Romantic by Top Critiquers Poems
#romantic
romantic by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 6:47pm
18th Nov 2024 6:47pm
Our Hearts Beat As One (Whispers of Love) (collab w/ Sappho)
To you, as you light up the sky
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your Ruby lips
Velvety and sweet like cherry wine
Need to be sealed with a kiss
That echoes in divine dimensions of
Future times
Eternally yours as the moon is ever so bright ...
A perfect, lovely night for love
Our dreams intertwine and bind us Together, forever
My love,
I want to give myself to you
Completely lost in the magic and Beauty of the present moment
We lie in fog-covered fields
You & I harmonize like the stars
Your gentle lips whisper a song,
Lifelong
Your Ruby lips
Velvety and sweet like cherry wine
Need to be sealed with a kiss
That echoes in divine dimensions of
Future times
Eternally yours as the moon is ever so bright ...
#collaboration
#FallingInLove
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
180 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 1:39pm
1st Jan 2025 1:39pm
Still Waiting To Kiss You!
#crush
#romantic
361 reads
15 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
16th Sep 2024 10:55pm
16th Sep 2024 10:55pm
errant
the errant immortal is in love with a human being
awaken little angel there is only so much that can be done
to love or not to
there's only so much to be done in the mortal realm
tread lightly you're interfering too much
erase the pain, you're enchanted by a man
sigh within but center yourself
a learning experience to be sure
exalting the flesh over the soul
you are sure to incur reprisal
awaken sweet girl and remember your immortality
lean on events to navigate your future
spells captured on the winds ...
awaken little angel there is only so much that can be done
to love or not to
there's only so much to be done in the mortal realm
tread lightly you're interfering too much
erase the pain, you're enchanted by a man
sigh within but center yourself
a learning experience to be sure
exalting the flesh over the soul
you are sure to incur reprisal
awaken sweet girl and remember your immortality
lean on events to navigate your future
spells captured on the winds ...
#ILoveYou
#romantic
103 reads
0 Comments
Her
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 7:11pm
18th Dec 2024 7:11pm
The Romantic Bard (The Oralizer)
The Kissing Place
Is magical
But it’s the man behind the words
That makes it so
His romanticism guarantees a swoon
With words that flow effortlessly
Over your body
Like a warm bath
Soothing
Painting lingual masterpieces on fleshy canvas
Your heart will skip a beat
As he lifts you into the paradise of his words
Challenging societal norms
Taboo topics
Nothing is off limits
Respectful and romantic
His poems transport you to a world
Where it’s all about YOU
My friend
A poet trained by Eros ...
Is magical
But it’s the man behind the words
That makes it so
His romanticism guarantees a swoon
With words that flow effortlessly
Over your body
Like a warm bath
Soothing
Painting lingual masterpieces on fleshy canvas
Your heart will skip a beat
As he lifts you into the paradise of his words
Challenging societal norms
Taboo topics
Nothing is off limits
Respectful and romantic
His poems transport you to a world
Where it’s all about YOU
My friend
A poet trained by Eros ...
#admiration
#erotic
#respect #romantic
#respect #romantic
162 reads
10 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
8th Jul 2018 00:56am
8th Jul 2018 00:56am
The Art of Fine Dining
I
A half-circled sun of yolk --
its soft liquid rolling over-easy
onto a pineappled-orange horizon
Wind scrapes the earth
as a butter knife over toast
while grape-jellied plumes
steamed from half-light
perking-a-pot of Sumatra gold
Window sheers became banners
pristine white in surrender;
caterpillar oceans reflected
light and shadowed movement
across the ochred room
Harbored candles shape-shifted
dying upon a basin of bed
and crushed...
A half-circled sun of yolk --
its soft liquid rolling over-easy
onto a pineappled-orange horizon
Wind scrapes the earth
as a butter knife over toast
while grape-jellied plumes
steamed from half-light
perking-a-pot of Sumatra gold
Window sheers became banners
pristine white in surrender;
caterpillar oceans reflected
light and shadowed movement
across the ochred room
Harbored candles shape-shifted
dying upon a basin of bed
and crushed...
#love
#romantic
1081 reads
15 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 8:50pm
18th Nov 2024 8:50pm
DuP
Deep underground real poets live
It's safer down there than above
They don't conform to the general view
And search for the meaning of love.
They write with a view from the lives they have lived.
Torn, shredded, healed and still here
Deep underground real poets live
Where they write without favour or fear.
Who ever runs the show blesses you all.
It's safer down there than above
They don't conform to the general view
And search for the meaning of love.
They write with a view from the lives they have lived.
Torn, shredded, healed and still here
Deep underground real poets live
Where they write without favour or fear.
Who ever runs the show blesses you all.
