Romantic Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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romantic seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 11:53am
1st Jan 2025 11:53am
SHALL I COMPARE THEE....
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day,
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
#admiration
#beauty
#love
#relationships
#romantic
121 reads
3 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 4:56pm
31st Dec 2024 4:56pm
Sounds Good To Me
What is "mellisonant"?
To tell one's "honey dip" about her soft, honeyed lips
Telling the sweet things you feel
when it's her love you sip
Its sound,
not the usual
But melodic and musical
However you call it
It's being methodic
Words like loving and gorgeous
Sexy
Erotic
It is dulcet tones describing her face
Mellifluous words for her beauty and grace
How her legs, hips, and shoulders
when 'neath covers they slip
Buoy your heart and your...
To tell one's "honey dip" about her soft, honeyed lips
Telling the sweet things you feel
when it's her love you sip
Its sound,
not the usual
But melodic and musical
However you call it
It's being methodic
Words like loving and gorgeous
Sexy
Erotic
It is dulcet tones describing her face
Mellifluous words for her beauty and grace
How her legs, hips, and shoulders
when 'neath covers they slip
Buoy your heart and your...
#beauty
#honesty
#romantic
95 reads
7 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 6:58am
28th Dec 2024 6:58am
IN SUCH A CUTIE
In such a cutie,
physical beauty
has its apogee
that so turns on me.
Delightful curvy,
hair shining blondie,
limbs slim but shapely
when posed like a tree.....
The essence of She,
at her most lovely.
physical beauty
has its apogee
that so turns on me.
Delightful curvy,
hair shining blondie,
limbs slim but shapely
when posed like a tree.....
The essence of She,
at her most lovely.
#beauty
#romantic
#women
174 reads
2 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 11:51am
22nd Dec 2024 11:51am
My Piece of Heaven
The prize is loving you and that's all I need.
Your laughter, your smile is always guaranteed.
It's the smell of your hair while laying next to me.
Holding you at night, knowing I'm your safety.
It's the way you look at me when you're angry.
Like there's a little demon about to break free.
It's your voice when you sing slightly off key.
You do it with joy because it makes me happy.
It's how I wake up thinking you're still amazing.
Before the makeup, the way God intended you to be seen.
It's all the things that fall in between, that...
Your laughter, your smile is always guaranteed.
It's the smell of your hair while laying next to me.
Holding you at night, knowing I'm your safety.
It's the way you look at me when you're angry.
Like there's a little demon about to break free.
It's your voice when you sing slightly off key.
You do it with joy because it makes me happy.
It's how I wake up thinking you're still amazing.
Before the makeup, the way God intended you to be seen.
It's all the things that fall in between, that...
#happiness
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
#romantic
211 reads
0 Comments
tating
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 4:45pm
20th Dec 2024 4:45pm
The Touch
The touch of a sinner
Summons the siren’s call
Melodic tunes whispered
From soft lips as
Our bodies connect
In a rhythmic flow
We move as one
And just let it be
Letting nothing interrupt
This moment of passion
Immersing ourselves in
Orgasmic pleasure
Summons the siren’s call
Melodic tunes whispered
From soft lips as
Our bodies connect
In a rhythmic flow
We move as one
And just let it be
Letting nothing interrupt
This moment of passion
Immersing ourselves in
Orgasmic pleasure
#happiness
#romantic
199 reads
7 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 4:26pm
20th Dec 2024 4:26pm
Exist
Exist
The pages fall off the calendar
As the leaves go from green to red then gold
My existence has lost all meaning
Unless I exist in bed next to you
The softness of your skin draws me in
Makes me want to give my burning love to you
When you’re away my spirit decays
And it doesn’t return until I lay my eyes upon you
In between I just resist but I can’t exist alone
The pages fall off the calendar
As the leaves go from green to red then gold
My existence has lost all meaning
Unless I exist in bed next to you
The softness of your skin draws me in
Makes me want to give my burning love to you
When you’re away my spirit decays
And it doesn’t return until I lay my eyes upon you
In between I just resist but I can’t exist alone
#happiness
#love
#relationships #romantic
#relationships #romantic
67 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 11:55am
20th Dec 2024 11:55am
I FEEL US MELD....
