Scary Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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scary seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Candyman
Born after the Civil War
Daniel Robitaille was a son of slaves
Was a very good artist
A rich farmer asked him
To paint his daughter
They fell in love
She got pregnant
Her father sent a lynch-mob after him
They captured him and cut off his hand with a rusty razor
The mob smeared his entire body with honey
Over his bloody body, the watchers ran away
When the bees came to take his life away
He died for love
His resurrection became a tale
And grew till he became a legend
Say his name five...
Daniel Robitaille was a son of slaves
Was a very good artist
A rich farmer asked him
To paint his daughter
They fell in love
She got pregnant
Her father sent a lynch-mob after him
They captured him and cut off his hand with a rusty razor
The mob smeared his entire body with honey
Over his bloody body, the watchers ran away
When the bees came to take his life away
He died for love
His resurrection became a tale
And grew till he became a legend
Say his name five...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
60 reads
9 Comments
La Casa 3 aka Ghosthouse
Someone's shout I hear
It's inside of me
I can't sleep
The house is alive, it speaks to me again
The ghost here lives, it will not leave us,
The ghost here lives, what is real?
A knock in the dark corner
And the fear has come
Creek - an old door, and the smell of evil
Light diminishes, the darkness will come
A crypt, there's a body
A wicked looking doll
A black princess, burnt by fire
The flame will destroy it, and return to their world
Ghost house, old chest
Bright light
The girl's a slave to...
It's inside of me
I can't sleep
The house is alive, it speaks to me again
The ghost here lives, it will not leave us,
The ghost here lives, what is real?
A knock in the dark corner
And the fear has come
Creek - an old door, and the smell of evil
Light diminishes, the darkness will come
A crypt, there's a body
A wicked looking doll
A black princess, burnt by fire
The flame will destroy it, and return to their world
Ghost house, old chest
Bright light
The girl's a slave to...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
82 reads
8 Comments
Silent Night, Evil Night- 1974
Silent night, stalker night, horror has come home
deck the halls with blood, murder underneath the mistletoe
a deranged and misogynist game, never see his face, no one knows his name
hidden deep in the attic dark, waxing feral, clinically insane
first was little Claire, he strangled her with care
she stares, with dead eyes thru her plastic shroud on the rocking chair
daddy came to town, but he'll never find her here
she might be dead, but still she rocks in decomposing Christmas cheer
cops couldn't find a clue, so they tapped the phone to hear...
deck the halls with blood, murder underneath the mistletoe
a deranged and misogynist game, never see his face, no one knows his name
hidden deep in the attic dark, waxing feral, clinically insane
first was little Claire, he strangled her with care
she stares, with dead eyes thru her plastic shroud on the rocking chair
daddy came to town, but he'll never find her here
she might be dead, but still she rocks in decomposing Christmas cheer
cops couldn't find a clue, so they tapped the phone to hear...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
69 reads
4 Comments
The Gore Gore Girls
#dark
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
#violence
46 reads
4 Comments
When A Stranger Calls
Was it something that you said?
Is it something you don’t own?
Do you feel you’re missing out?
Or are you being left alone?
The call is coming from the house
Invited guest that lives there now
It worked it’s way into your brain
All locked up and there’s no way out
Does the void return to you
Or are you the void it returns to
When it gazes deep inside itself for serotonin
Was there something left unsaid?
Are you back under control?
Are your fears being fed?
Will you pretend that you don’t know?
Is it something you don’t own?
Do you feel you’re missing out?
Or are you being left alone?
The call is coming from the house
Invited guest that lives there now
It worked it’s way into your brain
All locked up and there’s no way out
Does the void return to you
Or are you the void it returns to
When it gazes deep inside itself for serotonin
Was there something left unsaid?
Are you back under control?
Are your fears being fed?
Will you pretend that you don’t know?
#dark
#horror
#mystery
#PopCulture
#scary
74 reads
6 Comments
Hellraiser
By drops of blood he returned to live
But his body still was weak and powerless
It needs human flesh to feed
And then to reconstitute his rotten vital organs
Frank, you shouldn’t have invoked the cenobites
And Jesus wept
Kristy comes to daddy
The cenobites are in command
That bitch Julia helped him removing the fresh corpses
Where Frank used to cater his disgusting and full of vermin carcass
Thinking it would mislead the cenobites but they wouldn’t go easily
And he could fell the suffering on his skin
It was a...
But his body still was weak and powerless
It needs human flesh to feed
And then to reconstitute his rotten vital organs
Frank, you shouldn’t have invoked the cenobites
And Jesus wept
Kristy comes to daddy
The cenobites are in command
That bitch Julia helped him removing the fresh corpses
Where Frank used to cater his disgusting and full of vermin carcass
Thinking it would mislead the cenobites but they wouldn’t go easily
And he could fell the suffering on his skin
It was a...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
64 reads
6 Comments
7 Doors of Death
1927 Louisiana night
See the torches burning - They've come to take your life
The prophecies of EIBON - To unlock the Gates
You ungodly warlock - It's time to meet your fate
Opening the doors leads to the beyond
beyond the realm of man into which you'll be lost
Seven gates of hell where your heart rips from your chest
With any luck you better shut the seven doors of death
Louisiana 1981
The door lies dormant - Untouched by anyone
The markings in the cellar - Carved into the wall
There's evil in this house - Awoken by a hellish call ...
