Rhyming by Top Critiquers Poems
#rhyming
Her
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 8:54pm
17th Dec 2024 8:54pm
A Rhyme Along for Sir Solomon
Solomon_Song and his perfect rhymes
Will put a smile on your face every time
He’s quick with the trivia too
I don’t know about you
But I look forward to his review
Of my poems
‘Cuz I know know he’ll bring it home
With a poem of his own
He’s generous with the compliments
Quoting his favorite elements
Of what you’ve written
I’m quite smitten
With his fine qualities
And the way he rhymes with ease
This long-standing poet on DUP
Has been very supportive of me
Walking...
Will put a smile on your face every time
He’s quick with the trivia too
I don’t know about you
But I look forward to his review
Of my poems
‘Cuz I know know he’ll bring it home
With a poem of his own
He’s generous with the compliments
Quoting his favorite elements
Of what you’ve written
I’m quite smitten
With his fine qualities
And the way he rhymes with ease
This long-standing poet on DUP
Has been very supportive of me
Walking...
#admiration
#respect
#rhyming
63 reads
4 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
21st Jul 2024 5:22am
21st Jul 2024 5:22am
Listen
A torn photograph of the past
Foggy thoughts return inside
Moments that could never last
Salty words clash with pride
Whispers are growing louder
Time can wait without panic
Strung out on strange powder
Making the situation frantic
Old school analog creatures
Living within this digital age
Gruff with honest features
Taught from a different page
Sometimes change is hard
When no one stops to listen
Foggy thoughts return inside
Moments that could never last
Salty words clash with pride
Whispers are growing louder
Time can wait without panic
Strung out on strange powder
Making the situation frantic
Old school analog creatures
Living within this digital age
Gruff with honest features
Taught from a different page
Sometimes change is hard
When no one stops to listen
#LifeCycle
#LifeStruggles
#rhyming
120 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 11:18am
19th Dec 2024 11:18am
The Passion Dominates
The locking of our lips has a burn that becomes uncontrollable
Let the passion dominate, where nothing else is negotiable
Our teasing & pleasing creates an intoxicating, exhilarated desire
Making our time spent together more beloved before we expire
Our desirous fires rage endlessly
Undeniable and unrelenting
Makes our orgasmic pleasure we share worth all the repenting
You're a delicate beauty that my heart utterly loves & adores
While I am away from you, my loneliness seems to have no cure
An enigma that encompasses...
Let the passion dominate, where nothing else is negotiable
Our teasing & pleasing creates an intoxicating, exhilarated desire
Making our time spent together more beloved before we expire
Our desirous fires rage endlessly
Undeniable and unrelenting
Makes our orgasmic pleasure we share worth all the repenting
You're a delicate beauty that my heart utterly loves & adores
While I am away from you, my loneliness seems to have no cure
An enigma that encompasses...
#erotic
#love
#lover
#rhyming
#sensual
166 reads
16 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 10:42pm
30th Sep 2024 10:42pm
My Heart (the song version)
https://suno.com/song/4759b5a3-a3c7-45f4-af94-6452f2c0d384
Who said that I can't have it all
When the sun is shining & you're in my heart
Where else would I wanna be
Just sitting here watching you looking at me
And when this all comes to an end
I know I will enjoy every second we spend
And if you ever have a doubt
Just reach for me and you'll find out
You are my heart that is beating
you're the stars that are gleaming
you are the dream I keep seeing
you are everything that I needed ...
Who said that I can't have it all
When the sun is shining & you're in my heart
Where else would I wanna be
Just sitting here watching you looking at me
And when this all comes to an end
I know I will enjoy every second we spend
And if you ever have a doubt
Just reach for me and you'll find out
You are my heart that is beating
you're the stars that are gleaming
you are the dream I keep seeing
you are everything that I needed ...
#rhyming
227 reads
18 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
12th Sep 2024 5:02pm
12th Sep 2024 5:02pm
GYRATING HIPS
#erotic
#rhyming
#sex
275 reads
2 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
6th Apr 2022 1:07pm
6th Apr 2022 1:07pm
OLD WRITING TRUTHS NEEDED TODAY
NOTES
As I was going through old files,
papers, and notes from college days
I came across a graduate course
folder with the following writing tips.
1. Don't try to guess what people want to hear
from you; first, figure out what you have to say.
2. Rejection is a sure sign you are a serious writer.
3. Original thoughts flow quickly; borrowed ones don't.
4. Writing can, and does, take place at any time or place.
5. Few critics are on the Bestseller List.
6. You can't write effectively out of ignorance.
7. The first quality of a...
As I was going through old files,
papers, and notes from college days
I came across a graduate course
folder with the following writing tips.
1. Don't try to guess what people want to hear
from you; first, figure out what you have to say.
2. Rejection is a sure sign you are a serious writer.
3. Original thoughts flow quickly; borrowed ones don't.
4. Writing can, and does, take place at any time or place.
5. Few critics are on the Bestseller List.
6. You can't write effectively out of ignorance.
7. The first quality of a...
#rhyming
#dialogue
#uplifting
#emotional
#metaphor
544 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
14th Jan 2024 4:45pm
14th Jan 2024 4:45pm
On Reading Ginsburg’s “Howl”
Once, I possessed an open mind,
which I assure you was my own.
