Poems About Responsibility Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about responsibility seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
SamAlec
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Poem Published
10th Aug 2023 6:47pm
10th Aug 2023 6:47pm
Birthright
I deserve
You deserve
We deserve
We deserve better than this
I’m not inspired to fight for the freedom
To be a parasite
To say anything, consequence-free
To live in denial, delusion and distraction
To worship the “free market” and its occupying armies
To destroy the very planet we share
To commodify everyone and everything we love
To hate everything we are
“Freedom to” can become “freedom over”
When it flows from a society divided
I’ve earned
You’ve earned
Everything I have,...
You deserve
We deserve
We deserve better than this
I’m not inspired to fight for the freedom
To be a parasite
To say anything, consequence-free
To live in denial, delusion and distraction
To worship the “free market” and its occupying armies
To destroy the very planet we share
To commodify everyone and everything we love
To hate everything we are
“Freedom to” can become “freedom over”
When it flows from a society divided
I’ve earned
You’ve earned
Everything I have,...
#politics
#humankind
#freedom
#responsibility
#rebellion
258 reads
1 Comment
buddhakitty
Poem Published
10th Aug 2023 1:49am
10th Aug 2023 1:49am
bullet points
when outmanned and
outgunned in certain
situations
don't stick around long
enough to see how many
bullets will be fired
or to find out
how badly those
bullets are going
to hurt
outgunned in certain
situations
don't stick around long
enough to see how many
bullets will be fired
or to find out
how badly those
bullets are going
to hurt
#responsibility
151 reads
6 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
31st Jul 2023 10:42pm
31st Jul 2023 10:42pm
needle in the eye
morning arrived like
a needle in the eye
platefuls of crap
and carnage
being served seconds
without finishing firsts
don't bother holding your
breath when diving
onto the rocks below
the octaves are one
cent out of tune
the fourths and
fifths, tragic
another day
another Hindenburg
disaster
even the white flags
flee in terror
a needle in the eye
platefuls of crap
and carnage
being served seconds
without finishing firsts
don't bother holding your
breath when diving
onto the rocks below
the octaves are one
cent out of tune
the fourths and
fifths, tragic
another day
another Hindenburg
disaster
even the white flags
flee in terror
#responsibility
163 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
24th Jul 2023 9:09pm
24th Jul 2023 9:09pm
Raytheon
Inapt are men trading brains for muscle;
Too often swapped in the annuls of war
Where force was trained for disciplined hustle
And cold mentation as entropy's whore
To see that the widows were young and fresh
With no flowers of chivalry to bed;
Seemingly forgot was that their brave flesh
Drained as quickly as a coward's when bled.
And thus I challenge the bold and the brave
To fashion something more than tombs en masse
Where fewer cowards who escape the grave
Can chase a piece of liberated ass. ...
Too often swapped in the annuls of war
Where force was trained for disciplined hustle
And cold mentation as entropy's whore
To see that the widows were young and fresh
With no flowers of chivalry to bed;
Seemingly forgot was that their brave flesh
Drained as quickly as a coward's when bled.
And thus I challenge the bold and the brave
To fashion something more than tombs en masse
Where fewer cowards who escape the grave
Can chase a piece of liberated ass. ...
#family
#separation
#responsibility
203 reads
0 Comments
jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
16th Jul 2023 9:43am
16th Jul 2023 9:43am
The True Two Party System
I've been to Greece
England
France
Even Iran
With my friend back in ten
I remember thinking
What the fucks up with American men
Ive had more problems when
I go out
It's almost a fight
Ive calmed with years
But face the same spite
You would think I feel unsafe cause of the men
No
Most
It's the hag faced, youngling, or bitter women
They hit home
Almost every time I'm out
Last time at five guys
An old lady staring with hate as she stuffed mouth
But it's always like...
England
France
Even Iran
With my friend back in ten
I remember thinking
What the fucks up with American men
Ive had more problems when
I go out
It's almost a fight
Ive calmed with years
But face the same spite
You would think I feel unsafe cause of the men
No
Most
It's the hag faced, youngling, or bitter women
They hit home
Almost every time I'm out
Last time at five guys
An old lady staring with hate as she stuffed mouth
But it's always like...
