Poems About Tobacco Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about tobacco seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
20th May 2022 00:26am
20th May 2022 00:26am
such a common place addiction
really cut down on the cigarettes,
I freely admit I haven’t felt able to give them up
entirely my fault,
of course
one regrets ..
I freely admit I haven’t felt able to give them up
entirely my fault,
of course
one regrets ..
#tobacco
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0 Comments
DreamIllusions
Poem Published
19th May 2022 11:14pm
19th May 2022 11:14pm
Secondhand Smoke
Breathe. Swallow. Drown.
Now you’re lost where no one
Will come down
Down to find you in the deep
In the dark
Of secondhand smoke
Where lips curl
Dissatisfied
And the snarl
Provokes the night
To leave
But you’re still down there
At the bottom of the shallows
Hungrily searching for something
Anything
Except the secondhand smoke
That fills you up
From the inside out
It goes in smooth
And comes out jagged
Taking with it pieces
Of the pink flesh
Of your lungs
So when others borrow...
Now you’re lost where no one
Will come down
Down to find you in the deep
In the dark
Of secondhand smoke
Where lips curl
Dissatisfied
And the snarl
Provokes the night
To leave
But you’re still down there
At the bottom of the shallows
Hungrily searching for something
Anything
Except the secondhand smoke
That fills you up
From the inside out
It goes in smooth
And comes out jagged
Taking with it pieces
Of the pink flesh
Of your lungs
So when others borrow...
#city
#marijuana
#tobacco
#dirty
#FeelingTrapped
569 reads
1 Comment
TimWombles
Poem Published
13th Jun 2021 6:38am
13th Jun 2021 6:38am
You Really Don't
You really don't want to be around us right now
My wife without her smokes
And me being a fat man who can't eat
I love her and she loves me
But you can't tell it
We're both at each others throats
We know what it is
And we get over it
But lets be honest
It's ugly
A friend came over today
"Why aren't you smiling? You're always smiling"
I put one of those fake smiles, and sipped my water
"I'll live longer," I remind myself
A thought comes to my mind
"If this is going to be my diet, do I want to?"
I ponder ...
My wife without her smokes
And me being a fat man who can't eat
I love her and she loves me
But you can't tell it
We're both at each others throats
We know what it is
And we get over it
But lets be honest
It's ugly
A friend came over today
"Why aren't you smiling? You're always smiling"
I put one of those fake smiles, and sipped my water
"I'll live longer," I remind myself
A thought comes to my mind
"If this is going to be my diet, do I want to?"
I ponder ...
#anxiety
#tobacco
#diabetes
519 reads
9 Comments
Harold-Weathervein
Poem Published
4th Mar 2021 3:47pm
4th Mar 2021 3:47pm
Let The Nicotine Fly Higher Than The Birds Over Superior Lake. (the gig was up. I should have set sail at dawn.)
Gloomy midwestern mornings.
I'm sure some ass-hole wrote about its beauty.
I'm sure i'm guilty of it. Anyways...
I had bought a bag of rolling tobacco a week back.
I quit smoking 8, 9 years ago.
When I was with an ex-girl, I had picked up rolling my own,
for...financial reasons I explained.
What I didn't tell her in that Duluth? hotel
was that I started rolling as an excuse to get away from her.
She hated the smell more than a regular cigarette somehow. ...
I'm sure some ass-hole wrote about its beauty.
I'm sure i'm guilty of it. Anyways...
I had bought a bag of rolling tobacco a week back.
I quit smoking 8, 9 years ago.
When I was with an ex-girl, I had picked up rolling my own,
for...financial reasons I explained.
What I didn't tell her in that Duluth? hotel
was that I started rolling as an excuse to get away from her.
She hated the smell more than a regular cigarette somehow. ...
#alcohol
#tobacco
#honesty
#despair
#dating
532 reads
3 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
21st Feb 2021 1:25am
21st Feb 2021 1:25am
sisyphus, poor bloke
trying over and over again to roll a fag in the wind after his stroke
#tobacco
430 reads
4 Comments
Girthquake
Poem Published
19th Feb 2021 2:00pm
19th Feb 2021 2:00pm
Start Fartin
#erotic
#tobacco
#funny
#dirty
#sexy
427 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2020 8:07am
23rd Dec 2020 8:07am
DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING (PAST COMP ENTRY)
#sex
#alcohol
#tobacco
#rhyming
#funny
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dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
21st Sep 2020 00:19am
21st Sep 2020 00:19am
british idiom, of course
well ok yes smoking is bad bad bad bad bastards killing people
with their fags but I'm thinking f*ck it, the virus, I still need a drag ..
with their fags but I'm thinking f*ck it, the virus, I still need a drag ..
#tobacco
#fear
314 reads
0 Comments
Revmac
Poem Published
31st Aug 2020 12:07pm
31st Aug 2020 12:07pm
Puff
Around me you curl
With carcinogenic glee
Haze of joy and death
With carcinogenic glee
Haze of joy and death
#dark
#tobacco
465 reads
2 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
10th Aug 2020 2:57pm
10th Aug 2020 2:57pm
Bad To Be Glad, But Only Parapsychologically So. (See?)
Dark confuses light
diffusing into gelatinous
pieces of organic matter.
Maybe these colors don't belong together.
Maybe, truth be known, is a mere
state of deluded ego'mind running for dear life
across through evergreen and
permafrost to a loverly string of payment(s)
for that cherished Flo'da beach
priority prospects parlayed through Jesus Christ's
very...
diffusing into gelatinous
pieces of organic matter.
Maybe these colors don't belong together.
Maybe, truth be known, is a mere
state of deluded ego'mind running for dear life
across through evergreen and
permafrost to a loverly string of payment(s)
for that cherished Flo'da beach
priority prospects parlayed through Jesus Christ's
very...
#love
#alcohol
#heroin
#marijuana
#tobacco
505 reads
5 Comments
DCLXVI_1989
Poem Published
24th Jul 2020 7:34am
24th Jul 2020 7:34am
Pirouette
Smoke.
Flooded vision.
As my skin dries to my bones.
Cloaked.
Hooded minions.
As their cries scatter out alone.
Fog.
Left in trance.
As the stare of the clouds start to swarm.
Dawn.
The sunrise past.
But as it lifts i realize no one's home.
Haze.
Captured and tamed.
As if i tasted freedom and forgot.
Change.
Fractured and rearranged.
As if i wasted eons and fell off.
Flooded vision.
As my skin dries to my bones.
Cloaked.
Hooded minions.
As their cries scatter out alone.
Fog.
Left in trance.
As the stare of the clouds start to swarm.
Dawn.
The sunrise past.
But as it lifts i realize no one's home.
Haze.
Captured and tamed.
As if i tasted freedom and forgot.
Change.
Fractured and rearranged.
As if i wasted eons and fell off.
#marijuana
#tobacco
468 reads
2 Comments
Kissyaface29
Jah lioness
Jah lioness
Poem Published
17th Jul 2020 2:41am
17th Jul 2020 2:41am
Coochie Smokes
#happiness
#marijuana
#tobacco
762 reads
2 Comments
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