Poems About Stars by Top Critiquers
#stars
Revelation
The night was a twinkling glitter shower.
The moon's pale lemon light,
caressed the intoxicating sleepy flowers.
A whisper from the universe,
assured me I was not alone.
My silent primordial dreams,
were already known.
Galaxies joyously remember me.
They recognize my energy.
It glistens, the celestial shine of night.
Makes what lays beyond,
seem revelation bright.
The moon's pale lemon light,
caressed the intoxicating sleepy flowers.
A whisper from the universe,
assured me I was not alone.
My silent primordial dreams,
were already known.
Galaxies joyously remember me.
They recognize my energy.
It glistens, the celestial shine of night.
Makes what lays beyond,
seem revelation bright.
#dreams
#SelfDiscovery
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
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Garden Thumbprint
As azaleas fade
lilacs awaken—
wild cherries ripen
honeysuckle beckons
Wisteria petals
escape the vine;
glide naked
across the lawn
There is beauty
in their demise
and rebirth
assuming its rightful place
Neutrino streams
emission of the stars—
minute particles
trillions each second
passing in light speed
through every living thing
including us
imprinting our birth ...
lilacs awaken—
wild cherries ripen
honeysuckle beckons
Wisteria petals
escape the vine;
glide naked
across the lawn
There is beauty
in their demise
and rebirth
assuming its rightful place
Neutrino streams
emission of the stars—
minute particles
trillions each second
passing in light speed
through every living thing
including us
imprinting our birth ...
#universe
#stars
#spiritual
#LifeCycle
#wisdom
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The Abomination
Unfold the sky.
Reveal the lie.
From Krishnas mouth.
Deep inside.
The darkest night.
The deeps are bright.
An ocean of craters,
In a spider web.
The moon is late.
The cracks, radiate.
Like electrical storms,
Inside my head.
Blue as my veins.
The water sustains,
Life upon it,
Under the sea bed.
The sun in the sky,
Leaves the lamb chops fried.
A lion, with prey,
Inside it's den.
A God with one eye,
Winks at the night.
The lotus flower, hides,
Revealed inside the...
Reveal the lie.
From Krishnas mouth.
Deep inside.
The darkest night.
The deeps are bright.
An ocean of craters,
In a spider web.
The moon is late.
The cracks, radiate.
Like electrical storms,
Inside my head.
Blue as my veins.
The water sustains,
Life upon it,
Under the sea bed.
The sun in the sky,
Leaves the lamb chops fried.
A lion, with prey,
Inside it's den.
A God with one eye,
Winks at the night.
The lotus flower, hides,
Revealed inside the...
#moon
#stars
#sun
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THE DEEPNESS OF MANIFESTON
👋 it's been a while since we talked and spoke, I was wondering if you had a chance to explore, the true definition of what it means to be to be, open minded and confident that you are more stronger. Than you think due to the fact that you are a thinker. For example if you were given the opportunity, to be able to manifest your own thoughts, what would you. Want and need to change in your quest, for all that you have dreamed about in the still of the night, that still exists in the abyss of lost time. For example its easy to be awaken, by thoughts or imagination and to be able. To make...
#sun
#universe
#moon
#stars
#StreamOfConsciousness
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at starlite
what signs
of a
quiet
autumn
night,
leftover
hours from
the earlier
day, these
impartial
moments
still
decorate
minds,
absolute
and fondness
at starlite.
of a
quiet
autumn
night,
leftover
hours from
the earlier
day, these
impartial
moments
still
decorate
minds,
absolute
and fondness
at starlite.
#fall
#night
#stars
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O Mighty Orion
A furry star so damp and bright
purred with grace and simmering light.
Brushed against his heavenly belt
sprinkling her pearls above his kilt.
O Mighty Orion, cease your play.
I did not come to reminisce or stay.
You came to steal my wavering heart,
rip it out of my chest, smash it apart.
O Mighty Hunter, she wickedly gasped.
a kiss on the lips was all I asked.
I want that kiss, and for you to stay,
to hold in my arms for a night or day.
That all depends on your hardened vigil,
between...
purred with grace and simmering light.
Brushed against his heavenly belt
sprinkling her pearls above his kilt.
O Mighty Orion, cease your play.
I did not come to reminisce or stay.
You came to steal my wavering heart,
rip it out of my chest, smash it apart.
O Mighty Hunter, she wickedly gasped.
a kiss on the lips was all I asked.
I want that kiss, and for you to stay,
to hold in my arms for a night or day.
That all depends on your hardened vigil,
between...
#erotic
#love
#stars
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Stargazers in Awe
There is a nostalgia in her eyes
Like a memory of million heartbeats echoing through time
A story untold through a near glassy glacial glance
Cold and warm all at once
Reaching out in the night
In the vast expanse there is a sigh
It’s as if there is a secret from the universe wanting to escape
You can almost imagine it as it treks along
Leaving a trail of soft and slow breaths
Leaving stargazers in awe
It becomes kind of like a recollection
Of lovers
Of friends
Maybe even strangers that crossed paths ...
