there is one thing that everybody know.
A world where everything is bright and happy.
Maybe even wholesome or sappy.
A world where nobody cries.
Where sadness dies.
Nobody feels lonely and nobody denies.
Maybe a world of sunshine...
#hope
#motivational
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 11:05am
3rd Apr 2025 11:05am
Playing The Piano
The piano's keys made a noise.
That sounded like a lullaby,a voice.
As the hand went through the piano.
And it played their own song.
The melody was serene.
Peaceful,and very long.
Everyone clapped as they began to play.
Everybody listened and began to sway.
May I play with you,if I may?
Or hear your song someday?
Figures began to dance in your mind.
Your stress disappear as you unwind.
And the music became images,illusions.
Real,or in your head.
They become stories,that people will tell when you are...
That sounded like a lullaby,a voice.
As the hand went through the piano.
And it played their own song.
The melody was serene.
Peaceful,and very long.
Everyone clapped as they began to play.
Everybody listened and began to sway.
May I play with you,if I may?
Or hear your song someday?
Figures began to dance in your mind.
Your stress disappear as you unwind.
And the music became images,illusions.
Real,or in your head.
They become stories,that people will tell when you are...
#dance
#happiness
#hope
#music
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 11:00am
29th Mar 2025 11:00am
Loving Eyes
What happens underneath someone's eyes?
When they fall inlove and realize?
Does their life appear in front of their eyes?
Do they feel flutters in their stomach?
Or fantasize?
Is it like a shimmer in their eyes?
Or letting out dreamy sighs?
Let's go and swim in them together.
Imagine a person who's inlove,however.
The magic happening behind their eyes.
It's deeper than an ocean,you realize.
Maybe if you swim in it,it's like a red rose garden.
With roses,without any thorns.
Maybe it's magic,like a...
When they fall inlove and realize?
Does their life appear in front of their eyes?
Do they feel flutters in their stomach?
Or fantasize?
Is it like a shimmer in their eyes?
Or letting out dreamy sighs?
Let's go and swim in them together.
Imagine a person who's inlove,however.
The magic happening behind their eyes.
It's deeper than an ocean,you realize.
Maybe if you swim in it,it's like a red rose garden.
With roses,without any thorns.
Maybe it's magic,like a...
#FallingInLove
#happiness
#hope
#motivational
#uplifting
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
27th Mar 2025 10:56pm
27th Mar 2025 10:56pm
flower
in the sacrosanct disturbia
wandering through unsolicted
my soul breaks the surface of doubt
gentle need takes hold
and I know I want
my greed beholds beauty
with a deep exhale, I appreciate life
depressed states come and go
but my fascination with life only grows
pain makes me disassociate
still I cling to faith in something
even if it is a flower
who had the power to bloom today
turning her happy face to the sunshine
my disposition is lifted
and I get in sync with the rhythm of life ...
wandering through unsolicted
my soul breaks the surface of doubt
gentle need takes hold
and I know I want
my greed beholds beauty
with a deep exhale, I appreciate life
depressed states come and go
but my fascination with life only grows
pain makes me disassociate
still I cling to faith in something
even if it is a flower
who had the power to bloom today
turning her happy face to the sunshine
my disposition is lifted
and I get in sync with the rhythm of life ...
#uplifting
80 reads
5 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Mar 2025 3:54am
27th Mar 2025 3:54am
Your eyes are the key
From the very beginning of time it is said, that our eyes are the key 🗝️ to the deepness of our soul. For even now as I look into your eyes, I see the hurt and pain that you've had to endure in your life time. YET beneath the hurt and pain, 😞 you have a feeling of deepness that goes deeper than deep. Into the depths of your heart 💓 as it pours your sorrow, and hurt and confusion, into a pot of negativity. That has prevented you from seeing your true, growth and maturity, of your strength and courage and perseverance. For sure it's necessary, for you to analyze...
#dreams
#happiness
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
#uplifting
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Duice
Poem Published
27th Mar 2025 1:42am
27th Mar 2025 1:42am
God of Forethought and Crafty Counsel
Intrigued don’t lose sight
analyzing this giant deity plot
thru fog clouds in your head
storm in turbulent gamut vivid scene
Nostradamus skywriting painting cumulous
mind you courtesy of titan imagery mindless
goggles shine god-like Prometheus
narrated clay in animated Geppetto dream
I’m A Real Boy
ball lightning spark hop-skip-danced
polarity in spirited pitch
Frankenstein puppet smiling thunderous in glee
Enhanced pen arts bow to me
magnetic stun in curtsy
mumble praise then Beam swoop conscious
clubbed pose pole as...
analyzing this giant deity plot
thru fog clouds in your head
storm in turbulent gamut vivid scene
Nostradamus skywriting painting cumulous
mind you courtesy of titan imagery mindless
goggles shine god-like Prometheus
narrated clay in animated Geppetto dream
I’m A Real Boy
ball lightning spark hop-skip-danced
polarity in spirited pitch
Frankenstein puppet smiling thunderous in glee
Enhanced pen arts bow to me
magnetic stun in curtsy
mumble praise then Beam swoop conscious
clubbed pose pole as...
