Romantic Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#romantic
romantic seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Betty
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:50pm
Yesterday 6:50pm
I left the wig on when we f**ked
We’d gotten the diagnoses
that we have terminal
cancer of the relationship.
we tried chemo
and rebounds
and screaming at each other
until our lungs ran out of air
and sorrow carved
in our face like glacier canyons
You could never love me
even with the lights off
too afraid, I guess,
of what that looks like
maybe my mercurial touch
across those empty spaces
in your chest are like a slime mold
or a toxin,
or a cluster of tender-feelings herpes,
infecting you with...
that we have terminal
cancer of the relationship.
we tried chemo
and rebounds
and screaming at each other
until our lungs ran out of air
and sorrow carved
in our face like glacier canyons
You could never love me
even with the lights off
too afraid, I guess,
of what that looks like
maybe my mercurial touch
across those empty spaces
in your chest are like a slime mold
or a toxin,
or a cluster of tender-feelings herpes,
infecting you with...
#lover
#obsession
#passion
#romantic
#sex
50 reads
4 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 8:24pm
10th Apr 2025 8:24pm
~Our Fusing Breaths, of “-UYIR”:: body, mind, soul
(an inspired lyrical
(female lyrical in italics, male lyrical in non-italics)
inspired from the 1998 Tamil film #UyiroduUyiraga..
…from its its soulful~ romantic love number linked below)
https://youtu.be/RpljvhSoyCo?feature=shared
(Intro Refrain)
my darling my love...
you are my child
just this flesh alone, is not love
for the lifetimes lived on this earth
in all truth, your soul will arrive unto me
for the lifetimes lived on this earth
in all...
(female lyrical in italics, male lyrical in non-italics)
inspired from the 1998 Tamil film #UyiroduUyiraga..
…from its its soulful~ romantic love number linked below)
https://youtu.be/RpljvhSoyCo?feature=shared
(Intro Refrain)
my darling my love...
you are my child
just this flesh alone, is not love
for the lifetimes lived on this earth
in all truth, your soul will arrive unto me
for the lifetimes lived on this earth
in all...
#inspirational
#love
#lyrics
#romantic
#spiritual
65 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 10:58am
10th Apr 2025 10:58am
Baby it's you
So many times when I look or hear about people being lonely
I have a feeling of sadness deep inside
It makes me wonder if I would have been alone, before I found you
What would happen if you turned around and said goodbye
Honey it's you
you're what I'm living for
I have it all, nothing more
right from the start when I found you
Baby it's you
you were the one for me
the one who's been making me see
the world with you is such a brighter place
I now realize it's you
you are my brightest star
whether you're...
I have a feeling of sadness deep inside
It makes me wonder if I would have been alone, before I found you
What would happen if you turned around and said goodbye
Honey it's you
you're what I'm living for
I have it all, nothing more
right from the start when I found you
Baby it's you
you were the one for me
the one who's been making me see
the world with you is such a brighter place
I now realize it's you
you are my brightest star
whether you're...
#loneliness
#love
#lyrics
#relationships
#romantic
78 reads
6 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 00:48am
5th Apr 2025 00:48am
Romance and your bouncing boner
So I wanted to be a fucking
faerie princess and make out
in a damn daisy field
maybe frolic a bit
and get a little handsy
maybe get a little more
And I am a fucking vision
in a gauzy spring gown
and not much else
halo headband over my
shampoo-commercial perfect hair
as I sit in this field
surrounded by the
flowers and
the goddamn nature and
your naked ass
I struggle
because you swore if
I made you do this
you’d do it naked
and you...
faerie princess and make out
in a damn daisy field
maybe frolic a bit
and get a little handsy
maybe get a little more
And I am a fucking vision
in a gauzy spring gown
and not much else
halo headband over my
shampoo-commercial perfect hair
as I sit in this field
surrounded by the
flowers and
the goddamn nature and
your naked ass
I struggle
because you swore if
I made you do this
you’d do it naked
and you...
