Romantic by Top Critiquers Poems
#romantic
romantic by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Our Hearts Beat As One (Whispers of Love) (collab w/ Sappho)
To you, as you light up the sky
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your Ruby lips
Velvety and sweet like cherry wine
Need to be sealed with a kiss
That echoes in divine dimensions of
Future times
Eternally yours as the moon is ever so bright ...
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your Ruby lips
Velvety and sweet like cherry wine
Need to be sealed with a kiss
That echoes in divine dimensions of
Future times
Eternally yours as the moon is ever so bright ...
#collaboration
#FallingInLove
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
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2 Comments
Still Waiting To Kiss You!
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#crush
#romantic
357 reads
15 Comments
errant
the errant immortal is in love with a human being
awaken little angel there is only so much that can be done
to love or not to
there's only so much to be done in the mortal realm
tread lightly you're interfering too much
erase the pain, you're enchanted by a man
sigh within but center yourself
a learning experience to be sure
exalting the flesh over the soul
you are sure to incur reprisal
awaken sweet girl and remember your immortality
lean on events to navigate your future
spells captured on the winds ...
awaken little angel there is only so much that can be done
to love or not to
there's only so much to be done in the mortal realm
tread lightly you're interfering too much
erase the pain, you're enchanted by a man
sigh within but center yourself
a learning experience to be sure
exalting the flesh over the soul
you are sure to incur reprisal
awaken sweet girl and remember your immortality
lean on events to navigate your future
spells captured on the winds ...
#ILoveYou
#romantic
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The Romantic Bard (The Oralizer)
The Kissing Place
Is magical
But it’s the man behind the words
That makes it so
His romanticism guarantees a swoon
With words that flow effortlessly
Over your body
Like a warm bath
Soothing
Painting lingual masterpieces on fleshy canvas
Your heart will skip a beat
As he lifts you into the paradise of his words
Challenging societal norms
Taboo topics
Nothing is off limits
Respectful and romantic
His poems transport you to a world
Where it’s all about YOU
My friend
A poet trained by Eros ...
Is magical
But it’s the man behind the words
That makes it so
His romanticism guarantees a swoon
With words that flow effortlessly
Over your body
Like a warm bath
Soothing
Painting lingual masterpieces on fleshy canvas
Your heart will skip a beat
As he lifts you into the paradise of his words
Challenging societal norms
Taboo topics
Nothing is off limits
Respectful and romantic
His poems transport you to a world
Where it’s all about YOU
My friend
A poet trained by Eros ...
#admiration
#erotic
#respect #romantic
#respect #romantic
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10 Comments
DuP
Deep underground real poets live
It's safer down there than above
They don't conform to the general view
And search for the meaning of love.
They write with a view from the lives they have lived.
Torn, shredded, healed and still here
Deep underground real poets live
Where they write without favour or fear.
Who ever runs the show blesses you all.
It's safer down there than above
They don't conform to the general view
And search for the meaning of love.
They write with a view from the lives they have lived.
Torn, shredded, healed and still here
Deep underground real poets live
Where they write without favour or fear.
Who ever runs the show blesses you all.
#courage
#inspirational
#motivational
#romantic
#wisdom
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The Art of Fine Dining
I
A half-circled sun of yolk --
its soft liquid rolling over-easy
onto a pineappled-orange horizon
Wind scrapes the earth
as a butter knife over toast
while grape-jellied plumes
steamed from half-light
perking-a-pot of Sumatra gold
Window sheers became banners
pristine white in surrender;
caterpillar oceans reflected
light and shadowed movement
across the ochred room
Harbored candles shape-shifted
dying upon a basin of bed
and crushed...
A half-circled sun of yolk --
its soft liquid rolling over-easy
onto a pineappled-orange horizon
Wind scrapes the earth
as a butter knife over toast
while grape-jellied plumes
steamed from half-light
perking-a-pot of Sumatra gold
Window sheers became banners
pristine white in surrender;
caterpillar oceans reflected
light and shadowed movement
across the ochred room
Harbored candles shape-shifted
dying upon a basin of bed
and crushed...
