Poems About Rebirth Seeking Honest Critique
#rebirth
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Nov 2024 9:51pm
12th Nov 2024 9:51pm
THE WORLD I CREATED
Here I am above in the clouds of heaven, looking down upon the world 🌍 that I once created long ago. Yet now it has changed right before my own eyes. 👁️👁️ Yet it's unrecognizable like a haunted 🏠 house, on Halloween night when the freaks come out in the day time and night time. As change will be the outcome, of what you use to be able to have in life. Don't fear my children's, I am here for you all for a righteous blessing 🙏 is happening right before your eyes. 👁️👁️ For sure there is a blessing in disguise,...
#devil
#faith
#God
#rebirth
#TruthOfLife
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Sappho
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 8:36am
10th Nov 2024 8:36am
Diamond Processing
They judged and humiliated you
They tried to shape you according to
Their own narrow-minded world view
Their disregard tortured you very much
Your collision with social roles
Put you under enormous pressure
This way giving birth to a
Precious raw diamond
Despite all adversities and hardships
You embarked on a journey of
Finding and fulfilling your
Lífe's purpose
Your suffering scrubbed away
The magma of prejudices and
The mud of expectations and demands
The shining diamond became visible ...
They tried to shape you according to
Their own narrow-minded world view
Their disregard tortured you very much
Your collision with social roles
Put you under enormous pressure
This way giving birth to a
Precious raw diamond
Despite all adversities and hardships
You embarked on a journey of
Finding and fulfilling your
Lífe's purpose
Your suffering scrubbed away
The magma of prejudices and
The mud of expectations and demands
The shining diamond became visible ...
#rebirth
#spiritual
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6 Comments
CarrionCrow44
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 5:42am
7th Nov 2024 5:42am
Got No Say
Been forever now
Since a voice held a vote
Can’t recall when us became them
Well, you got no say
The colors dim
And streets get muddy
From shrapnel thrown around
Well, you got no say
Hate those ways
Deceptive and terrible too
Long gone is saying I told you so
Because it came true
You can’t run
There’s no hiding now
So rise up before they bury you
Fight the submission
Tax the wealthy
Rubber band their future
Let them crawl with no destination
Now, you...
Since a voice held a vote
Can’t recall when us became them
Well, you got no say
The colors dim
And streets get muddy
From shrapnel thrown around
Well, you got no say
Hate those ways
Deceptive and terrible too
Long gone is saying I told you so
Because it came true
You can’t run
There’s no hiding now
So rise up before they bury you
Fight the submission
Tax the wealthy
Rubber band their future
Let them crawl with no destination
Now, you...
#rebirth
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 10:26am
22nd Oct 2024 10:26am
HERE AS ONE FLAME
It is here I am as one flame 🔥 as I continue, to pray upon a positive journey and travel and walk, through this vortex of my own mind 🧠 As I leave behind me the deepness of the truth of a different world, that I can't shut down the very stream of events in this world. 🌎 THAT I could never really imagine that I wouldn't be able to recognize, that I can't really believe within my own eyes of which I see. 👁️👁️ For it's necessary that we must really understand, that there is a place that we must go to escape. FROM the negativity of the...
#faith
#philosophical
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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2 Comments
slipalong
Poem Published
21st Oct 2024 8:34pm
21st Oct 2024 8:34pm
Your coming from beyond the grave
The grave with bars interred.
your life was taken, just removed.
my prayers with longings more than words
to meet again, stand in your shoes.
My brother Roger was taken by suicide eight years ago, before covid was invented, before the epidemic of Woke generations mental trauma. A hard-working man, but always an enigma. Artist, collector, avid car boot sale attendee, the main Manchester to Coventry line was closed at rush hour to remove his body from the line, hit by the 08:10 express.
Each year we lay the table with an empty seat, light black candles,...
your life was taken, just removed.
my prayers with longings more than words
to meet again, stand in your shoes.
My brother Roger was taken by suicide eight years ago, before covid was invented, before the epidemic of Woke generations mental trauma. A hard-working man, but always an enigma. Artist, collector, avid car boot sale attendee, the main Manchester to Coventry line was closed at rush hour to remove his body from the line, hit by the 08:10 express.
Each year we lay the table with an empty seat, light black candles,...
#death
#graveyard
#rebirth
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 3:41pm
17th Oct 2024 3:41pm
TAKE NOTHING FOR GRANTED
AS I continue to stand and fight I get a second chance at life. 🙏 For they say that we have to learn to be able, to be strong enough to find the strength of endurance. For sure days will be hard yet there are those things, that gives us the very motivation to fight through the process of the hurt and pain. For sure anything worth fighting for is work, yet in the end it's necessary to understand what you must do. Even when it's something that we must never give up. 🤨 For I've learned from this experience of the changes, that my soul and body and mind and heart and spiritual...
