Poems About Stars by Top Critiquers
#stars
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 5:21pm
21st Apr 2025 5:21pm
tutelage
The stars stretch out before me as I sped through space
feeling the G forces on my mortal body
I astral traveled through the cosmos
at lightning speed so fast I couldn't see anything
until my soul slowed down for a moment, floating
And the stars and colors bloom in front of my eyes
amazed by the sight, I awed and oohed
Then was pulled again deeper into the celestial
where again the galaxies appeared before me
I had a sense of other beings and I could hear them talking
the being with me was communicating in their language ...
feeling the G forces on my mortal body
I astral traveled through the cosmos
at lightning speed so fast I couldn't see anything
until my soul slowed down for a moment, floating
And the stars and colors bloom in front of my eyes
amazed by the sight, I awed and oohed
Then was pulled again deeper into the celestial
where again the galaxies appeared before me
I had a sense of other beings and I could hear them talking
the being with me was communicating in their language ...
#stars
#universe
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 11:34pm
13th Mar 2025 11:34pm
Here I am as I am a woman
Here I am as I am a woman sitting here in the afternoon sun, of the mother land, yet it's here and now. I admire this tree of life. Tall looking like a badge of honor, standing under the sun, as it's light creating a image, of the bonsai tree of life with love, and happiness and dreams. For sure as I look forward beyond the tree of Life. I can feel it's power reaching into me, so spiritually touching the deepness of my heart ❤️ YET I feel so alive here and now in this space without time, as I am in twin with it's deepness of this subject matter that is called living life. ...
#evolution
#moon
#stars
#sun
#universe
108 reads
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brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
11th Nov 2018 2:46am
11th Nov 2018 2:46am
*****
walked the road at night
seeking space to view the stars
Perseids obliged
seeking space to view the stars
Perseids obliged
#stars
#haiku
785 reads
2 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 2:00pm
6th Oct 2024 2:00pm
Soul Lovers
it feels like we are
sexual soulmates
L said out of the
blue during sex
and that is true
though on other
aspects we pair
quite perfect too
as if our planets
are stellar in line
two similar lives
Colliding as if it
was meant to be
we see what lies
beneath our eyes
always complete
each other's lines
we are dark matter
and starfire in this
divine outer space
delicate souls who
found each other in
this magical cosmos
&...
sexual soulmates
L said out of the
blue during sex
and that is true
though on other
aspects we pair
quite perfect too
as if our planets
are stellar in line
two similar lives
Colliding as if it
was meant to be
we see what lies
beneath our eyes
always complete
each other's lines
we are dark matter
and starfire in this
divine outer space
delicate souls who
found each other in
this magical cosmos
&...
#lover
#stars
376 reads
22 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
1st May 2025 2:28am
1st May 2025 2:28am
Milky Way
We are cosmic dust
Part of the original creation
We are made of stars and planets
And everything spread across the great canvas
Compiled into sentient beings with the capacity to love
We are children of the universe
Descendants of galaxies and constellations
Waiting to join our brothers and sisters in the sky
While our eyes will be filled with awe and wonder
And until that fateful day
We’ll watch the stars here at home
Here, on the Milky Way
57 Unique Words
80 Total
Part of the original creation
We are made of stars and planets
And everything spread across the great canvas
Compiled into sentient beings with the capacity to love
We are children of the universe
Descendants of galaxies and constellations
Waiting to join our brothers and sisters in the sky
While our eyes will be filled with awe and wonder
And until that fateful day
We’ll watch the stars here at home
Here, on the Milky Way
57 Unique Words
80 Total
#humankind
#inspirational
#love
#stars
#universe
86 reads
4 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
25th Apr 2025 11:34pm
25th Apr 2025 11:34pm
~the (un)imagining
amidst the sumptuous
feeding in impending glooms..
trying hard.. to swim against
these blackly enshrouding
opacity clouds.. choking
in noxiousnes..
how foolishly dare-devilish
to act against a devil itself ..
(or is it the destined divinity..)
this mere pure a defying act
of i m a g i n i n g .. yes
(literally reads as if an ‘unageing’)
a rebellion.. a religion
this
imagining..
in the imagining..
the rainy droplets ...
feeding in impending glooms..
trying hard.. to swim against
these blackly enshrouding
opacity clouds.. choking
in noxiousnes..
how foolishly dare-devilish
to act against a devil itself ..
(or is it the destined divinity..)
this mere pure a defying act
of i m a g i n i n g .. yes
(literally reads as if an ‘unageing’)
a rebellion.. a religion
this
imagining..
in the imagining..
the rainy droplets ...
#death
#love
#spiritual #stars
#spiritual #stars
117 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 12:59pm
22nd Sep 2024 12:59pm
By Jove!
I glanced at lovely Artemis
who by the stars arose
and thereby got a moonbeam kiss
upon my groggy nose.
Her sportive gibbous, on the wane,
still threw a hearty glow
which sparked anew my sleepy brain
and all the Earth below.
