Poems About Responsibility Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about responsibility seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
29th Nov 2023 4:58am
29th Nov 2023 4:58am
To You
Saying goodbye gave me a second chance with you and tata and tio and all whom I wish to grow with. I am truly not angry as I was previously
Yet
As sorrow may linger, I vow to cover that pit with smothering memories of love and happiness.
As I merge with the child, the ever present mother, and the blind person that is me, anticipate mistakes that I will own and correct if I can.
My second chance, my love, my other, necessary half; I cannot even say that you and I can split like that. For one moment I feel the gravity centers in me, then the pull of you...
Yet
As sorrow may linger, I vow to cover that pit with smothering memories of love and happiness.
As I merge with the child, the ever present mother, and the blind person that is me, anticipate mistakes that I will own and correct if I can.
My second chance, my love, my other, necessary half; I cannot even say that you and I can split like that. For one moment I feel the gravity centers in me, then the pull of you...
#love
#responsibility
#success
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buddhakitty
Poem Published
26th Nov 2023 6:14pm
26th Nov 2023 6:14pm
what really matters most
the only things in life one really
needs is food, shelter, a self
directed purpose and a few
friends as honest and direct
as an arrow launched from a
bow into the bullseye of your
heart
needs is food, shelter, a self
directed purpose and a few
friends as honest and direct
as an arrow launched from a
bow into the bullseye of your
heart
#responsibility
164 reads
10 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
19th Nov 2023 7:17pm
19th Nov 2023 7:17pm
Men
Amazing men
Ever-blazing men
They go through dens
To meet those ends
Yes, I tread with classic men
Men who defend... those with less
Not them... who lay in bed
Till the clock struck ten
No, not every men
Just friendly men
Cos' men with messy heads......
I don't trend with them
I'm talking non-breaking men
Not lazyish men
Men whose hench....
's to fend off fiendish fiend
Ever-blazing men
They go through dens
To meet those ends
Yes, I tread with classic men
Men who defend... those with less
Not them... who lay in bed
Till the clock struck ten
No, not every men
Just friendly men
Cos' men with messy heads......
I don't trend with them
I'm talking non-breaking men
Not lazyish men
Men whose hench....
's to fend off fiendish fiend
#strength
#men
#friendship
#respect
#responsibility
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Joseph-Zenieh
Poem Published
18th Nov 2023 12:57pm
18th Nov 2023 12:57pm
ARE PEOPLE EQUAL?
ARE PEOPLE EQUAL?
Where are the people who see life
is full of charm that's crime to waste?
There is something hidden somewhere
that makes a person satisfied.
But where is that most obscure gem
and how can we advance to it?
So few can know. It's well concealed,
but it will cheer who finds that wealth..
The jewel's your effect on men,
and making them so pleased with selves.
Look for this target that quite few
can find and practise on mankind.
A lot of people are...
Where are the people who see life
is full of charm that's crime to waste?
There is something hidden somewhere
that makes a person satisfied.
But where is that most obscure gem
and how can we advance to it?
So few can know. It's well concealed,
but it will cheer who finds that wealth..
The jewel's your effect on men,
and making them so pleased with selves.
Look for this target that quite few
can find and practise on mankind.
A lot of people are...
#responsibility
132 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
10th Oct 2023 11:32am
10th Oct 2023 11:32am
CHILDREN'S IN THE SAND BOX
Let's talk about the people in CONGRESS, and have a REAL serious conversation on WHY DO THOSE. That WHO WE OF SOCIETY APPOINTED AS THE PEOPLE, THAT IS SUPPOSE TO BE HERE TO REPRESENT THE PEOPLE OF THE WORLD. AS THEY SPEND MORE TIME IN THE CHAMBER ROOM ARGUING, AMONGST EACH OTHER AND THEMSELVES, JUST GOING BACK AND FOURTH. YET STILL CAN'T COME TO A REAL, SOLUTION to fix the damn problem. FOR THE TRUE BETTERMENT OF THE WORLD AND IT'S PEOPLE'S.🌍 FOR it reminds me of CHILDRENS playing in the SAND BOX, to see who goes first to play in the sand, or who shall ride the swings on the swing bar...
#politics
#culture
#responsibility
#StreamOfConsciousness
#symbolism
159 reads
2 Comments
Johnny707
Poem Published
10th Oct 2023 00:13am
10th Oct 2023 00:13am
A Fathers heart
In the depths of a father's soul, a story unfolds,
Of sacrifice and pain, too great to be told.
For in the shadows, I silently carry the weight,
Protecting my children, their futures secure and straight.
Through sleepless nights and weary days,
I labor on, my love never sways.
For my children's dreams, my heart does bleed,
A silent warrior, fulfilling every need.
In my tired eyes, wisdom lines lie deep,
Etched by battles fought, secrets I'll forever keep.
I shield them from the darkness that may come,
Guiding them...
Of sacrifice and pain, too great to be told.
For in the shadows, I silently carry the weight,
Protecting my children, their futures secure and straight.
Through sleepless nights and weary days,
I labor on, my love never sways.
For my children's dreams, my heart does bleed,
A silent warrior, fulfilling every need.