#obsession
#passion
#romantic #sex
#romantic #sex
153 reads
11 Comments
Officialkn9ne
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 8:57pm
3rd Apr 2025 8:57pm
The Bus Driver’s Game
In a city humming, wheels on the street,
Behind the wheel, she greets with a beat.
A bus driver charming, though hard to connect,
With laughter and teasing—so blissfully unchecked.
Her hair catches sunlight in shades of soft gray,
She drives past my heart each and every day.
I try to approach her with words I can’t bring;
But she just raises brows as if sensing my sting.
“Why not spend your money? It’s yours after all!”
With playful indifference tucked into her thrall.
While...
Behind the wheel, she greets with a beat.
A bus driver charming, though hard to connect,
With laughter and teasing—so blissfully unchecked.
Her hair catches sunlight in shades of soft gray,
She drives past my heart each and every day.
I try to approach her with words I can’t bring;
But she just raises brows as if sensing my sting.
“Why not spend your money? It’s yours after all!”
With playful indifference tucked into her thrall.
While...
#crush
#LifeAsAWriter
#romantic
#temptation
#WritingPoetry
46 reads
0 Comments
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 7:14pm
2nd Apr 2025 7:14pm
"The Black Widow's Game (A Metaphor)"
Under the cover of night, she prowls
Wolves delve in with their beautiful howls
Creatures of the night guided by white owls
A seductress in the shadows, a black widow in human form,
To bend his will, and weather any storm.
Her silhouette, a whisper of the night,
Marked by the hourglass, a dangerous, red light.
Her skin, dark and alluring, her eyes, as deep as the abyss
As she speaks her voice leaves a hiss, those extraordinary lips.... Pure temptation, perfect to kiss....
He is drawn to her, captivated by her...
Wolves delve in with their beautiful howls
Creatures of the night guided by white owls
A seductress in the shadows, a black widow in human form,
To bend his will, and weather any storm.
Her silhouette, a whisper of the night,
Marked by the hourglass, a dangerous, red light.
Her skin, dark and alluring, her eyes, as deep as the abyss
As she speaks her voice leaves a hiss, those extraordinary lips.... Pure temptation, perfect to kiss....
He is drawn to her, captivated by her...
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#metaphor
#romantic
180 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
31st Mar 2025 2:55pm
31st Mar 2025 2:55pm
Prisoner of Desire
Your eroticism thrills me
A visceral burn
I simmer all day
Waiting for release
I’m your prisoner of want
Aroused and bothered
I wait in your sensual garden
My paradise of desire
A visceral burn
I simmer all day
Waiting for release
I’m your prisoner of want
Aroused and bothered
I wait in your sensual garden
My paradise of desire
#love
#romantic
#Romanticism #sensual
#Romanticism #sensual
276 reads
10 Comments
Mercurial
Poem Published
27th Mar 2025 8:09pm
27th Mar 2025 8:09pm
Tangled Hearts
I'm your mechanic in this love dynamic,
Come here let me fix your heart, but idk where to start,
It's stunning you're about to fall into my shiny star,
And stir you into an emotional frenzy
Lie on that lightbed full of dandelions,
I'm about to take you to the stars of a lost world,
Let me open your beautiful chest that stares at me so bad,
trust me your moans will reach the moons of Hades.
With my golden scissors, I'm slaying your heartbeats,
I wonder whats in here, colours I've never seen,
I hear...
Come here let me fix your heart, but idk where to start,
It's stunning you're about to fall into my shiny star,
And stir you into an emotional frenzy
Lie on that lightbed full of dandelions,
I'm about to take you to the stars of a lost world,
Let me open your beautiful chest that stares at me so bad,
trust me your moans will reach the moons of Hades.
With my golden scissors, I'm slaying your heartbeats,
I wonder whats in here, colours I've never seen,
I hear...
#love
#lover
#obsession
#romantic
#seductive
168 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 4:33pm
26th Mar 2025 4:33pm
We'll Meet on the Thames
I took a boat down the River Thames
To meet a secret lover who will remain unnamed
The water's tranquil nature is deceptive
I know if I fell in, I would forever be its captive
My chest aches with nervous tension.
