Poems About Stars by Top Critiquers
#stars
O Mighty Orion
A furry star so damp and bright
purred with grace and simmering light.
Brushed against his heavenly belt
sprinkling her pearls above his kilt.
O Mighty Orion, cease your play.
I did not come to reminisce or stay.
You came to steal my wavering heart,
rip it out of my chest, smash it apart.
O Mighty Hunter, she wickedly gasped.
a kiss on the lips was all I asked.
I want that kiss, and for you to stay,
to hold in my arms for a night or day.
That all depends on your hardened vigil,
between...
purred with grace and simmering light.
Brushed against his heavenly belt
sprinkling her pearls above his kilt.
O Mighty Orion, cease your play.
I did not come to reminisce or stay.
You came to steal my wavering heart,
rip it out of my chest, smash it apart.
O Mighty Hunter, she wickedly gasped.
a kiss on the lips was all I asked.
I want that kiss, and for you to stay,
to hold in my arms for a night or day.
That all depends on your hardened vigil,
between...
#erotic
#love
#stars
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Little Stars
Fireflies shine
Like little Stars
Dressing up
The night
Like little Stars
Dressing up
The night
#stars
#night
#nature
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Night's Desire
The night was dressed to astound.
The moon wore a billowing black gown.
Festooned in silver beads.
To coincide with the glitter of my needs.
You trace, like a whisper, your fingers down my naked spine.
The bind,
for my soul's story.
Trail my moonlit land of flesh with starborn kisses.
Make me a constellation of blisses.
Admist the tugs, twists and swerves of colliding destinies.
Tonight we deviate fate in euphoric glory.
and let the tangle of our lips forever be.
The moon wore a billowing black gown.
Festooned in silver beads.
To coincide with the glitter of my needs.
You trace, like a whisper, your fingers down my naked spine.
The bind,
for my soul's story.
Trail my moonlit land of flesh with starborn kisses.
Make me a constellation of blisses.
Admist the tugs, twists and swerves of colliding destinies.
Tonight we deviate fate in euphoric glory.
and let the tangle of our lips forever be.
#stars
#night
#passion
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Stars Eclipse the Moon
smothering the dawn...never
layed=back resistance to relieve tension
I prefer a hands-off approach
present, without impeding the wind
manners matter when dealing with molecules
on a molecular level, the earth is grieving
Its growing pains are recognized
as the universe stretches bending time to accommodate growth
within and without
sentinels of peace keep track
it is purported the Earth is billions of years old
humans laid track alongside the dinosaurs
giants have come and they have gone
so says time ...
layed=back resistance to relieve tension
I prefer a hands-off approach
present, without impeding the wind
manners matter when dealing with molecules
on a molecular level, the earth is grieving
Its growing pains are recognized
as the universe stretches bending time to accommodate growth
within and without
sentinels of peace keep track
it is purported the Earth is billions of years old
humans laid track alongside the dinosaurs
giants have come and they have gone
so says time ...
#stars
#angels
#aliens
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Shooting Stars
we both gasped
looking toward the night sky
and pointing in opposite directions
relevant to the nature of our journey
separated by lack of communication
yet our inclinations brought us back together
to stand here in awe at the beauty
of a celestial show
stars showering in motion
across the horizon
drawing a line
to your heart from mine
tying us into an embrace
with fingers interlaced
looking toward the night sky
and pointing in opposite directions
relevant to the nature of our journey
separated by lack of communication
yet our inclinations brought us back together
to stand here in awe at the beauty
of a celestial show
stars showering in motion
across the horizon
drawing a line
to your heart from mine
tying us into an embrace
with fingers interlaced
#FallingInLove
#NaPoWriMo2024
#sky
#stars
#wife
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my little boat
my
little boat,
sorry
to see
that sun
go down,
now
that misty
darkness
sank
closer
to the
treetops,
i weighted
my
little boat
in a
small harbor,
the moon
overwhelming me,
i lay
awake
to watch
the stars
in their
shadowy river,
falling asleep
in my
little boat.
little boat,
sorry
to see
that sun
go down,
now
that misty
darkness
sank
closer
to the
treetops,
i weighted
my
little boat
in a
small harbor,
the moon
overwhelming me,
i lay
awake
to watch
the stars
in their
shadowy river,
falling asleep
in my
little boat.
#moon
#stars
#sky
#night
#shadows
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STARS
STARS
From the million of stars up in the midnight sky,
There's one the shines brightest I can't deny.
