Spiritual Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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spiritual seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The Father's Feelings
standing alone inside my skin there is no loneliness or emptiness
unless my Father is discipling me
a very different type of being
set apart specifally for this moment
a reunion in the heavens is happening
a celestial celebration
my Father entertains dignataries from other worlds
they are his progeny though they appear different than us
our Father is busy
uniting the houses getting the men in order
stirring the chaos then choreographing the violence
all elements of life
there is no immortal death ...
unless my Father is discipling me
a very different type of being
set apart specifally for this moment
a reunion in the heavens is happening
a celestial celebration
my Father entertains dignataries from other worlds
they are his progeny though they appear different than us
our Father is busy
uniting the houses getting the men in order
stirring the chaos then choreographing the violence
all elements of life
there is no immortal death ...
#love
#spiritual
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Closeness
You’re somewhere close by
You’re watching
You’re waiting
It’s okay
I’m waiting too
I’m here only for you
We’ve met a thousand times before
We’ll meet a thousand times again
Yet I can’t remember what your face looks like
But I will know it when I do
You’re watching
You’re waiting
It’s okay
I’m waiting too
I’m here only for you
We’ve met a thousand times before
We’ll meet a thousand times again
Yet I can’t remember what your face looks like
But I will know it when I do
#relationships
#dreams
#spiritual
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Inner Peace
Inner peace requires peace of mind
Self doubt brings forth turbulence
Thus shaking the scales one must balance
Urgency brings on mistakes
Yet complacency stifles all growth
Find your pace but take your time
Take a few breaths and quiet the mind
Breathe in and breathe out
Do not bury but instead expel
Cleanse the vessel of your soul
Choose the higher path
Feel the energy from the heavens
Become born again
Your view is your world
Shape it to your desires
Conquer yourself and then be at peace ...
Self doubt brings forth turbulence
Thus shaking the scales one must balance
Urgency brings on mistakes
Yet complacency stifles all growth
Find your pace but take your time
Take a few breaths and quiet the mind
Breathe in and breathe out
Do not bury but instead expel
Cleanse the vessel of your soul
Choose the higher path
Feel the energy from the heavens
Become born again
Your view is your world
Shape it to your desires
Conquer yourself and then be at peace ...
#peace
#rebirth
#spiritual
#SelfReflection
#meditation
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Universal
#universe
#spiritual
#philosophical
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Ponder that…
Is death really the end?
Is it ever really over?
It just doesn’t seem logical to me
I know I’ve never believed it is
Yet when death stares you in the face
All logic goes out the window
I know she’s not really gone
She’s as close to me as ever
I can feel her all around me
She’s in each breath that I breathe
She’s in every tear that I cry
She is everywhere and in everything I do
She’s as gone now as she was when alive
She’s as present now as one can be in death
She’s constantly near and far
Always...
Is it ever really over?
It just doesn’t seem logical to me
I know I’ve never believed it is
Yet when death stares you in the face
All logic goes out the window
I know she’s not really gone
She’s as close to me as ever
I can feel her all around me
She’s in each breath that I breathe
She’s in every tear that I cry
She is everywhere and in everything I do
She’s as gone now as she was when alive
She’s as present now as one can be in death
She’s constantly near and far
Always...
#death
#spiritual
#LifeCycle
#philosophical
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Pray
stoic darkness utter the enchantment
say the spell that makes me hopeful
Our Father Who Art In Heaven Hallowed Be Thy Name
and so I pray to be free from my chains
Lead Me Not Into Temptation
please Father, no wickedness to befall me today
treachery is afoot to my dismay
forgive me for my complaints
I'm tested above my will to take
restraining my heart, I wait
revenge is human
vengeance is yours alone
you see the intentions
while I only see the act
praying for my tormentors
I've done as you asked ...
say the spell that makes me hopeful
Our Father Who Art In Heaven Hallowed Be Thy Name
and so I pray to be free from my chains
Lead Me Not Into Temptation
please Father, no wickedness to befall me today
treachery is afoot to my dismay
forgive me for my complaints
I'm tested above my will to take
restraining my heart, I wait
revenge is human
vengeance is yours alone
you see the intentions
while I only see the act
praying for my tormentors
I've done as you asked ...
