Poems About Stars by Top Critiquers
#stars
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 10:02pm
26th Mar 2025 10:02pm
hiccup
gleaning from fact and fiction
with visions of past events
Sacred art is understanding
wealth of knowledge is what I crave
Putting away earthly things
The dark appears, and I look in
It is all around us
my star records are in the heavens
memories locked in code
lest they be discovered
Mortal touch is disavowed
divinity in the flesh is graced
within the numerals is the key
a bit of math, and the information comes pouring in
past happenings and the future in collision with time
There is no fate...
with visions of past events
Sacred art is understanding
wealth of knowledge is what I crave
Putting away earthly things
The dark appears, and I look in
It is all around us
my star records are in the heavens
memories locked in code
lest they be discovered
Mortal touch is disavowed
divinity in the flesh is graced
within the numerals is the key
a bit of math, and the information comes pouring in
past happenings and the future in collision with time
There is no fate...
#humankind
#spiritual
#stars
67 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 11:34pm
13th Mar 2025 11:34pm
Here I am as I am a woman
Here I am as I am a woman sitting here in the afternoon sun, of the mother land, yet it's here and now. I admire this tree of life. Tall looking like a badge of honor, standing under the sun, as it's light creating a image, of the bonsai tree of life with love, and happiness and dreams. For sure as I look forward beyond the tree of Life. I can feel it's power reaching into me, so spiritually touching the deepness of my heart ❤️ YET I feel so alive here and now in this space without time, as I am in twin with it's deepness of this subject matter that is called living life. ...
#evolution
#moon
#stars
#sun
#universe
77 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:19pm
Yesterday 9:19pm
Hemet
I remember it was early in the winter of ‘89
My family was attending a church retreat
Somewhere in the California desert
Somewhere in those hills
In those days
Hemet was very much a desert town
The second night I was there
I remember some of us went out to the campfire
It was cold
But in the desert
Away from all the light pollution
The sky was lit up with all kinds of stars
And at fourteen
Impressionable by faith
I felt that something bigger than me was out there
That something had painted that canvass in the...
My family was attending a church retreat
Somewhere in the California desert
Somewhere in those hills
In those days
Hemet was very much a desert town
The second night I was there
I remember some of us went out to the campfire
It was cold
But in the desert
Away from all the light pollution
The sky was lit up with all kinds of stars
And at fourteen
Impressionable by faith
I felt that something bigger than me was out there
That something had painted that canvass in the...
#faith
#stars
#universe #WritingPoetry
#universe #WritingPoetry
19 reads
1 Comment
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
22nd May 2021 9:38pm
22nd May 2021 9:38pm
Garden Thumbprint
As azaleas fade
lilacs awaken—
wild cherries ripen
honeysuckle beckons
Wisteria petals
escape the vine;
glide naked
across the lawn
There is beauty
in their demise
and rebirth
assuming its rightful place
Neutrino streams
emission of the stars—
minute particles
trillions each second
passing in light speed
through every living thing
including us
imprinting our birth ...
lilacs awaken—
wild cherries ripen
honeysuckle beckons
Wisteria petals
escape the vine;
glide naked
across the lawn
There is beauty
in their demise
and rebirth
assuming its rightful place
Neutrino streams
emission of the stars—
minute particles
trillions each second
passing in light speed
through every living thing
including us
imprinting our birth ...
#universe
#stars
#spiritual
#LifeCycle
#wisdom
1072 reads
28 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 2:00pm
6th Oct 2024 2:00pm
Soul Lovers
it feels like we are
sexual soulmates
L said out of the
blue during sex
and that is true
though on other
aspects we pair
quite perfect too
as if our planets
are stellar in line
two similar lives
Colliding as if it
was meant to be
we see what lies
beneath our eyes
always complete
each other's lines
we are dark matter
and starfire in this
divine outer space
delicate souls who
found each other in
this magical cosmos
&...
sexual soulmates
L said out of the
blue during sex
and that is true
though on other
aspects we pair
quite perfect too
as if our planets
are stellar in line
two similar lives
Colliding as if it
was meant to be
we see what lies
beneath our eyes
always complete
each other's lines
we are dark matter
and starfire in this
divine outer space
delicate souls who
found each other in
this magical cosmos
&...
#lover
#stars
335 reads
22 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
9th Dec 2018 2:04pm
9th Dec 2018 2:04pm
'inner'vation
1.
interstellar drive
spiraling into the core
possibilities
2.
turgid silvery
droplets over lotus leaves
kundalini peaks
3.
stars of the tarred nights
eclipse not the Absolute
but faint gra(d/y)ing signs
4.
beyond skeletal
of famines and holocaust
minimalistic
5.
elemental self
an alchemical mishmash
infinite chaos
interstellar drive
spiraling into the core
possibilities
2.
turgid silvery
droplets over lotus leaves
kundalini peaks
3.
stars of the tarred nights
eclipse not the Absolute
but faint gra(d/y)ing signs
4.
beyond skeletal
of famines and holocaust
minimalistic
5.
elemental self
an alchemical mishmash
infinite chaos
#stars
#night
#haiku
#minimalist
#SelfDiscovery
801 reads
3 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
9th Jun 2024 10:39am
9th Jun 2024 10:39am
The Abomination
Unfold the sky.
