Romantic Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#romantic
romantic seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
LunaGreyhawk
Poem Published
Today 8:25am
Today 8:25am
The Thursday Train
As I squeeze my thighs together, attempting to stifle the slickness that threatens to soak my sheer, soft pink panties, I can’t help but think how daring this feels. I’d chosen these on purpose, just as he instructed. The anticipation of seeing him after this last stop has me convinced I was already wet before I slipped them on. A slow, steady throb settles into my core, making me feel swollen and needy in a way I’ve rarely experienced.
Settling into my seat on train A13, heading into the city, I can’t shake off the thrill thrumming through me. It seems crazy to meet in a bustling...
Settling into my seat on train A13, heading into the city, I can’t shake off the thrill thrumming through me. It seems crazy to meet in a bustling...
#erotic
#fiction
#lust
#romantic
#sensual
32 reads
1 Comment
NP_NP
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Poem Published
Yesterday 8:50pm
Yesterday 8:50pm
Vibe Check
Will you pass the vibe check?
Are you the Blue Moon song—classic yet distinct.
Remember, I like plants, not flowers.
I’ll connect to you on a deeper plane, more than anyone has.
Two planets circling, locked in orbit.
Slide close to me, and I'll slide to you.
Don’t forget to open my door when I step out of the car;
I love a man who proves chivalry isn’t dead.
I want a teacher and a student.
I’ll show you my darkness
If you reveal what truly haunts you.
Forever dancing, side by side,
Traveling partners, in sync,...
Are you the Blue Moon song—classic yet distinct.
Remember, I like plants, not flowers.
I’ll connect to you on a deeper plane, more than anyone has.
Two planets circling, locked in orbit.
Slide close to me, and I'll slide to you.
Don’t forget to open my door when I step out of the car;
I love a man who proves chivalry isn’t dead.
I want a teacher and a student.
I’ll show you my darkness
If you reveal what truly haunts you.
Forever dancing, side by side,
Traveling partners, in sync,...
#FallingInLove
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
#romantic
30 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:39pm
Yesterday 1:39pm
Still Waiting To Kiss You!
#crush
#romantic
112 reads
7 Comments
LunaGreyhawk
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:06pm
Yesterday 1:06pm
Arcadia
beneath his skilled
and ravishing fingers,
her curves melt into
rainy Sunday mornings
spent helplessly
entangled,
limbs ensconced
in concupiscent poses;
beneath his
luscious weight
she comes untethered,
rising up to taste
the lips of rapture
and ravishing fingers,
her curves melt into
rainy Sunday mornings
spent helplessly
entangled,
limbs ensconced
in concupiscent poses;
beneath his
luscious weight
she comes untethered,
rising up to taste
the lips of rapture
#erotic
#love
#lust
#romantic
#sensual
116 reads
12 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:53am
Yesterday 11:53am
SHALL I COMPARE THEE....
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day,
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
#admiration
#beauty
#love
#relationships
#romantic
67 reads
2 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 4:56pm
31st Dec 2024 4:56pm
Sounds Good To Me
What is "mellisonant"?
To tell one's "honey dip" about her soft, honeyed lips
Telling the sweet things you feel
when it's her love you sip
Its sound,
not the usual
But melodic and musical
However you call it
It's being methodic
Words like loving and gorgeous
Sexy
Erotic
It is dulcet tones describing her face
Mellifluous words for her beauty and grace
How her legs, hips, and shoulders
when 'neath covers they slip
Buoy your heart and your...
To tell one's "honey dip" about her soft, honeyed lips
Telling the sweet things you feel
when it's her love you sip
Its sound,
not the usual
But melodic and musical
However you call it
It's being methodic
Words like loving and gorgeous
Sexy
Erotic
It is dulcet tones describing her face
Mellifluous words for her beauty and grace
How her legs, hips, and shoulders
when 'neath covers they slip
Buoy your heart and your...
#beauty
#honesty
#romantic
58 reads
7 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 6:58am
28th Dec 2024 6:58am
IN SUCH A CUTIE
In such a cutie,
physical beauty
has its apogee
that so turns on me.
