Poems About Rainbows Seeking Honest Critique
#rainbow
Poems about rainbows seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Winning

#happiness
#BDSM
#rainbow
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The Wait
anarchy of soul rebels within...
I seek solace in nature
an open sky, trees vibrating green
guardians of the plane
discussing fate
whispers rustle their leaves
It's light enough now
Peering at what is right
The mighty redwoods
have seen it all
The deep abyss
holding all its secrets
takes a moment to comment
on the three earth revolutions
Nature sings on her own channel
with a memory of ages
broadcasting peace to the infant humans
Restless souls waiting
for the creator to...
I seek solace in nature
an open sky, trees vibrating green
guardians of the plane
discussing fate
whispers rustle their leaves
It's light enough now
Peering at what is right
The mighty redwoods
have seen it all
The deep abyss
holding all its secrets
takes a moment to comment
on the three earth revolutions
Nature sings on her own channel
with a memory of ages
broadcasting peace to the infant humans
Restless souls waiting
for the creator to...
#love
#trees
#sky
#rainbow
#nature
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Incorporated Corpse I Came
I carry carƞage
in carnations; crisp
corsages of cremation
4 cultivar and cull-curation:
carrion in celeḅratįon... I crew
the creeping crypt's caụsation
(cold, consţant, calculations) and
crash the carnival's coronation:
acute-coronary calcification.
By colt, I collate cult cathedrals;
coļlapꜱe them in capsized cerebrals
ȯf Crowley Coffee / cannabidiol keto
& computer-crafted cradle credos...
crụshing the curtain's christening curse,
cut clinically-clean &...
in carnations; crisp
corsages of cremation
4 cultivar and cull-curation:
carrion in celeḅratįon... I crew
the creeping crypt's caụsation
(cold, consţant, calculations) and
crash the carnival's coronation:
acute-coronary calcification.
By colt, I collate cult cathedrals;
coļlapꜱe them in capsized cerebrals
ȯf Crowley Coffee / cannabidiol keto
& computer-crafted cradle credos...
crụshing the curtain's christening curse,
cut clinically-clean &...
#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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2 Comments
rainbow
Poems of Innocence
Broken loaves, abundant giving
Broken lives, abundant living―cab
no. 3. rainbow
curved promises
uncompromisingly
ordained by His
Supreme Divinity
mountains that slope
accommodating trees
full of the hope
that blooms on bended knees
rivers that run
unceasingly to find ...
Broken loaves, abundant giving
Broken lives, abundant living―cab
no. 3. rainbow
curved promises
uncompromisingly
ordained by His
Supreme Divinity
mountains that slope
accommodating trees
full of the hope
that blooms on bended knees
rivers that run
unceasingly to find ...
#hope
#rainbow
#nature
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9/11 on an 1199
With the rising tumult,
the colt split the rum
in my predator eyes
like 45-RPMs strike
100 Usain bolts on a
33-record role to reprise.
I was seeing quadraphonics
that poly-carbon hydroponics
could only surmise. As I went
supersonic, the rubber felt
ironic where the tires left
the tarmac and my two
wheels started to fly.
Flies like bullets
desmodromic
etched the tartar
from my brick, and
my mortar-piston flesh
turned to tartare slicks for this
redlined pick between my thighs. It's
September the...
the colt split the rum
in my predator eyes
like 45-RPMs strike
100 Usain bolts on a
33-record role to reprise.
I was seeing quadraphonics
that poly-carbon hydroponics
could only surmise. As I went
supersonic, the rubber felt
ironic where the tires left
the tarmac and my two
wheels started to fly.
Flies like bullets
desmodromic
etched the tartar
from my brick, and
my mortar-piston flesh
turned to tartare slicks for this
redlined pick between my thighs. It's
September the...
#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns
#zombies
#ThrillSeeking
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1 Comment
Through the Kaleidoscope
Acknowledge the darkness
but do not dwell on it —
months or years from now
with the clarity of hindsight,
you will see how it combines
with every colour of the rainbow
to create an image of great beauty.
Constantly changing; dynamic and vibrant,
YOUR life is a masterpiece.
Do you see it yet?
but do not dwell on it —
months or years from now
with the clarity of hindsight,
you will see how it combines
with every colour of the rainbow
to create an image of great beauty.
Constantly changing; dynamic and vibrant,
YOUR life is a masterpiece.
Do you see it yet?
#dark
#LifeStruggles
#rainbow
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3 Comments
Head-melt McGriddle
I'm gonna eat you like Cat & bibble;
labia lugs, tongue-swept under thẹ
rug-spilled kitten-kibble, no- acquittal!
You needa thug head-melt MȼGriddle.
The whole kit and kaboodle, not just
a litl nibble. Uṋskirt 'n' full coṃmitẗal,
I'll diddle that Skittle past the point
of pant and piddle. You're the bird,
I'm the worm on nitrous, wiggle, wiggle;
Hot Mama dill pickle! Whipits clit-spittle-
bug, kissin' hugs split down the middle.
Nipples stiff and shriveled, popcorn!
Buttermilk jugs, kettle swivelled. ...
labia lugs, tongue-swept under thẹ
rug-spilled kitten-kibble, no- acquittal!
You needa thug head-melt MȼGriddle.
The whole kit and kaboodle, not just
a litl nibble. Uṋskirt 'n' full coṃmitẗal,
I'll diddle that Skittle past the point
of pant and piddle. You're the bird,
I'm the worm on nitrous, wiggle, wiggle;
Hot Mama dill pickle! Whipits clit-spittle-
bug, kissin' hugs split down the middle.
