Rhyming by Top Critiquers Poems
#rhyming
Secrets Buried in their Assholes!
#lies
#corruption
#politics
#America
#rhyming
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Sidebars
#rhyming
#funny
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OLD WRITING TRUTHS NEEDED TODAY
NOTES
As I was going through old files,
papers, and notes from college days
I came across a graduate course
folder with the following writing tips.
1. Don't try to guess what people want to hear
from you; first, figure out what you have to say.
2. Rejection is a sure sign you are a serious writer.
3. Original thoughts flow quickly; borrowed ones don't.
4. Writing can, and does, take place at any time or place.
5. Few critics are on the Bestseller List.
6. You can't write effectively out of ignorance.
7. The first quality of a...
As I was going through old files,
papers, and notes from college days
I came across a graduate course
folder with the following writing tips.
1. Don't try to guess what people want to hear
from you; first, figure out what you have to say.
2. Rejection is a sure sign you are a serious writer.
3. Original thoughts flow quickly; borrowed ones don't.
4. Writing can, and does, take place at any time or place.
5. Few critics are on the Bestseller List.
6. You can't write effectively out of ignorance.
7. The first quality of a...
#rhyming
#dialogue
#uplifting
#emotional
#metaphor
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as she writes
when i
think
of her,
i think
of
the beauty
i have
never seen,
her beauty
comes partly
from
her words
that she
writes,
each line
reaching the
all over
moments
i get
to spend
with her.
think
of her,
i think
of
the beauty
i have
never seen,
her beauty
comes partly
from
her words
that she
writes,
each line
reaching the
all over
moments
i get
to spend
with her.
#rhyming
#admiration
#emotional #metaphor
#emotional #metaphor
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RELAX AND ENJOY
#sex
#erotic
#rhyming #sensual
#rhyming #sensual
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On Reading Ginsburg’s “Howl”
Once, I possessed an open mind,
which I assure you was my own.
I used it to read Ginsberg’s “Howl”.
Well, I don’t wish to be unkind
but those words seemed randomly sown.
my first reaction was a scowl.
So I tried a second reading.
His words looked clipped and pasted;
mashed to the page with cruel force.
Was he desperate? Was he bleeding?
Or perhaps just strangely wasted
by some bizarre urban remorse?
Was there a narrative to track,
or should I have even bothered to try?
Words like photos pinned up on a board ...
which I assure you was my own.
I used it to read Ginsberg’s “Howl”.
Well, I don’t wish to be unkind
but those words seemed randomly sown.
my first reaction was a scowl.
So I tried a second reading.
His words looked clipped and pasted;
mashed to the page with cruel force.
Was he desperate? Was he bleeding?
Or perhaps just strangely wasted
by some bizarre urban remorse?
Was there a narrative to track,
or should I have even bothered to try?
Words like photos pinned up on a board ...
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
#nostalgia
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Again and Again
Feeling like I have something to gain,
I dust my pencil off again.
Some letters march to their end
because I have writer’s block again.
Other letters go against the grain;
they are looking to start a war again.
Banding together, they do what they intend;
now I am crying from what they said again.
Here I am harvesting my pain,
hoping to use it to fix myself again.
Making a stand, then I have to pretend
to get my bearings and have a grip again.
Seems organic, and I feel perfectly sane.
No, I do not want to fail again.
Yes, I...
I dust my pencil off again.
Some letters march to their end
because I have writer’s block again.
Other letters go against the grain;
they are looking to start a war again.
Banding together, they do what they intend;
now I am crying from what they said again.
Here I am harvesting my pain,
hoping to use it to fix myself again.
Making a stand, then I have to pretend
to get my bearings and have a grip again.
Seems organic, and I feel perfectly sane.
No, I do not want to fail again.
Yes, I...