In my tired eyes, wisdom lines lie deep,
Etched by battles fought, secrets I'll forever keep.
I shield them from the darkness that may come,
Guiding them...
#children
#family
#daughter
#son
#responsibility
339 reads
3 Comments
jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
9th Oct 2023 3:52am
9th Oct 2023 3:52am
Cultivators Rule This Place
I want to live
To walk along your streets as if a beggar
No story of upcoming ventures
No past to endlessly endeavor
Provide for those who will not pay a Thing back
I walk this place with change in pockets
Blessings to spread if I can
I have sought not
I ask for not
All I want
Has been provided
And as I sit
In sanctuary
Watching nearby
As peace is divided
I help my neighbor
Living in close quarters
Generations under one roof
The elderly
Wanting for healthy
Days only...
To walk along your streets as if a beggar
No story of upcoming ventures
No past to endlessly endeavor
Provide for those who will not pay a Thing back
I walk this place with change in pockets
Blessings to spread if I can
I have sought not
I ask for not
All I want
Has been provided
And as I sit
In sanctuary
Watching nearby
As peace is divided
I help my neighbor
Living in close quarters
Generations under one roof
The elderly
Wanting for healthy
Days only...
#love
#kindness
#LifeGoals #responsibility
#LifeGoals #responsibility
163 reads
4 Comments
superslooth
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2023 2:38am
3rd Oct 2023 2:38am
Abundance
In the dark risen playground
Between the years, he had found her back.
And now among the crowd, she lost him again.
Swinging in the arms of sunshine
She still missed the presence of his shadow.
When there were rhinestones all around her
She still missed the sparkle of his smile.
While she danced among the stars
She still missed his hand that led her through the crowd.
She spent her days in chaos
But as the night grew silent once again
The moon beamed his face in her newly lit eyes.
She let peace take over and silence...
Between the years, he had found her back.
And now among the crowd, she lost him again.
Swinging in the arms of sunshine
She still missed the presence of his shadow.
When there were rhinestones all around her
She still missed the sparkle of his smile.
While she danced among the stars
She still missed his hand that led her through the crowd.
She spent her days in chaos
But as the night grew silent once again
The moon beamed his face in her newly lit eyes.
She let peace take over and silence...
#love
#responsibility
212 reads
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buddhakitty
Poem Published
4th Sep 2023 3:47am
4th Sep 2023 3:47am
acceptance
it is better to kill the
tribe
burn down the village
then to swat a single
fly on the
table
to save an
apple
tribe
burn down the village
then to swat a single
fly on the
table
to save an
apple
#LifeStruggles
#responsibility
142 reads
8 Comments
LillyValleyPoems
Poem Published
20th Aug 2023 6:19am
20th Aug 2023 6:19am
Spider Babies
It’s been 5 months since
We’ve spoken
And I’ve been stirring it up,
It’s all in my head
I’ve tried to forget
A conversation with my husband;
Me: I don’t want spiders
in my room,
Should we do something?
Husband: no, when they hatch
They’ll all blow away
That spider out my window
She’s got babies
A tiny cocoon;
Like how I call my robe
When I see my bebe’s
Morning face,
My cocoon’s only for my
Littlest ones
I want them to remember
These silken warmseys threads
It’s...
We’ve spoken
And I’ve been stirring it up,
It’s all in my head
I’ve tried to forget
A conversation with my husband;
Me: I don’t want spiders
in my room,
Should we do something?
Husband: no, when they hatch
They’ll all blow away
That spider out my window
She’s got babies
A tiny cocoon;
Like how I call my robe
When I see my bebe’s
Morning face,
My cocoon’s only for my
Littlest ones
I want them to remember
These silken warmseys threads
It’s...
#parent
#motherhood
#responsibility
234 reads
1 Comment
peninnah
Poem Published
16th Aug 2023 1:18pm
16th Aug 2023 1:18pm
DRUNK DILEMMA
Pay the bills. V. Buy a bottle
Pay the bills. V. Buy a bottle
Pay the bills...
Arrrrggghhh!Give me the bottle!!!
©
Drunk diary.
Pay the bills. V. Buy a bottle
Pay the bills...
Arrrrggghhh!Give me the bottle!!!
©
Drunk diary.
#alcohol
#addiction
#responsibility
218 reads
10 Comments
bandit
Poem Published
12th Aug 2023 4:22pm
12th Aug 2023 4:22pm
a prefect gift
a ragged breath
naked and undressed
kisses, hands a wondering
love and passion a plunder
desire overtakes you and me
where do you begin
where do I end
one from start to finish
heart and soul completely
what God joined, perfection in it
a prefect gift he has given
that pure gift to the one
that gift to the one you marry
not for every tom dick or mary
naked and undressed
kisses, hands a wondering
love and passion a plunder
desire overtakes you and me
where do you begin
where do I end
one from start to finish
heart and soul completely
what God joined, perfection in it
a prefect gift he has given
that pure gift to the one
that gift to the one you marry
not for every tom dick or mary
#beauty
#freedom
#morality
#responsibility
#passion
165 reads
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