Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 2:38pm
24th Jan 2025 2:38pm
~the syneresis moon
his eyes are in a fixated
long stare at mine..
in a unbearably delicate
holding of so much
tears and words
he wants to
cry out
& say..
yet he’s here
in a determined
stagnant stare
shines his
the ever iron clad
pitch black coal
eyes.. only that
now the syneresing
irises are in a separating…
… as pulpy famine greys
with the inner broken
yet the somehow running
& holding patterns
of a crinkly petallous
sepia blooms..
fading out
to a distant ...
long stare at mine..
in a unbearably delicate
holding of so much
tears and words
he wants to
cry out
& say..
yet he’s here
in a determined
stagnant stare
shines his
the ever iron clad
pitch black coal
eyes.. only that
now the syneresing
irises are in a separating…
… as pulpy famine greys
with the inner broken
yet the somehow running
& holding patterns
of a crinkly petallous
sepia blooms..
fading out
to a distant ...
#family
#illness
#love
#moon
#support
104 reads
10 Comments
Lynxxey
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 3:02am
20th Jan 2025 3:02am
All that matters
Blacked out days from thoughts that race
I swear sometimes things just don’t change
Until I look out to see your face
And all those things they seem to dissipate
All that matters is what you think
I love you like the stormy weather loves the sea
Thinking of the memories you bring
I want to make more, I hope that you agree
Days go by, and seasons change
People come and go, and contribute to our ways
But if you look on out beyond the rain
What I feel for you will always be the same
All that matters is what...
I swear sometimes things just don’t change
Until I look out to see your face
And all those things they seem to dissipate
All that matters is what you think
I love you like the stormy weather loves the sea
Thinking of the memories you bring
I want to make more, I hope that you agree
Days go by, and seasons change
People come and go, and contribute to our ways
But if you look on out beyond the rain
What I feel for you will always be the same
All that matters is what...
#love
#relationships
#support
94 reads
0 Comments
Carlie_luv
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 3:11am
17th Jan 2025 3:11am
The Man
I miss his face his hands on my body his eyes I miss the man his soul his his hugs his kisses I miss the dreams I had in his arms.. I run I hide I love him beyond his word I crave him in more ways then one my mind pushes me to the vulnerable side of being a women to let him lead.. to love me beyond my eyes pass my exterior. I think of him all day all night I love him can’t get him out my system soul bound. His cravenness for me his personality is never given up on his patience to want me when I’m unsure of myself. The little things flowers.. calls.. check ins never forget me. Loving me I miss...
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#support
87 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 11:38am
16th Jan 2025 11:38am
Legalize Patience & Understanding
You probably see what the photographer photographed
A variety of liquor bottles ready for purchase and consumption
I sorta see that too
Many see this image and think of people partying, having a good time,
getting drunk and maybe fucking their lover or some total stranger,
alcohol has that effect
Many people use it to relax after a hard days work or school
Some may see alcohol as a crutch, a friend,
something they can turn to when life gets to heavy or complex
Millions rely on alcohol to wash away their memories, their tragedies, ...
A variety of liquor bottles ready for purchase and consumption
I sorta see that too
Many see this image and think of people partying, having a good time,
getting drunk and maybe fucking their lover or some total stranger,
alcohol has that effect
Many people use it to relax after a hard days work or school
Some may see alcohol as a crutch, a friend,
something they can turn to when life gets to heavy or complex
Millions rely on alcohol to wash away their memories, their tragedies, ...
#addiction
#alcohol
#motivational
#nonfiction
#support
70 reads
6 Comments
stevenyprince
alysha
alysha
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 3:12pm
10th Jan 2025 3:12pm
Twin.
One must protect the boundaries of love
With 3 hearts
Warrior, protector, lover
He came and wrapped me up
The day after the bird hit the window
My brother, black angel
Upside down wings
Feathers so soft
And warm
Against the skin of my arm
As you love me
Surround me
I let go
Dissipate
Cycles within cycles
Into the sea, liquidied
Turned to hide inside the earth
Became fire and expanded wide
Burn to ashes and rise
Just float
The wind, that is, its
Spinning
Around inside the...
With 3 hearts
Warrior, protector, lover
He came and wrapped me up
The day after the bird hit the window
My brother, black angel
Upside down wings
Feathers so soft
And warm
Against the skin of my arm
As you love me
Surround me
I let go
Dissipate
Cycles within cycles
Into the sea, liquidied
Turned to hide inside the earth
Became fire and expanded wide
Burn to ashes and rise
Just float
The wind, that is, its
Spinning
Around inside the...
