Poems About Snow Seeking Honest Critique
#snow
faithmairee
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 8:39am
16th Apr 2024 8:39am
Snowy
Snow on mountains fall
Biting wind stings nose and cheeks
Winter lingers on
Biting wind stings nose and cheeks
Winter lingers on
#winter
#nature
#snow
52 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Mar 2024 2:14pm
12th Mar 2024 2:14pm
You Deserve A Break Today
A man by the name of Chester was the owner of a McDonald's on the outskirts of Green Bay, Wisconsin.
Sometime in March 1980, he was driving North on Interstate 43 when he crashed his car.
There was a decent snowfall occurring with icy conditions.
His vehicle had crossed the median and into the southbound lanes before hitting a guardrail.
Chester was able to climb out of the burning wreckage, pulled off all of his burning clothes and stood naked in the middle of the road.
In a matter of minutes, Chester was run over and killed by an oncoming tractor-trailer. ...
Sometime in March 1980, he was driving North on Interstate 43 when he crashed his car.
There was a decent snowfall occurring with icy conditions.
His vehicle had crossed the median and into the southbound lanes before hitting a guardrail.
Chester was able to climb out of the burning wreckage, pulled off all of his burning clothes and stood naked in the middle of the road.
In a matter of minutes, Chester was run over and killed by an oncoming tractor-trailer. ...
#nature
#snow
#fiction #ShortStory
#fiction #ShortStory
87 reads
12 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Mar 2024 8:05pm
7th Mar 2024 8:05pm
Don't Know How Long She's Been In The Frozen Food Section
A scientific expedition finds
a naked female humanoid
inside the iceberg they
were examining.
a naked female humanoid
inside the iceberg they
were examining.
#snow
#fiction
#dialogue
#mystery
#scifi
54 reads
0 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
6th Mar 2024 10:23pm
6th Mar 2024 10:23pm
Snowfall
The sunlight peeks through the clouds
A subtle gleam in the pristine white
You add a dash of colour with your locks of chocolate brown
Your smile is enough to set my soul alight.
The first snow is beginning to fall
They leave a wet caress upon your honeyed skin
I’m left intoxicated more so than by alcohol
As I yearn for our journey to begin.
I’m looking forward to the snowfall
Your love has gotten me through it all
What once was dark has now turned bright
My frozen heart has melted with your light.
My darling love,...
A subtle gleam in the pristine white
You add a dash of colour with your locks of chocolate brown
Your smile is enough to set my soul alight.
The first snow is beginning to fall
They leave a wet caress upon your honeyed skin
I’m left intoxicated more so than by alcohol
As I yearn for our journey to begin.
I’m looking forward to the snowfall
Your love has gotten me through it all
What once was dark has now turned bright
My frozen heart has melted with your light.
My darling love,...
#love
#snow
#rhyming
#FallingInLove
#SelfReflection
138 reads
10 Comments
Heisenberg68
Poem Published
26th Feb 2024 00:44am
26th Feb 2024 00:44am
Twilight Trails in the Mountain's Hush
In the mountain's gentle cradle, where the quiet pines do play,
Under sun’s retiring light, the snowscape dons the cloak of day.
Skis carve silent paths with grace, in turns of silent might,
While nature’s hushed and whispered tones, slip into alpine night.
In the caress of solitude, where chill and vision fuse,
A waltz of shadows, light, and spark, the lonely path I choose.
Trails stretch out to touch my dreams, they reach with fading light,
As day's last rays tug soft at seams, and coax the coming night.
Soft is the swish of skis in eve, a...
Under sun’s retiring light, the snowscape dons the cloak of day.
Skis carve silent paths with grace, in turns of silent might,
While nature’s hushed and whispered tones, slip into alpine night.
In the caress of solitude, where chill and vision fuse,
A waltz of shadows, light, and spark, the lonely path I choose.
Trails stretch out to touch my dreams, they reach with fading light,
As day's last rays tug soft at seams, and coax the coming night.
Soft is the swish of skis in eve, a...
