Poems About Rejection Seeking Honest Critique
#rejection
Poems about rejection seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Damselinhandcuffs
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 2:30am
22nd Jan 2025 2:30am
Bug
I used your pet name last night.
It was an accident.
It slipped out of the lonely gap of my teeth
as I slipped him out of me.
It came searching for you like the pest that you are.
I called this stranger your pet name and cried,
It was an accident.
How it still pains me
that you turned out to be a flea only for her.
The bird woman
The one who could leave and still be so present.
So controlling in absence.
But my dear,
you are a bug.
A plague that took years from...
It was an accident.
It slipped out of the lonely gap of my teeth
as I slipped him out of me.
It came searching for you like the pest that you are.
I called this stranger your pet name and cried,
It was an accident.
How it still pains me
that you turned out to be a flea only for her.
The bird woman
The one who could leave and still be so present.
So controlling in absence.
But my dear,
you are a bug.
A plague that took years from...
#breakup
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#rejection
#UnrequitedLove
91 reads
2 Comments
Chere-Rene13
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 1:13am
22nd Jan 2025 1:13am
Misunderstood
Misunderstood...Day dreamer...Night thinker. A witch they branded...A woman they couldn't view. Absurd are her ways, so the crowds says. Their cruelty of words parroted echos in her head. These hidden empires which reigns this place she dwells & fell in. Burst of near bloat, tears she restrains from outside feats. Whispering laughter, assorted giggles, secrets never audible, but tones she even hears at home. Nobody batted an eye or cared to believe. She lied to them, lied to herself & took their falsehoods of belief. Heavy are their sighs, knowing their bold face devious lies. They...
#loneliness
#rejection
88 reads
2 Comments
OccultCatalyst
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 4:53am
21st Jan 2025 4:53am
End It Stupid Bitch
#abuse
#anger
#deception
#lust
#rejection
65 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 9:25pm
20th Jan 2025 9:25pm
In cased inside of glass
If you could change your life what would you consider, to change about your own life. FOR it's true that we have the ability and power, to alter our lives and further along, the direction of our lives as well, as our dreams. For sure if you could get one thing right, in your own life what would it be, that you have done that you would, want to be truly undone. FROM the deepness of the hurt and pain, that you caused, and left so many levels of feelings, unattended with emotional scars. That still to this day is lingering, in the dark deepness of some people's, heart and mind that you had...
#confusion
#disappointment
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#rejection
75 reads
0 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:52pm
19th Jan 2025 10:52pm
I been lost
I been lost
So many days without seeing
My father
And I wonder if he will came back to me
Father I am nothing without you
I need you in my life father
What part can you understand father?
That I am lonely without you
Father please return to me
I am now begging you to return
To me
So many days without seeing
My father
And I wonder if he will came back to me
Father I am nothing without you
I need you in my life father
What part can you understand father?
That I am lonely without you
Father please return to me
I am now begging you to return
To me
#dark
#despair
#disappointment
#grief
#rejection
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Northern1
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 1:14am
19th Jan 2025 1:14am
To Be
To be torn from innocence
To be laughed at
To be humiliated
To be doubted
To be doubting self
To be discounted
To be harrassed
To be challenged
To be bullied
To be attacked
To be beaten up
To be discarded
To be spat on
To be judged
To be hated
To be confined
To be raped
To be brave
To be stubborn
To be tough
To be focused
To be persevering
To be better
To be released
To be vindicated
To be a survivor
To be reborn
To be laughed at
To be humiliated
To be doubted
To be doubting self
To be discounted
To be harrassed
To be challenged
To be bullied
To be attacked
To be beaten up
To be discarded
To be spat on
To be judged
To be hated
To be confined
To be raped
To be brave
To be stubborn
To be tough
To be focused
To be persevering
To be better
To be released
To be vindicated
To be a survivor
To be reborn
#bullying
#escape
#healing
#LifeStruggles
#rejection
105 reads
2 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 7:06pm
9th Jan 2025 7:06pm
I choose all of you people
I choose
All of you people
To be my friends
Also we have a lot
In common
I am a Christian
And you people
Are also Christian
From birth
To adult life
Also People I am
God’s poet
And you people
Are also a poet
I go to bed early every
Single night
And you people
Also go to bed early
The next day I wake
Up at 11:00 am
All of you people
Also wake up
At 11:00 am
Also I have my shower
First thing in the morning
I put some body wash
In my sponge
Then I rub my ...
All of you people
To be my friends
Also we have a lot
In common
I am a Christian
And you people
Are also Christian
From birth
To adult life
Also People I am
God’s poet
And you people
Are also a poet
I go to bed early every
Single night
And you people
Also go to bed early
The next day I wake
Up at 11:00 am
All of you people
Also wake up
At 11:00 am
Also I have my shower
First thing in the morning
I put some body wash
In my sponge
Then I rub my ...
