Poems About the Universe by Top Critiquers
#universe
Poems about the universe by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Glaxian
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 10:05pm
18th Jan 2025 10:05pm
Sometimes
Sometimes]
In the dead of night, when I'm all alone
Reality seems squishy, the day's strife is done.
Not quite awake and not quite asleep
I don't know if the nightmare is over
Or about to begin
Let me try this again....
In the night season, when I'm all alone
Reality blurs the sounds of the night.
It's just not right, the body is weary
but the mind will not unload.
Again....
I'm all alone chilled to the bone
Alone, alone, reach for the phone
No one to call, no one at all, fall
I'd fall...
In the dead of night, when I'm all alone
Reality seems squishy, the day's strife is done.
Not quite awake and not quite asleep
I don't know if the nightmare is over
Or about to begin
Let me try this again....
In the night season, when I'm all alone
Reality blurs the sounds of the night.
It's just not right, the body is weary
but the mind will not unload.
Again....
I'm all alone chilled to the bone
Alone, alone, reach for the phone
No one to call, no one at all, fall
I'd fall...
#aliens
#night
#nightmares
#unicorns
#universe
98 reads
5 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
8th Jan 2024 3:54pm
8th Jan 2024 3:54pm
Light Years
Light Years
The farthest back I can remember, there were already forms…forms, faces, locations. I remember seeing them and watching them like I was a viewer with no body of my own. It all felt familiar but mostly random. The people and the places didn’t seem to match and would often switch without reason. I remember feeling very strong connections to many of the images I saw, but I cannot refine a memory to a particular emotional reaction to a particular scenario.
I have no way to measure how long things went on like that, but, eventually, the forms and faces and...
The farthest back I can remember, there were already forms…forms, faces, locations. I remember seeing them and watching them like I was a viewer with no body of my own. It all felt familiar but mostly random. The people and the places didn’t seem to match and would often switch without reason. I remember feeling very strong connections to many of the images I saw, but I cannot refine a memory to a particular emotional reaction to a particular scenario.
I have no way to measure how long things went on like that, but, eventually, the forms and faces and...
#universe
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#philosophical
#scifi
216 reads
1 Comment
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 4:47pm
2nd Dec 2024 4:47pm
Drowning In A Daylight Nightmare
Where are we heading
Human nature helplessly wondering
Mother Nature hopefully warning..
A submerged universe
By a torrent of floods curse
What is coming hope not worse..
A world of less and less meaning
For all those on the surface floating
Solid grounds nolonger touching..
To what is occurring inside unaware
Unable to see the gloom and void in the air
Drowning in a daylight nightmare..
Trapped in a web of wealth and profusion
Full to the brim the sight in confusion
Bathing in...
Human nature helplessly wondering
Mother Nature hopefully warning..
A submerged universe
By a torrent of floods curse
What is coming hope not worse..
A world of less and less meaning
For all those on the surface floating
Solid grounds nolonger touching..
To what is occurring inside unaware
Unable to see the gloom and void in the air
Drowning in a daylight nightmare..
Trapped in a web of wealth and profusion
Full to the brim the sight in confusion
Bathing in...
#humankind
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeCycle
#technology
#universe
117 reads
6 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
6th Apr 2023 2:02am
6th Apr 2023 2:02am
Reality Is Mind
Reality Is Mind
The function
of the form is
to house
that function.
The form
is its own function.
The CTMU:
The back
of the head
evolved eyes
on its blindside,
knowing exactly
what it would find:
the Self-Directed,
still evolving.
Submitting
to reality
and dominating
our vanities,
we bring
all sides
of ourselves
into inner,
integrated
harmony.
The function
of the form is
to house
that function.
The form
is its own function.
The CTMU:
The back
of the head
evolved eyes
on its blindside,
knowing exactly
what it would find:
the Self-Directed,
still evolving.
Submitting
to reality
and dominating
our vanities,
we bring
all sides
of ourselves
into inner,
integrated
harmony.
#universe
#shadows
#evolution
241 reads
2 Comments
darkcloud68
Poem Published
20th Aug 2024 9:12pm
20th Aug 2024 9:12pm
Life In Motion
Life is all motion as we are the movement of the seas. Oh life is all motion, as I feel it's vast waves moving through me. I'm am just as the movement of leaves upon a tree blowing in the breeze. I am as limitless as the sky above my head. So limitless and free.
Dreams are for sleeping. Subconscious movements of the mind. I'm am just a time traveler moving through time. Life is for the claimers and I am claiming mines.The sun rays are shining on my face. And I am claiming it's shine. I am the owner of my vineyards. I love the sweetness of it's grapes I am the maker of wines. I am the...
Dreams are for sleeping. Subconscious movements of the mind. I'm am just a time traveler moving through time. Life is for the claimers and I am claiming mines.The sun rays are shining on my face. And I am claiming it's shine. I am the owner of my vineyards. I love the sweetness of it's grapes I am the maker of wines. I am the...