#rhyming
#MentalHealth
#myself
#SelfReflection
#FeelingLost
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Jacked
Hell yeah I’m on point I see you and your boys chit fucking chetting
Eyeing the goods but yo I’m not sweating
I’m a fiend for this shit, a maestro at shirt wetting
The best way to clean the wound is a little blood letting
Watch me move as I move weighted down as I slide
Is it the gat or the stash got me lubed like KY
Fucking plan your next move but remember this isn’t checkers it’s chess
Play me for a pussy bitch but let’s see who wears the black dress
Black mask, dark clothes, and lying prone watching both your doors
A sniper locked...
Eyeing the goods but yo I’m not sweating
I’m a fiend for this shit, a maestro at shirt wetting
The best way to clean the wound is a little blood letting
Watch me move as I move weighted down as I slide
Is it the gat or the stash got me lubed like KY
Fucking plan your next move but remember this isn’t checkers it’s chess
Play me for a pussy bitch but let’s see who wears the black dress
Black mask, dark clothes, and lying prone watching both your doors
A sniper locked...
#rhyming
#narrative
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Mermaids on Land
It happens once a year
When the weather turns warm
Both men and women gather
Sometimes they swarm!
You can find them on both sides of the hill
Yelling encouragements and cheering
After their alcohol sets in,
You hear lewd comments and jeering
The women who compete
Are determined and stopless
Their boobs bouncing all over
Because they run topless!
It's a sight to be seen
There's women of all sizes
Some people are shocked
There's always lots of surprises!
The winner from each age group ...
When the weather turns warm
Both men and women gather
Sometimes they swarm!
You can find them on both sides of the hill
Yelling encouragements and cheering
After their alcohol sets in,
You hear lewd comments and jeering
The women who compete
Are determined and stopless
Their boobs bouncing all over
Because they run topless!
It's a sight to be seen
There's women of all sizes
Some people are shocked
There's always lots of surprises!
The winner from each age group ...
#women
#rhyming
#funny
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Ever expanding
Why poetry?
Why breathe.
Why feelings?
Why needs.
I need expression
I need words
There are exceptions
Rarely heard
I have desires
I have dreams
Ever expanding
So it seems…
Why breathe.
Why feelings?
Why needs.
I need expression
I need words
There are exceptions
Rarely heard
I have desires
I have dreams
Ever expanding
So it seems…
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
#SelfReflection #passion
#SelfReflection #passion
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Lineage and Legacy
Lineage and Legacy as one must come to perceive
Those are life’s footprints we deem to conceive
Moments in time we have achieved
As we glance upon a mirror of our reflection
Our eyes, nose, lips, lineage at times comes into question
What makes us the person who we are
From a presence already ordained beyond a constellation of stars
Are we playing out our life on a cosmic screen
Sight and feelings in time unforeseen
Learning in life to keep our noses clean
If God does know all
Then why do we...
Those are life’s footprints we deem to conceive
Moments in time we have achieved
As we glance upon a mirror of our reflection
Our eyes, nose, lips, lineage at times comes into question
What makes us the person who we are
From a presence already ordained beyond a constellation of stars
Are we playing out our life on a cosmic screen
Sight and feelings in time unforeseen
Learning in life to keep our noses clean
If God does know all
Then why do we...
#identity
#rhyming
#myself
#SelfReflection
#passion
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Black Tar Lung
Still coughing up
A black tar lung
Ink stains blot
My choking tongue
Quill races by
My mind’s undone
No fear of death
I’ve been expunged
Like alchemy
We’re having fun
But not quite like
When I was young
Matured respite
A refined hunt
Each letter penned
With dripping lust
Aging beauty
Hair like rust
I crave response
I crave your touch
A black tar lung
Ink stains blot
My choking tongue
Quill races by
My mind’s undone
No fear of death
I’ve been expunged
Like alchemy
We’re having fun
But not quite like
When I was young
Matured respite
A refined hunt
Each letter penned
With dripping lust
Aging beauty
Hair like rust
I crave response
I crave your touch
#jealousy
#lust
#rhyming
#LifeAsAWriter
#determination
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