#courage
#inspirational
#motivational
#romantic
#wisdom
104 reads
7 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Aug 2023 6:42pm
24th Aug 2023 6:42pm
WHAT YOU HAVE IS A BLESSING
THE HERE AND NOW...👁️👁️
for what comes to your mind as it slowly comes, with the whole manifestion of mere thoughts. Coming back with a full force of energy with deep inner emotions. Blessing you with sweet sensual dreams and thoughts, that will have you remembering that she is more than an illusion, as she is a woman who stands there before you, yes in all her beautiful essence of a woman with a kindred spirit and love and kindness Just BECAUSE OF YOU....👁️👁️
for what comes to your mind as it slowly comes, with the whole manifestion of mere thoughts. Coming back with a full force of energy with deep inner emotions. Blessing you with sweet sensual dreams and thoughts, that will have you remembering that she is more than an illusion, as she is a woman who stands there before you, yes in all her beautiful essence of a woman with a kindred spirit and love and kindness Just BECAUSE OF YOU....👁️👁️
#romantic
#gratitude
#support
#respect
#obsession
348 reads
7 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 11:53am
1st Jan 2025 11:53am
SHALL I COMPARE THEE....
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day,
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
#admiration
#beauty
#love
#relationships
#romantic
148 reads
4 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
9th Sep 2024 10:51am
9th Sep 2024 10:51am
Overflow
A whisper in your ear
A lovers heart request
Come to me my dear
Eye deep, I confess
Lost within your rays
The sunshine of my life
For you my love, I crave
Golden sparks ignite
Flyby sensual high
Soft touch all aglow
You'll never be denied
Feelings overflow
A lovers heart request
Come to me my dear
Eye deep, I confess
Lost within your rays
The sunshine of my life
For you my love, I crave
Golden sparks ignite
Flyby sensual high
Soft touch all aglow
You'll never be denied
Feelings overflow
#love
#romantic
377 reads
14 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
24th Jan 2024 3:25pm
24th Jan 2024 3:25pm
I AM NOT ALL MY POEMS
I continually marvel how
there is a tendency to equate
or judge poets to be what they
write about. I plead not guilty
to that charge. Rarely, if ever
"I am what or who I write about."
I once read there are 168 poetry
writing styles. In college I was
taught there were 29.
I know most forms of literature
has a way of drawing the reader
into the text creating opinions,
and even identity and pros and
cons conclusion about the writer.
I, as most of us tend to do, draw
on personal observations, imaginary ...
there is a tendency to equate
or judge poets to be what they
write about. I plead not guilty
to that charge. Rarely, if ever
"I am what or who I write about."
I once read there are 168 poetry
writing styles. In college I was
taught there were 29.
I know most forms of literature
has a way of drawing the reader
into the text creating opinions,
and even identity and pros and
cons conclusion about the writer.
I, as most of us tend to do, draw
on personal observations, imaginary ...
#romantic
#inspirational
#fiction
#narrative
#confessional
230 reads
6 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 1:29pm
15th Jan 2025 1:29pm
A Romantic..
want and romance
and then
the opening
the walkway looking west
a small cutaway
I held you close
staring into your laser eyes
holding you tight
tenderness spinning out of control
a new control emerged
one you knew was buried
deep in my brow
matching you stare for stare
electrons and gamma rays
cross stimulation
I took your smile
and marked it
with my mine
taking you
under my wing
protecting you
feeding you
giving you...
and then
the opening
the walkway looking west
a small cutaway
I held you close
staring into your laser eyes
holding you tight
tenderness spinning out of control
a new control emerged
one you knew was buried
deep in my brow
matching you stare for stare
electrons and gamma rays
cross stimulation
I took your smile
and marked it
with my mine
taking you
under my wing
protecting you
feeding you
giving you...
#love
#romantic
#Romanticism
207 reads
22 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 00:05am
4th Dec 2024 00:05am
Adulation Bombastry
In a daze of phlogiston and aether
and steampunk chunks of yesteryear vapor
I wrote love sonnets just to bequeath her
on a myriad of fine craft paper...
all for the castles in her maven sky
of woolgathering watercolor drops
the sunbeams brought to her passage bird eye
from lupine fields and fresh Aegilops.
She the canny nymph, and I the satyr,
who hoped she'd take a turn upon my flute
somewhere in my cavorting to mate her
or nurse the dew from her paradise fruit...
raised in that old Virginia for lovers
she already...
and steampunk chunks of yesteryear vapor
I wrote love sonnets just to bequeath her
on a myriad of fine craft paper...
all for the castles in her maven sky
of woolgathering watercolor drops
the sunbeams brought to her passage bird eye
from lupine fields and fresh Aegilops.
She the canny nymph, and I the satyr,
who hoped she'd take a turn upon my flute
somewhere in my cavorting to mate her
or nurse the dew from her paradise fruit...
raised in that old Virginia for lovers
she already...
#marriage
#PowerOfWords
#romantic
#wife
#WritingPoetry
227 reads
10 Comments
DU Poetry : Romantic by Top Critiquers Poems
