Rhyming Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#rhyming
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 12:58pm
1st Jan 2025 12:58pm
It can happen
When will this be over?
I use to drive a 1972 Chevy Nova
Please don't worry, don't be ashamed
Many people are set up, eventually blamed
How would you know that he was dressed like a she
You fell for her, but it was all make believe
Until that one day when you wanted to have sex
You stripped off all her clothes, and you asked for the check
Fuck this, why didn't you tell me you were a man
"Who cares baby, I'll make you feel grand!!"
No way dude
I had enough of you
I took my clothes and ran out of the house
To...
I use to drive a 1972 Chevy Nova
Please don't worry, don't be ashamed
Many people are set up, eventually blamed
How would you know that he was dressed like a she
You fell for her, but it was all make believe
Until that one day when you wanted to have sex
You stripped off all her clothes, and you asked for the check
Fuck this, why didn't you tell me you were a man
"Who cares baby, I'll make you feel grand!!"
No way dude
I had enough of you
I took my clothes and ran out of the house
To...
#boyfriend
#girlfriend
#identity
#rhyming
#sex
75 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 1:05pm
24th Dec 2024 1:05pm
Your two front teeth
#Christmas
#lyrics
#parody
#rhyming
#satirical
112 reads
8 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 10:22am
21st Dec 2024 10:22am
Besma
Besma, rhyme old poetess
The word for her a charming princess
Poetry is her valiant knight
A guiding Muse who pops at night
So obsessive she is about spelling
With a genuine flair for creative writing
Her forte is the soulful human touch
So elated when praised as such
Watching romance and action films her leisure
Reading and listening to music for her a pleasure
Horror movies make her heart sink
For sci-fi stories she has no flowing ink
To serve and enlighten, her wish and dream
With Love, peace and joy Humanity will...
The word for her a charming princess
Poetry is her valiant knight
A guiding Muse who pops at night
So obsessive she is about spelling
With a genuine flair for creative writing
Her forte is the soulful human touch
So elated when praised as such
Watching romance and action films her leisure
Reading and listening to music for her a pleasure
Horror movies make her heart sink
For sci-fi stories she has no flowing ink
To serve and enlighten, her wish and dream
With Love, peace and joy Humanity will...
#funny
#LifeAsAWriter
#myself
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
92 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 11:18am
19th Dec 2024 11:18am
The Passion Dominates
The locking of our lips has a burn that becomes uncontrollable
Let the passion dominate, where nothing else is negotiable
Our teasing & pleasing creates an intoxicating, exhilarated desire
Making our time spent together more beloved before we expire
Our desirous fires rage endlessly
Undeniable and unrelenting
Makes our orgasmic pleasure we share worth all the repenting
You're a delicate beauty that my heart utterly loves & adores
While I am away from you, my loneliness seems to have no cure
An enigma that encompasses...
Let the passion dominate, where nothing else is negotiable
Our teasing & pleasing creates an intoxicating, exhilarated desire
Making our time spent together more beloved before we expire
Our desirous fires rage endlessly
Undeniable and unrelenting
Makes our orgasmic pleasure we share worth all the repenting
You're a delicate beauty that my heart utterly loves & adores
While I am away from you, my loneliness seems to have no cure
An enigma that encompasses...
#erotic
#love
#lover
#rhyming
#sensual
291 reads
16 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 8:24am
19th Dec 2024 8:24am
The Gift Of Muse And The Grace To Inspire
If I have to poetry see and define
My words would shrink and stop to ink
My thoughts would be unable to align
And in confusion I would rather sink..
Visions in words would learn how to speak
Words marvellously moulded by a wordsmith
Far reaching charm a poet would constantly seek
Unique gems adeptly crafted by a goldsmith..
It’s the power to paint and portray
Compose a tune.. an ambient so rare
An art gallery, a rich tapestry to display
Masters of words of sublime flair..
Much more.. the magic of poetry ...
My words would shrink and stop to ink
My thoughts would be unable to align
And in confusion I would rather sink..
Visions in words would learn how to speak
Words marvellously moulded by a wordsmith
Far reaching charm a poet would constantly seek
Unique gems adeptly crafted by a goldsmith..
It’s the power to paint and portray
Compose a tune.. an ambient so rare
An art gallery, a rich tapestry to display
Masters of words of sublime flair..
Much more.. the magic of poetry ...
#art
#inspirational
#LifeAsAWriter
#rhyming
#WritingPoetry
90 reads
6 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 1:05am
19th Dec 2024 1:05am
Want More
The ocean waves keep crashing on the shore
I’ve been told to accept less, but I want more
The moonlight is the only guide that I need; a steady comfort to protect me when I bleed
I write my own destiny; this is what I swore.
Love hurts, but loneliness kills
My goal has been accomplished with the blood that I’ve spilt.
