Romantic Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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romantic seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 1:52pm
7th Mar 2025 1:52pm
Where are we going?
Softened lines converge
in the haze, your lips meet mine,
blurred, yet crystal clear.
Whispers merge with light,
colors fade but hearts align
timeless in the kiss.
Within oblivion
a kiss blooms, defying void,
timeless whispers rise.
Stars dissolve to dust
yet your touch ignites the dark,
void bends, love remains.
Through the endless night
oblivion guards our spark
bound within the void.
Through the veiled embrace
world dissolves to just us...
Softened lines converge
in the haze, your lips meet mine,
blurred, yet crystal clear.
Whispers merge with light,
colors fade but hearts align
timeless in the kiss.
Within oblivion
a kiss blooms, defying void,
timeless whispers rise.
Stars dissolve to dust
yet your touch ignites the dark,
void bends, love remains.
Through the endless night
oblivion guards our spark
bound within the void.
Through the veiled embrace
world dissolves to just us...
#husband
#love
#passion
#relationships
#romantic
82 reads
9 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 9:55am
7th Mar 2025 9:55am
Boomerang
You're the weapon of choice.
You're invisible in the rain.
My enemies better duck fast,
If they want to keep their brains.
You're supersonic.
You're a siren shrieking.
Fidget spinner in flight.
Intimidating and defeating.
All my enemies, they hide.
Because they think you're insane.
You put their minds out of focus.
Riding the jet streams.
All they see is the glare,
From an object unseen.
You hide in the air.
So fresh and clean.
You're the weapon I sharpen.
Working together as one. ...
You're invisible in the rain.
My enemies better duck fast,
If they want to keep their brains.
You're supersonic.
You're a siren shrieking.
Fidget spinner in flight.
Intimidating and defeating.
All my enemies, they hide.
Because they think you're insane.
You put their minds out of focus.
Riding the jet streams.
All they see is the glare,
From an object unseen.
You hide in the air.
So fresh and clean.
You're the weapon I sharpen.
Working together as one. ...
#romantic
#violence
#war
61 reads
2 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 3:44am
5th Mar 2025 3:44am
Rewind
You can't say that I didn't try.
I gave you what I could.
I even let you have my mind.
Nights I prayed,
And days I use to fantasize.
I was mesmerized how I reflected in your eyes.
Plus I hate to mention,
All the little dirty things you would do for me.
Flowers just because.
Reminiscing on what once was.
Holding hands when we bent the block.
Late night smoke sessions.
And early morning pillow talks.
Sexing you above the sheets.
While the radio played slow beats.
I'd like to press rewind,
Just to find what we lost...
I gave you what I could.
I even let you have my mind.
Nights I prayed,
And days I use to fantasize.
I was mesmerized how I reflected in your eyes.
Plus I hate to mention,
All the little dirty things you would do for me.
Flowers just because.
Reminiscing on what once was.
Holding hands when we bent the block.
Late night smoke sessions.
And early morning pillow talks.
Sexing you above the sheets.
While the radio played slow beats.
I'd like to press rewind,
Just to find what we lost...
#breakup
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
#romantic
72 reads
0 Comments
SweetBobbyBlu
Easin On In
Easin On In
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 8:31pm
4th Mar 2025 8:31pm
A Kiss Will Tell
In the Summer . . .
when the sky is blue
and the rain is warm
and the mood is right,
our skin will touch,
as if a chill in winter
wrapped our breath,
warm in splendor.
The bonds will break
as heat will rise,
from loves embrace
to endless skies.
The earth is gone,
the Heavens sigh,
as first touch glows
and souls say hi.
Eyes then search,
thoughts so scattered,
from parting kiss
to endless matter.
To touch and ask
with words unspoken,
minds will meet
with...
when the sky is blue
and the rain is warm
and the mood is right,
our skin will touch,
as if a chill in winter
wrapped our breath,
warm in splendor.
The bonds will break
as heat will rise,
from loves embrace
to endless skies.
