Poems About Tolerance Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about tolerance seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 1:18pm
23rd Dec 2024 1:18pm
Seriously though, you look great!
When I saw you waddle past me with your four kids, I felt sorry for your husband
Imagine him trying to get excited over that wide, blubbery ass of yours
I bet he feels like a man whose life has ended way to early
Well, shut my mouth!!
Who the hell do I think I am talking like that?
I have no right!
Maybe your husband is a fat piece of shit like you and he doesn't notice
Maybe you turn him on
Maybe that 10 mile wide ass of yours gets him going
Maybe he thinks that's the best thing he's ever seen
Come on, let's not kid ourselves here
I...
Imagine him trying to get excited over that wide, blubbery ass of yours
I bet he feels like a man whose life has ended way to early
Well, shut my mouth!!
Who the hell do I think I am talking like that?
I have no right!
Maybe your husband is a fat piece of shit like you and he doesn't notice
Maybe you turn him on
Maybe that 10 mile wide ass of yours gets him going
Maybe he thinks that's the best thing he's ever seen
Come on, let's not kid ourselves here
I...
#honesty
#inspirational
#love
#sex
#tolerance
92 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 1:15pm
23rd Dec 2024 1:15pm
Hard-Up People Suck!
I wanted to tell you something
I don't want to call or text on the phone
I-phones Suck!!
Writing is what I'm going to do
If I wait another day, I may not be able to do this
Well here it goes....
You are the 1st person I ever wanted to punch in the mouth
I guess you didn't want to hear that but that's the fucking truth
I think you're a stupid piece of shit
You buy me food and then you want to fuck me
I have to leave to go to work and you get all mad at me
Then say I'm not paying attention to you
You want me more then...
I don't want to call or text on the phone
I-phones Suck!!
Writing is what I'm going to do
If I wait another day, I may not be able to do this
Well here it goes....
You are the 1st person I ever wanted to punch in the mouth
I guess you didn't want to hear that but that's the fucking truth
I think you're a stupid piece of shit
You buy me food and then you want to fuck me
I have to leave to go to work and you get all mad at me
Then say I'm not paying attention to you
You want me more then...
#boredom
#denial
#emptiness #tolerance
#emptiness #tolerance
78 reads
14 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 9:23pm
28th Nov 2024 9:23pm
Mr. Grinch
Honestly since you asked
I’m disgruntled
enjoying today alone cup near full
Quick temper galore
I’m typically Mr. Freeze solo
during holidays
it's a dagger in the ice chest
that goes ignored
Intoxicated subzero don’t do toxic stupid shit
like suicide or murder
that’s poison ivy black rose debauchery
just one more dark problem
Life is perception some perceive demons
I make tea for mine
when not decimating them,
urbane Alfred: Batman & Robin
I been embrace the shadows
depress at least 20...
I’m disgruntled
enjoying today alone cup near full
Quick temper galore
I’m typically Mr. Freeze solo
during holidays
it's a dagger in the ice chest
that goes ignored
Intoxicated subzero don’t do toxic stupid shit
like suicide or murder
that’s poison ivy black rose debauchery
just one more dark problem
Life is perception some perceive demons
I make tea for mine
when not decimating them,
urbane Alfred: Batman & Robin
I been embrace the shadows
depress at least 20...
#emptiness
#holiday
#MentalHealth
#tolerance
#depression
134 reads
1 Comment
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 9:58pm
10th Nov 2024 9:58pm
By the light of the fire we write
Tears refuse to fall
Words remain unspoken
The potent mind
Rusts in soulessness
The aces are held
So are the kings and queens
Held as they deal
Without faces
Everybody loses
Details, details in truth
Crash of sensibiltiy
Mowing the grass
Pulling out the flowering weeds
Sheltering the undergrowth
For reptilian love
What should be done is forgotten
What is done is murderous
What could be done, is buried
Under tons of wasted thoughts
All we need is taken
Stolen and...
Words remain unspoken
The potent mind
Rusts in soulessness
The aces are held
So are the kings and queens
Held as they deal
Without faces
Everybody loses
Details, details in truth
Crash of sensibiltiy
Mowing the grass
Pulling out the flowering weeds
Sheltering the undergrowth
For reptilian love
What should be done is forgotten
What is done is murderous
What could be done, is buried
Under tons of wasted thoughts
All we need is taken
Stolen and...
#dark
#greed
#hope
#kindness
#tolerance
85 reads
2 Comments
Louisamay
JaneyBean
JaneyBean
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 9:39pm
10th Nov 2024 9:39pm
It Seems
It seems everyone knows best
My way or the highway
My politics are the only way
And I won’t accept you feel that way
I understand and you don’t
And so we will be enemies
I cannot accept your point of view
It affects me too much
I’m not a snowflake I’m just right
I’m sensitive, my mental health is fragile
And because of the way I feel
I can’t trust my fellow humans
You were wrong
And to hell with democracy if it doesn’t go my way
Hang on that’s a bit religious hmm
American against American
It’s so sad ...
My way or the highway
My politics are the only way
And I won’t accept you feel that way
I understand and you don’t
And so we will be enemies
I cannot accept your point of view
It affects me too much
I’m not a snowflake I’m just right
I’m sensitive, my mental health is fragile
And because of the way I feel
I can’t trust my fellow humans
You were wrong
And to hell with democracy if it doesn’t go my way
Hang on that’s a bit religious hmm
American against American
It’s so sad ...