I used it to read Ginsberg’s “Howl”.
Well, I don’t wish to be unkind
but those words seemed randomly sown.
my first reaction was a scowl.
So I tried a second reading.
His words looked clipped and pasted;
mashed to the page with cruel force.
Was he desperate? Was he bleeding?
Or perhaps just strangely wasted
by some bizarre urban remorse?
Was there a narrative to track,
or should I have even bothered to try?
Words like photos pinned up on a board ...
which I assure you was my own.
I used it to read Ginsberg’s “Howl”.
Well, I don’t wish to be unkind
but those words seemed randomly sown.
my first reaction was a scowl.
So I tried a second reading.
His words looked clipped and pasted;
mashed to the page with cruel force.
Was he desperate? Was he bleeding?
Or perhaps just strangely wasted
by some bizarre urban remorse?
Was there a narrative to track,
or should I have even bothered to try?
Words like photos pinned up on a board ...
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
#nostalgia
113 reads
2 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
15th Aug 2024 11:57pm
15th Aug 2024 11:57pm
Tinseltown (collab with Vision_of_insanity)
Plastic people, faux life
Celebrities shine,
Amongst the pain & strife
An illusion of a directors thoughts
Cesspool in Eden
Pleasing the studio boss
Artificial in everything that's seen
Pictures of beauty
Reality is a dream
Never think more then you know
A testament to your image
Look your best, before the show
Wading in a shallow pool
Drink it up like a fool.
Trees a plenty and lost inside.
A forest, crazies, come to hide.
Hollywood, shining bright.
The stars, flickering, through...
Celebrities shine,
Amongst the pain & strife
An illusion of a directors thoughts
Cesspool in Eden
Pleasing the studio boss
Artificial in everything that's seen
Pictures of beauty
Reality is a dream
Never think more then you know
A testament to your image
Look your best, before the show
Wading in a shallow pool
Drink it up like a fool.
Trees a plenty and lost inside.
A forest, crazies, come to hide.
Hollywood, shining bright.
The stars, flickering, through...
#deception
#lies
#PopCulture
#rhyming
#sadness
132 reads
5 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
14th Mar 2024 7:44pm
14th Mar 2024 7:44pm
String Instruments
What's the point of so many rhythmic lines?...
Row, rhyme and rum
They are just waves in the same sea.
Seagull murmurs
like someone singing a fado or two
or it will come to sing much later.
Arrange drawers, sticks and prints
from left to right in an order
almost alphabetical.
Unhinged fairies blessing the sound
of a lute, a guitar and a banjo.
Without wings, without bones, like angels!
Pain descriptive nonconformities
that passes through the brain shamelessly
Bloodlust of a dark predator.
...
Row, rhyme and rum
They are just waves in the same sea.
Seagull murmurs
like someone singing a fado or two
or it will come to sing much later.
Arrange drawers, sticks and prints
from left to right in an order
almost alphabetical.
Unhinged fairies blessing the sound
of a lute, a guitar and a banjo.
Without wings, without bones, like angels!
Pain descriptive nonconformities
that passes through the brain shamelessly
Bloodlust of a dark predator.
...
#music
#rhyming
#lyrics
112 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 6:00am
17th Nov 2024 6:00am
In Lieu of a Kiss
#funny
#rhyming
66 reads
2 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
17th Mar 2023 12:46pm
17th Mar 2023 12:46pm
Writer's block - a how-to manual
Writers block
Roadblock
Deadlock
Airlock
Headlock
Gridlock
Cockblock
Hemlock
Butchers block
Building block
Nighthawk
Sleepwalk
Sweet talk
Small talk
Double talk
Poppycock
Cinderblock
Shellshock
Bedrock
Aftershock
Dirty sock
Moonwalk
Punk rock
Peacock
Roadblock
Deadlock
Airlock
Headlock
Gridlock
Cockblock
Hemlock
Butchers block
Building block
Nighthawk
Sleepwalk
Sweet talk
Small talk
Double talk
Poppycock
Cinderblock
Shellshock
Bedrock
Aftershock
Dirty sock
Moonwalk
Punk rock
Peacock
#rhyming
#WritersBlock
307 reads
18 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:22am
Yesterday 10:22am
Besma
Besma, rhyme old poetess
The word for her a charming princess
Poetry is her valiant knight
A guiding Muse who pops at night
So obsessive she is about spelling
With a genuine flair for creative writing
Her forte is the soulful human touch
So elated when praised as such
Watching romance and action films her leisure
Reading and listening to music for her a pleasure
Horror movies make her heart sink
For sci-fi stories she has no flowing ink
To serve and enlighten, her wish and dream
With Love, peace and joy Humanity will...
The word for her a charming princess
Poetry is her valiant knight
A guiding Muse who pops at night
So obsessive she is about spelling
With a genuine flair for creative writing
Her forte is the soulful human touch
So elated when praised as such
Watching romance and action films her leisure
Reading and listening to music for her a pleasure
Horror movies make her heart sink
For sci-fi stories she has no flowing ink
To serve and enlighten, her wish and dream
With Love, peace and joy Humanity will...
#funny
#LifeAsAWriter
#myself
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
53 reads
10 Comments
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