Poems About the Sun by Top Critiquers
#sun
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 6:50am
14th Sep 2024 6:50am
questions ???
a question
came to the
mind of darkness,
can I click a picture of light?
the moon also
expressed its thoughts,
can't the phases of the sun
also increase or decrease like me?
came to the
mind of darkness,
can I click a picture of light?
the moon also
expressed its thoughts,
can't the phases of the sun
also increase or decrease like me?
#moon
#sun
206 reads
11 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
15th Oct 2022 4:11pm
15th Oct 2022 4:11pm
Contented
it's not often the sun rises to clear blue skies
bringing smiles and vision to clouded eyes
to see a beginning and not to be begging
of what is, not was
blurred in a vision
I see past what I fear
the beauty, the wit
listening to whispers
suddenly appeared
the sun rises and I shine
alone in her presence
contented
in what I might find
bringing smiles and vision to clouded eyes
to see a beginning and not to be begging
of what is, not was
blurred in a vision
I see past what I fear
the beauty, the wit
listening to whispers
suddenly appeared
the sun rises and I shine
alone in her presence
contented
in what I might find
#happiness
#sun
376 reads
8 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2021 11:49pm
3rd Sep 2021 11:49pm
a real love story
today,
I laid in a
field
and let
the sun
touch
me,
caress
me
everywhere,
make me
his
paramore.
holding
me in
his arms,
whispering
sweetly in
my ear until
I was breathless:
I love
you,
I love
you,
I
love
you.
then warm,
satisfied,
I slept,
my soul
couldn't
cum
anymore.
I laid in a
field
and let
the sun
touch
me,
caress
me
everywhere,
make me
his
paramore.
holding
me in
his arms,
whispering
sweetly in
my ear until
I was breathless:
I love
you,
I love
you,
I
love
you.
then warm,
satisfied,
I slept,
my soul
couldn't
cum
anymore.
#love
#kindness
#sun
582 reads
14 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
24th Aug 2023 9:54pm
24th Aug 2023 9:54pm
A Seam of Sapphire
Blue sapphire seam
Between shore and sky
Winter is far away
No sirens no trouble
The loud ones sleep off their hangovers
The red sky
The pink sky
The blue sky
Belongs to those who gaze
Up from the small world
A seam of sapphire
Between shore and sky
Glimmers under the sun
Winter is far away
The water is warm
No sirens no anger
No police
Quiet like a Victorian Sunday
Men walk about bare chested
If only the women could to
Every tree sings its own...
Between shore and sky
Winter is far away
No sirens no trouble
The loud ones sleep off their hangovers
The red sky
The pink sky
The blue sky
Belongs to those who gaze
Up from the small world
A seam of sapphire
Between shore and sky
Glimmers under the sun
Winter is far away
The water is warm
No sirens no anger
No police
Quiet like a Victorian Sunday
Men walk about bare chested
If only the women could to
Every tree sings its own...
#sea
#sun
296 reads
4 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
12th Sep 2022 8:48pm
12th Sep 2022 8:48pm
Burn Baby Burn!
Nuclear Fusion
burning in my blood
7 times hotter than the sun
100 million *C
30 second burn...
I am The Human Torch
Burn the mother down!
burning in my blood
7 times hotter than the sun
100 million *C
30 second burn...
I am The Human Torch
Burn the mother down!
#love
#sun
#fire
386 reads
7 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
8th Jul 2023 3:48am
8th Jul 2023 3:48am
Sunbath for Sea Otters
Sunbath for Sea Otters
Sunbathing sea otters
Dream like arctic orphans
On glacial ice floes
Like angels on an ice cube
But in wingless reverie
When daydreams come and go
With the Alaskan tides
Not trapped for fashion
By tourists who take pictures
They nap in nature’s cool embrace
On melting islands
Of sunken mountains
Fleeting as snow
When the sun comes out
But lasting a summer afternoon
Where solar heated mammals sleep
Sunbathing sea otters
Dream like arctic orphans
On glacial ice floes
Like angels on an ice cube
But in wingless reverie
When daydreams come and go
With the Alaskan tides
Not trapped for fashion
By tourists who take pictures
They nap in nature’s cool embrace
On melting islands
Of sunken mountains
Fleeting as snow
When the sun comes out
But lasting a summer afternoon
Where solar heated mammals sleep
#dreams
#sea
#sun #animals
#sun #animals
218 reads
2 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 4:16pm
2nd Feb 2025 4:16pm
Mundus Intus Me
Souls and black holes,
haunting wide eyes,
shinier than coal.