See the torches burning - They've come to take your life
The prophecies of EIBON - To unlock the Gates
You ungodly warlock - It's time to meet your fate
Opening the doors leads to the beyond
beyond the realm of man into which you'll be lost
Seven gates of hell where your heart rips from your chest
With any luck you better shut the seven doors of death
Louisiana 1981
The door lies dormant - Untouched by anyone
The markings in the cellar - Carved into the wall
There's evil in this house - Awoken by a hellish call ...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
61 reads
4 Comments
I'm here to kick ass and chew bubble gum!
Hidden from humanity, Hideous to see
Walking among the humans, Acting like one of us
But with these special glasses, see them for what they are
They will take over your brain, They will bring you pain
They Live in every city, They have been here for years
They control the police, they're sick they have no fear
THEY LIVE!!!!
Now the time has come to fight, we must take a stand
They have galactic power, Super intelligence
Watches that can transport them if they feel threatened
How do you kill these creatures, impossible it...
Walking among the humans, Acting like one of us
But with these special glasses, see them for what they are
They will take over your brain, They will bring you pain
They Live in every city, They have been here for years
They control the police, they're sick they have no fear
THEY LIVE!!!!
Now the time has come to fight, we must take a stand
They have galactic power, Super intelligence
Watches that can transport them if they feel threatened
How do you kill these creatures, impossible it...
#aliens
#PopCulture
#scary
#scifi
#violence
86 reads
6 Comments
Romero's Day of the Dead
Zombie plague, curse of the walking dead, flesh hungry
The city writhes in an army of filthy rotting things
The pressures.. of survival drives a scientist to find
A way to domesticate the mindless zombie kind
Heart, Liver, Kidneys - They need not
Organs mean nothing - They only rot
Mindless walking dead - They need to feed
Basic motor functions - Is all they need
Humans have finally become the minority
400,000 to one they've over run us now
Low on ammunition and running out of soldiers too
What will you do when the dead have a taste for...
The city writhes in an army of filthy rotting things
The pressures.. of survival drives a scientist to find
A way to domesticate the mindless zombie kind
Heart, Liver, Kidneys - They need not
Organs mean nothing - They only rot
Mindless walking dead - They need to feed
Basic motor functions - Is all they need
Humans have finally become the minority
400,000 to one they've over run us now
Low on ammunition and running out of soldiers too
What will you do when the dead have a taste for...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
86 reads
6 Comments
Erik, the Phantom
Lon Chaney...the catacombs in this prison cell
I feel a nightmare, a raging blaze
Resurrecting you to haunt me
In gay Paree, the theater grand, I'm just waiting for you
Turn to Christina, her lovely voice my only freedom
Alas my only choice
Down in the dungeon
Upon this stage
Behind this mask
To feed my rage
I'll be there, always there
You all know my name
I'll be there, always there
And dream of lost fame
You cannot see me, but hear my voice
Leading you on and on, dear
your lovely talent I will push ...
I feel a nightmare, a raging blaze
Resurrecting you to haunt me
In gay Paree, the theater grand, I'm just waiting for you
Turn to Christina, her lovely voice my only freedom
Alas my only choice
Down in the dungeon
Upon this stage
Behind this mask
To feed my rage
I'll be there, always there
You all know my name
I'll be there, always there
And dream of lost fame
You cannot see me, but hear my voice
Leading you on and on, dear
your lovely talent I will push ...
#dark
#horror
#PopCulture #scary
#PopCulture #scary
61 reads
2 Comments
The dead will walk the earth
Now they are coming to dominate
And declare war to the world
Infection is spreading
Like a cancer through the globe
Marching like soldiers they come
Starving for blood no fear
Burn, kill and destroy are their song
Flesh is all the need now
Zombies are coming
Eviscerating
Bloodshed on the streets
This is the Dawn of the Dead
Forward we march to survive
With blood and anger they rise
We hold secure in the hide
Weapons and strength to fight
When all is done forever
We walk the earth again
And declare war to the world
Infection is spreading
Like a cancer through the globe
Marching like soldiers they come
Starving for blood no fear
Burn, kill and destroy are their song
Flesh is all the need now
Zombies are coming
Eviscerating
Bloodshed on the streets
This is the Dawn of the Dead
Forward we march to survive
With blood and anger they rise
We hold secure in the hide
Weapons and strength to fight
When all is done forever
We walk the earth again
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
#zombies
66 reads
2 Comments
The Burning
In a camp not far from here
On the other side of the lake
Everything burnt down
Nothing left but the ruins
Night has fallen, Light the firewood
Gather all the children, Raise Your Shears
Icarus burns, As Cronus feeds
The Awakening, The Conjuring
Faceless creatures with Satanic Priests
Blood, Fire, Pentagrams
Revenge thru necromancy
Satanic Chants
Hellfire Witchery
Summon, Murder, Burn
The Cult of Cropsy
He's still alive
Don't look, he sees
Don't breathe, he hears
Don't move, you...
On the other side of the lake
Everything burnt down
Nothing left but the ruins
Night has fallen, Light the firewood
Gather all the children, Raise Your Shears
Icarus burns, As Cronus feeds
The Awakening, The Conjuring
Faceless creatures with Satanic Priests
Blood, Fire, Pentagrams
Revenge thru necromancy
Satanic Chants
Hellfire Witchery
Summon, Murder, Burn
The Cult of Cropsy
He's still alive
Don't look, he sees
Don't breathe, he hears
Don't move, you...
#dark
#evil
#horror
#PopCulture
#scary
71 reads
6 Comments
DU Poetry : Scary Seeking Honest Critique Poems