#snow
#SelfDiscovery
47 reads
0 Comments
Heisenberg68
Poem Published
18th Feb 2024 5:15pm
18th Feb 2024 5:15pm
Big Bear's Winter Whisper
In the silent hush of Big Bear's embrace,
Where snowflakes dance with delicate grace,
A frozen canvas, under the sun's soft gaze,
Speaks of serenity in a million ways.
Footprints etch stories on the white expanse,
A testament to nature’s quiet romance.
Mountain air whispers through the pines,
In this haven where tranquility aligns.
Here, gratitude blooms like alpine flowers,
For this retreat with its timeless hours.
A balance struck 'twixt peace and play,
Where nature’s hand skillfully sways.
As skis glide and...
Where snowflakes dance with delicate grace,
A frozen canvas, under the sun's soft gaze,
Speaks of serenity in a million ways.
Footprints etch stories on the white expanse,
A testament to nature’s quiet romance.
Mountain air whispers through the pines,
In this haven where tranquility aligns.
Here, gratitude blooms like alpine flowers,
For this retreat with its timeless hours.
A balance struck 'twixt peace and play,
Where nature’s hand skillfully sways.
As skis glide and...
#sun
#sky
#nature
#snow
#dawn
97 reads
4 Comments
Ashley_M_Hardy
Poem Published
6th Feb 2024 8:44am
6th Feb 2024 8:44am
Ice (Haiku)
Alabaster gleam
Iridescence petrified
Frozen northern lights
Iridescence petrified
Frozen northern lights
#snow
#haiku
86 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2024 2:27am
22nd Jan 2024 2:27am
Better To Stay Warm Than Freezing
You know, it's such
a good thing we
are both naked
in here instead
of being out
in the cold snow.
a good thing we
are both naked
in here instead
of being out
in the cold snow.
#home
#snow
#fiction
#dialogue
#sensual
141 reads
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Sappho
Poem Published
19th Jan 2024 6:35pm
19th Jan 2024 6:35pm
Snow-white
Free fall
Oh my goodness! I am falling!
Nothing to grab hold on
Petrified with fear
I close my eyes
Mother why did you let me go of?
Zero gravity
No more free falling
But lightweighted floating
I am dancing gracefully
Pirouetting like a ballerina
In my hectagon tutu
Far below
My brothers and sisters
Cover the ground with a
Glistening white blanket
Wait a moment!
I will come and join you!
Oh my goodness! I am falling!
Nothing to grab hold on
Petrified with fear
I close my eyes
Mother why did you let me go of?
Zero gravity
No more free falling
But lightweighted floating
I am dancing gracefully
Pirouetting like a ballerina
In my hectagon tutu
Far below
My brothers and sisters
Cover the ground with a
Glistening white blanket
Wait a moment!
I will come and join you!
#snow
58 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Jan 2024 1:52pm
18th Jan 2024 1:52pm
After We Got Out Of That Winter Storm
It's a good thing we
got out of the snow and back
in the house. We'll just
wait for our wet clothes to dry.
Why are you staring at me?
got out of the snow and back
in the house. We'll just
wait for our wet clothes to dry.
Why are you staring at me?
#snow
#fiction
#dialogue
#tanka
#sensual
125 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
8th Jan 2024 4:50pm
8th Jan 2024 4:50pm
Blizzards
because you are the opposite
from my other side
turned inside out
autumn's cold khaki
that clicks below
of the heels
elbows hurt
and hands slip
on door handles
abrasive mouth
kissing the back of my neck
because you are autumn
of my other skin
burned by a blizzard
autumn without shades of blue.
from my other side
turned inside out
autumn's cold khaki
that clicks below
of the heels
elbows hurt
and hands slip
on door handles
abrasive mouth
kissing the back of my neck
because you are autumn
of my other skin
burned by a blizzard
autumn without shades of blue.
#fall
#snow
#mirror
#art
#emotions
53 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th Nov 2023 3:25pm
20th Nov 2023 3:25pm
Who Is That Stupid?
Cody
looked out the
living
room window and saw
somebody walking
in the snow before
asking
"Who is that
stupid?"
looked out the
living
room window and saw
somebody walking
in the snow before
asking
"Who is that
stupid?"
#home
#winter
#nature
#snow
#fiction
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