Rap by Top Critiquers Poems
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rap by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Divergence is a Bitch
I lost my mind and found my soul
In all the strange twists and turns in life
It was the path I overlooked
The path riddled with stones and boulders
Tribulations
Without words and warmth
Whose gullies and trenches seemed too steep
And lessons seemed too long
I chose not to follow
Circumstances, life and time had not been on my side
(I wandered the earth alone)
In my haste I chose the path taken by others
Whose well traveled roads offered safety and comfort
And discovered a journey void of color
Whose pace...
In all the strange twists and turns in life
It was the path I overlooked
The path riddled with stones and boulders
Tribulations
Without words and warmth
Whose gullies and trenches seemed too steep
And lessons seemed too long
I chose not to follow
Circumstances, life and time had not been on my side
(I wandered the earth alone)
In my haste I chose the path taken by others
Whose well traveled roads offered safety and comfort
And discovered a journey void of color
Whose pace...
#determination
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
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178 reads
5 Comments
In The Game~with the Badass DevilsChild

#dark
#evil
#rap
693 reads
7 Comments
Real Vampires

#dark
#evil
#horror
#rap
#vampires
146 reads
1 Comment
Damn These Bars
Freeze! Please don’t light that match or I’ll call dispatch
These bars may catch ire fire and there is no escape hatch
Watch out for the flames when I aim to tame then proclaim -
It’s my turn to burn because I yearn to play this rapping game
My vocabulary can be very hairy so be wary of how I spill
Still my quill is chill with a thrill when I dig and run this drill
Is just that the word stirs and spurs running like herds grazing
But writing rhymes is like fighting crimes with all guns blazing
Don’t blink because this ink will sync in with...
These bars may catch ire fire and there is no escape hatch
Watch out for the flames when I aim to tame then proclaim -
It’s my turn to burn because I yearn to play this rapping game
My vocabulary can be very hairy so be wary of how I spill
Still my quill is chill with a thrill when I dig and run this drill
Is just that the word stirs and spurs running like herds grazing
But writing rhymes is like fighting crimes with all guns blazing
Don’t blink because this ink will sync in with...
#funny
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry #rap
#WritingPoetry #rap
1111 reads
10 Comments
Sinister Sins of Poetry
I’m considered by many as half man and half motherfucka
So to you sensitive ass bitches both sides will never love ya’,
“On that starting line so to the disrespectful fucka I’m going in first
Putting in the work so bruh-bruh prepare for the hurt,
“Not only do I have one middle finger, but I have two
No explanation-you know what the sign language translates too,
“So it’s on a motherfucka if they wanna catch a double disrespect
If not take your medicine and go get some uncomfortable rest,
“I send motherfuckas to bed...
So to you sensitive ass bitches both sides will never love ya’,
“On that starting line so to the disrespectful fucka I’m going in first
Putting in the work so bruh-bruh prepare for the hurt,
“Not only do I have one middle finger, but I have two
No explanation-you know what the sign language translates too,
“So it’s on a motherfucka if they wanna catch a double disrespect
If not take your medicine and go get some uncomfortable rest,
“I send motherfuckas to bed...
#rap
662 reads
4 Comments
Honoring The Legends Of Gangsta’s Paradise
These motherfuckas must don’t know who they are fucking with
What, you think a sista can’t have an education, and still roll up on some good hard dick
Taking you down with a head shot hit
Making it happen when you come taking that yang in my hood
I will fuck you up without recognition so don’t get my mission misunderstood
You know how I represent myself, flying bullets have no names on them once felt
Moving the coke, bitches, and gun whipping a snitch, cementing his shoes so his crew know his ass been straight...
What, you think a sista can’t have an education, and still roll up on some good hard dick
Taking you down with a head shot hit
Making it happen when you come taking that yang in my hood
I will fuck you up without recognition so don’t get my mission misunderstood
You know how I represent myself, flying bullets have no names on them once felt
Moving the coke, bitches, and gun whipping a snitch, cementing his shoes so his crew know his ass been straight...
#city
#rap
#culture
756 reads
9 Comments
A Night of Horror Part 2 of 2

#abuse
#LifeChangingMoment
#passion
#rap
#sex
207 reads
3 Comments
Duck

#rap
187 reads
2 Comments
Practice Bars 2
So buzzed - it's insane.
Smoked up - hit the J.
Flow comes - NBA.
Post up - hit the J.
Shawty "hit on me", like she put a hit on me.
Surely "Swiss army", I'm "reserved to switch on," see.
Her face was "drag" like cheap queer.
She made Bruh "gag" like cheap beer.
Her taste was "ass" like seat smeared.
She may be "had" like scheme here.
Y'all got "dive bars" - poor service.
Dawg gon' "bite hard" on "curbed...
Smoked up - hit the J.
Flow comes - NBA.
Post up - hit the J.
Shawty "hit on me", like she put a hit on me.
Surely "Swiss army", I'm "reserved to switch on," see.
Her face was "drag" like cheap queer.
She made Bruh "gag" like cheap beer.
Her taste was "ass" like seat smeared.
She may be "had" like scheme here.
Y'all got "dive bars" - poor service.
Dawg gon' "bite hard" on "curbed...
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#rhyming
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