#love
#romantic
1079 reads
15 Comments
WHAT YOU HAVE IS A BLESSING
THE HERE AND NOW...👁️👁️
for what comes to your mind as it slowly comes, with the whole manifestion of mere thoughts. Coming back with a full force of energy with deep inner emotions. Blessing you with sweet sensual dreams and thoughts, that will have you remembering that she is more than an illusion, as she is a woman who stands there before you, yes in all her beautiful essence of a woman with a kindred spirit and love and kindness Just BECAUSE OF YOU....👁️👁️
for what comes to your mind as it slowly comes, with the whole manifestion of mere thoughts. Coming back with a full force of energy with deep inner emotions. Blessing you with sweet sensual dreams and thoughts, that will have you remembering that she is more than an illusion, as she is a woman who stands there before you, yes in all her beautiful essence of a woman with a kindred spirit and love and kindness Just BECAUSE OF YOU....👁️👁️
#romantic
#gratitude
#support
#respect
#obsession
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7 Comments
Everywhere I Go
If i look, I find you.
You think i can't see you,
But I'm blinded by you.
You speak to me,
And I confide in you.
Things you probably,
Already knew.
I open my heart,
But you zip away.
Those homing missiles,
Don't intimidate me.
I'm blinded by you,
Thats all I see.
Someone I trust.
Someone i need
You think i can't see you,
But I'm blinded by you.
You speak to me,
And I confide in you.
Things you probably,
Already knew.
I open my heart,
But you zip away.
Those homing missiles,
Don't intimidate me.
I'm blinded by you,
Thats all I see.
Someone I trust.
Someone i need
#romantic
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6 Comments
I AM NOT ALL MY POEMS
I continually marvel how
there is a tendency to equate
or judge poets to be what they
write about. I plead not guilty
to that charge. Rarely, if ever
"I am what or who I write about."
I once read there are 168 poetry
writing styles. In college I was
taught there were 29.
I know most forms of literature
has a way of drawing the reader
into the text creating opinions,
and even identity and pros and
cons conclusion about the writer.
I, as most of us tend to do, draw
on personal observations, imaginary ...
there is a tendency to equate
or judge poets to be what they
write about. I plead not guilty
to that charge. Rarely, if ever
"I am what or who I write about."
I once read there are 168 poetry
writing styles. In college I was
taught there were 29.
I know most forms of literature
has a way of drawing the reader
into the text creating opinions,
and even identity and pros and
cons conclusion about the writer.
I, as most of us tend to do, draw
on personal observations, imaginary ...
#romantic
#inspirational
#fiction
#narrative
#confessional
226 reads
6 Comments
Overflow
A whisper in your ear
A lovers heart request
Come to me my dear
Eye deep, I confess
Lost within your rays
The sunshine of my life
For you my love, I crave
Golden sparks ignite
Flyby sensual high
Soft touch all aglow
You'll never be denied
Feelings overflow
A lovers heart request
Come to me my dear
Eye deep, I confess
Lost within your rays
The sunshine of my life
For you my love, I crave
Golden sparks ignite
Flyby sensual high
Soft touch all aglow
You'll never be denied
Feelings overflow
#love
#romantic
375 reads
14 Comments
SHALL I COMPARE THEE....
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day,
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
#admiration
#beauty
#love
#relationships
#romantic
146 reads
4 Comments
A Romantic..
want and romance
and then
the opening
the walkway looking west
a small cutaway
I held you close
staring into your laser eyes
holding you tight
tenderness spinning out of control
a new control emerged
one you knew was buried
deep in my brow
matching you stare for stare
electrons and gamma rays
cross stimulation
I took your smile
and marked it
with my mine
taking you
under my wing
protecting you
feeding you
giving you...
and then
the opening
the walkway looking west
a small cutaway
I held you close
staring into your laser eyes
holding you tight
tenderness spinning out of control
a new control emerged
one you knew was buried
deep in my brow
matching you stare for stare
electrons and gamma rays
cross stimulation
I took your smile
and marked it
with my mine
taking you
under my wing
protecting you
feeding you
giving you...
#love
#romantic
#Romanticism
190 reads
22 Comments
DU Poetry : Romantic by Top Critiquers Poems