Romantic by Top Critiquers Poems
#romantic
romantic by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Tomorrow's Forever
A man and woman fall deeply in love
nothing else truly matters
strolling together through life, hands entwined
through respect for one another’s hopes and desires
Two lives combine, creating a connected One
sharing struggles, while holding onto the good
forging loving memories along the way
provided a chance to do it again, for sure we would
Our yesterdays and today's will always be tethered
we are meant to always be together
we stand eternally side by side
tomorrow our love will remain bonded forever
nothing else truly matters
strolling together through life, hands entwined
through respect for one another’s hopes and desires
Two lives combine, creating a connected One
sharing struggles, while holding onto the good
forging loving memories along the way
provided a chance to do it again, for sure we would
Our yesterdays and today's will always be tethered
we are meant to always be together
we stand eternally side by side
tomorrow our love will remain bonded forever
#happiness
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#rhyming
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If I Was Cupid...
If I was Cupid…
I’d make two of the most hateful manliest homophobes
Feel something for each other in their souls
So that their core beliefs would rock in their foundations
And that their erections couldn’t be controlled
Whenever they looked into each other’s eyes
If I was Cupid…
I’d make two people from different faiths and creeds
Who have hatred and bigotry for each other’s cultures
Fall in love to the point they couldn’t stand to be apart
So that they would realize religion doesn’t really count
When it comes to matters...
I’d make two of the most hateful manliest homophobes
Feel something for each other in their souls
So that their core beliefs would rock in their foundations
And that their erections couldn’t be controlled
Whenever they looked into each other’s eyes
If I was Cupid…
I’d make two people from different faiths and creeds
Who have hatred and bigotry for each other’s cultures
Fall in love to the point they couldn’t stand to be apart
So that they would realize religion doesn’t really count
When it comes to matters...
#love
#romantic
#ValentinesDay #funny
#ValentinesDay #funny
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10 Comments
desert winds
you are the warm winds
that blow across my desert
*
you circle in my skies
a mighty hawk
*
with passion in my blood
I call to you caw, caw
*
primal is my desire for you
wild in nature
you belong to none
*
untamed
your will has carved canyons
in my soul
*
a mighty river courses
through my veins
my body remains scorched
& parched
* ...
that blow across my desert
*
you circle in my skies
a mighty hawk
*
with passion in my blood
I call to you caw, caw
*
primal is my desire for you
wild in nature
you belong to none
*
untamed
your will has carved canyons
in my soul
*
a mighty river courses
through my veins
my body remains scorched
& parched
* ...
#love
#lust
#romantic
#nature
#desert
1044 reads
32 Comments
I AM NOT ALL MY POEMS
I continually marvel how
there is a tendency to equate
or judge poets to be what they
write about. I plead not guilty
to that charge. Rarely, if ever
"I am what or who I write about."
I once read there are 168 poetry
writing styles. In college I was
taught there were 29.
I know most forms of literature
has a way of drawing the reader
into the text creating opinions,
and even identity and pros and
cons conclusion about the writer.
I, as most of us tend to do, draw
on personal observations, imaginary ...
there is a tendency to equate
or judge poets to be what they
write about. I plead not guilty
to that charge. Rarely, if ever
"I am what or who I write about."
I once read there are 168 poetry
writing styles. In college I was
taught there were 29.
I know most forms of literature
has a way of drawing the reader
into the text creating opinions,
and even identity and pros and
cons conclusion about the writer.
I, as most of us tend to do, draw
on personal observations, imaginary ...
#romantic
#inspirational
#fiction
#narrative
#confessional
125 reads
6 Comments
if i could see you again *
if i
could see
you again
for the
first time,
two people
broken
somewhere
then proceed,
starving,
in her
white
cotton dress,
feeling it
against
her ankles,
when i
come home.
could see
you again
for the
first time,
two people
broken
somewhere
then proceed,
starving,
in her
white
cotton dress,
feeling it
against
her ankles,
when i
come home.
#romantic
#beauty
#admiration
#respect
#crush
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5 Comments
MY DAILY RITUAL
Each and every night I talk to the moon about you
place my wishes upon its light in hope to come true
also I tell the Lord the very same words when I pray
how badly want your safe return to me someday
I miss our conversations, your laugh and smile
oh, how I wish you'd come back and stay awhile
my happiest moments were ones I shared with you
now that you have gone away I am feeling so blue
I like to believe that you also love and miss me
and wonder if we were together how it would be
you will be welcomed very warmly I...
place my wishes upon its light in hope to come true
also I tell the Lord the very same words when I pray
how badly want your safe return to me someday
I miss our conversations, your laugh and smile
oh, how I wish you'd come back and stay awhile
my happiest moments were ones I shared with you
now that you have gone away I am feeling so blue
I like to believe that you also love and miss me
and wonder if we were together how it would be
you will be welcomed very warmly I...