The earth is gone,
the Heavens sigh,
as first touch glows
and souls say hi.
Eyes then search,
thoughts so scattered,
from parting kiss
to endless matter.
To touch and ask
with words unspoken,
minds will meet
with...
#FallingInLove
#love
#romantic
109 reads
2 Comments
Villev
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 7:47pm
26th Feb 2025 7:47pm
Pale Evenings Glow
Words spoken over wine in candlelight
On a pale moonlit night
What could be better?
Such are the desires and pleasures of life
Heard in the evening crooner’s voice
Witnessed in the twilight
By the night owl’s steady gaze
Together in unison
As the stars blaze
Burning till the wax melts
And the wick flickers and fades
On a pale moonlit night
What could be better?
Such are the desires and pleasures of life
Heard in the evening crooner’s voice
Witnessed in the twilight
By the night owl’s steady gaze
Together in unison
As the stars blaze
Burning till the wax melts
And the wick flickers and fades
#love
#moon
#night #romantic
#night #romantic
75 reads
2 Comments
Wannabe_batman
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 3:43pm
24th Feb 2025 3:43pm
Her
Skin as white as snow,
eyes with an uncanny glow,
hair made out of fresh silk,
oh! heaven may I have seen;
in her, love was like a mothers womb,
and pain was like when a fire blooms,
no garment could ever fit her beauty,
even the moon was jealous of her!!
with a heart that was only pure,
as the sun in the sky,
her smile shines bright,
got paralyzed by only her sight,
if that was love I wasn't sure,
lungs pumping with a sweet pain,
if it were, our love would have left a stain,
breath with a burning Passion,
but now...
eyes with an uncanny glow,
hair made out of fresh silk,
oh! heaven may I have seen;
in her, love was like a mothers womb,
and pain was like when a fire blooms,
no garment could ever fit her beauty,
even the moon was jealous of her!!
with a heart that was only pure,
as the sun in the sky,
her smile shines bright,
got paralyzed by only her sight,
if that was love I wasn't sure,
lungs pumping with a sweet pain,
if it were, our love would have left a stain,
breath with a burning Passion,
but now...
#beauty
#crush
#love #romantic
#love #romantic
105 reads
0 Comments
SweetBobbyBlu
Easin On In
Easin On In
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 8:36pm
23rd Feb 2025 8:36pm
A Night Out Then In
#dirty
#erotic
#romantic
#sensual
#sex
120 reads
0 Comments
MasterG
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 2:35pm
23rd Feb 2025 2:35pm
Never mine
As I take pen in hand
To write but one final verse
I stop to read your text
Examine your photos
The love begins to poor
From my eyes as rain
My hands begin to shake
Knowing this is but a farewell
It becomes hard to breathe
Catching my breath
Becoming impossible to breathe
Empty time will fill the void
As you slip thru my hands
Putting down the pen
Unable to write
I see now that was once unclear
You were never mine
To have and to hold
Till death do us part
It was but a dream
Made by the...
To write but one final verse
I stop to read your text
Examine your photos
The love begins to poor
From my eyes as rain
My hands begin to shake
Knowing this is but a farewell
It becomes hard to breathe
Catching my breath
Becoming impossible to breathe
Empty time will fill the void
As you slip thru my hands
Putting down the pen
Unable to write
I see now that was once unclear
You were never mine
To have and to hold
Till death do us part
It was but a dream
Made by the...
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
#romantic
115 reads
0 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 1:17pm
22nd Feb 2025 1:17pm
What Songbird Sings The Night To Wake
Its late now
I drowse between imaginings
and dreams
You sleep or I'd call
...(I wonder if you're asleep [or thinking of me the same])
*
The quiet whiles
In the wee, small hours
when night gives way to flights of dreams
I lay adrift in imaginings
Yes, tonight (my love)
Your linger wraps my thoughts
Unbidden
At times the heart will have its way
As ordinary thoughts find their lustre
When moments touch your grace
What speaks the deep of night
Save missing you
I'm caught in the spell...
