Poems About Snow Seeking Honest Critique
#snow
CanisInc-Untis
Poem Published
31st Aug 2022 1:06pm
31st Aug 2022 1:06pm
Wolves bring Frozen Roses in the Peak of Winter - part3
endowed with lycanthrope
locomotion
vined in the making
he with her and her with him
palpitant in winters’
encompassing embrace
filling the hollow
of the dark watch of
conflagerated space
they consumed the land all about them
nature the castles of their reign
supernatural engines
dynamic force
her long hair and wing kept winter
absorbed the sorcery of it all
his fullmoon bursting onto the realm
like a planetary collision
bellowbacked monster
3 nights the scourge of war
the weapon of her...
locomotion
vined in the making
he with her and her with him
palpitant in winters’
encompassing embrace
filling the hollow
of the dark watch of
conflagerated space
they consumed the land all about them
nature the castles of their reign
supernatural engines
dynamic force
her long hair and wing kept winter
absorbed the sorcery of it all
his fullmoon bursting onto the realm
like a planetary collision
bellowbacked monster
3 nights the scourge of war
the weapon of her...
#rose
#winter
#snow
#vampires
#werewolves
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CanisInc-Untis
Poem Published
26th Aug 2022 12:17pm
26th Aug 2022 12:17pm
Wolves bring Frozen Roses in the peak of Winter - part2
cantering over
with precipitous hope
that disappeared in the dark.......
with her left behind cloak
flapping in the wind
sniffing around frantically
ice crystals melting
turning my nose to stone
burying in my coat
but her wafer of wicked scent
still faintly alive
hibernating in leaves and needles
I continued on
because for her I was dogmatically bent
surely led me
to the finding of her sweet flesh
vulnerable and open
partly dolly-broken
panting for each breath
as my rose had thawed...
with precipitous hope
that disappeared in the dark.......
with her left behind cloak
flapping in the wind
sniffing around frantically
ice crystals melting
turning my nose to stone
burying in my coat
but her wafer of wicked scent
still faintly alive
hibernating in leaves and needles
I continued on
because for her I was dogmatically bent
surely led me
to the finding of her sweet flesh
vulnerable and open
partly dolly-broken
panting for each breath
as my rose had thawed...
#rose
#winter
#snow
#vampires
#werewolves
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CanisInc-Untis
Poem Published
8th Jun 2022 8:35am
8th Jun 2022 8:35am
Wolves bring Frozen Roses in the peak of Winter - part1
the wolf wandered
thru the grey of dusk
emergent from a forest
beset with landridden snow
and drifted with each fall
searching for his Vampress
gripping the frozen stem
between his teeth
the lifeless body
of a blood-purple rose
bruised and frostbitten
by the empire of winter
yet as the ice melted
into his mouth
she became more alive
and he more undead
then shivered
as he had to press it on
and preserve from
fates' duality
and find her
for she could not return ...
thru the grey of dusk
emergent from a forest
beset with landridden snow
and drifted with each fall
searching for his Vampress
gripping the frozen stem
between his teeth
the lifeless body
of a blood-purple rose
bruised and frostbitten
by the empire of winter
yet as the ice melted
into his mouth
she became more alive
and he more undead
then shivered
as he had to press it on
and preserve from
fates' duality
and find her
for she could not return ...
#rose
#snow
#vampires
#UnrequitedLove
#werewolves
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Seed
Poem Published
12th Mar 2022 2:23pm
12th Mar 2022 2:23pm
I Wonder About the Purpose of Snow
I wonder about the purpose of snow.
We got a couple inches overnight
So infrequently do we get snow
That it still seems special every time;
Exciting, a wonderful wonderland.
I admire its beauty all the while
Cursing the cold and worse the ice.
I laugh at jokes about dogs being frozen
To fire hydrants.
I wonder about the purpose of snow.
Our winters are normally mild
We go years without ever seeing snow.
We never owned gloves and so
We had to make do by putting socks
On our hands before going outside.
I never...
We got a couple inches overnight
So infrequently do we get snow
That it still seems special every time;
Exciting, a wonderful wonderland.
I admire its beauty all the while
Cursing the cold and worse the ice.
I laugh at jokes about dogs being frozen
To fire hydrants.
I wonder about the purpose of snow.
Our winters are normally mild
We go years without ever seeing snow.
We never owned gloves and so
We had to make do by putting socks
On our hands before going outside.
I never...
#snow
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Dec 2021 2:01pm
25th Dec 2021 2:01pm
My Advice To Santa
My
advice
to Santa
is for him to
start flying a jet
sleigh attached to robot
reindeer in case he has to
fly into certain areas where
there is not even a speck of snow
instead of rain due to this one warm spell.
advice
to Santa
is for him to
start flying a jet
sleigh attached to robot
reindeer in case he has to
fly into certain areas where
there is not even a speck of snow
instead of rain due to this one warm spell.
#rain
#snow
#Christmas
#fiction
#dialogue
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Dec 2021 3:26am
17th Dec 2021 3:26am
Because Mom And Dad Were Too Poor
While walking home with his cat on a
sleigh, a little boy looked at the
trees that have been all lit up
and decorated for
Christmas and began
to cry because
Mom and Dad
were too
poor.
sleigh, a little boy looked at the
trees that have been all lit up
and decorated for
Christmas and began
to cry because
Mom and Dad
were too
poor.
