Poems About Temptation by Top Critiquers
#temptation
Poems about temptation by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 3:38pm
29th Dec 2024 3:38pm
when i submitted my darkness in his radiant light
i was
smelling
like an angel
when i
touched
his
talented tongue
pleasant lips
and
gorgeous cock...
when
i kissed
the night
and tasted
his
hanging moon
through
my personal hell
that was filled
with sparkling wine...
smelling
like an angel
when i
touched
his
talented tongue
pleasant lips
and
gorgeous cock...
when
i kissed
the night
and tasted
his
hanging moon
through
my personal hell
that was filled
with sparkling wine...
#sensual
#sex
#temptation
378 reads
24 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
9th May 2024 4:41pm
9th May 2024 4:41pm
uncovered
The slump of
your shoulders
foreshadows the
way the night softly
covers our feet
like a blanket
filled with holes
in peak winter
I want to cover
you as softly as
this night,
and etch
the sheetprints
of my skin
on yours
I want to shiver
as my hands find
home against
your chest
with midnight’s
sparse remains
forgotten
on
the floor
and I want ...
your shoulders
foreshadows the
way the night softly
covers our feet
like a blanket
filled with holes
in peak winter
I want to cover
you as softly as
this night,
and etch
the sheetprints
of my skin
on yours
I want to shiver
as my hands find
home against
your chest
with midnight’s
sparse remains
forgotten
on
the floor
and I want ...
#lover
#sensual
#temptation
331 reads
31 Comments
Ambjr
Poem Published
10th Feb 2025 2:46pm
10th Feb 2025 2:46pm
she makes me vulgar
she makes me vulgar
turns me primal…raw
transforms me into somethin feral
when her scent fills my lungs
lord knows I ain’t no saint
and she’s my fiercest addiction
my darkest desire
writhin on shadowed sheets
her body becomes an altar
in this ritual of need
where I worship with rough hands
and a heart that beats her name
she makes me vulgar
with those midnight eyes
dark as sin…carved from stars
drownin me in their depths
I want to consume her whole
devour her til nothin remains ...
turns me primal…raw
transforms me into somethin feral
when her scent fills my lungs
lord knows I ain’t no saint
and she’s my fiercest addiction
my darkest desire
writhin on shadowed sheets
her body becomes an altar
in this ritual of need
where I worship with rough hands
and a heart that beats her name
she makes me vulgar
with those midnight eyes
dark as sin…carved from stars
drownin me in their depths
I want to consume her whole
devour her til nothin remains ...
#erotic
#lust
#sex #temptation
#sex #temptation
135 reads
12 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
16th Jul 2024 3:15am
16th Jul 2024 3:15am
imaginary subtext
She said my hips look delicious
no, no
She said the position of my hips
looks delicious
no, no
She said the movement of my hips
looks delicious
no, no, that's worse
She said the way my hips feel is...
nope
She said the way my hips
feel in that position is...
no, she definitely didn't fucking say that
What she said was...
What she said was
that supported bridge posture
feels delicious
And she's not wrong...
no, no
She said the position of my hips
looks delicious
no, no
She said the movement of my hips
looks delicious
no, no, that's worse
She said the way my hips feel is...
nope
She said the way my hips
feel in that position is...
no, she definitely didn't fucking say that
What she said was...
What she said was
that supported bridge posture
feels delicious
And she's not wrong...
#crush
#erotic
#lust #temptation
#lust #temptation
311 reads
8 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
15th Mar 2024 6:31pm
15th Mar 2024 6:31pm
Too Hot To Make Love
#sex
#sexy
#temptation
329 reads
14 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
24th Sep 2022 3:35pm
24th Sep 2022 3:35pm
Married Man with Lustful Thoughts and getting caught part 6 of 6
#erotic
#sexy
#temptation
284 reads
2 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
31st Jul 2022 2:23am
31st Jul 2022 2:23am
Flirt
I don't need your love
just want you to ache for me
then I'm in control
just want you to ache for me
then I'm in control
#lust
#senryu
#crush #temptation
#crush #temptation
631 reads
10 Comments
DaVinci_07
Leo
Leo
Poem Published
27th Jan 2019 00:32am
27th Jan 2019 00:32am
Chocolate Chip Cookie
Chocolate Chip Cookie, Oh Chocolate Chip!