Reveal the lie.
From Krishnas mouth.
Deep inside.
The darkest night.
The deeps are bright.
An ocean of craters,
In a spider web.
The moon is late.
The cracks, radiate.
Like electrical storms,
Inside my head.
Blue as my veins.
The water sustains,
Life upon it,
Under the sea bed.
The sun in the sky,
Leaves the lamb chops fried.
A lion, with prey,
Inside it's den.
A God with one eye,
Winks at the night.
The lotus flower, hides,
Revealed inside the...
Reveal the lie.
From Krishnas mouth.
Deep inside.
The darkest night.
The deeps are bright.
An ocean of craters,
In a spider web.
The moon is late.
The cracks, radiate.
Like electrical storms,
Inside my head.
Blue as my veins.
The water sustains,
Life upon it,
Under the sea bed.
The sun in the sky,
Leaves the lamb chops fried.
A lion, with prey,
Inside it's den.
A God with one eye,
Winks at the night.
The lotus flower, hides,
Revealed inside the...
#moon
#stars
#sun
202 reads
8 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 10:58am
19th Nov 2024 10:58am
Stars
In the night sky's vast incandescence.
Stars whisper secrets of wind presence.
Dreams ignite with hopeful persistence.
Guiding hearts with gentle fluorescence.
Stars whisper secrets of wind presence.
Dreams ignite with hopeful persistence.
Guiding hearts with gentle fluorescence.
#anxiety
#dreams
#night
#stars
#storm
110 reads
6 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 12:59pm
22nd Sep 2024 12:59pm
By Jove!
I glanced at lovely Artemis
who by the stars arose
and thereby got a moonbeam kiss
upon my groggy nose.
Her sportive gibbous, on the wane,
still threw a hearty glow
which sparked anew my sleepy brain
and all the Earth below.
Thusly the morning was well spent
before the day began
when to her zenith Luna went
as gold as old rattan.
And there she did luxuriate
above Orion's frame
chasing her to an evening fate...
beneath a solar flame 🔥
who by the stars arose
and thereby got a moonbeam kiss
upon my groggy nose.
Her sportive gibbous, on the wane,
still threw a hearty glow
which sparked anew my sleepy brain
and all the Earth below.
Thusly the morning was well spent
before the day began
when to her zenith Luna went
as gold as old rattan.
And there she did luxuriate
above Orion's frame
chasing her to an evening fate...
beneath a solar flame 🔥
#earth
#moon
#stars #sun
#stars #sun
248 reads
24 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
8th Sep 2021 2:10pm
8th Sep 2021 2:10pm
Betelgeuse
A dark enrapture -
Captivates
to
capture,
The mystery
of
perception,
Giving
One
The impression
They are
a lone
ion -
alone
in
the
Eon,
To stare
at
a star,
in subtle vibrations
Afar,
Awakening
to
Starlight
or
Becoming...
Starlight
Captivates
to
capture,
The mystery
of
perception,
Giving
One
The impression
They are
a lone
ion -
alone
in
the
Eon,
To stare
at
a star,
in subtle vibrations
Afar,
Awakening
to
Starlight
or
Becoming...
Starlight
#universe
#stars
#shadows
#evolution
#astronomy
403 reads
2 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 5:08am
14th Sep 2024 5:08am
Distracted
The narrator
in the documentary about the deepest secrets of space
the mysteries of the universe
the ultra-exclusive party
in the creator's backyard
A portal to drive a 500 mph Ferrari
through the wall of limitations
into a field of luminescent orbs
each one the voice of wisdom
each one beckoning you
to hear its story
To know
To finally,
actually
really
know
But the narrator
- the stupid effing narrator -
keeps...
in the documentary about the deepest secrets of space
the mysteries of the universe
the ultra-exclusive party
in the creator's backyard
A portal to drive a 500 mph Ferrari
through the wall of limitations
into a field of luminescent orbs
each one the voice of wisdom
each one beckoning you
to hear its story
To know
To finally,
actually
really
know
But the narrator
- the stupid effing narrator -
keeps...
#stars
#universe
152 reads
3 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
11th Nov 2018 2:46am
11th Nov 2018 2:46am
*****
walked the road at night
seeking space to view the stars
Perseids obliged
seeking space to view the stars
Perseids obliged
#stars
#haiku
773 reads
2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Stars by Top Critiquers