#emptiness
#fear
#greed
#loneliness
#rejection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 12:40pm
8th Jan 2025 12:40pm
Be at peace
Be at peace angels from heaven
Be at peace mother
Be at peace my friends
Be at peace my reverend
Be at peace my God
Be at piece my saints
Be at peace birds
Be at peace Mother Nature
Be at peace sea
Be at peace farmers
Be at peace little baby
Be at peace fisherman
Be at peace moon when you shine at night
Stars be at peace also when you shine at night
Birds be at peace when you fly in the sky during the day
Be at peace mother
Be at peace my friends
Be at peace my reverend
Be at peace my God
Be at piece my saints
Be at peace birds
Be at peace Mother Nature
Be at peace sea
Be at peace farmers
Be at peace little baby
Be at peace fisherman
Be at peace moon when you shine at night
Stars be at peace also when you shine at night
Birds be at peace when you fly in the sky during the day
#bittersweet
#boredom
#fear
#frustration
#rejection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 11:17pm
7th Jan 2025 11:17pm
No me ama mais
No me ama mais
Porque my dear friends
It leaves me sad
Knowing that you
No me ama mais
I am also feeling very sad
My dear friends
Now you had abandon me
And never came back to see me
Again
Now I am living in isolation
And I lost the touch of the outside
World
Also now I have to start all over
Making friends again
And it is not going to be easy again
Yes I wonder if the people I chose
To be my friends will accept me
The way I am
Porque my dear friends
It leaves me sad
Knowing that you
No me ama mais
I am also feeling very sad
My dear friends
Now you had abandon me
And never came back to see me
Again
Now I am living in isolation
And I lost the touch of the outside
World
Also now I have to start all over
Making friends again
And it is not going to be easy again
Yes I wonder if the people I chose
To be my friends will accept me
The way I am
#boredom
#frustration
#greed
#rejection
#shame
57 reads
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 10:22am
6th Jan 2025 10:22am
Move on, leave the scene
She snickered in my face
I told her all the things that I felt and she laughed me right out the door
I can still hear her laughing at me
Even when I'm alone, I can hear her cackling like a witch
I want to get out
Get in my car at night and drive an endless road to somewhere but nowhere
Affection is a disease
Don't succumb to it, it will destroy you!
It's for weak fools
I've moved on
I told her all the things that I felt and she laughed me right out the door
I can still hear her laughing at me
Even when I'm alone, I can hear her cackling like a witch
I want to get out
Get in my car at night and drive an endless road to somewhere but nowhere
Affection is a disease
Don't succumb to it, it will destroy you!
It's for weak fools
I've moved on
#fiction
#rejection
#relationships
#shame
#ShortStory
81 reads
4 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 8:59pm
5th Jan 2025 8:59pm
Now is time
Now is time to say to someone I love you
When you see him or her
Now is a good time to celebrate who you were born to be
Now is the good time to say forgiveness to someone that you hurt in the past and
Move on with your life
Now is a good time to learn to love yourself
Now is a good time to discover what you love to do
Now is a good time to worship God
Now it is a good time to pray for the people of the world
Now it is a good time to lend a hand in the community
Now it is a good time to write your feelings in your notebook
Now it is a...
When you see him or her
Now is a good time to celebrate who you were born to be
Now is the good time to say forgiveness to someone that you hurt in the past and
Move on with your life
Now is a good time to learn to love yourself
Now is a good time to discover what you love to do
Now is a good time to worship God
Now it is a good time to pray for the people of the world
Now it is a good time to lend a hand in the community
Now it is a good time to write your feelings in your notebook
Now it is a...
#anger
#boredom
#loneliness
#rejection
#sadness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 8:59pm
5th Jan 2025 8:59pm
Where do I get the courage?
Where do I get the courage?
Where do I get the courage to go on living again?
To come out of my shell?
To pray again?
To smile?
Where do I get the courage to sing again?
Or laugh?
Where do I get the courage to go out again?
To relax again?
To breathe?
Where do I get the courage to love again?
To be free again?
To cook again?
Or look at the blue sky again?
Where do I get the courage to write again?
To wipe out the bad memories?
And put the past behind?
Where do I get the courage to make new friends?
Or...
Where do I get the courage to go on living again?
To come out of my shell?
To pray again?
To smile?
Where do I get the courage to sing again?
Or laugh?
Where do I get the courage to go out again?
To relax again?
To breathe?
Where do I get the courage to love again?
To be free again?
To cook again?
Or look at the blue sky again?
Where do I get the courage to write again?
To wipe out the bad memories?
And put the past behind?
Where do I get the courage to make new friends?
Or...
#disappointment
#emptiness
#loneliness
#regret
#rejection
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