Poems About Rejection Seeking Honest Critique
#rejection
Poems about rejection seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 12:40pm
17th Feb 2025 12:40pm
Treating Love Letters Like Junk Mail
She told the police on her boyfriend
They nailed him with a suitcase full of heroin
He was tried & sent to jail
She was paid in full, the money that she was promised for helping out
She moved into a nice apartment
After a while, she got some letters from him
He didn't know that she was the one that had set him up
His letters were full of declarations of eternal love
The only thing that kept him going was thinking of her each & every day he sat in his rotten, stinking cell
She laughed at the letters and threw them away
After a few...
They nailed him with a suitcase full of heroin
He was tried & sent to jail
She was paid in full, the money that she was promised for helping out
She moved into a nice apartment
After a while, she got some letters from him
He didn't know that she was the one that had set him up
His letters were full of declarations of eternal love
The only thing that kept him going was thinking of her each & every day he sat in his rotten, stinking cell
She laughed at the letters and threw them away
After a few...
#apathy
#heartbroken
#prison
#rejection
#suicide
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15 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 3:46pm
13th Feb 2025 3:46pm
Every hour
Every hour
I am thinking of you
My father
You blessed me
With a nice weather
It is finally sunny today
Thanks God Father
We had already lots of rainy days
During the summer
So father you cooled the earth already
For us
We must tell you that we love the sunny days
We are having a mild summer
I am thinking of you
My father
You blessed me
With a nice weather
It is finally sunny today
Thanks God Father
We had already lots of rainy days
During the summer
So father you cooled the earth already
For us
We must tell you that we love the sunny days
We are having a mild summer
#bittersweet
#boredom
#greed
#rejection
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:27pm
7th Feb 2025 10:27pm
Dear friend
Dear friend
Always remember
That you are a child of God
He is the one that
Created you in his image
A long time ago
So you are beautiful
In God’s eyes
And if you don’t agree
It is ok because God
Has his own opinion
Always remember
That you are a child of God
He is the one that
Created you in his image
A long time ago
So you are beautiful
In God’s eyes
And if you don’t agree
It is ok because God
Has his own opinion
#anger
#disappointment
#loneliness
#regret
#rejection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 1:40am
7th Feb 2025 1:40am
If we can dream
If we can dream
While we sleep
In our cozy
And warm bed
We always dream
With the people
We lost
27 years ago
Who have died
Of cancer
At that time
We bad done
Their funeral
Service
And we bury
Then at
Their graves
Today they live
There new lives
In heaven
Also they are
Not suffering
Anymore
They are resting
In peace
While we sleep
In our cozy
And warm bed
We always dream
With the people
We lost
27 years ago
Who have died
Of cancer
At that time
We bad done
Their funeral
Service
And we bury
Then at
Their graves
Today they live
There new lives
In heaven
Also they are
Not suffering
Anymore
They are resting
In peace
#apathy
#bittersweet
#emptiness
#frustration
#rejection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 11:08am
5th Feb 2025 11:08am
Don't go around
Don't go around
Talking behind my back
To you
Snobbish friends
Because I hate
When you do that
You have no right
To do that
Also when you do that
You also hurt me badly
And I must
Tell you that
I hate that very much
Tell me what I supposed
To do with you
Because I don't trust you
At all
I want to break our friendship
Please go and live your
Life alone
And I will also
Live my life alone
Also, I don't need a friend
Like that
Talking behind my back
To you
Snobbish friends
Because I hate
When you do that
You have no right
To do that
Also when you do that
You also hurt me badly
And I must
Tell you that
I hate that very much
Tell me what I supposed
To do with you
Because I don't trust you
At all
I want to break our friendship
Please go and live your
Life alone
And I will also
Live my life alone
Also, I don't need a friend
Like that
#anger
#disappointment
#jealousy
#rejection
#sadness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 11:07am
5th Feb 2025 11:07am
I am working my way back to you Father
I am working my way back to you Father
I am very sorry for all my bad behavior
But I was frustrated
With the poems I was writing for you
Because I was stuck
Writing poems for you
I started writing some poems for you
But I couldn't get right
So I had to erased it and started again
A few times
Because I wasn't satisfied with
The way it was coming out
Maybe I need to put my brain to rest
And start to vent a little
All day today
I am very sorry for all my bad behavior
But I was frustrated
With the poems I was writing for you
Because I was stuck
Writing poems for you
I started writing some poems for you
But I couldn't get right
So I had to erased it and started again
A few times
Because I wasn't satisfied with
The way it was coming out
Maybe I need to put my brain to rest
And start to vent a little
All day today
#anxiety
#fear
#greed
#loneliness
#rejection
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poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 11:30am
1st Feb 2025 11:30am
When Fake Outshines The Truth
Hoof-printed trails speak of goats, sheeps and livestock herds,and the small pawprints of sloughi left behind..easily recognized.I take the route daily trodden, the way of my thoughts to browse the forest woods, and the mountain rocks...
overwhelmed with mundane vocabulary, idle speeches,vain chatting, the brain is about to collapse into fruitless abyss,dehydrated, i skip into the forest woods, the open lands, open their hands to my muse, fuel my heart with the most truthful feelings, the mountain is silently friendly and warm...
