Poems About Stars by Top Critiquers
#stars
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 11:54pm
15th Sep 2024 11:54pm
sparkle
jilted craven pale of thought
crystal clear confusion
looking into the mist it swirls red
meaning indecision
so I check the ruins
something is moving against me
levitating then elevating and touching the sky
the onyx corridor opens
and I approach my father
it is a great and weighty thing
rarely do I bother him here
the watchers speak in unison
permission is granted
so I slowly approach
he is Wisdom
he reads my soul
hex upon hex it is a curse
purification ritual should cleanse you of this...
crystal clear confusion
looking into the mist it swirls red
meaning indecision
so I check the ruins
something is moving against me
levitating then elevating and touching the sky
the onyx corridor opens
and I approach my father
it is a great and weighty thing
rarely do I bother him here
the watchers speak in unison
permission is granted
so I slowly approach
he is Wisdom
he reads my soul
hex upon hex it is a curse
purification ritual should cleanse you of this...
#earth
#stars
#universe
93 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Nov 2023 1:00am
17th Nov 2023 1:00am
THE DEEPNESS OF MANIFESTON
👋 it's been a while since we talked and spoke, I was wondering if you had a chance to explore, the true definition of what it means to be to be, open minded and confident that you are more stronger. Than you think due to the fact that you are a thinker. For example if you were given the opportunity, to be able to manifest your own thoughts, what would you. Want and need to change in your quest, for all that you have dreamed about in the still of the night, that still exists in the abyss of lost time. For example its easy to be awaken, by thoughts or imagination and to be able. To make...
#sun
#universe
#moon
#stars
#StreamOfConsciousness
219 reads
3 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
9th Dec 2018 2:04pm
9th Dec 2018 2:04pm
'inner'vation
1.
interstellar drive
spiraling into the core
possibilities
2.
turgid silvery
droplets over lotus leaves
kundalini peaks
3.
stars of the tarred nights
eclipse not the Absolute
but faint gra(d/y)ing signs
4.
beyond skeletal
of famines and holocaust
minimalistic
5.
elemental self
an alchemical mishmash
infinite chaos
interstellar drive
spiraling into the core
possibilities
2.
turgid silvery
droplets over lotus leaves
kundalini peaks
3.
stars of the tarred nights
eclipse not the Absolute
but faint gra(d/y)ing signs
4.
beyond skeletal
of famines and holocaust
minimalistic
5.
elemental self
an alchemical mishmash
infinite chaos
#stars
#night
#haiku
#minimalist
#SelfDiscovery
743 reads
3 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 2:00pm
6th Oct 2024 2:00pm
Soul Lovers
it feels like we are
sexual soulmates
L said out of the
blue during sex
and that is true
though on other
aspects we pair
quite perfect too
as if our planets
are stellar in line
two similar lives
Colliding as if it
was meant to be
we see what lies
beneath our eyes
always complete
each other's lines
we are dark matter
and starfire in this
divine outer space
delicate souls who
found each other in
this magical cosmos
&...
sexual soulmates
L said out of the
blue during sex
and that is true
though on other
aspects we pair
quite perfect too
as if our planets
are stellar in line
two similar lives
Colliding as if it
was meant to be
we see what lies
beneath our eyes
always complete
each other's lines
we are dark matter
and starfire in this
divine outer space
delicate souls who
found each other in
this magical cosmos
&...
#lover
#stars
231 reads
22 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
22nd May 2021 9:38pm
22nd May 2021 9:38pm
Garden Thumbprint
As azaleas fade
lilacs awaken—
wild cherries ripen
honeysuckle beckons
Wisteria petals
escape the vine;
glide naked
across the lawn
There is beauty
in their demise
and rebirth
assuming its rightful place
Neutrino streams
emission of the stars—
minute particles
trillions each second
passing in light speed
through every living thing
including us
imprinting our birth ...
lilacs awaken—
wild cherries ripen
honeysuckle beckons
Wisteria petals
escape the vine;
glide naked
across the lawn
There is beauty
in their demise
and rebirth
assuming its rightful place
Neutrino streams
emission of the stars—
minute particles
trillions each second
passing in light speed
through every living thing
including us
imprinting our birth ...
#universe
#stars
#spiritual
#LifeCycle
#wisdom
1019 reads
28 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:32pm
Yesterday 1:32pm
White Butterflies
The snow was like miniature white butterflies
in a beautifully choreographed flutter.
Always vanishing too soon.
So we wish upon a cluster of winter stars,
that permeate the mental bars.
Beneath the glow of the ambiguous moon.
The despair of not knowing if another cherished
day will exist.
The very dark between stars is what despair
cannot resist.
The snow falls in a stark silent rapture
of every fallen dream the heart still yearns to capture.
The moon is the wolf's trusted guiding light.
While the rabbit's eyes were...
in a beautifully choreographed flutter.
Always vanishing too soon.
So we wish upon a cluster of winter stars,
that permeate the mental bars.
Beneath the glow of the ambiguous moon.
The despair of not knowing if another cherished
day will exist.
The very dark between stars is what despair
cannot resist.
The snow falls in a stark silent rapture
of every fallen dream the heart still yearns to capture.