#kindness
#love
#philosophical
#politics
#tolerance
65 reads
5 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
28th Oct 2024 10:50am
28th Oct 2024 10:50am
No One
No one cares what I say
I say it everyday and twice on Sundays
Do you hear what I say when you look away from me
I hear what you say even in my sleep and my
Not nightmares
Wake up in the middle of the day
Try to find a compass
I hear what you mean even in the in between
I see what you see in your daydreams
I realize it’s not a dream but real life
No one hears me so I scream
Yell out from the rooftops
And to the ocean
But no one hears my plea to save me
But no one hears...
I say it everyday and twice on Sundays
Do you hear what I say when you look away from me
I hear what you say even in my sleep and my
Not nightmares
Wake up in the middle of the day
Try to find a compass
I hear what you mean even in the in between
I see what you see in your daydreams
I realize it’s not a dream but real life
No one hears me so I scream
Yell out from the rooftops
And to the ocean
But no one hears my plea to save me
But no one hears...
#children
#dark
#honesty
#hypocrisy
#tolerance
74 reads
0 Comments
ArnoMalan1
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 00:56am
8th Oct 2024 00:56am
Shallow words
Don't want to believe it, embrace it
anymore
Don't want to get caught up, end up
anymore
Don't want to allow it, accept it
anymore
Shallow words,
they come so easily
Each time they use them
they become more empty
So easily they lie,
true colors expose it
Their actions are real
and they don't even know it
Don't want to lean on, look for
anymore
Don't want to let it, trust it
anymore
Cause I can't keep trying, keep fighting
anymore
Shallow words, ...
anymore
Don't want to get caught up, end up
anymore
Don't want to allow it, accept it
anymore
Shallow words,
they come so easily
Each time they use them
they become more empty
So easily they lie,
true colors expose it
Their actions are real
and they don't even know it
Don't want to lean on, look for
anymore
Don't want to let it, trust it
anymore
Cause I can't keep trying, keep fighting
anymore
Shallow words, ...
#honesty
#tolerance
96 reads
1 Comment
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
7th Sep 2024 6:36pm
7th Sep 2024 6:36pm
My temporary job
work in progress (will rewrite later)
#job
#tolerance
84 reads
1 Comment
AprylNovember
A.R.M.
A.R.M.
Poem Published
4th Sep 2024 2:04am
4th Sep 2024 2:04am
Dinner with the devil
The devil came, to dinner one night.
He was a man, all dressed in white.
Light in manner, confessed a sinner.
Proved good manners, all through dinner.
Soon the devil, showed up often.
So thought that, I could help him.
He seemed to share, my every thought.
He filled up all, the empty spots.
To look the devil straight, you see.
A man that's vulnerable, I his need.
And since my thoughts, are always good.
I'd protect him, as I should.
Then the day, he showed late.
Dinner cold, made...
He was a man, all dressed in white.
Light in manner, confessed a sinner.
Proved good manners, all through dinner.
Soon the devil, showed up often.
So thought that, I could help him.
He seemed to share, my every thought.
He filled up all, the empty spots.
To look the devil straight, you see.
A man that's vulnerable, I his need.
And since my thoughts, are always good.
I'd protect him, as I should.
Then the day, he showed late.
Dinner cold, made...
#hypocrisy
#strength
#tolerance #wisdom
#tolerance #wisdom
139 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
4th Sep 2024 00:39am
4th Sep 2024 00:39am
a cry from the carriage
there’s scaffolding all over the city,
as though the structures might fall
down any minute, but it’s only
the bloody trains that are held up ..
as though the structures might fall
down any minute, but it’s only
the bloody trains that are held up ..
#tolerance
87 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Aug 2024 1:45am
2nd Aug 2024 1:45am
CREATURES OF HABITS
As we exchange our own personal chains of thoughts and insight, into this senseless mindless trap between the lines of your own personal. REALITY of what is right and wrong 🤔 For have you ever been in a relationship or situation, that you have felt like a outer experience. FOR your thoughts and insight and imagination. 🤨 Become slowly something that you have or not never had to expected. TO ever happens to just you yet there is no longer a exception. TO the rules of what is known of your own personal life. 😞 AS people are creatures of habits. For a snake sheds it's...
#honesty
#misunderstood
#sacrifice
#strength
#tolerance
109 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Jun 2024 11:52am
29th Jun 2024 11:52am
What are you doing tonight
When I saw you waddle past me with your four kids, I felt sorry for your husband
Imagine him trying to get excited over that wide, blubbery ass of yours
I bet he feels like a man whose life has ended way to early
Well, shut my mouth!!
Who the hell do I think I am talking like that?
I have no right!
Maybe your husband is a fat piece of shit like you and he doesn't notice
Maybe you turn him on
Maybe that 10 mile wide ass of yours gets him going
Maybe he thinks that's the best thing he's ever seen
Come on, let's not kid ourselves here
I...
Imagine him trying to get excited over that wide, blubbery ass of yours
I bet he feels like a man whose life has ended way to early
Well, shut my mouth!!
Who the hell do I think I am talking like that?
I have no right!
Maybe your husband is a fat piece of shit like you and he doesn't notice
Maybe you turn him on
Maybe that 10 mile wide ass of yours gets him going
Maybe he thinks that's the best thing he's ever seen
Come on, let's not kid ourselves here
I...
#honesty
#inspirational
#respect
#sex
#tolerance
140 reads
10 Comments
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