Delightful curvy,
hair shining blondie,
limbs slim but shapely
when posed like a tree.....
The essence of She,
at her most lovely.
physical beauty
has its apogee
that so turns on me.
Delightful curvy,
hair shining blondie,
limbs slim but shapely
when posed like a tree.....
The essence of She,
at her most lovely.
#beauty
#romantic
#women
133 reads
2 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 11:51am
22nd Dec 2024 11:51am
My Piece of Heaven
The prize is loving you and that's all I need.
Your laughter, your smile is always guaranteed.
It's the smell of your hair while laying next to me.
Holding you at night, knowing I'm your safety.
It's the way you look at me when you're angry.
Like there's a little demon about to break free.
It's your voice when you sing slightly off key.
You do it with joy because it makes me happy.
It's how I wake up thinking you're still amazing.
Before the makeup, the way God intended you to be seen.
It's all the things that fall in between, that...
Your laughter, your smile is always guaranteed.
It's the smell of your hair while laying next to me.
Holding you at night, knowing I'm your safety.
It's the way you look at me when you're angry.
Like there's a little demon about to break free.
It's your voice when you sing slightly off key.
You do it with joy because it makes me happy.
It's how I wake up thinking you're still amazing.
Before the makeup, the way God intended you to be seen.
It's all the things that fall in between, that...
#happiness
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
#romantic
142 reads
0 Comments
tating
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 4:45pm
20th Dec 2024 4:45pm
The Touch
The touch of a sinner
Summons the siren’s call
Melodic tunes whispered
From soft lips as
Our bodies connect
In a rhythmic flow
We move as one
And just let it be
Letting nothing interrupt
This moment of passion
Immersing ourselves in
Orgasmic pleasure
Summons the siren’s call
Melodic tunes whispered
From soft lips as
Our bodies connect
In a rhythmic flow
We move as one
And just let it be
Letting nothing interrupt
This moment of passion
Immersing ourselves in
Orgasmic pleasure
#happiness
#romantic
172 reads
7 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 4:26pm
20th Dec 2024 4:26pm
Exist
Exist
The pages fall off the calendar
As the leaves go from green to red then gold
My existence has lost all meaning
Unless I exist in bed next to you
The softness of your skin draws me in
Makes me want to give my burning love to you
When you’re away my spirit decays
And it doesn’t return until I lay my eyes upon you
In between I just resist but I can’t exist alone
The pages fall off the calendar
As the leaves go from green to red then gold
My existence has lost all meaning
Unless I exist in bed next to you
The softness of your skin draws me in
Makes me want to give my burning love to you
When you’re away my spirit decays
And it doesn’t return until I lay my eyes upon you
In between I just resist but I can’t exist alone
#happiness
#love
#relationships #romantic
#relationships #romantic
56 reads
0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 11:55am
20th Dec 2024 11:55am
I FEEL US MELD....
I feel us meld
when I am held
against your warm
and fleshy form...
Hands wandering
with wondering
how each side feels,
deeply reveals...
Responding with
the take-and-give
of kisses shared,
lover hearts bared...
as, soon will be,
each side's body
as we prepare
our bed to share...
Continuing,
with lovemaking,
one upon one
in union.
Deep into night,
held still as tight,
we fall asleep,
Love vigils keep.
when I am held
against your warm
and fleshy form...
Hands wandering
with wondering
how each side feels,
deeply reveals...
Responding with
the take-and-give
of kisses shared,
lover hearts bared...
as, soon will be,
each side's body
as we prepare
our bed to share...
Continuing,
with lovemaking,
one upon one
in union.
Deep into night,
held still as tight,
we fall asleep,
Love vigils keep.
#love
#passion
#romantic #sex
#romantic #sex
190 reads
3 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 1:35am
14th Dec 2024 1:35am
Lips and Aura … Come Closer Babe
Let’s face it
I got it
You want it
It’s ok
Holidays are almost here
Get the real deal
Accept no substitutes
Free Delivery
I got it
You want it
It’s ok
Holidays are almost here
Get the real deal
Accept no substitutes
Free Delivery
#identity
#men
#myself
#power
#romantic
181 reads
22 Comments
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