Will never reveal
the secrets they stole.
Hearts and galaxies,
I've only just begun
to travel me.
Freedom burns in my bloodstream.
My mind and the moon,
share the intricate mystery
of the orchard's bloom.
Break me out of
yesterday's cocoon.
My smile and the sun,
warm light beams
that seek to stun.
Kindness spread
to everyone.
My dreams and the clouds,
fluffy wishes
to astound.
To despair,
I am no...
haunting wide eyes,
shinier than coal.
Will never reveal
the secrets they stole.
Hearts and galaxies,
I've only just begun
to travel me.
Freedom burns in my bloodstream.
My mind and the moon,
share the intricate mystery
of the orchard's bloom.
Break me out of
yesterday's cocoon.
My smile and the sun,
warm light beams
that seek to stun.
Kindness spread
to everyone.
My dreams and the clouds,
fluffy wishes
to astound.
To despair,
I am no...
#clouds
#dreams
#moon
#SelfDiscovery
#sun
103 reads
10 Comments
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
19th Jan 2020 5:55am
19th Jan 2020 5:55am
MORNING SUN VAMPIRE PRAYER
MORNING SUN,
I HAVE A CUTE VAMPIRE DATE
AND I CAN'T WAIT, I CAN'T BE LATE...
STARS THAT SHINE....MY GOTHIC CAPE...
MORNING SUN,
BLACK ROSES....THAT DARKENS POSIES
IS HIS TRUE HEART
PRECIOUS SUN.... DON'T BREAK US APART....
NO NO...
MORNING SUN,
HE IS A GOOD VAMPIRE
HE ONLY BITES, IF THEIR EVIL BLOOD DESPISE....
IN HIS EYES...THEY TAKE ME HIGHER...
...
I HAVE A CUTE VAMPIRE DATE
AND I CAN'T WAIT, I CAN'T BE LATE...
STARS THAT SHINE....MY GOTHIC CAPE...
MORNING SUN,
BLACK ROSES....THAT DARKENS POSIES
IS HIS TRUE HEART
PRECIOUS SUN.... DON'T BREAK US APART....
NO NO...
MORNING SUN,
HE IS A GOOD VAMPIRE
HE ONLY BITES, IF THEIR EVIL BLOOD DESPISE....
IN HIS EYES...THEY TAKE ME HIGHER...
...
#love
#sun
#fate
#vampires
#curse
575 reads
9 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Oct 2023 7:57pm
4th Oct 2023 7:57pm
Making A Play For Some Other Bikini Chick
Rebecca went
to the beach
to catch some sun
only to see Jason
making a play for some
other bikini chick
who is unlike the one he's hitched to.
to the beach
to catch some sun
only to see Jason
making a play for some
other bikini chick
who is unlike the one he's hitched to.
#friendship
#corruption
#sun
#beach
#fiction
173 reads
0 Comments
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
13th Apr 2023 11:19pm
13th Apr 2023 11:19pm
Warmth
Celestial glow;
illuminating warmth.
Cover me with your light.
Bathe my skin
with your radiance
and my soul
with your fire.
Awake in me
dormant desires
and slumbering senses.
Reignite my will
and renew my strength.
Energy-giving heat,
heal my heart
and expand my mind.
As I wait,
let your honeyed beams
permeate my very being.
Soften any rough edges
and purify me.
Cover me;
bring me into you
that warmth and light
might exude from me.
illuminating warmth.
Cover me with your light.
Bathe my skin
with your radiance
and my soul
with your fire.
Awake in me
dormant desires
and slumbering senses.
Reignite my will
and renew my strength.
Energy-giving heat,
heal my heart
and expand my mind.
As I wait,
let your honeyed beams
permeate my very being.
Soften any rough edges
and purify me.
Cover me;
bring me into you
that warmth and light
might exude from me.
#sun
#healing
#dawn #NaPoWriMo2023
#dawn #NaPoWriMo2023
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13 Comments
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