We sent countless notes stating our affection.
As assured that we were meant
Butterfly’s within would not relent
I dock before him with breath held
Knowing that this moment created a spell
Woven in intricate knots
Aiming for us never to forget this spot
Trembling hands reach out to him
A...
To meet a secret lover who will remain unnamed
The water's tranquil nature is deceptive
I know if I fell in, I would forever be its captive
My chest aches with nervous tension.
We sent countless notes stating our affection.
As assured that we were meant
Butterfly’s within would not relent
I dock before him with breath held
Knowing that this moment created a spell
Woven in intricate knots
Aiming for us never to forget this spot
Trembling hands reach out to him
A...
#ForbiddenLove
#romantic
146 reads
10 Comments
PunkPoe
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 7:32am
22nd Mar 2025 7:32am
What If
What If”
What if I never devour your ruby mouth again?
What if you get lost in the wilderness of evil sin?
If what, I ask myself do I recall you in my dreams?
Always the same one, couldn't hear my screams
Everyday begging that you would let me back in
But what if the sunset doesn't come to rise again?
What if you stop painting the sky for only my eyes?
What if you never decorated my heart by surprise?
And what if these days won't carry on for us forever?
What if your kisses aren't carried by a gusty...
What if I never devour your ruby mouth again?
What if you get lost in the wilderness of evil sin?
If what, I ask myself do I recall you in my dreams?
Always the same one, couldn't hear my screams
Everyday begging that you would let me back in
But what if the sunset doesn't come to rise again?
What if you stop painting the sky for only my eyes?
What if you never decorated my heart by surprise?
And what if these days won't carry on for us forever?
What if your kisses aren't carried by a gusty...
#bittersweet
#love
#romantic
79 reads
0 Comments
Kewton_Magic1
KewtonMagic
KewtonMagic
Poem Published
15th Mar 2025 2:15pm
15th Mar 2025 2:15pm
YOU ARE MINE
You are mine
I feel it
You are mine
Something tells me you're mine
May be not now, but eventually you will be mine
Nothing, and nothing at all will stop me, nothing will stop us
And when the stars finally align, I will hold you, my grip will be so fine tight.
I will hold you for ever, until my hands go weak and can't hold even a feather, until I have no pulse in my body.
That is my dream, that is my purpose, that will be life to me.
You are my life line, never fade until we exhaust even the deepest of any feelings we could ever have. That's my...
I feel it
You are mine
Something tells me you're mine
May be not now, but eventually you will be mine
Nothing, and nothing at all will stop me, nothing will stop us
And when the stars finally align, I will hold you, my grip will be so fine tight.
I will hold you for ever, until my hands go weak and can't hold even a feather, until I have no pulse in my body.
That is my dream, that is my purpose, that will be life to me.
You are my life line, never fade until we exhaust even the deepest of any feelings we could ever have. That's my...
#love
#relationships
#romantic
138 reads
2 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 7:01pm
13th Mar 2025 7:01pm
I'LL TAKE YOU FOR A SPIN
I'll take you for a spin,
if it is not a sin
to ask this woman out
with me - it is my shout.
We can be " just be a pair"
who happen to car share.
In anonymity
you and I can just be,
away from gossipy
neighbours and family.
The time belongs to us,
not like being on bus.
No one will bat an eye
as they see us go by
to where I'm taking you.
You can choose what we do
at our destination.
Let loose imagination!
if it is not a sin
to ask this woman out
with me - it is my shout.
We can be " just be a pair"
who happen to car share.
In anonymity
you and I can just be,
away from gossipy
neighbours and family.
The time belongs to us,
not like being on bus.
No one will bat an eye
as they see us go by
to where I'm taking you.
You can choose what we do
at our destination.
Let loose imagination!
#dating
#love
#relationships #romantic
#relationships #romantic
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0 Comments
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