Nipples stiff and shriveled, popcorn!
Buttermilk jugs, kettle swivelled. ...
#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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3 Comments
One-of-a-kind Romance
My heart is somewhere in the Palisadoes peninsula.
How I wish I could go back to that place again.
A fascinating woman anticipates my return.
I still think of the evening I walked away from her.
Oh how I long to embrace her in the sea breeze.
Alice and I were so in love with each other.
She at no time expected me to tell her goodbye.
I left her on the shore of the Caribbean Sea,
But my whole heart stayed behind with her.
How could I ever forget our one-of-a-kind romance?
We wished upon stars, and we painted rainbows. ...
How I wish I could go back to that place again.
A fascinating woman anticipates my return.
I still think of the evening I walked away from her.
Oh how I long to embrace her in the sea breeze.
Alice and I were so in love with each other.
She at no time expected me to tell her goodbye.
I left her on the shore of the Caribbean Sea,
But my whole heart stayed behind with her.
How could I ever forget our one-of-a-kind romance?
We wished upon stars, and we painted rainbows. ...
#love
#breakup
#sea
#stars
#rainbow
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3 Comments
Tinker Belle on Wheels
It's a shrinky-dink matter of ins-
tincts that bats its wrinkly winks at
a phat drink of roller-rink stink & pink.
He has no inkling of Brink's direct-link
to the clink when he sinks-in, slinks his
"slinky winky" into her tattered mink skin,
innocently inks some DNA (allegedly) then,
skinks away in a blink. It's his rat-fink, drinky
brain all outta sync when he plinks that kinky
trinket out at the precinct. That's just a baad
coinkydink. At best, deliṅquent hijinks when:
Tinker Belle, knowing all well, sprinkles her ...
tincts that bats its wrinkly winks at
a phat drink of roller-rink stink & pink.
He has no inkling of Brink's direct-link
to the clink when he sinks-in, slinks his
"slinky winky" into her tattered mink skin,
innocently inks some DNA (allegedly) then,
skinks away in a blink. It's his rat-fink, drinky
brain all outta sync when he plinks that kinky
trinket out at the precinct. That's just a baad
coinkydink. At best, deliṅquent hijinks when:
Tinker Belle, knowing all well, sprinkles her ...
#rainbow
#monsters
#fairies
#unicorns
#zombies
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S.S. Worship
Kleptomanic:
pussy👜 in a panic;
she hijacked my dick
like it's grandtheft Titanic
heading iceberg... Lettuce-
bẹgin in the mouth & finish
South of the Atlantic, ex-
ploding volcanic🌋6-6-6!
Cock-rrring, you heard???
I'm dick-dialin' drunk, all
hung up in you frantic☎️
bottom top-shelf on tap,
and driving eṛratịc;🚢🥴
😈S.S. Warship Satanic!
...Helvetic-poking holes
like a fully-autømatỉk 🔫
MPX on sabbatical- in ur
Burmuda...
pussy👜 in a panic;
she hijacked my dick
like it's grandtheft Titanic
heading iceberg... Lettuce-
bẹgin in the mouth & finish
South of the Atlantic, ex-
ploding volcanic🌋6-6-6!
Cock-rrring, you heard???
I'm dick-dialin' drunk, all
hung up in you frantic☎️
bottom top-shelf on tap,
and driving eṛratịc;🚢🥴
😈S.S. Warship Satanic!
...Helvetic-poking holes
like a fully-autømatỉk 🔫
MPX on sabbatical- in ur
Burmuda...
#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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We Bought A Haunted Nursing Home In Iowa
PUBLIC NOTICE:
Cait and I finally bought that haunted house in Waterloo, Iowa (with 200+ murders/deaths) formerly known as The Bonorden Nursing Home;
located at: 1020 West Third Street... 50701.
This house is in a state of suspended decay, fleshed-out as a paranormal escape-room bed & breakfast. We're open to visitors.
We've got cursed objects, horcruxes a plenty, death mirrors galore, dolls with attachments, dybbuk boxes, occult paraphernalia, torture tubs, tainted materials, human remains; stained: books, movies, apparel, furniture, etc!
...
Cait and I finally bought that haunted house in Waterloo, Iowa (with 200+ murders/deaths) formerly known as The Bonorden Nursing Home;
located at: 1020 West Third Street... 50701.
This house is in a state of suspended decay, fleshed-out as a paranormal escape-room bed & breakfast. We're open to visitors.
We've got cursed objects, horcruxes a plenty, death mirrors galore, dolls with attachments, dybbuk boxes, occult paraphernalia, torture tubs, tainted materials, human remains; stained: books, movies, apparel, furniture, etc!
...
#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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6 Comments
Waitin’ At The Station
You got rain, people, posters, trains, beetles, holsters, rain again
The band spittin’ out rainbows
The blues playing the blues
You got crowds in and out
All in a hurry or patient but going somewhere
Sun did the same depending on time of day and type of
Cloud took suns shine today
Sun wasn’t around to defend itself
Rain again
But that’s okay
Blues plays like I said before and I had to mention it again because oh did them blues play
No one seemed to notice but I barely noticed everyone not noticing because of
Don’t they hear them...
The band spittin’ out rainbows
The blues playing the blues
You got crowds in and out
All in a hurry or patient but going somewhere
Sun did the same depending on time of day and type of
Cloud took suns shine today
Sun wasn’t around to defend itself
Rain again
But that’s okay
Blues plays like I said before and I had to mention it again because oh did them blues play
No one seemed to notice but I barely noticed everyone not noticing because of
Don’t they hear them...
#rain
#rainbow
#music
#humankind
#trains
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