Poems About School Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about school seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Jul 2024 11:19am
30th Jul 2024 11:19am
The Aliens Have Arrived
Yelling cursing, noise level terror
Then he hits her
She cries
Things get quiet, then it starts again
Locked in his room, the boy sits on the floor next to his bed
That's the place he goes when they go at it
Mother & Alien, this man/boyfriend
This thing that watches TV or it's i-phone and drinks long cans of malt liquor in the dark
Sometimes the Alien is there when his mother isn't
The Alien doesn't talk
The Alien drinks, beats mother & watches TV
The boy knows that he's lucky the Alien doesn't beat on him
Other Aliens have...
Then he hits her
She cries
Things get quiet, then it starts again
Locked in his room, the boy sits on the floor next to his bed
That's the place he goes when they go at it
Mother & Alien, this man/boyfriend
This thing that watches TV or it's i-phone and drinks long cans of malt liquor in the dark
Sometimes the Alien is there when his mother isn't
The Alien doesn't talk
The Alien drinks, beats mother & watches TV
The boy knows that he's lucky the Alien doesn't beat on him
Other Aliens have...
#abuse
#aliens
#DomesticViolence
#home
#school
127 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
30th Jun 2024 4:58pm
30th Jun 2024 4:58pm
The Schoolboys and the Rastafarian Men (With original Patois quotations)
Two schoolboys, Dan and Josh, attended the Independent City All Age School in St. Catherine. In the evenings, they used to walk through a cane field near the school when they were going home. Many tall coconut trees bordered the cane field. Dan and Josh would cut sugar cane and pick coconuts to eat. In addition to that, they would carry some sugar cane and coconuts home.
The boys had a big problem. They had to pass a construction site on the way home, and some men who worked there would beg them sugar cane and coconuts. If the boys refused to give the men what they asked...
The boys had a big problem. They had to pass a construction site on the way home, and some men who worked there would beg them sugar cane and coconuts. If the boys refused to give the men what they asked...
#men
#school
#curse
#water
#children
79 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2024 2:31am
22nd Jun 2024 2:31am
Let's Get One Thing Straight, Kid.
Let's
get one
thing straight, Kid.
I agreed to
pose naked for your
art class project. But you
are not allowed to do things
to me that we know should be known
as nasty and obscene or the deal
is off. Do I make myself clear on that?
get one
thing straight, Kid.
I agreed to
pose naked for your
art class project. But you
are not allowed to do things
to me that we know should be known
as nasty and obscene or the deal
is off. Do I make myself clear on that?
#art
#dialogue
#fiction
#school
#sensual
178 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Jun 2024 4:25pm
16th Jun 2024 4:25pm
Such An Embarrassing Day It Was For Her
On Monday, Janet
disrobed and turned
towards the entire
art class that includes
her grandmother.
disrobed and turned
towards the entire
art class that includes
her grandmother.
#family
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#school
#sensual
188 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Jun 2024 7:12pm
14th Jun 2024 7:12pm
Last Day Of School
#abuse
#bullying
#revenge
#school
#teens
80 reads
7 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th May 2024 9:00pm
28th May 2024 9:00pm
It Really Was Peter's Idea
Hazel stepped into the classroom.
She dropped her robe and stood naked.
It really was Peter's idea.
She dropped her robe and stood naked.
It really was Peter's idea.
#art
#fiction
#friendship
#school
#sensual
155 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th May 2024 11:27am
28th May 2024 11:27am
From The Duckling To The Swan
There was this
one girl back in high school
who was such a nerd but lets herself
to dare to dream of a way to make it all go
away which happened when we met her
in college and... now... is
so red hot.
one girl back in high school
who was such a nerd but lets herself
to dare to dream of a way to make it all go
away which happened when we met her
in college and... now... is
so red hot.
#dialogue
#fiction
#healing
#school
#suffering
130 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th May 2024 11:16am
25th May 2024 11:16am
Under Pressure
One time when I was in summer camp
I was talking to this guy about suicide
He told me about this kid he used to go to school with
The kid was a straight "A" student
His parents told him not to bother coming home if he had anything less
One day they were walking home from school and he said he had gotten a "B"
He said, "My parents are going to kill me"
My friend said, "No way, relax!"
The kid said that he had to go
My friend said, "See ya later"
Later that day the kid jumped off the roof of his...
I was talking to this guy about suicide
He told me about this kid he used to go to school with
The kid was a straight "A" student
His parents told him not to bother coming home if he had anything less
One day they were walking home from school and he said he had gotten a "B"
He said, "My parents are going to kill me"
My friend said, "No way, relax!"
The kid said that he had to go
My friend said, "See ya later"
Later that day the kid jumped off the roof of his...
#anxiety
#LifeStruggles
#nonfiction
#school
#suicide
199 reads
6 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
24th May 2024 5:21am
24th May 2024 5:21am
Nobody Cares That You Were Chased by a Donkey in Sardinia
She was probably rehearsing telling the story
as the event was happening
something about a donkey
persisntely rubbing up against her
which caused the other four teachers
at our last day of school happy hour
to ask why
Why would a donkey do that?
Eww.
I think he liked you, liked you
I quip
as I dip a chip into the cruelly fiery salsa
at the Mexican restaurant
in one of the most Mexican parts of town
now I'm being mildly pathetic
playing up my ethnic experience.
I was running so fast my heart rate...
as the event was happening
something about a donkey
persisntely rubbing up against her
which caused the other four teachers
at our last day of school happy hour
to ask why
Why would a donkey do that?
Eww.
I think he liked you, liked you
I quip
as I dip a chip into the cruelly fiery salsa
at the Mexican restaurant
in one of the most Mexican parts of town
now I'm being mildly pathetic
playing up my ethnic experience.
I was running so fast my heart rate...
#animals
#school
#travel
135 reads
7 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th May 2024 3:21pm
20th May 2024 3:21pm
Keep Yourself As Still As Possible
Don't move, Brittany. Just keep yourself
as still as possible. And don't
worry. Josh will be here to
strip down and take your place
soon. Hello, Class... and
welcome to our
nude model
studies
course.
as still as possible. And don't
worry. Josh will be here to
strip down and take your place
soon. Hello, Class... and
welcome to our
nude model
studies
course.
#art
#dialogue
#fiction
#school
#sensual
161 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Apr 2024 9:50pm
13th Apr 2024 9:50pm
I'm Kind Of Busy Right Now
Melanie called Simon and asked him to
pick up Mark from school while Luke
touched her naked body.
pick up Mark from school while Luke
touched her naked body.
#friendship
#school
#fiction
#lover
#sensual
126 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 3:40am
10th Apr 2024 3:40am
The One Type Of Classroom Dream
Holly walked to the blackboard.
Then, her teacher shouted "SHE IS NAKED!"
That made Holly wake up.
Then, her teacher shouted "SHE IS NAKED!"
That made Holly wake up.
#friendship
#dreams
#school
#fiction
#sensual
129 reads
0 Comments
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