Like a memory of million heartbeats echoing through time
A story untold through a near glassy glacial glance
Cold and warm all at once
Reaching out in the night
In the vast expanse there is a sigh
It’s as if there is a secret from the universe wanting to escape
You can almost imagine it as it treks along
Leaving a trail of soft and slow breaths
Leaving stargazers in awe
It becomes kind of like a recollection
Of lovers
Of friends
Maybe even strangers that crossed paths ...
#love
#universe
#stars
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little angel
Little girl, why are you crying?
sensations of grief fall over me
stars rushing to their death
falling from the sky
they crash into us
leaving the heavens permanently
while some of us spend are whole existence
to be taken where they are
sighs and whispers
hush the angels are listening
my heart encourages my inner child
you see a beautiful place when you are finished
I hope it isn't just a fairy tale
maybe heaven is only for some
the stars being signs and wonders
it makes me curious about all of...
sensations of grief fall over me
stars rushing to their death
falling from the sky
they crash into us
leaving the heavens permanently
while some of us spend are whole existence
to be taken where they are
sighs and whispers
hush the angels are listening
my heart encourages my inner child
you see a beautiful place when you are finished
I hope it isn't just a fairy tale
maybe heaven is only for some
the stars being signs and wonders
it makes me curious about all of...
#angels
#earth
#stars
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Scented Love Letter (In The Stars)
Into the Heavens we blend the silhouette of our beautiful souls
Where the rose scent of my skin sails under your nose
Mm... to my lips your kisses softly flow
Beyond the clouds as we ascend past the stars
Venus feels so good to be seduced by the rogue serenades of handsome Mars
Your head thrown back, unto the stars calling out my name
The stature of your body in its release, jerking
Relishing in the hungered satisfaction of my gyrating
Draining the crux of your soul while you are plummeting over and over...
Where the rose scent of my skin sails under your nose
Mm... to my lips your kisses softly flow
Beyond the clouds as we ascend past the stars
Venus feels so good to be seduced by the rogue serenades of handsome Mars
Your head thrown back, unto the stars calling out my name
The stature of your body in its release, jerking
Relishing in the hungered satisfaction of my gyrating
Draining the crux of your soul while you are plummeting over and over...
#war
#stars
#lover
#sensual
#seductive
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Within a Glance
I went somewhere and you were there
alone within the same nightmare
intwined we swirled throughout the night
making the darkest love we dare
And without sight to our delight
we kissed the sun and stole her light
in bended synchronicity
star crossed lovers in lonely plight
But this despair that we both share
while dancing in the space out there
cuts to the quick this devil's bite
until we lose the will to care
So if by chance or happenstance
we break away from circumstance
then I will fly and thus be seen...
alone within the same nightmare
intwined we swirled throughout the night
making the darkest love we dare
And without sight to our delight
we kissed the sun and stole her light
in bended synchronicity
star crossed lovers in lonely plight
But this despair that we both share
while dancing in the space out there
cuts to the quick this devil's bite
until we lose the will to care
So if by chance or happenstance
we break away from circumstance
then I will fly and thus be seen...
#hope
#magic
#nightmares #stars
#nightmares #stars
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The Shepherd's Hour
The Shepherd's Hour
The moon is red on misty horizon
Within a dancing fog, and the plains
In vapor dozing, the frog complains
Among the reeds, where chill has arisen
***
Water flowers have closed their petals
In distance far, poplars show profile
Straight and tight their ghosts unseen awhile
And between the bush, glowworms shuttle
**
The owls now awake, noiseless take flight
Rowing the black air with heavy wings
The zenith full, a fainting glow blinks
White, Venus emerges, it is Night *
...
The moon is red on misty horizon
Within a dancing fog, and the plains
In vapor dozing, the frog complains
Among the reeds, where chill has arisen
***
Water flowers have closed their petals
In distance far, poplars show profile
Straight and tight their ghosts unseen awhile
And between the bush, glowworms shuttle
**
The owls now awake, noiseless take flight
Rowing the black air with heavy wings
The zenith full, a fainting glow blinks
White, Venus emerges, it is Night *
...
#astronomy
#earth
#moon #stars
#moon #stars
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Dark Stars
Never seeking attention
Dark Stars aren’t born that way
Existing only for inky perfection
Upon an infinite ebony skyway
Stitching into each other
Midnight’s ageless background
To hideaway from prying eyes
Without making a single sound
Uncomfortable with the shine
Elevated buried treasures
Never found or cracked open
Locked away with pleasure
Five dark pointed shoulders
Lifting bright stars high
Without malice or jealousy
Enhancing their light
Dark Stars aren’t born that way
Existing only for inky perfection
Upon an infinite ebony skyway
Stitching into each other
Midnight’s ageless background
To hideaway from prying eyes
Without making a single sound
Uncomfortable with the shine
Elevated buried treasures
Never found or cracked open
Locked away with pleasure
Five dark pointed shoulders
Lifting bright stars high
Without malice or jealousy
Enhancing their light
#friendship
#universe
#stars
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DU Poetry : Poems About Stars by Top Critiquers