Poems About Rebirth Seeking Honest Critique
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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 3:35pm
19th Jan 2025 3:35pm
Indelible Lines
Oh, how much i long
For the vintage sound of the olden music
The plaintive violin, under the gentle caress
A stroke of a piano-keys, by slender fingers
Of which the joy is not the less..
Oh, what a craving i do have !!!
Golden fields sway like sea-waves
The waltzing dance of the Summer wheat
Ripened under May's heat
The cheerful grasshoppers' sizzling shriek..
With hot chirping, skipping
Wheezing, such a cosy bossom
Where throbbing sentiments live
...
For the vintage sound of the olden music
The plaintive violin, under the gentle caress
A stroke of a piano-keys, by slender fingers
Of which the joy is not the less..
Oh, what a craving i do have !!!
Golden fields sway like sea-waves
The waltzing dance of the Summer wheat
Ripened under May's heat
The cheerful grasshoppers' sizzling shriek..
With hot chirping, skipping
Wheezing, such a cosy bossom
Where throbbing sentiments live
...
#faith
#morality
#philosophical
#rebirth
#spiritual
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PAR
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 6:44pm
12th Jan 2025 6:44pm
Glitch
Toep, the drow, with eyes like midnight,
wanders smlaer where swodahs peerc
in his grasp, taolfa a secret tight
guarding mysteries in the ecnelis deeps.
He traverses smaerd, a phantom's guide,
in the labyrinth of the dnim's design,
carrying taolfa, where samgine hide,
in the dnim, where worlds eniwtne.
Whispering through the sliev of thought...
Toep, the keeper of smlaer neesnu.
In his presence, reality is wrought,
a dance of swodahs, where truth has neeb.
wanders smlaer where swodahs peerc
in his grasp, taolfa a secret tight
guarding mysteries in the ecnelis deeps.
He traverses smaerd, a phantom's guide,
in the labyrinth of the dnim's design,
carrying taolfa, where samgine hide,
in the dnim, where worlds eniwtne.
Whispering through the sliev of thought...
Toep, the keeper of smlaer neesnu.
In his presence, reality is wrought,
a dance of swodahs, where truth has neeb.
#rebellion
#rebirth
#revenge
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12 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 6:57am
12th Jan 2025 6:57am
It’s Okay
We all die and it’s okay
It’s okay it’s okay
To be afraid..to be afraid
But we all die and it’s okay
We can’t get away
From our own destiny
Maybe there’s some tall grass
In the garden of Eden
When we die
We’ll live for eternity
Not much of a Bible man
But I’m starting to believe
It can’t be for nothing
Why we’re still standing
Maybe there is some tall green grass
In the garden of Eden
Maybe there is some tall green grass
Leading us to heaven
When we die ...
It’s okay it’s okay
To be afraid..to be afraid
But we all die and it’s okay
We can’t get away
From our own destiny
Maybe there’s some tall grass
In the garden of Eden
When we die
We’ll live for eternity
Not much of a Bible man
But I’m starting to believe
It can’t be for nothing
Why we’re still standing
Maybe there is some tall green grass
In the garden of Eden
Maybe there is some tall green grass
Leading us to heaven
When we die ...
#death
#heaven
#rebirth
#redemption
#spiritual
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 2:47am
6th Jan 2025 2:47am
Forgotten World
These barren cries whisper plains,
Despair. This silence, artic, yet brightens refrain.
Hushed dreams glisten; they surge, then blooming,
Horizons where shadows dance, fading into softly.
Despair. This silence, artic, yet brightens refrain,
Grainy laughter spins through sands of grains.
Horizons where shadows dance, fading into softly,
Seamless yet prickled, tender echoes still seas.
Grainy laughter spins through sands of grains,
Turquoise dawns flood sepia skies.
Seamless yet prickled, tender echoes still seas, ...
Despair. This silence, artic, yet brightens refrain.
Hushed dreams glisten; they surge, then blooming,
Horizons where shadows dance, fading into softly.
Despair. This silence, artic, yet brightens refrain,
Grainy laughter spins through sands of grains.
Horizons where shadows dance, fading into softly,
Seamless yet prickled, tender echoes still seas.
Grainy laughter spins through sands of grains,
Turquoise dawns flood sepia skies.
Seamless yet prickled, tender echoes still seas, ...
#despair
#hope
#rebirth
98 reads
5 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 10:51pm
25th Dec 2024 10:51pm
Here we are in deep thoughts
How much does the deepness of the brain 🧠 that holds the mind, see within the very deepness of our lives, of the things. THAT we all have to learn to just to navigate, through the process of being able to just to survive, in this space and time of our lives. 🙏 FOR real that is the truth of the truth that has, been guiding you in ways that you can't even imagine. 😞 YET it is necessary to understand the whole situation, from start to finish for sure we are here. Facing one another as we exchange thoughts, from our own personal network, that has become the most powerful...
#faith
#fate
#morality
#philosophical
#rebirth
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 3:18am
22nd Dec 2024 3:18am
Spiritual Awakening
TO BE GRATEFUL AND THANKFUL AND BLESSED YET WHY is it that there is ways to go to escape, from the negativity and drama, but yet it doesn't matter what you think 🤔 and still feel. For sure we have to learn to truly navigate, through the process of the SUBCONSCIOUSNESS OF THOSE THINGS. THAT SEEMS TO JUST DRAW US IN SO many LEVELS OF CONTROL OVER US. YET I have found what I need to sustain life 🙏 for it's the truth of the nonsense that doesn't matter 😔 but yet it does sometimes. 🤨 For sure everything that we have to go through, is precious to life that sometimes...