#women
#men
#CallToAction
#inequality
#responsibility
210 reads
7 Comments
Kementic1
Poem Published
12th Jul 2023 6:30pm
12th Jul 2023 6:30pm
Evolution
I begin my poem with this verse
we must be the change we seek in the universe
We must stop ourselves and leaders from lying
bc old folks and babies are dying
Less money spent on war
means more for the poor
If America wants to call itself a Christian nation
it must first seek it's own salvation
The answer is not in Right Wing Neo-fascist revolution
but in a spiritual -Evolution
we must be the change we seek in the universe
We must stop ourselves and leaders from lying
bc old folks and babies are dying
Less money spent on war
means more for the poor
If America wants to call itself a Christian nation
it must first seek it's own salvation
The answer is not in Right Wing Neo-fascist revolution
but in a spiritual -Evolution
#politics
#freedom
#culture
#morality
#responsibility
807 reads
5 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
12th Jul 2023 6:36am
12th Jul 2023 6:36am
chains
Is life so dear or peace so sweet as to be purchased at the price of chains and
slavery? Forbid it, Almighty God! I know not what course others may take, but
as for me, give me liberty, or give me death!―Patrick Henry
some are metal fetters for your fleet feet
―not a single step for liberty!
night and day, you wallow on defeat street,
yearning for civil mobility.
some are passions that consume your goodwill,
gormandising liberty of wit,
glueing, to your thirst, tastes so untranquil
that, though sate, you know not how to...
slavery? Forbid it, Almighty God! I know not what course others may take, but
as for me, give me liberty, or give me death!―Patrick Henry
some are metal fetters for your fleet feet
―not a single step for liberty!
night and day, you wallow on defeat street,
yearning for civil mobility.
some are passions that consume your goodwill,
gormandising liberty of wit,
glueing, to your thirst, tastes so untranquil
that, though sate, you know not how to...
#freedom
#escape
#FeelingTrapped #responsibility
#FeelingTrapped #responsibility
218 reads
2 Comments
jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
5th Jul 2023 5:57am
5th Jul 2023 5:57am
Wave of Rage
This monster
Well fed and overgrown
Stares darkly
A hound near his throne
The stench of fear dissolves
It was threatening my resolve
Driving my blade through
As it rears with reaching claws
Raising the mutts head
One single purpose arose
One thought as eyes lock
Stirs hope that points us home
Where I intend to take him.
Well fed and overgrown
Stares darkly
A hound near his throne
The stench of fear dissolves
It was threatening my resolve
Driving my blade through
As it rears with reaching claws
Raising the mutts head
One single purpose arose
One thought as eyes lock
Stirs hope that points us home
Where I intend to take him.
#anger
#love
#depression
#support
#responsibility
199 reads
2 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
28th Jun 2023 5:35pm
28th Jun 2023 5:35pm
The absolute value of material wealth
Your accumulated wealth
is the greatest sign of your karma...
the karma that got you that wealth,
and the karma you get to distribute through others.
is the greatest sign of your karma...
the karma that got you that wealth,
and the karma you get to distribute through others.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#responsibility #Hindu
#responsibility #Hindu
155 reads
2 Comments
Kementic1
Poem Published
19th Jun 2023 6:01pm
19th Jun 2023 6:01pm
F@ck Paragraph 8*
Nowadays on-line I have to give my consent
even to read the simplest content
Which one of my rights I am signing away I have no clue
but what else can I do
I just want to surf the internet in peace
and with all of these pop ups I wish they would desist and cease
All these corporations are now doing this as their protocol
forced by the legal teams so they don't take a fall
One last thing before it is too late
f@ck all of these entities and their Paragraph 8
even to read the simplest content
Which one of my rights I am signing away I have no clue
but what else can I do
I just want to surf the internet in peace
and with all of these pop ups I wish they would desist and cease
All these corporations are now doing this as their protocol
forced by the legal teams so they don't take a fall
One last thing before it is too late
f@ck all of these entities and their Paragraph 8
#identity
#politics
#freedom
#responsibility
#risk
451 reads
4 Comments
Joseph-Zenieh
Poem Published
14th Jun 2023 12:52pm
14th Jun 2023 12:52pm
DON'T LET RESULTS DISHEARTEN YOU.
DON'T LET RESULTS DISHEARTEN YOU.
Christian faith is ease not anguish.
It reveals a high example.
Jesus shows us how we should be
and behave to be His blessed ones.
He would like us to be warriors,
to defend His creeds and teachings.
He was not afraid of fighting
even when it meant His torture.
He was counting on His Master,
Who conferred on Him great power.
All His gifts could give the spirits
which might not yield instant profits.
Christ could do what was perfection
but if failure bled His forehead, ...
Christian faith is ease not anguish.
It reveals a high example.
Jesus shows us how we should be
and behave to be His blessed ones.
He would like us to be warriors,
to defend His creeds and teachings.
He was not afraid of fighting
even when it meant His torture.
He was counting on His Master,
Who conferred on Him great power.
All His gifts could give the spirits
which might not yield instant profits.
Christ could do what was perfection
but if failure bled His forehead, ...
#responsibility
175 reads
21 Comments
A_Conduit
Poem Published
12th Jun 2023 10:31am
12th Jun 2023 10:31am
Age Of Consent Pt.1
#nature
#ignorance
#responsibility
#manipulation
#deception
127 reads
0 Comments
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