Spiritual Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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spiritual seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Senryu - Dieu Duet
God, through miracles
guides us when lost or confused
constantly rescued
My God sets the screen
so I can, with ease, make my shot
listen to your Coach
guides us when lost or confused
constantly rescued
My God sets the screen
so I can, with ease, make my shot
listen to your Coach
#God
#hope
#love
#spiritual
#support
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Shield Before Shield
Shield before shield,
I could have busted through all of your walls.
Let the dust settle before you speak to someone new.
I told myself I’d do something different this time,
Yet I got distracted by what I once desired.
There he was, all wrapped with a beautiful bow.
I rushed to catch a glimpse, heart pounding, like a cartoon, it raced within my chest. I slipped, got delusional, then my creator cast everything into darkness.
I was forced to sit with my silence, and then, I heard my vibrational...
I told myself I’d do something different this time,
Yet I got distracted by what I once desired.
There he was, all wrapped with a beautiful bow.
I rushed to catch a glimpse, heart pounding, like a cartoon, it raced within my chest. I slipped, got delusional, then my creator cast everything into darkness.
I was forced to sit with my silence, and then, I heard my vibrational...
#identity
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeStruggles
#spiritual
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Via "666"
6 Hour's 6 minutes 6 seconds the witching hour is at hand!!
Warlocks prepared for battle release your battle cry and lay out all your plans!!
Engaged in this eternal warfare mortal combat of the soul our main goal is to overtake and gain all control!
The Mission is clear as we get in gear with no fear, with dominance so overwhelming and bold!
Set for that final judgment hour and day fully equipped to make all our enemies fold!
Moving forward with full force, powerful rituals and spells designed to help all our goals to excel!!
...
Warlocks prepared for battle release your battle cry and lay out all your plans!!
Engaged in this eternal warfare mortal combat of the soul our main goal is to overtake and gain all control!
The Mission is clear as we get in gear with no fear, with dominance so overwhelming and bold!
Set for that final judgment hour and day fully equipped to make all our enemies fold!
Moving forward with full force, powerful rituals and spells designed to help all our goals to excel!!
...
#magic
#pagan
#rebirth
#religion
#spiritual
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The Road Back To You
All roads lead to something that we need in life
It's the something that leads us back to our inner-self
It's the something that leads us back to our inner-self
#identity
#LifeGoals
#minimalist #spiritual
#minimalist #spiritual
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~the purpose
take away even my memory
your cruel designs of lobotomy
can win you toxic nuclear wars
but yes there I am here again.. still
throbbing as a steely butterfly heart
with lousily stitched up a punctured
ruptured mind.. unable to comprehend
or feel anything even..
but yet this hearted up beat.. it’s frictional
heat has already marathonically lighted up
this eternal soul .. that feel knows the pain
the pain .. that...
your cruel designs of lobotomy
can win you toxic nuclear wars
but yes there I am here again.. still
throbbing as a steely butterfly heart
with lousily stitched up a punctured
ruptured mind.. unable to comprehend
or feel anything even..
but yet this hearted up beat.. it’s frictional
heat has already marathonically lighted up
this eternal soul .. that feel knows the pain
the pain .. that...
#dystopian
#inspirational
#nature #spiritual
#nature #spiritual
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~: Civarttiri
the spiritual energies
of this pent up cosmos ..
unlocks
as the planetary alignments
take a straight line magnetism
when the impossible leap
of Him happens.. just hop(p)ing
for Her..
Shiva he is … in a coming together
fusionsal One form with her, the
Shakthi..
dancing long both the gelling form
..until the rock hard echoing core
of cosmos cracks to a hell of a
breaking scream.. of a
sudden long beeping in
an...
of this pent up cosmos ..
unlocks
as the planetary alignments
take a straight line magnetism
when the impossible leap
of Him happens.. just hop(p)ing
for Her..