#winter
#snow
#Christmas
#fiction
#despair
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Seed
Poem Published
6th Dec 2021 6:48pm
6th Dec 2021 6:48pm
This Is Not December
We flew to Montreal on vacation
Canada was white with snow
I don't know what I expected
The buildings, walls, and boxcars
Were thick with graffiti
Just like home
We took the train up to Quebec City
Countryside dressed in snowfall
The winter sky was gray
And looking through any window
It looked cold outside
The Canadians were unphased
The snow, the ice, the salt
The wet, the freeze, and the gravel
The snowplows, drifts, bluster
So different from the deep south
The heart of dixie
Where we may get snow
Once...
Canada was white with snow
I don't know what I expected
The buildings, walls, and boxcars
Were thick with graffiti
Just like home
We took the train up to Quebec City
Countryside dressed in snowfall
The winter sky was gray
And looking through any window
It looked cold outside
The Canadians were unphased
The snow, the ice, the salt
The wet, the freeze, and the gravel
The snowplows, drifts, bluster
So different from the deep south
The heart of dixie
Where we may get snow
Once...
#winter
#snow
#travel
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faithmairee
Poem Published
27th Nov 2021 11:08am
27th Nov 2021 11:08am
Unmovable
It's cold here
I've shivers down my spine
My mittens don't cut it
I am, however unmovable
Standing here in awe
Of the breathtaking snow
Recalling the sled rides
And the snow men
Of my childhood days
Way up north
Living on the tip of
The Allegheny Forrest
Few memories of
Those long gone days
Are quite as precious
As the one's spent
Frolicking in the
Pure, white snow
Under it's blissful spell
I've shivers down my spine
My mittens don't cut it
I am, however unmovable
Standing here in awe
Of the breathtaking snow
Recalling the sled rides
And the snow men
Of my childhood days
Way up north
Living on the tip of
The Allegheny Forrest
Few memories of
Those long gone days
Are quite as precious
As the one's spent
Frolicking in the
Pure, white snow
Under it's blissful spell
#childhood
#winter
#nature #snow
#nature #snow
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7 Comments
nikkimoe
Poem Published
28th Oct 2021 3:54pm
28th Oct 2021 3:54pm
Don't Forget The Ice
Slowly sipping her gin,
she said she had found love,
yet it wasn't him.
Slowly sipping his gin
he said when the bottles empty
she'll know where to find him.
Drink, drank, drunk,
sink, sank, sunk
and a bunch of other
bullshit about love.
She flicked her glass,
it magically filled back up.
she said she had found love,
yet it wasn't him.
Slowly sipping his gin
he said when the bottles empty
she'll know where to find him.
Drink, drank, drunk,
sink, sank, sunk
and a bunch of other
bullshit about love.
She flicked her glass,
it magically filled back up.
#love
#snow
#alcohol #unicorns
#alcohol #unicorns
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TimWombles
Poem Published
5th Sep 2021 8:43am
5th Sep 2021 8:43am
January
Draped in a white coat
A frigid cold stare, he is not kind
With a wave of his hand
The winds blow
Frost covers his eyes, your eyes
And the windows between
Ice covers the trees, like figurines in a curio cabinet
Holding them, weighing them down
Till their spines break
Every day is a battle, every day he will win
But he won't last forever
Nothing does
A frigid cold stare, he is not kind
With a wave of his hand
The winds blow
Frost covers his eyes, your eyes
And the windows between
Ice covers the trees, like figurines in a curio cabinet
Holding them, weighing them down
Till their spines break
Every day is a battle, every day he will win
But he won't last forever
Nothing does
#wind
#snow
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Thetravelingfairy
Poem Published
16th Jul 2021 00:22am
16th Jul 2021 00:22am
Winter Beauty
She is delicate, like the frost that coats garden petals
Roses that grow in unlikely places, she graces
For she is snow, and her flakes fall softly on my lips, as I catch her in my palms
Amongst bitter winter breeze
If even for a while, I cherish the cold
Because seasons never stay forever
People come and go, like falling snow
Notice how the prettiest flowers brown too soon
She will melt, before storm clouds rest
Trickling into rivers, that birth springtide bloom
Roses that grow in unlikely places, she graces
For she is snow, and her flakes fall softly on my lips, as I catch her in my palms
Amongst bitter winter breeze
If even for a while, I cherish the cold
Because seasons never stay forever
People come and go, like falling snow
Notice how the prettiest flowers brown too soon
She will melt, before storm clouds rest
Trickling into rivers, that birth springtide bloom
#love
#winter
#snow
#FallingInLove
#IMissYou
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KristinaX
Poem Published
11th Mar 2021 9:19pm
11th Mar 2021 9:19pm
Bare Feet
Under the moonlight
Traces of bare feet in snow
Feeling the cold again
Traces of bare feet in snow
Feeling the cold again
#LifeStruggles
#snow
#senryu
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