Come and push me into the water; let it ooze in my pores
Even when my lips say “stop”, I keep on wanting more
I’m told that I ask too much, that I should accept what I have
I don’t expect empty souls to ever understand. ...
I’ve been told to accept less, but I want more
The moonlight is the only guide that I need; a steady comfort to protect me when I bleed
I write my own destiny; this is what I swore.
Love hurts, but loneliness kills
My goal has been accomplished with the blood that I’ve spilt.
Come and push me into the water; let it ooze in my pores
Even when my lips say “stop”, I keep on wanting more
I’m told that I ask too much, that I should accept what I have
I don’t expect empty souls to ever understand. ...
#faith
#hope
#rhyming
#sacrifice
#strength
94 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 11:06am
17th Dec 2024 11:06am
Yuletide Sadness
Every year the winds get colder
Their screams cut like knives
Shadows follow my winter walks
Bitter voices carol the night
Dreams of days when the fire would warm me
You were there inside the flame
But you are gone and the years grow bitter
My soul is withered and wrapped with pain
Drifting in my fever there's sadness
Calling me to come back home
Ghosts that dance inside my head
Forever chill that haunts my bones
Dreams of nights where the world seemed alive
That there was time to catch my fall
But I am left with that...
Their screams cut like knives
Shadows follow my winter walks
Bitter voices carol the night
Dreams of days when the fire would warm me
You were there inside the flame
But you are gone and the years grow bitter
My soul is withered and wrapped with pain
Drifting in my fever there's sadness
Calling me to come back home
Ghosts that dance inside my head
Forever chill that haunts my bones
Dreams of nights where the world seemed alive
That there was time to catch my fall
But I am left with that...
#Christmas
#dark
#holiday
#rhyming
#sadness
95 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 11:02am
16th Dec 2024 11:02am
She'll hump you for bacon
#dirty
#food
#lust
#rhyming
#sex
86 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 7:28pm
11th Dec 2024 7:28pm
Some Nursery Rhymes For You
#dirty
#fiction
#magic
#rhyming
#sex
111 reads
6 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 7:13am
1st Dec 2024 7:13am
Refrained
(Moon_bather/Fia Naturie collab)
I got this to say
You don’t know me anyway
I got this to say
What the fuck you trying to say
How many fingers you got
Not enough to make you stop
How many minds can bleed
Until you stop your fucking seed
Hello 911, She’s going to need help please
What is your emergency
The world, and what she believes
Excuse me?
I want to leave and go away
Are you being detained in any way
She has locked me in chain, making me stay
I’ll send...
I got this to say
You don’t know me anyway
I got this to say
What the fuck you trying to say
How many fingers you got
Not enough to make you stop
How many minds can bleed
Until you stop your fucking seed
Hello 911, She’s going to need help please
What is your emergency
The world, and what she believes
Excuse me?
I want to leave and go away
Are you being detained in any way
She has locked me in chain, making me stay
I’ll send...
#collaboration
#FreeVerse
#rhyming #StreamOfConsciousness
#rhyming #StreamOfConsciousness
98 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 11:22am
27th Nov 2024 11:22am
Don't follow the path that I just wrote
Everyday it's on repeat
drink your coffee move your feet
Take your brain and then dispose
where it goes, nobody knows
Just keep moving
just keep working
Desperate system
mental prison
Keep on the tracks
do not look back
Just keep working hours
that devours
Hopes we're dreaming
it's deceiving
This is madness
costumed fascists
Made our lives of shit and plastic
Filling us with their distractions
keeps us from seeing infractions
This isn't a life, it's a prison.
drink your coffee move your feet
Take your brain and then dispose
where it goes, nobody knows
Just keep moving
just keep working
Desperate system
mental prison
Keep on the tracks
do not look back
Just keep working hours
that devours
Hopes we're dreaming
it's deceiving
This is madness
costumed fascists
Made our lives of shit and plastic
Filling us with their distractions
keeps us from seeing infractions
This isn't a life, it's a prison.
#inspirational
#motivational
#MovingOn
#rhyming
#uplifting
74 reads
9 Comments
refinemind
SUNLITE
SUNLITE
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 10:36am
27th Nov 2024 10:36am
I'M HERE=WHO ?
I'm here =Who ?
The LOVEofy0U view
A Vegan Stew from the vegetation that grew
Ok let's Do in lue add the hue then it's
Peek A Boo WALA it's brand spanking new sent too you flow of a
Tear to a ear in a year so you can hear point of a spear that was thrown from the rear
IS nothing SOMETHING too?
I'M HERE- WHO??
The LOVEofy0U view
A Vegan Stew from the vegetation that grew
Ok let's Do in lue add the hue then it's
Peek A Boo WALA it's brand spanking new sent too you flow of a
Tear to a ear in a year so you can hear point of a spear that was thrown from the rear
IS nothing SOMETHING too?
I'M HERE- WHO??
#rhyming
62 reads
0 Comments
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