Poems About Tolerance Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about tolerance seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
CarrionCrow44
Poem Published
15th Dec 2021 8:22am
15th Dec 2021 8:22am
A Spark
I saw whitecaps
And thunder over the hill
Rain pelts worn rock
Seeping below
Sitting here
Scribbling little notes
Like soldiers after the battle
Nervous and in ruin
Nothing is wrong
But my frown won’t crown
Keeping my head turning inside out
Maybe one day
I’ll see the sun come out
But not now, so I shouldn’t doubt
Stars go small
They glow in the dark
A crescent blue moon appears
Leading them along
Embers somber
And daylight surfaces
A flicker, a spark I once knew...
And thunder over the hill
Rain pelts worn rock
Seeping below
Sitting here
Scribbling little notes
Like soldiers after the battle
Nervous and in ruin
Nothing is wrong
But my frown won’t crown
Keeping my head turning inside out
Maybe one day
I’ll see the sun come out
But not now, so I shouldn’t doubt
Stars go small
They glow in the dark
A crescent blue moon appears
Leading them along
Embers somber
And daylight surfaces
A flicker, a spark I once knew...
#tolerance
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0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
13th Oct 2021 1:01am
13th Oct 2021 1:01am
the arms of grace
just think if compassion
and mercy
were not uncommon
acts,
what if these virtues
came a easily as drinking
water, breathing, or
sleeping.
what would this world
be like:
wars, genocide, atrocities
would end,
hunger, homelessness,
poverty would no
longer be tolerated,
addiction, abuse,
domestic violence
would desolve before
the continence of
grace
can you picture a
world like
this?
...you can!
come on ...
and mercy
were not uncommon
acts,
what if these virtues
came a easily as drinking
water, breathing, or
sleeping.
what would this world
be like:
wars, genocide, atrocities
would end,
hunger, homelessness,
poverty would no
longer be tolerated,
addiction, abuse,
domestic violence
would desolve before
the continence of
grace
can you picture a
world like
this?
...you can!
come on ...
#kindness
#courage
#peace
#healing
#tolerance
576 reads
16 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
4th Oct 2021 1:04am
4th Oct 2021 1:04am
everyone knows best
not particularly careful
about what I say, but I mean well let’s leave it to others
to interpret as they may
about what I say, but I mean well let’s leave it to others
to interpret as they may
#tolerance
297 reads
4 Comments
Mastersensation
Pent
Pent
Poem Published
22nd Jul 2021 00:32am
22nd Jul 2021 00:32am
Ukulele
She plays her ukulele
A single mom next door
I think that she's improving
Told her to play it more
Someone shouted once
"You're playing it too loud"
She continued strumming
Made me kinda proud
I've been in her shoes
With a trumpet, and guitar
Played in our garage
The door was not ajar
I admit to playing poor
Was hard to tolerate
But now I'm good at both
Though I never will be great
A single mom next door
I think that she's improving
Told her to play it more
Someone shouted once
"You're playing it too loud"
She continued strumming
Made me kinda proud
I've been in her shoes
With a trumpet, and guitar
Played in our garage
The door was not ajar
I admit to playing poor
Was hard to tolerate
But now I'm good at both
Though I never will be great
#music
#tolerance
322 reads
2 Comments
POETICIASIMPLY
Poem Published
12th Jul 2021 1:15pm
12th Jul 2021 1:15pm
Auction DownFall Bidding
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#strength
#honesty
#humankind
#misunderstood
#tolerance
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0 Comments
Quizzy29
Tanzo Ellis
Tanzo Ellis
Poem Published
20th Jun 2021 11:43pm
20th Jun 2021 11:43pm
My fault not to be determined
I seemed to always be the one to lose my temper first.
You never seemed to pay attention to my actions more than my words.
Apparently, I was the one who needed a lesson in patience.
You watched as I cried through my emotions.
I needed your stability with no credibility.
You ignored my attempts, & played with my fears.
I became unrecognizable standing in front of you.
(Mis-understanding)
You never seemed to pay attention to my actions more than my words.
Apparently, I was the one who needed a lesson in patience.
You watched as I cried through my emotions.
I needed your stability with no credibility.
You ignored my attempts, & played with my fears.
I became unrecognizable standing in front of you.