A love so beautiful, so rare and forever true,
the love that's shared only between me & you.
From the million of stars up in the midnight sky,
There's one the shines brightest I can't deny.
A love so beautiful, so rare and forever true,
the love that's shared only between me & you.
#stars
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My Shining Star
She's my star she's
shining very bright
doing that Thing You Do
You chase the adventure
Where it may lead
You find yourself on
a wild ride giving
it all you got
While you are both
shining with
Orgasmic Bliss
over and over again
Til the roosters crow
shining very bright
doing that Thing You Do
You chase the adventure
Where it may lead
You find yourself on
a wild ride giving
it all you got
While you are both
shining with
Orgasmic Bliss
over and over again
Til the roosters crow
#love
#women
#men
#sex
#stars
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Garden Thumbprint
As azaleas fade
lilacs awaken—
wild cherries ripen
honeysuckle beckons
Wisteria petals
escape the vine;
glide naked
across the lawn
There is beauty
in their demise
and rebirth
assuming its rightful place
Neutrino streams
emission of the stars—
minute particles
trillions each second
passing in light speed
through every living thing
including us
imprinting our birth ...
lilacs awaken—
wild cherries ripen
honeysuckle beckons
Wisteria petals
escape the vine;
glide naked
across the lawn
There is beauty
in their demise
and rebirth
assuming its rightful place
Neutrino streams
emission of the stars—
minute particles
trillions each second
passing in light speed
through every living thing
including us
imprinting our birth ...
#universe
#stars
#spiritual
#LifeCycle
#wisdom
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Perseid
Auriga, Jupiter, and a crescent moon
Owned a very early eastern sky
As lowly hung the Dipper's northern spoon
With a brace of meteors blasting by!
And Cassiopeia, above it all,
Was regal on her meridian throne
Watching stars shoot in their final fall
Of plasma transmutation from stone!
The Pleiades, so coquettishly aglow
As seven stellar sisters so divine,
Embraced my mortal psyche, so far below,
With the sibling light of their rise and shine...
First to withdraw into daybreak's beams
Of Aurora mastering...
Owned a very early eastern sky
As lowly hung the Dipper's northern spoon
With a brace of meteors blasting by!
And Cassiopeia, above it all,
Was regal on her meridian throne
Watching stars shoot in their final fall
Of plasma transmutation from stone!
The Pleiades, so coquettishly aglow
As seven stellar sisters so divine,
Embraced my mortal psyche, so far below,
With the sibling light of their rise and shine...
First to withdraw into daybreak's beams
Of Aurora mastering...
#earth
#universe
#moon
#stars
#astronomy
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Stargazers in Awe
There is a nostalgia in her eyes
Like a memory of million heartbeats echoing through time
A story untold through a near glassy glacial glance
Cold and warm all at once
Reaching out in the night
In the vast expanse there is a sigh
It’s as if there is a secret from the universe wanting to escape
You can almost imagine it as it treks along
Leaving a trail of soft and slow breaths
Leaving stargazers in awe
It becomes kind of like a recollection
Of lovers
Of friends
Maybe even strangers that crossed paths ...
Like a memory of million heartbeats echoing through time
A story untold through a near glassy glacial glance
Cold and warm all at once
Reaching out in the night
In the vast expanse there is a sigh
It’s as if there is a secret from the universe wanting to escape
You can almost imagine it as it treks along
Leaving a trail of soft and slow breaths
Leaving stargazers in awe
It becomes kind of like a recollection
Of lovers
Of friends
Maybe even strangers that crossed paths ...
#love
#universe
#stars
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Night and Stars
It was a time of night and stars,
where firelight stained colomnus trees
against the quilted black of night.
Hearts spun on mortal plains
embrace in hues of pale moonlight.
No storm, nor rain befell the eve’,
they spoke of ancient lakes that flowed
and forests steeped in elven words,
a grimwar rich in blood and time.
It was a time of night and stars,
where darkness delved in
delicious delight.
The air was still, intense but warm,
like the eyes that hold the others gaze
an ensemble, if you will, ...
where firelight stained colomnus trees
against the quilted black of night.
Hearts spun on mortal plains
embrace in hues of pale moonlight.
No storm, nor rain befell the eve’,
they spoke of ancient lakes that flowed
and forests steeped in elven words,
a grimwar rich in blood and time.
It was a time of night and stars,
where darkness delved in
delicious delight.
The air was still, intense but warm,
like the eyes that hold the others gaze
an ensemble, if you will, ...
#love
#stars
#nature
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