Poems About Suffering Seeking Honest Critique
#suffering
Poems about suffering seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
What Happens When You Go On A Blind Date
Amelia saw a stud
named Sebastian
at a bar. The next
day, she woke with
an echo in her head.
named Sebastian
at a bar. The next
day, she woke with
an echo in her head.
#alcohol
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#suffering
#dating
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A Result Of Drinking The Punch At Last Night's Party
Nathan
flushed the John
after
throwing up and took
one more look at Ruth
still sleeping naked
with both
hands on his
forehead.
flushed the John
after
throwing up and took
one more look at Ruth
still sleeping naked
with both
hands on his
forehead.
#alcohol
#fiction
#suffering
#sensual
#weakness
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What Happened To Her After The Bachelorette Party
Alice woke up on a Saturday
morning and discovered much to
her shock that she was naked
and next to some guy still
sleeping before she
realized that
she's supposed
to get
hitched.
morning and discovered much to
her shock that she was naked
and next to some guy still
sleeping before she
realized that
she's supposed
to get
hitched.
#marriage
#corruption
#fiction
#suffering
#sensual
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Not A Good Idea To Go To The Beach Alone
Karen was enjoying
some fun in the sun
before suffering from
trauma due to sexual
assault on the beach.
some fun in the sun
before suffering from
trauma due to sexual
assault on the beach.
#sex
#beach
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#suffering
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Spinning Plates
Once upon a time,
there lived a plate spinner.
Providing the momentum
to keep the plates moving
gave her purpose,
comfort and joy.
Although her life was busy,
she thrived for years
and would happily add more plates
whenever life required it.
Until one day,
she fell—
and all her plates
crashed
down
on
top
of
her
there lived a plate spinner.
Providing the momentum
to keep the plates moving
gave her purpose,
comfort and joy.
Although her life was busy,
she thrived for years
and would happily add more plates
whenever life required it.
Until one day,
she fell—
and all her plates
crashed
down
on
top
of
her
#LifeStruggles
#confessional
#illness
#SelfReflection
#suffering
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I've Had It With That Cheating Whore!
Eric found a hidden videotape.
It shows David humping Kate so hard.
Eric... now... wants a divorce.
It shows David humping Kate so hard.
Eric... now... wants a divorce.
#porn
#fiction
#suffering
#sensual
#hurt
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All part of the experience my dear
If one painted suffering out of the frame
what picture would remain?
Rose tinted portraits of happy hanged men
dancing in their fecal matter.
Some computer wizard types asked the AI
draw me a white family.
Sorry dave i can't do that, was the reply
That shade has henceforth been removed.
How the heartaches, only to remove the muscle
replaced by bubble wrapped algorithmic suggestions .
Soma for the comatose, numbing emotions
Zeros and ones in the distant past
what picture would remain?
Rose tinted portraits of happy hanged men
dancing in their fecal matter.
Some computer wizard types asked the AI
draw me a white family.
Sorry dave i can't do that, was the reply
That shade has henceforth been removed.
How the heartaches, only to remove the muscle
replaced by bubble wrapped algorithmic suggestions .
Soma for the comatose, numbing emotions
Zeros and ones in the distant past
#PTSD
#suffering
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1 Comment
New People Moving Into A House
Ursula spotted some new people
moving into a house down the
street and went over there to
say "hi" to them. That was
five days ago. She
was found naked
in that now
empty
house.
moving into a house down the
street and went over there to
say "hi" to them. That was
five days ago. She
was found naked
in that now
empty
house.
#home
#fiction
#suffering
#sensual
#weakness
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Pieces and Reasons
#childhood
#abuse
#memories #suffering
#memories #suffering
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Soul Decay
A collection of scars
kept close to the chest
protection necessary
continuous unrest
All consuming
residing in disease
like a cancer
brought to my knees
Trauma ceaseless
devouring its prey
mocking my efforts
soul in decay
Impotent to see
as if I were blind
struggling to leave
the past behind
Lack of confidence
loss of self-worth
innocence gone
no rebirth
kept close to the chest
protection necessary
continuous unrest
All consuming
residing in disease
like a cancer
brought to my knees
Trauma ceaseless
devouring its prey
mocking my efforts
soul in decay
Impotent to see
as if I were blind
struggling to leave
the past behind
Lack of confidence
loss of self-worth
innocence gone
no rebirth
#depression
#dark
#despair #suffering
#despair #suffering
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Night vision
Crossing borders Canada never been here before.
Whole drive my mind and heart tore.
I still see you my love tears fill my eyes I still adore
Tree after tree each kilometer pass.
Pull up for petrol back out fast.
I'll break the steering wheel I don't ease my grasp.
Out by a lake British Colombia has peace.
Some lady won't quit speaking, go away please.
You don't know me not in the least.
I dint want to talk or eat with you.
I want to be alone is that wrong to do.
I had to move before my temper blew.
...
Whole drive my mind and heart tore.
I still see you my love tears fill my eyes I still adore
Tree after tree each kilometer pass.
Pull up for petrol back out fast.
I'll break the steering wheel I don't ease my grasp.
Out by a lake British Colombia has peace.
Some lady won't quit speaking, go away please.
You don't know me not in the least.
I dint want to talk or eat with you.
I want to be alone is that wrong to do.
I had to move before my temper blew.
...
#regret
#grief
#shadows
#suffering
#emptiness
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Equivalency
Everything bears a cost,
Not merely a price to be tossed.
For every gain we seek to host,
Something else must be lost.
To earn the coin, we toil,
Sweat upon the soil.
For respect to be our lot,
We must act in ways that are not forgot.
To hold goods within our grasp,
We part with coins that clasp.
When gains are made, yet nothing's spent,
The scale tips – it's not what nature meant.
For each thing gained without a toll,
Disrupts the balance of the whole.
We must reckon with the cost,
For nothing comes...
Not merely a price to be tossed.
For every gain we seek to host,
Something else must be lost.
To earn the coin, we toil,
Sweat upon the soil.
For respect to be our lot,
We must act in ways that are not forgot.
To hold goods within our grasp,
We part with coins that clasp.
When gains are made, yet nothing's spent,
The scale tips – it's not what nature meant.
For each thing gained without a toll,
Disrupts the balance of the whole.
We must reckon with the cost,
For nothing comes...
#TruthOfLife
#suffering
#emotional
#sacrifice
#choices
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DU Poetry : Poems About Suffering Seeking Honest Critique