#love
#spiritual
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Death & Taxes
Is life just about taxes & death?
Were surviving, not living
disrespectful, unforgiving
Let's make a change, life is short
Give and respect, before we all abort
Were surviving, not living
disrespectful, unforgiving
Let's make a change, life is short
Give and respect, before we all abort
#LifeStruggles
#inspirational
#spiritual
#LifeGoals
#respect
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Cathedral cheese
I went south one day to sit on a hill
And low and behold I found a packet of cheese
Who’d have thought it would bring me to my knees
I looked up at the sky and saw a bird
I found myself and transcended realms
As I held my cheese I felt quite overwhelmed
I sat on the floor and thought “Am I god?”
With my cheese in tow and a feeling of love
I sunk into the ground and became one with above
And low and behold I found a packet of cheese
Who’d have thought it would bring me to my knees
I looked up at the sky and saw a bird
I found myself and transcended realms
As I held my cheese I felt quite overwhelmed
I sat on the floor and thought “Am I god?”
With my cheese in tow and a feeling of love
I sunk into the ground and became one with above
#spiritual
#philosophical
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Dust
desert umbra flows
impending foggy darkness
no shelter from dust
impending foggy darkness
no shelter from dust
#wind
#nature
#spiritual
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REFLECTION (mid 1990's, Galveston Island, Texas)
look broadly at the big mirror
see the big picture reflected there
do you see and feel only darkness and fear
or do you feel and see love
joy hope beauty and wonder
looking back out at you instead
quick
look around
and behind the big mirror again
do you still see love
at some point the big mirror will break
shattering into a thousand other
individually reflective pieces
where you will still see and be left
with only yourself and the big picture
in your mind and quickened senses
and hopefully love
joy hope...
see the big picture reflected there
do you see and feel only darkness and fear
or do you feel and see love
joy hope beauty and wonder
looking back out at you instead
quick
look around
and behind the big mirror again
do you still see love
at some point the big mirror will break
shattering into a thousand other
individually reflective pieces
where you will still see and be left
with only yourself and the big picture
in your mind and quickened senses
and hopefully love
joy hope...
#spiritual
#mirror
#TruthOfLife
#SelfReflection
#SelfDiscovery
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Wise Words From The Wild
Wise Words From The Wild
Free your will, and let your feel guide you to where
you initially belong, Dust and Water and the Spirit between,
Where man is homo sapiens born, where wise thoughts, feelings
and genuine creation takes its heavenly roots.
Be wise and relieve a clogged brain besieged by mundane
satisfaction, by bewildering intoxication, by echoless walls.
Be wise and rub those emotionless eyes, and start to see,
and come up to hear the waltz of the winds and songs of Springs
the tango of...
Free your will, and let your feel guide you to where
you initially belong, Dust and Water and the Spirit between,
Where man is homo sapiens born, where wise thoughts, feelings
and genuine creation takes its heavenly roots.
Be wise and relieve a clogged brain besieged by mundane
satisfaction, by bewildering intoxication, by echoless walls.
Be wise and rub those emotionless eyes, and start to see,
and come up to hear the waltz of the winds and songs of Springs
the tango of...
#religion
#rebirth
#spiritual
#philosophical
#morality
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TIME FLIES AS DO I (11-9-1995; Galveston Island, Texas)
it seems
the later i stay up
each night
the faster time
flys by
insomnia slings me
again and again
centrifugally
like a nocturnal throw of the dice
through a lopsided
elliptical orbit
increasingly further
around and beyond
all common sense and logic
beyond sleep s central
restorative processing experience
into the alchemical digestive enzymes
of tomorrow morning s
now fast approaching
first light
as i sail through these dark slippery...
the later i stay up
each night
the faster time
flys by
insomnia slings me
again and again
centrifugally
like a nocturnal throw of the dice
through a lopsided
elliptical orbit
increasingly further
around and beyond
all common sense and logic
beyond sleep s central
restorative processing experience
into the alchemical digestive enzymes
of tomorrow morning s
now fast approaching
first light
as i sail through these dark slippery...
#spiritual
#insomnia
#healing
#disability
#cancer
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