Poems About the Sun by Top Critiquers
#sun
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
24th Aug 2023 9:54pm
24th Aug 2023 9:54pm
A Seam of Sapphire
Blue sapphire seam
Between shore and sky
Winter is far away
No sirens no trouble
The loud ones sleep off their hangovers
The red sky
The pink sky
The blue sky
Belongs to those who gaze
Up from the small world
A seam of sapphire
Between shore and sky
Glimmers under the sun
Winter is far away
The water is warm
No sirens no anger
No police
Quiet like a Victorian Sunday
Men walk about bare chested
If only the women could to
Every tree sings its own...
Between shore and sky
Winter is far away
No sirens no trouble
The loud ones sleep off their hangovers
The red sky
The pink sky
The blue sky
Belongs to those who gaze
Up from the small world
A seam of sapphire
Between shore and sky
Glimmers under the sun
Winter is far away
The water is warm
No sirens no anger
No police
Quiet like a Victorian Sunday
Men walk about bare chested
If only the women could to
Every tree sings its own...
#sea
#sun
303 reads
4 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 4:16pm
2nd Feb 2025 4:16pm
Mundus Intus Me
Souls and black holes,
haunting wide eyes,
shinier than coal.
Will never reveal
the secrets they stole.
Hearts and galaxies,
I've only just begun
to travel me.
Freedom burns in my bloodstream.
My mind and the moon,
share the intricate mystery
of the orchard's bloom.
Break me out of
yesterday's cocoon.
My smile and the sun,
warm light beams
that seek to stun.
Kindness spread
to everyone.
My dreams and the clouds,
fluffy wishes
to astound.
To despair,
I am no...
haunting wide eyes,
shinier than coal.
Will never reveal
the secrets they stole.
Hearts and galaxies,
I've only just begun
to travel me.
Freedom burns in my bloodstream.
My mind and the moon,
share the intricate mystery
of the orchard's bloom.
Break me out of
yesterday's cocoon.
My smile and the sun,
warm light beams
that seek to stun.
Kindness spread
to everyone.
My dreams and the clouds,
fluffy wishes
to astound.
To despair,
I am no...
#clouds
#dreams
#moon
#SelfDiscovery
#sun
111 reads
10 Comments
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
19th Jan 2020 5:55am
19th Jan 2020 5:55am
MORNING SUN VAMPIRE PRAYER
MORNING SUN,
I HAVE A CUTE VAMPIRE DATE
AND I CAN'T WAIT, I CAN'T BE LATE...
STARS THAT SHINE....MY GOTHIC CAPE...
MORNING SUN,
BLACK ROSES....THAT DARKENS POSIES
IS HIS TRUE HEART
PRECIOUS SUN.... DON'T BREAK US APART....
NO NO...
MORNING SUN,
HE IS A GOOD VAMPIRE
HE ONLY BITES, IF THEIR EVIL BLOOD DESPISE....
IN HIS EYES...THEY TAKE ME HIGHER...
...
I HAVE A CUTE VAMPIRE DATE
AND I CAN'T WAIT, I CAN'T BE LATE...
STARS THAT SHINE....MY GOTHIC CAPE...
MORNING SUN,
BLACK ROSES....THAT DARKENS POSIES
IS HIS TRUE HEART
PRECIOUS SUN.... DON'T BREAK US APART....
NO NO...
MORNING SUN,
HE IS A GOOD VAMPIRE
HE ONLY BITES, IF THEIR EVIL BLOOD DESPISE....
IN HIS EYES...THEY TAKE ME HIGHER...
...
#love
#sun
#fate
#vampires
#curse
581 reads
9 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
8th Jul 2023 3:48am
8th Jul 2023 3:48am
Sunbath for Sea Otters
Sunbath for Sea Otters
Sunbathing sea otters
Dream like arctic orphans
On glacial ice floes
Like angels on an ice cube
But in wingless reverie
When daydreams come and go
With the Alaskan tides
Not trapped for fashion
By tourists who take pictures
They nap in nature’s cool embrace
On melting islands
Of sunken mountains
Fleeting as snow
When the sun comes out
But lasting a summer afternoon
Where solar heated mammals sleep
Sunbathing sea otters
Dream like arctic orphans
On glacial ice floes
Like angels on an ice cube
But in wingless reverie
When daydreams come and go
With the Alaskan tides
Not trapped for fashion
By tourists who take pictures
They nap in nature’s cool embrace
On melting islands
Of sunken mountains
Fleeting as snow
When the sun comes out
But lasting a summer afternoon
Where solar heated mammals sleep
#dreams
#sea
#sun #animals
#sun #animals
221 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 11:33am
16th Apr 2025 11:33am
Oh, Am I In Big Trouble.
As the sun rises, she
finds a golden ball on
the ground and plays
with it until she hears
a snap from that thing.
She picks it up and
sees cracks all over it
which makes her realize
that it really is an egg.
finds a golden ball on
the ground and plays
with it until she hears
a snap from that thing.
She picks it up and
sees cracks all over it
which makes her realize
that it really is an egg.
#confusion
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#ignorance
#sun
55 reads
0 Comments
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
13th Apr 2023 11:19pm
13th Apr 2023 11:19pm
Warmth
Celestial glow;
illuminating warmth.
Cover me with your light.
Bathe my skin
with your radiance
and my soul
with your fire.
Awake in me
dormant desires
and slumbering senses.
Reignite my will
and renew my strength.
Energy-giving heat,
heal my heart
and expand my mind.
As I wait,
let your honeyed beams
permeate my very being.
Soften any rough edges
and purify me.
Cover me;
bring me into you
that warmth and light
might exude from me.
illuminating warmth.
Cover me with your light.
Bathe my skin
with your radiance
and my soul
with your fire.
Awake in me
dormant desires
and slumbering senses.
Reignite my will
and renew my strength.
Energy-giving heat,
heal my heart
and expand my mind.
As I wait,
let your honeyed beams
permeate my very being.
Soften any rough edges
and purify me.
Cover me;
bring me into you
that warmth and light
might exude from me.
#sun
#healing
#dawn #NaPoWriMo2023
#dawn #NaPoWriMo2023
309 reads
13 Comments
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