#uplifting
100 reads
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 9:19pm
25th Mar 2025 9:19pm
Door to a new world
Open the door to a new world and set yourself free
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
A closed door will never allow you to reach your fullest potential
When you least expect it, someone considers you influential
Don't close your mind to people who may inspire
Create a bond amongst others, no need for barbwire
Open the door to a new world and set yourself free
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
A closed door will never allow you to reach your fullest potential
When you least expect it, someone considers you influential
Don't close your mind to people who may inspire
Create a bond amongst others, no need for barbwire
Open the door to a new world and set yourself free
Open the door to a new world, set your mind at ease
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
89 reads
10 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 7:40pm
24th Mar 2025 7:40pm
I deserve it all
Twice the peace; twice the grace... Sound mind; steady pace
All the heights; I’m meant to chase... Man; I deserve it all.
Fewer foes; sharpest plans... Golden stocks and bigger brands
Built it up with my own hands... Yea; I deserve it all.
Shining stones; my wrist aglow... Seats reclined; the engines roar
Waves that kiss my private shore... I deserve it all.
Respect my name; let praises ring... Islands where the palm trees swing
Every blessing wealth can bring... I deserve it all.
For the my sister who left too...
All the heights; I’m meant to chase... Man; I deserve it all.
Fewer foes; sharpest plans... Golden stocks and bigger brands
Built it up with my own hands... Yea; I deserve it all.
Shining stones; my wrist aglow... Seats reclined; the engines roar
Waves that kiss my private shore... I deserve it all.
Respect my name; let praises ring... Islands where the palm trees swing
Every blessing wealth can bring... I deserve it all.
For the my sister who left too...
#faith
#hope
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 11:00am
21st Mar 2025 11:00am
Time Passing Through
Can't the future just wait?
Can't we pass the obstacles we await?
Could we fool and dodge fate?
They say the future is happy and bright.
But I can't help but worry at night.
Life is like an endless fight.
You fight to live and survive.
Or just sleep peacefully through the night.
Which one you get is not under your control.
We just want to savour the moment.
And not let the bad thoughts of the future take toll.
When you suddenly see the red lights.
When you went through all the struggles and fights.
I...
Can't we pass the obstacles we await?
Could we fool and dodge fate?
They say the future is happy and bright.
But I can't help but worry at night.
Life is like an endless fight.
You fight to live and survive.
Or just sleep peacefully through the night.
Which one you get is not under your control.
We just want to savour the moment.
And not let the bad thoughts of the future take toll.
When you suddenly see the red lights.
When you went through all the struggles and fights.
I...
#hope
#motivational
#MovingOn
#TimeHeals
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 3:47pm
19th Mar 2025 3:47pm
Foot Steps in the clouds
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ Have you ever stop and look and listen to your footsteps of where, you've been and gone through the process of living your own life. As you've had your share of the ups and downs that came with life, for sure we will have and had some rough times as well as some good times. For let's be honest and truthful with thyself, as we reflect upon our steps through this cycle of your life. For sure we've had our share of disappointments, and moments when we shed some tears, when we were alone. But yet we somehow was able to stay focus,...
#emotional
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
17th Mar 2025 10:56am
17th Mar 2025 10:56am
Warmth
I don't know what's about the feeling.
Of warmth that comforts us and gets us reeling.
Maybe it's the way it reminds you of a friend's warm hug.
Or your own child,gently catching your attention by tugging on your shirt.
The warmth of sunshine rays.
On hot summer beach days.
The dear childhood days when you used to play.
And the times you would create.
The memories you hold onto.
And the upcoming of fate.
The warm sensation warmth does create.
Sometimes it can soothe the soul.
Or chase away any negative emotion...
Of warmth that comforts us and gets us reeling.
Maybe it's the way it reminds you of a friend's warm hug.
Or your own child,gently catching your attention by tugging on your shirt.
The warmth of sunshine rays.
On hot summer beach days.
The dear childhood days when you used to play.
And the times you would create.
The memories you hold onto.
And the upcoming of fate.
The warm sensation warmth does create.
Sometimes it can soothe the soul.
Or chase away any negative emotion...
#hope
#loneliness
#motivational #uplifting
#motivational #uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Mar 2025 5:37am
17th Mar 2025 5:37am
The past is your future
When you have to go through things somethings in life, sometimes we have to learn to understand that everything happens, for a reason which makes them become out of our own control of our own hands. For sure it's true that we all will go through somethings that we may, never truly understand but yet it's those things that will affect us and change us in so many ways. For it's true when we have to deal with cancers and some other type of diseases, life becomes so unbearable with the pain just going through the chemotherapy, and radiation treatments. That we just wanna give up hope and stop...
#dialogue
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
100 reads
3 Comments
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