I feel us meld
when I am held
against your warm
and fleshy form...
Hands wandering
with wondering
how each side feels,
deeply reveals...
Responding with
the take-and-give
of kisses shared,
lover hearts bared...
as, soon will be,
each side's body
as we prepare
our bed to share...
Continuing,
with lovemaking,
one upon one
in union.
Deep into night,
held still as tight,
we fall asleep,
Love vigils keep.
when I am held
against your warm
and fleshy form...
Hands wandering
with wondering
how each side feels,
deeply reveals...
Responding with
the take-and-give
of kisses shared,
lover hearts bared...
as, soon will be,
each side's body
as we prepare
our bed to share...
Continuing,
with lovemaking,
one upon one
in union.
Deep into night,
held still as tight,
we fall asleep,
Love vigils keep.
#love
#passion
#romantic #sex
#romantic #sex
222 reads
3 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 1:35am
14th Dec 2024 1:35am
Lips and Aura … Come Closer Babe
Let’s face it
I got it
You want it
It’s ok
Holidays are almost here
Get the real deal
Accept no substitutes
Free Delivery
I got it
You want it
It’s ok
Holidays are almost here
Get the real deal
Accept no substitutes
Free Delivery
#identity
#men
#myself
#power
#romantic
202 reads
22 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 2:01pm
13th Dec 2024 2:01pm
Can I Kiss You Again?
#crush
#romantic
#passion
#dark
#BDSM
435 reads
20 Comments
Lyrically_Inclined
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 1:44pm
9th Dec 2024 1:44pm
Forces
Unstoppable
Unmovable
Into each other we crash
Colliding beautifully
Like cosmic energy
Creatively we dance
Like clashing cymbals
But skillfully manipulating
To the drummer’s beat
Our Lovemaking
Lustfully aggressive
Yet passionately
Magnetic
Electrically charged
Opposites Attracting
Unable to separate
Rhythmically entrenched
All encompassing
Consumed
In each other’s….
Lust
Unmovable
Into each other we crash
Colliding beautifully
Like cosmic energy
Creatively we dance
Like clashing cymbals
But skillfully manipulating
To the drummer’s beat
Our Lovemaking
Lustfully aggressive
Yet passionately
Magnetic
Electrically charged
Opposites Attracting
Unable to separate
Rhythmically entrenched
All encompassing
Consumed
In each other’s….
Lust
#love
#lust
#romantic
#seductive
#sensual
295 reads
2 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 3:08am
9th Dec 2024 3:08am
Saharan memories
I imagine the day they
found a catfish in the desert
An archeologist winced at
an unforgiving sun,
stretched his neck
and polished another
fucking rock
in the stupid sand
and cursed the
sheer idiocy of it all
because it’s
drunken shit-faced dumb
to look for sea snakes
in the desert
But those intrepid explorers
found their evidence
About 100 Million years ago,
while T-Rex dropped shits the
size of smart cars,
the Sahara Desert
was a vast sea
...
found a catfish in the desert
An archeologist winced at
an unforgiving sun,
stretched his neck
and polished another
fucking rock
in the stupid sand
and cursed the
sheer idiocy of it all
because it’s
drunken shit-faced dumb
to look for sea snakes
in the desert
But those intrepid explorers
found their evidence
About 100 Million years ago,
while T-Rex dropped shits the
size of smart cars,
the Sahara Desert
was a vast sea
...
#desert
#IMissYou
#love
#lover
#romantic
279 reads
28 Comments
CircleDanceSquared
AlyssaJane96
AlyssaJane96
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 9:30pm
4th Dec 2024 9:30pm
Sweet Valentine
#dreams
#lover
#romantic
#sex
#ValentinesDay
138 reads
5 Comments
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