Spiritual Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#spiritual
spiritual seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
~a march(-ing) red..
.in a high noonish-dusk dramatics..
in a thin-line hybridised cusp… of a
wanton to puritan or vice versa..
i sit towards the sunny window .. letting in
the naked sunlight in all its luscious sparkle
.. of duskiness yellows.. dripping exuberance
of a translucent caramel honey in its tinkling
lippy dimpling corner kisses in a centric frilly
thickening voluptuous smoochy gather..
the buzzing whirring in trucks one after the
other .. but with some organic intervals in
between them as a...
in a thin-line hybridised cusp… of a
wanton to puritan or vice versa..
i sit towards the sunny window .. letting in
the naked sunlight in all its luscious sparkle
.. of duskiness yellows.. dripping exuberance
of a translucent caramel honey in its tinkling
lippy dimpling corner kisses in a centric frilly
thickening voluptuous smoochy gather..
the buzzing whirring in trucks one after the
other .. but with some organic intervals in
between them as a...
#birds
#love
#spiritual
#StreamOfConsciousness
#trees
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Found Scrawled Across an Instrument of Occultic Practice
This astrolabe has measured out
My days in damned astrology
The turning of its golden hands
Riposte to pure theology
My days in damned astrology
The turning of its golden hands
Riposte to pure theology
#historical
#magic
#pagan #spiritual
#pagan #spiritual
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3 Comments
random 3 (spirited) senryus ~of & ~from the day
viz: 3 senryu
#love
#minimalist
#senryu #spiritual
#senryu #spiritual
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~selkie:: in the sempiternal inner calling
The one thing which we seek with insatiable desire is to forget ourselves, … to lose our sempiternal memory, and to do something without knowing how or why….” ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson
she
has appeared
for me ..
watching me
following me ..
an intervention
decodes me this
now…
will i be able to
sense her presence ..
she had risen for me
from the deep seas
.. in her enchanted seal
form .. her dense shiny skin ...
she
has appeared
for me ..
watching me
following me ..
an intervention
decodes me this
now…
will i be able to
sense her presence ..
she had risen for me
from the deep seas
.. in her enchanted seal
form .. her dense shiny skin ...
#animals
#love
#sea
#spiritual
#symbolism
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Senryu - Dieu Duet
God, through miracles
guides us when lost or confused
constantly rescued
My God sets the screen
so I can, with ease, make my shot
listen to your Coach
guides us when lost or confused
constantly rescued
My God sets the screen
so I can, with ease, make my shot
listen to your Coach
#God
#hope
#love
#spiritual
#support
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Shield Before Shield
Shield before shield,
I could have busted through all of your walls.
Let the dust settle before you speak to someone new.
I told myself I’d do something different this time,
Yet I got distracted by what I once desired.
There he was, all wrapped with a beautiful bow.
I rushed to catch a glimpse, heart pounding, like a cartoon, it raced within my chest. I slipped, got delusional, then my creator cast everything into darkness.
I was forced to sit with my silence, and then, I heard my vibrational...
I told myself I’d do something different this time,
Yet I got distracted by what I once desired.
There he was, all wrapped with a beautiful bow.
I rushed to catch a glimpse, heart pounding, like a cartoon, it raced within my chest. I slipped, got delusional, then my creator cast everything into darkness.
I was forced to sit with my silence, and then, I heard my vibrational...
#identity
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeStruggles
#spiritual
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Via "666"
6 Hour's 6 minutes 6 seconds the witching hour is at hand!!
Warlocks prepared for battle release your battle cry and lay out all your plans!!
Engaged in this eternal warfare mortal combat of the soul our main goal is to overtake and gain all control!
The Mission is clear as we get in gear with no fear, with dominance so overwhelming and bold!
Set for that final judgment hour and day fully equipped to make all our enemies fold!
Moving forward with full force, powerful rituals and spells designed to help all our goals to excel!!
...
Warlocks prepared for battle release your battle cry and lay out all your plans!!
Engaged in this eternal warfare mortal combat of the soul our main goal is to overtake and gain all control!
The Mission is clear as we get in gear with no fear, with dominance so overwhelming and bold!
Set for that final judgment hour and day fully equipped to make all our enemies fold!
Moving forward with full force, powerful rituals and spells designed to help all our goals to excel!!
...
#magic
#pagan
#rebirth
#religion
#spiritual
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The Road Back To You
All roads lead to something that we need in life
It's the something that leads us back to our inner-self
It's the something that leads us back to our inner-self
#identity
#LifeGoals
#minimalist #spiritual
#minimalist #spiritual
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~the purpose
take away even my memory
your cruel designs of lobotomy
can win you toxic nuclear wars
but yes there I am here again.. still
throbbing as a steely butterfly heart
with lousily stitched up a punctured
ruptured mind.. unable to comprehend
or feel anything even..
but yet this hearted up beat.. it’s frictional
heat has already marathonically lighted up
this eternal soul .. that feel knows the pain
the pain .. that...
your cruel designs of lobotomy
can win you toxic nuclear wars
but yes there I am here again.. still
throbbing as a steely butterfly heart
with lousily stitched up a punctured
ruptured mind.. unable to comprehend
or feel anything even..
but yet this hearted up beat.. it’s frictional
heat has already marathonically lighted up
this eternal soul .. that feel knows the pain
the pain .. that...
#dystopian
#inspirational
#nature #spiritual
#nature #spiritual
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~: Civarttiri
the spiritual energies
of this pent up cosmos ..
unlocks
as the planetary alignments
take a straight line magnetism
when the impossible leap
of Him happens.. just hop(p)ing
for Her..
Shiva he is … in a coming together
fusionsal One form with her, the
Shakthi..
dancing long both the gelling form
..until the rock hard echoing core
of cosmos cracks to a hell of a
breaking scream.. of a
sudden long beeping in
an...
of this pent up cosmos ..
unlocks
as the planetary alignments
take a straight line magnetism
when the impossible leap
of Him happens.. just hop(p)ing
for Her..
Shiva he is … in a coming together
fusionsal One form with her, the
Shakthi..
dancing long both the gelling form
..until the rock hard echoing core
of cosmos cracks to a hell of a
breaking scream.. of a
sudden long beeping in
an...
#astronomy
#love
#spiritual #StreamOfConsciousness
#spiritual #StreamOfConsciousness
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Create
I’ve always marveled at woman in art,
myself, I like poetry, staying up all night,
arguing with someone, anyone,
about which poet is overrated.
I love to watch as she makes pottery,
paints, plays the piano, sings a song—
women giving into their creative art,
giving them access to their more feminine side.
Could that be what they call a man’s feminine side?
It’s his creative art, hands in motion,
his heart pouring onto a canvas or simply just molding clay.
I...
myself, I like poetry, staying up all night,
arguing with someone, anyone,
about which poet is overrated.
I love to watch as she makes pottery,
paints, plays the piano, sings a song—
women giving into their creative art,
giving them access to their more feminine side.
Could that be what they call a man’s feminine side?
It’s his creative art, hands in motion,
his heart pouring onto a canvas or simply just molding clay.
I...
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational
#spiritual
#uplifting
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-divinity
and all that t'was
thou should not be
for all that's love
is but one to see..
.
and, or the pain
for not, of love
unto this be, why
the gods envy us...
-ed
thou should not be
for all that's love
is but one to see..
.
and, or the pain
for not, of love
unto this be, why
the gods envy us...
-ed
#love
#sadness
#spiritual
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3 Comments
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