Shiva he is … in a coming together
fusionsal One form with her, the
Shakthi..
dancing long both the gelling form
..until the rock hard echoing core
of cosmos cracks to a hell of a
breaking scream.. of a
sudden long beeping in
an...
#astronomy
#love
#spiritual #StreamOfConsciousness
#spiritual #StreamOfConsciousness
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Create
I’ve always marveled at woman in art,
myself, I like poetry, staying up all night,
arguing with someone, anyone,
about which poet is overrated.
I love to watch as she makes pottery,
paints, plays the piano, sings a song—
women giving into their creative art,
giving them access to their more feminine side.
Could that be what they call a man’s feminine side?
It’s his creative art, hands in motion,
his heart pouring onto a canvas or simply just molding clay.
I...
myself, I like poetry, staying up all night,
arguing with someone, anyone,
about which poet is overrated.
I love to watch as she makes pottery,
paints, plays the piano, sings a song—
women giving into their creative art,
giving them access to their more feminine side.
Could that be what they call a man’s feminine side?
It’s his creative art, hands in motion,
his heart pouring onto a canvas or simply just molding clay.
I...
#happiness
#hope
#inspirational
#spiritual
#uplifting
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-divinity
and all that t'was
thou should not be
for all that's love
is but one to see..
.
and, or the pain
for not, of love
unto this be, why
the gods envy us...
-ed
thou should not be
for all that's love
is but one to see..
.
and, or the pain
for not, of love
unto this be, why
the gods envy us...
-ed
#love
#sadness
#spiritual
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The Watchful Soul
Dear reader, let me tell you now,
Of a soul who watched, yet wore no vow.
A lover’s call, a secret scheme,
Crafted in the shadows, part of a dream.
She had fun, leaving clues behind, Little whispers, a careful mind. No one saw, no one knew, the puzzle built for a chosen few.
Always observing, sharp and keen, a glimpse of words, a hidden scene. “Am I a genius, or just insane?” The question lingered, but none could claim.
From a young age, she began to learn, psychology patterns,...
She had fun, leaving clues behind, Little whispers, a careful mind. No one saw, no one knew, the puzzle built for a chosen few.
Always observing, sharp and keen, a glimpse of words, a hidden scene. “Am I a genius, or just insane?” The question lingered, but none could claim.
From a young age, she began to learn, psychology patterns,...
#narrative
#ShortStory
#spiritual
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~your [self-cannibalistic karma-driven] overshadows
viz: overshadows
#dark
#hypocrisy
#lies #spiritual
#lies #spiritual
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I'm in love
I'm in love with something my soul can not reflect
Seen by those that play admonishment
Drinking those that fall like some cheap refreshment
I'm in love with more than this physical concept
Those that grasp come off as inept
The physical is all they deem to protect
I'm in love with flying high
Fear not baby don't cry
Some folks like to point and say that's the bad guy
I'm in love with all the flaws
Fallen yet unbroken picked up off the floor ...
Seen by those that play admonishment
Drinking those that fall like some cheap refreshment
I'm in love with more than this physical concept
Those that grasp come off as inept
The physical is all they deem to protect
I'm in love with flying high
Fear not baby don't cry
Some folks like to point and say that's the bad guy
I'm in love with all the flaws
Fallen yet unbroken picked up off the floor ...
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#spiritual
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Garden of Eden
Snakes slither on concrete when the grass is cut
They appear in human form with smiling faces
Devious lies laced with deceitful eyes
Sinful minds plot on innocent souls
Presenting them with the forbidden fruit
Money, drugs, sex and fame
All enticing entities that will destroy your self identity
Take a bite of it and realize the sweet sensation isn’t worth the bitter aftertaste.
They appear in human form with smiling faces
Devious lies laced with deceitful eyes
Sinful minds plot on innocent souls
Presenting them with the forbidden fruit
Money, drugs, sex and fame
All enticing entities that will destroy your self identity
Take a bite of it and realize the sweet sensation isn’t worth the bitter aftertaste.
#corruption
#dark
#greed
#humankind
#spiritual
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