#love
#romantic
#patience
#passion
#bittersweet
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Tension Moist
These Lips
Your mouth
The romance that thinks
out loud or in hushed tones
Sitting on the veranda
Sipping tea, my arm around you
Picking up your wild mane
Grazing your neck ever so slightly
Romance
Connection
Electricity
Tension moist in the collected air
Your mouth
The romance that thinks
out loud or in hushed tones
Sitting on the veranda
Sipping tea, my arm around you
Picking up your wild mane
Grazing your neck ever so slightly
Romance
Connection
Electricity
Tension moist in the collected air
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#sensual
#seductive
570 reads
22 Comments
The Art of Fine Dining
I
A half-circled sun of yolk --
its soft liquid rolling over-easy
onto a pineappled-orange horizon
Wind scrapes the earth
as a butter knife over toast
while grape-jellied plumes
steamed from half-light
perking-a-pot of Sumatra gold
Window sheers became banners
pristine white in surrender;
caterpillar oceans reflected
light and shadowed movement
across the ochred room
Harbored candles shape-shifted
dying upon a basin of bed
and crushed...
A half-circled sun of yolk --
its soft liquid rolling over-easy
onto a pineappled-orange horizon
Wind scrapes the earth
as a butter knife over toast
while grape-jellied plumes
steamed from half-light
perking-a-pot of Sumatra gold
Window sheers became banners
pristine white in surrender;
caterpillar oceans reflected
light and shadowed movement
across the ochred room
Harbored candles shape-shifted
dying upon a basin of bed
and crushed...
#love
#romantic
991 reads
15 Comments
THE SHALL WE DO IT QUESTION
We've hung around each other long,
the bond we have is growing strong.
Tell me, honey, what would you do
if I asked to make love to you?
Would you say "Yes", give me a go,
or shake your pretty head, say "No"
and turn your back upon the chance
of a consummated romance.
or take the third way, hesitating,
by insisting on us waiting
until about this you're more sure
of wanting sexual pleasure?
the bond we have is growing strong.
Tell me, honey, what would you do
if I asked to make love to you?
Would you say "Yes", give me a go,
or shake your pretty head, say "No"
and turn your back upon the chance
of a consummated romance.
or take the third way, hesitating,
by insisting on us waiting
until about this you're more sure
of wanting sexual pleasure?
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#sex
#rhyming
210 reads
2 Comments
Eternal Flame
love resides within her heart
a selfless flame, forever burning
no limits set it flows abound
a love that never forgets
softly held in tough days,
through all hurts it's always there
it gently shows through kind acts
love for him that freely flows
when days are rough and tears fall
love shines through wounds made
it mends broken wings
and paint smiles on beloved's face
her love asks nothing in return
no reciprocation or praises
a gentle grace descent to embrace
the gentle Soul
a selfless flame, forever burning
no limits set it flows abound
a love that never forgets
softly held in tough days,
through all hurts it's always there
it gently shows through kind acts
love for him that freely flows
when days are rough and tears fall
love shines through wounds made
it mends broken wings
and paint smiles on beloved's face
her love asks nothing in return
no reciprocation or praises
a gentle grace descent to embrace
the gentle Soul
#romantic
#dreams
194 reads
8 Comments
The Aftermath
#lust
#romantic
#BDSM #vampires
#BDSM #vampires
91 reads
5 Comments
Night Heart
She's has my heart
because she's my
best friend who's
ready to engage in
Sexual Congress with me
Which is turning me on
To her mind, body, soul
which you want to
send into orgasmic bliss
over and over again
Until she can't move
So go full throttle
and tap that ass
all night and
morning long
because she's my
best friend who's
ready to engage in
Sexual Congress with me
Which is turning me on
To her mind, body, soul
which you want to
send into orgasmic bliss
over and over again
Until she can't move
So go full throttle
and tap that ass
all night and
morning long
#love
#women
#men
#romantic
#sex
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8 Comments
DU Poetry : Romantic by Top Critiquers Poems