#universe
215 reads
2 Comments
REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
6th Jul 2024 12:06pm
6th Jul 2024 12:06pm
"Secret Invasion " A24×8!!
In the Age, of true light which dissipates all illusions brought forth with the help of the moon's light!
Manipulated and created within, A.I.'s!
Meaning angel's intelligence fused and used by liquid crystal technology working in tandem, fuel for all vices!
Facilitated and coordinated throughout all and every device's, strategically making it easy to attach and latch on to those with low vibrational energy!!
Taking control of your mind while erasing your memory!
Because at the end of every century the earth 🌎 resets and the wave...
Manipulated and created within, A.I.'s!
Meaning angel's intelligence fused and used by liquid crystal technology working in tandem, fuel for all vices!
Facilitated and coordinated throughout all and every device's, strategically making it easy to attach and latch on to those with low vibrational energy!!
Taking control of your mind while erasing your memory!
Because at the end of every century the earth 🌎 resets and the wave...
#aliens
#earth
#evolution
#moon
#universe
238 reads
2 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
15th Oct 2021 2:21pm
15th Oct 2021 2:21pm
Splitting Hairs
Hair is there -
[a fixation and fluctuation]
in layers
over
the
Lair
of perception
in layers
of
cares
that capture and caress
the remainder and the rest
of
what
is
There,
and there, there is the innocuous
hidden away things
Hideous
made beauteous
in
this
Plethora of awareness
into studious
Examination -
[Cascades and a caress]
in
Contours
of
streams...
[a fixation and fluctuation]
in layers
over
the
Lair
of perception
in layers
of
cares
that capture and caress
the remainder and the rest
of
what
is
There,
and there, there is the innocuous
hidden away things
Hideous
made beauteous
in
this
Plethora of awareness
into studious
Examination -
[Cascades and a caress]
in
Contours
of
streams...
#universe
377 reads
4 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
22nd May 2024 7:54am
22nd May 2024 7:54am
Beautiful Uniqueness
I am a strange creature
Of the humanly persuasion
Set apart by only
My beautiful uniqueness
I bow before no one
Responsible for my actions
And mine alone
The universe exists for me
But doesn't revolve around me
I am of little importance
Except for what
I can do for others
That is my purpose
And that alone
For my birth
In truth, I am nothing more
Than a tiny fly speck
On the aamazing face
Of this thing called earth
Of the humanly persuasion
Set apart by only
My beautiful uniqueness
I bow before no one
Responsible for my actions
And mine alone
The universe exists for me
But doesn't revolve around me
I am of little importance
Except for what
I can do for others
That is my purpose
And that alone
For my birth
In truth, I am nothing more
Than a tiny fly speck
On the aamazing face
Of this thing called earth
#earth
#identity
#myself #universe
#myself #universe
174 reads
8 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
25th May 2024 3:36am
25th May 2024 3:36am
The Poetic Universe
High above clouds blanketing a sleeping earth
pale horizon fades into the vast universe
Tiny dots of brilliance, so small to my eyes
possess magnitude that baffles my limited mind
If miniscule is enormous, then my big problems are small
as distance and eternity dwarf them all
A fresh perspective on our differences unfolding
as ancient light gains new meaning upon our beholding
The Creator of stars and planets and oceans
saw fit to equip me with words and emotions
So this gift I’ll employ to share a truth with you: ...
pale horizon fades into the vast universe
Tiny dots of brilliance, so small to my eyes
possess magnitude that baffles my limited mind
If miniscule is enormous, then my big problems are small
as distance and eternity dwarf them all
A fresh perspective on our differences unfolding
as ancient light gains new meaning upon our beholding
The Creator of stars and planets and oceans
saw fit to equip me with words and emotions
So this gift I’ll employ to share a truth with you: ...
#love
#spiritual
#universe
367 reads
11 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 11:01pm
14th Oct 2024 11:01pm
The Evolution Of A Mad Genius
energies felt and absorbed...
was light the first technology based orb?
placed upon a grid of both math and molecule build
amassed locomotion to realize the visions being seen
building block by block
a mad genius of mass proportions
sound may have been the first break iin understanding
a language understood or sung
the sun is largely made of up nuclear energy
solar flairs tears apart mars
there was technology their at one time...it seems
as well as a healthy atmosphere
advanced...
was light the first technology based orb?
placed upon a grid of both math and molecule build
amassed locomotion to realize the visions being seen
building block by block
a mad genius of mass proportions
sound may have been the first break iin understanding
a language understood or sung
the sun is largely made of up nuclear energy
solar flairs tears apart mars
there was technology their at one time...it seems
as well as a healthy atmosphere
advanced...
#God
#metaphor
#philosophical
#technology
#universe
98 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2023 3:11am
23rd Jul 2023 3:11am
Our Scanners Probed A Comet
Our scanners probed a
comet that zoomed its way past
our ship still in space.
comet that zoomed its way past
our ship still in space.
#universe
#haiku
#fiction
#dialogue
#scifi
191 reads
4 Comments
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