...
The wilderness...
overwhelmed with mundane vocabulary, idle speeches,vain chatting, the brain is about to collapse into fruitless abyss,dehydrated, i skip into the forest woods, the open lands, open their hands to my muse, fuel my heart with the most truthful feelings, the mountain is silently friendly and warm...
...
The wilderness...
#anxiety
#frustration
#rejection #shame
#rejection #shame
162 reads
5 Comments
Damselinhandcuffs
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 6:47am
31st Jan 2025 6:47am
Silent Peak
How much is left for you to feel?
Isn't this lonesomeness killing you with patience my love?
Eating away the molten layers
The pretty walls within your skin
How can you ever feel satisfaction still laying next to him?
Touching yourself
Keeping company to the growing empty spaces
That used to be so full-
Full of love
The deep taste of a shared future
The sweet pallet of its laughter
How much is left to feel?
As he lays sleeping...
Isn't this lonesomeness killing you with patience my love?
Eating away the molten layers
The pretty walls within your skin
How can you ever feel satisfaction still laying next to him?
Touching yourself
Keeping company to the growing empty spaces
That used to be so full-
Full of love
The deep taste of a shared future
The sweet pallet of its laughter
How much is left to feel?
As he lays sleeping...
#love
#MovingOn
#rejection
#relationships
#UnrequitedLove
142 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 00:04am
31st Jan 2025 00:04am
Just Call It Quits!
Balding age of wisdom and the world grows old
Hair continues to fall out, the truth has been told
I'll continue to repeat myself, hopefully it makes you forget
Running on empty is rewarding, but not cool if you're on a jet
Cataracts, everyone is a grey massive blur
Watching porn, makes you realize your an amateur
You make yourself believe, you're the one for the job
Boss spits in your face, points you to the door-knob
Finding all it's worth in a lonely worthless world
You continue to get rejected by hard up, lonely girls
The time...
Hair continues to fall out, the truth has been told
I'll continue to repeat myself, hopefully it makes you forget
Running on empty is rewarding, but not cool if you're on a jet
Cataracts, everyone is a grey massive blur
Watching porn, makes you realize your an amateur
You make yourself believe, you're the one for the job
Boss spits in your face, points you to the door-knob
Finding all it's worth in a lonely worthless world
You continue to get rejected by hard up, lonely girls
The time...
#aging
#rejection
#rhyming #TruthOfLife
#rhyming #TruthOfLife
112 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 10:24pm
30th Jan 2025 10:24pm
love hurts so much
Why we can't find someone who means what they say, and not do anything to prove to you how are they gonna, be able to know what you need and really want, in your life and world. 🌍 For it's seems that nowadays it's getting harder, to tell the differences between what is good and bad, or if it's real or fake which makes it that harder to know, on who we should trust between the lines of what is the truth or lies. For tell me why we can't find, the real genuine deepness of what it meant to have a real commitment, with real consistency and real communications skills. TO articulate what...
#disappointment
#emptiness
#heartbroken
#rejection
#StreamOfConsciousness
97 reads
4 Comments
NP_NP
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 2:08pm
25th Jan 2025 2:08pm
Russians
In the black and white of an endless film, I long to be your red rose, vivid, surreal. The last glimpse you catch before closing your eyes, The final breath shared under stormy skies.
I have never fought so fiercely, so true, Until the battle of words was between me and you. In the war of hearts, we wield the knives, Each strike cutting deep, yet we both survive.
I hold the blade to your chest, you to my throat, A silent scream as our souls take note. I beg you to do it, to end this rift, But you, with your surrender, offer a white handkerchief.
You fall to your knees,...
I have never fought so fiercely, so true, Until the battle of words was between me and you. In the war of hearts, we wield the knives, Each strike cutting deep, yet we both survive.
I hold the blade to your chest, you to my throat, A silent scream as our souls take note. I beg you to do it, to end this rift, But you, with your surrender, offer a white handkerchief.
You fall to your knees,...
#heartbroken
#hurt
#love
#rejection
#UnrequitedLove
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BaldyBrown
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 8:29am
23rd Jan 2025 8:29am
Right By the Balls
Going on sixty-four, I've developed a dangerous penchant for change. Captain sparky would quickly point out the fact that probably 97 percent of us at this age have a steady bearing away from the same, and for obvious reasons. Indeed, my most resent plunge into uncharted waters has found me clinging to a frail piece of bark with nearly all of my earthly possessions and financial assets lost at sea. Like a repulsive shot of back-woods corn mash, I love it. My mother was smoking something when I was in the oven.
Her & I discovered that our dreams collided, so I’ve taken my...
Her & I discovered that our dreams collided, so I’ve taken my...
#betrayal
#disappointment
#gratitude
#MovingOn
#rejection
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