#birds
#love
#spiritual
#strength
#support
93 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 10:52am
10th Jan 2025 10:52am
Soulless Zombi
Four walls surround me
And im feeling sick
Don't remember yesterday
Don't know what's real
Blood on my shirt
Mud on my hair
Paranoia's kicking in
The delusions never stop
Living in the moment as they say
Doing what the masses do
Wearing what the masses wear
Going where the masses go
Sacrifice your mind
And your sanity
Disconnect one moment
Spiral to infinity
Midnight strikes the pills go down
You thought this is a story?
Hear the colors see the music
Feel so fucking great ...
And im feeling sick
Don't remember yesterday
Don't know what's real
Blood on my shirt
Mud on my hair
Paranoia's kicking in
The delusions never stop
Living in the moment as they say
Doing what the masses do
Wearing what the masses wear
Going where the masses go
Sacrifice your mind
And your sanity
Disconnect one moment
Spiral to infinity
Midnight strikes the pills go down
You thought this is a story?
Hear the colors see the music
Feel so fucking great ...
#confusion
#drugs
#identity
#MentalHealth
#support
66 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 1:24pm
9th Jan 2025 1:24pm
Detox and Discontent
You will not be getting any sympathy from me
Too late for that
Ignorance seen through your blind eyes
Cause & effect
Detox
Artificial promises
I'm feeling empty
Destroy reality
I crawl deep inside myself
Detox and discontent
Too late for that
Ignorance seen through your blind eyes
Cause & effect
Detox
Artificial promises
I'm feeling empty
Destroy reality
I crawl deep inside myself
Detox and discontent
#emptiness
#lies
#support #TruthOfLife
#support #TruthOfLife
79 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 10:14am
8th Jan 2025 10:14am
The Assist
Hurt creates anger
Anger triggers oppressed thoughts
Lend someone a hand
Anger triggers oppressed thoughts
Lend someone a hand
#friendship
#hurt
#oppression
#senryu
#support
61 reads
13 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 6:30pm
6th Jan 2025 6:30pm
Back to the Light
When I look into the mirror
Turn the page on this dark chapter
Gone are my fears; they went out the door
I’ve had enough; I can’t take no more
Lend me a guiding hand back to the light.
Turn the page on this dark chapter
Gone are my fears; they went out the door
I’ve had enough; I can’t take no more
Lend me a guiding hand back to the light.
#SelfReflection
#spiritual
#support
77 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 12:40pm
2nd Jan 2025 12:40pm
Ready, Aim, Desire
She looked so goddamn sexy with that gun in her mouth.
It really brought out her cheekbones.
Ohhhhh Yeahhhhh, I get really aroused and hard just thinking about it.
I wonder if she'll pull the trigger?
Do you think I can encourage it?
Let's end this story right now.
It really brought out her cheekbones.
Ohhhhh Yeahhhhh, I get really aroused and hard just thinking about it.
I wonder if she'll pull the trigger?
Do you think I can encourage it?
Let's end this story right now.
#erotic
#girlfriend
#motivational #support
#motivational #support
135 reads
18 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 11:54pm
25th Dec 2024 11:54pm
I am the conundrum
I am the conundrum
Facing the truth
While wondering
what we have here
More than nothing
I know that
Surely you feel the same
look at what we have here
It’s like saying you love someone
When you really don’t
And you leave it at that
goddamn
I am the conundrum
Fucking leave me
Or love me, but
You do you
goddamn
Where am I
Where you are
Leaves me falling right into
Your arms again.
…shit.
Facing the truth
While wondering
what we have here
More than nothing
I know that
Surely you feel the same
look at what we have here
It’s like saying you love someone
When you really don’t
And you leave it at that
goddamn
I am the conundrum
Fucking leave me
Or love me, but
You do you
goddamn
Where am I
Where you are
Leaves me falling right into
Your arms again.
…shit.
#admiration
#apathy
#confusion
#despair
#support
61 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 12:17pm
25th Dec 2024 12:17pm
A Gift
Good Morning to each of you. I went to bed last night without any gifts under the tree.
I woke up this morning and there were a whole bunch of gifts waiting to be opened.
The power of magic if you believe in something.
As I approached each gift, I realized that every gift was from all of you.
You all are the gifts that were under my tree.
Everyone of you have made me shine since arriving here in January 2024.
The power of words, praise and feedback truly is something magical & real.
I wish all of you at DUP a Happy Holiday and Happy New Year.
I woke up this morning and there were a whole bunch of gifts waiting to be opened.
The power of magic if you believe in something.
As I approached each gift, I realized that every gift was from all of you.
You all are the gifts that were under my tree.
Everyone of you have made me shine since arriving here in January 2024.
The power of words, praise and feedback truly is something magical & real.
I wish all of you at DUP a Happy Holiday and Happy New Year.
#friendship
#happiness
#love
#magic
#support
81 reads
9 Comments
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