#faith
#rebirth
#redemption
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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drone
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 9:44am
9th Oct 2024 9:44am
After
One must Understand
The difference between
Being guided
And being ordered
The parables of the wise
Never happened
They are simply
Choices
That are left
In your own Hands
Being ordered
By whatever higher power
You Believe
Simply means
There will be
Consequences
For you
And your family
IF you do not Obey
And believe
TO be or not to be
A Slave
LIKE the walking dead
The Choice is yours
IF you believe
You'll wake up
After ...
The difference between
Being guided
And being ordered
The parables of the wise
Never happened
They are simply
Choices
That are left
In your own Hands
Being ordered
By whatever higher power
You Believe
Simply means
There will be
Consequences
For you
And your family
IF you do not Obey
And believe
TO be or not to be
A Slave
LIKE the walking dead
The Choice is yours
IF you believe
You'll wake up
After ...
#morality
#philosophical
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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cabcool
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 6:39am
25th Sep 2024 6:39am
remOrse
The skeletons of the past must not hold back the dream of a new life, even
though fear and regret, guilt and remorse may unsettle us during the effort to
give our future a new home.”—Erik Pevernagie
i have no time to stop and count
the number of the wrongs,
or measure the intensity
of all the harm i’ve caused;
to test how high i’ve placed myself
above the needs of throngs,
or fathom depths i’ve stooped to hurt
poor men whose...
though fear and regret, guilt and remorse may unsettle us during the effort to
give our future a new home.”—Erik Pevernagie
i have no time to stop and count
the number of the wrongs,
or measure the intensity
of all the harm i’ve caused;
to test how high i’ve placed myself
above the needs of throngs,
or fathom depths i’ve stooped to hurt
poor men whose...
#forgiveness
#ImSorry
#LifeChangingMoment
#rebirth
#regret
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oldmanG
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 5:09am
22nd Sep 2024 5:09am
God is using me
#rebirth
#redemption
#religion #spiritual
#religion #spiritual
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InDreamz
Poem Published
10th Sep 2024 5:05pm
10th Sep 2024 5:05pm
Death
In the womb
of death
I shall slumber
like a baby,
surrounded by an amniotic
ocean of serenity.
Learn, grow, develop
in my waking,
and be nourished through
the umbilical cord
connected to the spiritual realm
until
I'm ready for rebirth
Ready to experience
heaven 'n' hell
again...
of death
I shall slumber
like a baby,
surrounded by an amniotic
ocean of serenity.
Learn, grow, develop
in my waking,
and be nourished through
the umbilical cord
connected to the spiritual realm
until
I'm ready for rebirth
Ready to experience
heaven 'n' hell
again...
#death
#philosophical
#rebirth
#sleep
#spiritual
225 reads
19 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
7th Sep 2024 4:17am
7th Sep 2024 4:17am
LIKE LACTOSE LAVA FLOW (11-9-1995; Galveston Island, Texas)
wordz circle
wordz spiral
in thermal helixez
like spiraling d n a
as they drift and fall out
of mind z sky z
in a sudden spontaneous
gushing release
of incontinent subliminal wordz
in theze frequent language spillz
az iz the case
in this one here
like lactoze lava flow
like the black ink buzzardz they are
opportunistically scavenging themzelvez
and anything else
they can sink their insatiable
lettered teeth into
az an effectively therapeutic
survival strategic devize
to pick my life...
wordz spiral
in thermal helixez
like spiraling d n a
as they drift and fall out
of mind z sky z
in a sudden spontaneous
gushing release
of incontinent subliminal wordz
in theze frequent language spillz
az iz the case
in this one here
like lactoze lava flow
like the black ink buzzardz they are
opportunistically scavenging themzelvez
and anything else
they can sink their insatiable
lettered teeth into
az an effectively therapeutic
survival strategic devize
to pick my life...
#cancer
#fate
#PTSD
#rebirth
#spiritual
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OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
6th Aug 2024 2:07am
6th Aug 2024 2:07am
WAITING GAME (6-17-2001; Galveston Island, Texas)
such complexity
stuck in density
we call this world
beneath it s spell
we re only pupae
in these temporal shells
chrysalistic vehicles
of our eternal souls
despite free will
we wait in these cells
until silent metamorphosis occurs
then after one final moment
of suspended brief darkness
along our journey s way
in which complete transformation
of physical being s form
shape shiftingly transpires ...
stuck in density
we call this world
beneath it s spell
we re only pupae
in these temporal shells
chrysalistic vehicles
of our eternal souls
despite free will
we wait in these cells
until silent metamorphosis occurs
then after one final moment
of suspended brief darkness
along our journey s way
in which complete transformation
of physical being s form
shape shiftingly transpires ...
#evolution
#philosophical
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
147 reads
2 Comments
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