Why do you torment me,
with your mouthwatering taste.
Like the apple in the tree,
you are forbidden by my waist.
Yet your Devilish charms,
sweet texture, and aroma seduce me.
Just a taste a small bite,
it'll be alright.
But a bite doesn't suffice.
For once I've sinned, the furor begins.
One won't do.
As long as you have brother and sisters,
I'll continue to score.
Even when they are gone,
I'll search for more.
Like an addict,
I cannot stop. ...
Why do you torment me,
with your mouthwatering taste.
Like the apple in the tree,
you are forbidden by my waist.
Yet your Devilish charms,
sweet texture, and aroma seduce me.
Just a taste a small bite,
it'll be alright.
But a bite doesn't suffice.
For once I've sinned, the furor begins.
One won't do.
As long as you have brother and sisters,
I'll continue to score.
Even when they are gone,
I'll search for more.
Like an addict,
I cannot stop. ...
#food
#temptation
879 reads
19 Comments
Baldwin
Poem Published
24th Sep 2021 7:34pm
24th Sep 2021 7:34pm
Odysseus the Liar
So Circe never won the heart inside you,
never, so you say?
And yet it was your men,
now wasn’t it,
homesick, sore afraid,
and longing for their unforgotten wives,
who had to prize you from her grasp
to sail again the sea
towards delayed Ithaca,
recall you to your stated destiny?
What lies, you spin!
For one who claims his name means
“Born for Pain”,
you took your time, and theirs,
a year
in pleasurings.
And this I also know:
If Circe called to you again
called with her sirens’ voice, ...
never, so you say?
And yet it was your men,
now wasn’t it,
homesick, sore afraid,
and longing for their unforgotten wives,
who had to prize you from her grasp
to sail again the sea
towards delayed Ithaca,
recall you to your stated destiny?
What lies, you spin!
For one who claims his name means
“Born for Pain”,
you took your time, and theirs,
a year
in pleasurings.
And this I also know:
If Circe called to you again
called with her sirens’ voice, ...
#temptation
404 reads
8 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 00:24am
14th Nov 2024 00:24am
Storm’s Reckoning
She was a force in the bar,
a slip of heat in midnight’s haze,
her hips swayed like music, slow and sure,
dark hair wild, flowing down her back
like thunder waiting to break.
Storm, they called her
fitting, I thought,
she had a body built to ruin peace,
lips like fire, eyes that caught,
and hips that dared the night to dream.
She slipped close, a whisper of heat,
hand on my shoulder, her nails like claws,
fingers tracing the line of my jaw
as she grinned up, a flash of sin. ...
a slip of heat in midnight’s haze,
her hips swayed like music, slow and sure,
dark hair wild, flowing down her back
like thunder waiting to break.
Storm, they called her
fitting, I thought,
she had a body built to ruin peace,
lips like fire, eyes that caught,
and hips that dared the night to dream.
She slipped close, a whisper of heat,
hand on my shoulder, her nails like claws,
fingers tracing the line of my jaw
as she grinned up, a flash of sin. ...
#courage
#passion
#seductive
#sexy
#temptation
61 reads
0 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
30th Oct 2023 9:20am
30th Oct 2023 9:20am
Our First Date
#relationships
#sexy
#temptation
258 reads
2 Comments
DetectiveOGasm
Poem Published
30th Aug 2024 12:21pm
30th Aug 2024 12:21pm
That Matter Of Taste
The gloss of your excited condition
flavours my lips
feeding and fueling
my concentrated worship
Your legs rest on my back
as I navigate the median
with mouth and fingers
to draw a response
You shift as each fold
investigated attracts
a pleasured gasp
urging me to summon
sensations remembered.
flavours my lips
feeding and fueling
my concentrated worship
Your legs rest on my back
as I navigate the median
with mouth and fingers
to draw a response
You shift as each fold
investigated attracts
a pleasured gasp
urging me to summon
sensations remembered.
#erotic
#temptation
334 reads
2 Comments
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