I drowse between imaginings
and dreams
You sleep or I'd call
...(I wonder if you're asleep [or thinking of me the same])
*
The quiet whiles
In the wee, small hours
when night gives way to flights of dreams
I lay adrift in imaginings
Yes, tonight (my love)
Your linger wraps my thoughts
Unbidden
At times the heart will have its way
As ordinary thoughts find their lustre
When moments touch your grace
What speaks the deep of night
Save missing you
I'm caught in the spell...
#FallingInLove
#love
#romantic
111 reads
5 Comments
XiaoLong
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 4:19am
21st Feb 2025 4:19am
Alluring
a face hidden by a mobile phone mask,
the February moon that came to forge,
knowing her traits, an adventurous task,
an alluring woman so cool, a chill-out lodge.
As she walks in, a scent of fragrant ambrosia,
almost an encounter with an alluring beauty from Polynesia,
I admired her in awe, yet I was looking away after the first glance,
sense of an alluring nature, yet the innocence left me in trance,
I embraced her elegance tightly in my arms,
she’s an alluring power that glows,
such deep eyes my mind just blows, ...
the February moon that came to forge,
knowing her traits, an adventurous task,
an alluring woman so cool, a chill-out lodge.
As she walks in, a scent of fragrant ambrosia,
almost an encounter with an alluring beauty from Polynesia,
I admired her in awe, yet I was looking away after the first glance,
sense of an alluring nature, yet the innocence left me in trance,
I embraced her elegance tightly in my arms,
she’s an alluring power that glows,
such deep eyes my mind just blows, ...
#dreams
#passion
#romantic #sexy
#romantic #sexy
76 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 11:32am
19th Feb 2025 11:32am
almost forgotten languages on the surface of a stone
I spent the night with my fingers buried
on some keys, damn typewriter,
they don't speak my language.
I have an old alphabet and you probably
never seen a carrier pigeon...
I struggle with these meaningless words,
out of context, code words
that try to signify love, desire, oblivion.
What about the numbers?
Ah, those malevolent signifiers of time,
of space and how many fingers we have then,
on each hand, how many times they touch
every year of your time, every letter of your name...
Each phase of the moon.
...
on some keys, damn typewriter,
they don't speak my language.
I have an old alphabet and you probably
never seen a carrier pigeon...
I struggle with these meaningless words,
out of context, code words
that try to signify love, desire, oblivion.
What about the numbers?
Ah, those malevolent signifiers of time,
of space and how many fingers we have then,
on each hand, how many times they touch
every year of your time, every letter of your name...
Each phase of the moon.
...
#love
#passion
#PowerOfWords
#redemption
#romantic
84 reads
6 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
18th Feb 2025 12:19pm
18th Feb 2025 12:19pm
Couples Unexpectedly Similar #1
In twilight waters jellyfish glide,
soft tendrils dance a lover's guide,
umbrella skies above in love's tide.
Moonlit waves where hearts twine.
jellyfish glow, a luminous sign,
umbrellas whisper: "You are mine."
Beneath the sea, in secret dreams,
jellyfish drift, where romance gleams
umbrellas shelter love's true beams.
Waves caress in a tender sweep.
Jellyfish pulse in the ocean deep.
Umbrellas hold the vows they keep.
In the depths, where love will flow,
jellyfish shine their lights...
soft tendrils dance a lover's guide,
umbrella skies above in love's tide.
Moonlit waves where hearts twine.
jellyfish glow, a luminous sign,
umbrellas whisper: "You are mine."
Beneath the sea, in secret dreams,
jellyfish drift, where romance gleams
umbrellas shelter love's true beams.
Waves caress in a tender sweep.
Jellyfish pulse in the ocean deep.
Umbrellas hold the vows they keep.
In the depths, where love will flow,
jellyfish shine their lights...
#crush
#love
#lust
#passion
#romantic
88 reads
14 Comments
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