The moon is the wolf's trusted guiding light.
While the rabbit's eyes were...
#moon
#SelfReflection
#snow #stars
#snow #stars
53 reads
12 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 12:59pm
22nd Sep 2024 12:59pm
By Jove!
I glanced at lovely Artemis
who by the stars arose
and thereby got a moonbeam kiss
upon my groggy nose.
Her sportive gibbous, on the wane,
still threw a hearty glow
which sparked anew my sleepy brain
and all the Earth below.
Thusly the morning was well spent
before the day began
when to her zenith Luna went
as gold as old rattan.
And there she did luxuriate
above Orion's frame
chasing her to an evening fate...
beneath a solar flame 🔥
who by the stars arose
and thereby got a moonbeam kiss
upon my groggy nose.
Her sportive gibbous, on the wane,
still threw a hearty glow
which sparked anew my sleepy brain
and all the Earth below.
Thusly the morning was well spent
before the day began
when to her zenith Luna went
as gold as old rattan.
And there she did luxuriate
above Orion's frame
chasing her to an evening fate...
beneath a solar flame 🔥
#earth
#moon
#stars #sun
#stars #sun
210 reads
24 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 8:47am
8th Dec 2024 8:47am
fireflies singing
i heard
the fireflies
singing,
their
lights,
flames
burning
into
the night,
stars
watch
with their
sighs,
and then
silence,
the dawn
comes,
fills the
morning,
the sun
like
incense
for
the skin.
the fireflies
singing,
their
lights,
flames
burning
into
the night,
stars
watch
with their
sighs,
and then
silence,
the dawn
comes,
fills the
morning,
the sun
like
incense
for
the skin.
#morning
#night
#sky
#stars
#sun
55 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
24th Nov 2022 10:11am
24th Nov 2022 10:11am
Stargazers in Awe
There is a nostalgia in her eyes
Like a memory of million heartbeats echoing through time
A story untold through a near glassy glacial glance
Cold and warm all at once
Reaching out in the night
In the vast expanse there is a sigh
It’s as if there is a secret from the universe wanting to escape
You can almost imagine it as it treks along
Leaving a trail of soft and slow breaths
Leaving stargazers in awe
It becomes kind of like a recollection
Of lovers
Of friends
Maybe even strangers that crossed paths ...
Like a memory of million heartbeats echoing through time
A story untold through a near glassy glacial glance
Cold and warm all at once
Reaching out in the night
In the vast expanse there is a sigh
It’s as if there is a secret from the universe wanting to escape
You can almost imagine it as it treks along
Leaving a trail of soft and slow breaths
Leaving stargazers in awe
It becomes kind of like a recollection
Of lovers
Of friends
Maybe even strangers that crossed paths ...
#love
#universe
#stars
487 reads
12 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 10:58am
19th Nov 2024 10:58am
Stars
In the night sky's vast incandescence.
Stars whisper secrets of wind presence.
Dreams ignite with hopeful persistence.
Guiding hearts with gentle fluorescence.
Stars whisper secrets of wind presence.
Dreams ignite with hopeful persistence.
Guiding hearts with gentle fluorescence.
#anxiety
#dreams
#night
#stars
#storm
66 reads
6 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
9th Jun 2024 10:39am
9th Jun 2024 10:39am
The Abomination
Unfold the sky.
Reveal the lie.
From Krishnas mouth.
Deep inside.
The darkest night.
The deeps are bright.
An ocean of craters,
In a spider web.
The moon is late.
The cracks, radiate.
Like electrical storms,
Inside my head.
Blue as my veins.
The water sustains,
Life upon it,
Under the sea bed.
The sun in the sky,
Leaves the lamb chops fried.
A lion, with prey,
Inside it's den.
A God with one eye,
Winks at the night.
The lotus flower, hides,
Revealed inside the...
Reveal the lie.
From Krishnas mouth.
Deep inside.
The darkest night.
The deeps are bright.
An ocean of craters,
In a spider web.
The moon is late.
The cracks, radiate.
Like electrical storms,
Inside my head.
Blue as my veins.
The water sustains,
Life upon it,
Under the sea bed.
The sun in the sky,
Leaves the lamb chops fried.
A lion, with prey,
Inside it's den.
A God with one eye,
Winks at the night.
The lotus flower, hides,
Revealed inside the...
#moon
#stars
#sun
152 reads
8 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
26th Sep 2024 5:32pm
26th Sep 2024 5:32pm
Allah’s Most Sacred Cherished Roots
I love you beyond the Stars
As the Moon of my heart kisses your dawn
Swept away in the veil of your Clouds
May the Grand Rising of our stance in life
Always be granted unto the everlasting Sun
As we sit upon the throne of its cosmic warmth
Where showers of mercy shall bind our rings of infinity
As the Moon of my heart kisses your dawn
Swept away in the veil of your Clouds
May the Grand Rising of our stance in life
Always be granted unto the everlasting Sun
As we sit upon the throne of its cosmic warmth
Where showers of mercy shall bind our rings of infinity
#clouds
#moon
#nature
#stars
#sun
243 reads
5 Comments
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