Rap by Top Critiquers Poems
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rap by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
In The Game~with the Badass DevilsChild
#dark
#evil
#rap
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Damn These Bars
Freeze! Please don’t light that match or I’ll call dispatch
These bars may catch ire fire and there is no escape hatch
Watch out for the flames when I aim to tame then proclaim -
It’s my turn to burn because I yearn to play this rapping game
My vocabulary can be very hairy so be wary of how I spill
Still my quill is chill with a thrill when I dig and run this drill
Is just that the word stirs and spurs running like herds grazing
But writing rhymes is like fighting crimes with all guns blazing
Don’t blink because this ink will sync in with...
These bars may catch ire fire and there is no escape hatch
Watch out for the flames when I aim to tame then proclaim -
It’s my turn to burn because I yearn to play this rapping game
My vocabulary can be very hairy so be wary of how I spill
Still my quill is chill with a thrill when I dig and run this drill
Is just that the word stirs and spurs running like herds grazing
But writing rhymes is like fighting crimes with all guns blazing
Don’t blink because this ink will sync in with...
#funny
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry #rap
#WritingPoetry #rap
1058 reads
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Honoring The Legends Of Gangsta’s Paradise
These motherfuckas must don’t know who they are fucking with
What, you think a sista can’t have an education, and still roll up on some good hard dick
Taking you down with a head shot hit
Making it happen when you come taking that yang in my hood
I will fuck you up without recognition so don’t get my mission misunderstood
You know how I represent myself, flying bullets have no names on them once felt
Moving the coke, bitches, and gun whipping a snitch, cementing his shoes so his crew know his ass been straight...
What, you think a sista can’t have an education, and still roll up on some good hard dick
Taking you down with a head shot hit
Making it happen when you come taking that yang in my hood
I will fuck you up without recognition so don’t get my mission misunderstood
You know how I represent myself, flying bullets have no names on them once felt
Moving the coke, bitches, and gun whipping a snitch, cementing his shoes so his crew know his ass been straight...
#city
#rap
#culture
693 reads
9 Comments
A Night of Horror Part 2 of 2
#abuse
#LifeChangingMoment
#passion
#rap
#sex
108 reads
3 Comments
Practice Bars 2
So buzzed - it's insane.
Smoked up - hit the J.
Flow comes - NBA.
Post up - hit the J.
Shawty "hit on me", like she put a hit on me.
Surely "Swiss army", I'm "reserved to switch on," see.
Her face was "drag" like cheap queer.
She made Bruh "gag" like cheap beer.
Her taste was "ass" like seat smeared.
She may be "had" like scheme here.
Y'all got "dive bars" - poor service.
Dawg gon' "bite hard" on "curbed...
Smoked up - hit the J.
Flow comes - NBA.
Post up - hit the J.
Shawty "hit on me", like she put a hit on me.
Surely "Swiss army", I'm "reserved to switch on," see.
Her face was "drag" like cheap queer.
She made Bruh "gag" like cheap beer.
Her taste was "ass" like seat smeared.
She may be "had" like scheme here.
Y'all got "dive bars" - poor service.
Dawg gon' "bite hard" on "curbed...
#funny
#lyrics
#metaphor
#rap
#rhyming
279 reads
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In The Game~with the talented DevilsChild
#dark
#evil
#rap
554 reads
9 Comments
Sinister Sins of Poetry
I’m considered by many as half man and half motherfucka
So to you sensitive ass bitches both sides will never love ya’,
“On that starting line so to the disrespectful fucka I’m going in first
Putting in the work so bruh-bruh prepare for the hurt,
“Not only do I have one middle finger, but I have two
No explanation-you know what the sign language translates too,
“So it’s on a motherfucka if they wanna catch a double disrespect
If not take your medicine and go get some uncomfortable rest,
“I send motherfuckas to bed...
So to you sensitive ass bitches both sides will never love ya’,
“On that starting line so to the disrespectful fucka I’m going in first
Putting in the work so bruh-bruh prepare for the hurt,
“Not only do I have one middle finger, but I have two
No explanation-you know what the sign language translates too,
“So it’s on a motherfucka if they wanna catch a double disrespect
If not take your medicine and go get some uncomfortable rest,
“I send motherfuckas to bed...
#rap
481 reads
4 Comments
SHOOK
you can call me a stan
I love me some Eminem
more so his slept on stuff
"Buffalo Bill" and "My Darling" can't be touched
listen to that and tell me he ain't a rap god
Kanye has a few and Drake has a few
but really they're just not my style
Kendrick Lamar gets some love
and Lil Wayne is a bit of a guilty pleasure
but I'm more into the old school
power houses like NWA, Wu-Tang
and Bone Thugs
their flow would make anyone want to be
an M.C.
not to mention Redman is a class all his own ...
I love me some Eminem
more so his slept on stuff
"Buffalo Bill" and "My Darling" can't be touched
listen to that and tell me he ain't a rap god
Kanye has a few and Drake has a few
but really they're just not my style
Kendrick Lamar gets some love
and Lil Wayne is a bit of a guilty pleasure
but I'm more into the old school
power houses like NWA, Wu-Tang
and Bone Thugs
their flow would make anyone want to be
an M.C.
not to mention Redman is a class all his own ...
#music
#rap
#MyInspiration
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Duck
#rap
90 reads
2 Comments
Disney Things
Just woke up, I was sleeping, like a real beauty
On my Aladdin flow, daddy come ride my magic carpet
Money ain't a issue, I just got that notification
Here comes another deposit
Serving little mermaid baby come and take a tour in my sea
Use the gills if you need to breath into me from down under
Please take a swim into my budding rose, like your name is Flounder
Diamonds sparkle so bright, like Cinderella's slipper
A true Belle of the ball knows how to tame a beast
Step out of line and he will make sure you will lay deceased ...
On my Aladdin flow, daddy come ride my magic carpet
Money ain't a issue, I just got that notification
Here comes another deposit
Serving little mermaid baby come and take a tour in my sea
Use the gills if you need to breath into me from down under
Please take a swim into my budding rose, like your name is Flounder
Diamonds sparkle so bright, like Cinderella's slipper
A true Belle of the ball knows how to tame a beast
Step out of line and he will make sure you will lay deceased ...
#rap
591 reads
4 Comments
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