(Mis-understanding)
#strength
#patience
#wisdom #tolerance
#wisdom #tolerance
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bandit
Poem Published
17th May 2021 11:23am
17th May 2021 11:23am
Communicate
all I want to say
yesterday was the start of today
that's how we build a better tomorrow
no longer to rely on hope
it is now built on faith
to communicate the need
that is the relationship we need
yesterday was the start of today
that's how we build a better tomorrow
no longer to rely on hope
it is now built on faith
to communicate the need
that is the relationship we need
#strength
#rebirth
#spiritual
#redemption
#tolerance
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0 Comments
4Her411
Poem Published
7th May 2021 4:23am
7th May 2021 4:23am
I wish
I wish I could softly speak
to speak cautiously
so you could hear my heart
in ways to get my points across
I wish I could softy speak
as delicately in my poetry
for the affirmation through
the word I us. The touch I give
I wish I could softly speak
to equal the word I write
the true feelings from my heart
I do right
to speak cautiously
so you could hear my heart
in ways to get my points across
I wish I could softy speak
as delicately in my poetry
for the affirmation through
the word I us. The touch I give
I wish I could softly speak
to equal the word I write
the true feelings from my heart
I do right
#happiness
#love
#forgiveness
#patience
#tolerance
507 reads
2 Comments
BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
1st May 2021 9:41pm
1st May 2021 9:41pm
“Mind Their Business“ ... Written By Big Virge 30/11/2019
Man ... Can I Get A Witness ... ?!?
Cos It Seems That Some People ...
Just Do Not Know How To ...
... Mind Their Business ... !!!
As If They Can See ...
Through The Eye of MY Needle ...
Needle ... As In ...
My Resorting To Sin ...
Because of The Cheek ...
of These IGNORANT Peeps ... !!!
They’d Best Stay OFF My Course ...
Before I Enforce A War That Ensures ...
That They Cannot Resort ...
To Anything More Than Holding Their Jaws ... !!!
...
Cos It Seems That Some People ...
Just Do Not Know How To ...
... Mind Their Business ... !!!
As If They Can See ...
Through The Eye of MY Needle ...
Needle ... As In ...
My Resorting To Sin ...
Because of The Cheek ...
of These IGNORANT Peeps ... !!!
They’d Best Stay OFF My Course ...
Before I Enforce A War That Ensures ...
That They Cannot Resort ...
To Anything More Than Holding Their Jaws ... !!!
...
#anger
#jealousy
#relationships
#frustration
#tolerance
338 reads
2 Comments
TimWombles
Poem Published
27th Apr 2021 2:55pm
27th Apr 2021 2:55pm
Choices
Some people see the human body as a work of art
A thing of beauty that strikes to the heart
Tattoos to them are like graffiti on a Monet
I'm afraid that's me, what more can I say?
Some people see the human body as a canvas, a blank slate
The...
A thing of beauty that strikes to the heart
Tattoos to them are like graffiti on a Monet
I'm afraid that's me, what more can I say?
Some people see the human body as a canvas, a blank slate
The...
#choices
#tolerance
#acceptance
430 reads
6 Comments
bandit
Poem Published
24th Apr 2021 5:22pm
24th Apr 2021 5:22pm
How sad (empty nest)
marriage should be about him and you
not an empty nest feeling nothing left
how sad that raising kids is all you feel you had
so from your wedding day today raising kids
sharing a bed you have nothing left
there is time left to build that relationship
where did those unbridled feelings go
before the kids and growing old
refresh that first night you met
start dating rekindle those feeling renewed
there was something special wasn't there then
to many empty nest stories resides
don't just through away 20 or 30 years of life ...
not an empty nest feeling nothing left
how sad that raising kids is all you feel you had
so from your wedding day today raising kids
sharing a bed you have nothing left
there is time left to build that relationship
where did those unbridled feelings go
before the kids and growing old
refresh that first night you met
start dating rekindle those feeling renewed
there was something special wasn't there then
to many empty nest stories resides
don't just through away 20 or 30 years of life ...
#children
#memories
#escape
#sacrifice
#tolerance
253 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
26th Mar 2021 00:38am
26th Mar 2021 00:38am
it ill chimes
orwell was homophobic, and
yet in all else a good man, and should a good man be defined by the prejudice of his times?
yet in all else a good man, and should a good man be defined by the prejudice of his times?
#tolerance
501 reads
2 Comments
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