Thusly the morning was well spent
before the day began
when to her zenith Luna went
as gold as old rattan.
And there she did luxuriate
above Orion's frame
chasing her to an evening fate...
beneath a solar flame 🔥
who by the stars arose
and thereby got a moonbeam kiss
upon my groggy nose.
Her sportive gibbous, on the wane,
still threw a hearty glow
which sparked anew my sleepy brain
and all the Earth below.
Thusly the morning was well spent
before the day began
when to her zenith Luna went
as gold as old rattan.
And there she did luxuriate
above Orion's frame
chasing her to an evening fate...
beneath a solar flame 🔥
#earth
#moon
#stars #sun
#stars #sun
263 reads
24 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
20th Apr 2025 6:08pm
20th Apr 2025 6:08pm
Whirling Dervishes
like whirling dervishes are stars;
pirouetting on their axis-
spin, spin, spinning
in a meditative momentum.
zooming in...zooming out-
breathing luminous plasma.
fusing...exploding-
a continuum of endless beginning.
swirling...spiraling
ever in the celestial realm
to the divine music
of the colossal cosmos.
emerged from the void
these self-sustaining entities
held by their own gravity,
constructing...destructing
themselves
as they dance
in trance ...
pirouetting on their axis-
spin, spin, spinning
in a meditative momentum.
zooming in...zooming out-
breathing luminous plasma.
fusing...exploding-
a continuum of endless beginning.
swirling...spiraling
ever in the celestial realm
to the divine music
of the colossal cosmos.
emerged from the void
these self-sustaining entities
held by their own gravity,
constructing...destructing
themselves
as they dance
in trance ...
#spiritual
#stars
#love
130 reads
9 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
8th Sep 2021 2:10pm
8th Sep 2021 2:10pm
Betelgeuse
A dark enrapture -
Captivates
to
capture,
The mystery
of
perception,
Giving
One
The impression
They are
a lone
ion -
alone
in
the
Eon,
To stare
at
a star,
in subtle vibrations
Afar,
Awakening
to
Starlight
or
Becoming...
Starlight
Captivates
to
capture,
The mystery
of
perception,
Giving
One
The impression
They are
a lone
ion -
alone
in
the
Eon,
To stare
at
a star,
in subtle vibrations
Afar,
Awakening
to
Starlight
or
Becoming...
Starlight
#universe
#stars
#shadows
#evolution
#astronomy
414 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 10:58am
19th Nov 2024 10:58am
Stars
In the night sky's vast incandescence.
Stars whisper secrets of wind presence.
Dreams ignite with hopeful persistence.
Guiding hearts with gentle fluorescence.
Stars whisper secrets of wind presence.
Dreams ignite with hopeful persistence.
Guiding hearts with gentle fluorescence.
#anxiety
#dreams
#night
#stars
#storm
129 reads
6 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
31st Jan 2022 2:17pm
31st Jan 2022 2:17pm
The Eyes Have It
The Eyes Have It
The swirl
Of the girl
As she entered
The room
Took up
The space,
As one
Might assume,
In fact
Her demeanor
Just filled up
The place.
Spiraling,
Encouraging,
Spilling over
Like lace,
Seen
By the hall
No chance
Not at all
And rested
The seat
Across
From my feet.
Covering her face,
She asked
The color
Of her eyes.
"That's a trick
Question,"
I came
With surprise.
...
The swirl
Of the girl
As she entered
The room
Took up
The space,
As one
Might assume,
In fact
Her demeanor
Just filled up
The place.
Spiraling,
Encouraging,
Spilling over
Like lace,
Seen
By the hall
No chance
Not at all
And rested
The seat
Across
From my feet.
Covering her face,
She asked
The color
Of her eyes.
"That's a trick
Question,"
I came
With surprise.
...
#universe
#stars
#shadows #evolution
#shadows #evolution
470 reads
6 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 2:34am
4th Feb 2025 2:34am
Softly Stargazing
I have been loving this awakening moment in time
It has taken me so many years to be in heart, mind, body and giving thanks to my soul
To not allow the small occurrence in life to rock my morale
It is best to live in the moment
I listen daily to so many troubled intellects and they scream for peace, serenity of their heart
Endorphins and Adrenaline is the body’s best friend
Such a natural high when both are merged is to calm or a flight in your weakened defense
If everyone would only tap into the resources of its on psychic ...
It has taken me so many years to be in heart, mind, body and giving thanks to my soul
To not allow the small occurrence in life to rock my morale
It is best to live in the moment
I listen daily to so many troubled intellects and they scream for peace, serenity of their heart
Endorphins and Adrenaline is the body’s best friend
Such a natural high when both are merged is to calm or a flight in your weakened defense
If everyone would only tap into the resources of its on psychic ...
#moon
#stars
#universe
#water
#sun
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DU Poetry : Poems About Stars by Top Critiquers