#faith
#rebirth
#religion
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 00:03am
15th Dec 2024 00:03am
My life is in your HANDS
From within the very depth of my own thoughts, 🤔 here I am as I am just a mortal man. 💪 Strong in my beliefs of my faith, 🙏 it's that reason I am sitting here watching the world, 🌍 as it changes into a eclipse of a beautiful dream. YET now that is only a illogical illustration of thoughts. 🤔 For the deepness of the mind and heart and soul, can only take so much before it BREAKS. 💔 For it surely goes to the deepness of the feelings and emotions, and the deepness of my thoughts and insight and imagination. For sure I am grateful and thankful and...
#faith
#fate
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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5 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 8:30am
6th Dec 2024 8:30am
The True Story Of Adam And Eve
Another lovely day in paradise.
The sky is coloured in orangy red
When from their wildflower bed
Adam and Eve gently rise.
All of nature breathes peace.
Playfully a fox chases a hare.
Sweet birdsong lingers in the air.
Sun warms a cat’s golden fleece.
A stroll through Garden Eden they take
With a lively mind and carefree.
When Eve stops in front of a tree,
On one branch lies a glittering snake.
"Careful, Eve! From the evil run away!"
“It’s a harmless beauty, can't you see?
I'm sure it's the...
The sky is coloured in orangy red
When from their wildflower bed
Adam and Eve gently rise.
All of nature breathes peace.
Playfully a fox chases a hare.
Sweet birdsong lingers in the air.
Sun warms a cat’s golden fleece.
A stroll through Garden Eden they take
With a lively mind and carefree.
When Eve stops in front of a tree,
On one branch lies a glittering snake.
"Careful, Eve! From the evil run away!"
“It’s a harmless beauty, can't you see?
I'm sure it's the...
#faith
#rebirth
#spiritual
153 reads
8 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 00:20am
6th Dec 2024 00:20am
FEELINGS FEEL THIS I THIS ME I AM NO MORE. (12-5-2024, 2:00am; Palm Springs, California)
feelings feel
these feelings i feel
who is this
i
this i
who feels
all these inner
feelings i feel
that gently flow
or flash flood through me
at times
who is this
me
i ve so long
now
experientially known
since day one
on
this me
this i
i claim to be
is this me
i
or this i
me
or is there perhaps
no real
i or me
no me nor i
in truth
at all
in this illusory dream
i m in
but rather only
just all...
these feelings i feel
who is this
i
this i
who feels
all these inner
feelings i feel
that gently flow
or flash flood through me
at times
who is this
me
i ve so long
now
experientially known
since day one
on
this me
this i
i claim to be
is this me
i
or this i
me
or is there perhaps
no real
i or me
no me nor i
in truth
at all
in this illusory dream
i m in
but rather only
just all...
#earth
#evolution
#LifeChangingMoment
#rebirth
#spiritual
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IanakaOlTexas
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 5:53am
28th Nov 2024 5:53am
Hearts
In the shadows of a love once bright,
Where whispers of the past take flight,
I wandered lost, a heart in pain,
Through shores of sorrow, in the rain.
Each memory a thorn that stings,
Of broken wings, woken dreams
A love that soared, then fell apart,
Left echoes deep within my heart.
But time, the healer, eventually came,
To mend the wounds, and the brain
With every dawn, a chance to grow,
To find the strength to let it all go.
Through sleepless nights and endless sighs,
I learned to see with clearer eyes, ...
Where whispers of the past take flight,
I wandered lost, a heart in pain,
Through shores of sorrow, in the rain.
Each memory a thorn that stings,
Of broken wings, woken dreams
A love that soared, then fell apart,
Left echoes deep within my heart.
But time, the healer, eventually came,
To mend the wounds, and the brain
With every dawn, a chance to grow,
To find the strength to let it all go.
Through sleepless nights and endless sighs,
I learned to see with clearer eyes, ...
#love
#rebirth
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 4:18am
20th Nov 2024 4:18am
Rebirth
Death is not destruction.
The wheel of life turns endlessly.
From smoke comes fire, from fire comes ash,
From ash springs life again.
Breath is born anew.
The fall of a tree is death,
The sprout of a seed is life.
Momentary sorrow, eternal peace.
The eternal rhythm of time.
The soul is neither born nor dies.
It flows through the ages.
Like a river to the ocean,
Life and soul journey toward liberation.
Rebirth again, death again.
The body fades, the soul endures.
Creation is infinite,...
The wheel of life turns endlessly.
From smoke comes fire, from fire comes ash,
From ash springs life again.
Breath is born anew.
The fall of a tree is death,
The sprout of a seed is life.
Momentary sorrow, eternal peace.
The eternal rhythm of time.
The soul is neither born nor dies.
It flows through the ages.
Like a river to the ocean,
Life and soul journey toward liberation.
Rebirth again, death again.
The body fades, the soul endures.
Creation is infinite,...
#rebirth
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drone
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 9:11am
17th Nov 2024 9:11am
Gurdjieff
There are many ways
One can begin
To wake up
But there is a way
That goes straight
To the heart
The 4th way
NO mass protests
NO sticks and stones
The silent Rebellion Way
One can begin
To wake up
But there is a way
That goes straight
To the heart
The 4th way
NO mass protests
NO sticks and stones
The silent Rebellion Way
#courage
#morality
#motivational
#rebirth
#strength
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