Poems About Rainbows Seeking Honest Critique
#rainbow
Poems about rainbows seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
One-of-a-kind Romance
My heart is somewhere in the Palisadoes peninsula.
How I wish I could go back to that place again.
A fascinating woman anticipates my return.
I still think of the evening I walked away from her.
Oh how I long to embrace her in the sea breeze.
Alice and I were so in love with each other.
She at no time expected me to tell her goodbye.
I left her on the shore of the Caribbean Sea,
But my whole heart stayed behind with her.
How could I ever forget our one-of-a-kind romance?
We wished upon stars, and we painted rainbows. ...
How I wish I could go back to that place again.
A fascinating woman anticipates my return.
I still think of the evening I walked away from her.
Oh how I long to embrace her in the sea breeze.
Alice and I were so in love with each other.
She at no time expected me to tell her goodbye.
I left her on the shore of the Caribbean Sea,
But my whole heart stayed behind with her.
How could I ever forget our one-of-a-kind romance?
We wished upon stars, and we painted rainbows. ...
#love
#breakup
#sea
#stars
#rainbow
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Tinker Belle on Wheels
It's a shrinky-dink matter of ins-
tincts that bats its wrinkly winks at
a phat drink of roller-rink stink & pink.
He has no inkling of Brink's direct-link
to the clink when he sinks-in, slinks his
"slinky winky" into her tattered mink skin,
innocently inks some DNA (allegedly) then,
skinks away in a blink. It's his rat-fink, drinky
brain all outta sync when he plinks that kinky
trinket out at the precinct. That's just a baad
coinkydink. At best, deliṅquent hijinks when:
Tinker Belle, knowing all well, sprinkles her ...
tincts that bats its wrinkly winks at
a phat drink of roller-rink stink & pink.
He has no inkling of Brink's direct-link
to the clink when he sinks-in, slinks his
"slinky winky" into her tattered mink skin,
innocently inks some DNA (allegedly) then,
skinks away in a blink. It's his rat-fink, drinky
brain all outta sync when he plinks that kinky
trinket out at the precinct. That's just a baad
coinkydink. At best, deliṅquent hijinks when:
Tinker Belle, knowing all well, sprinkles her ...
#rainbow
#monsters
#fairies
#unicorns
#zombies
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S.S. Worship
Kleptomanic:
pussy👜 in a panic;
she hijacked my dick
like it's grandtheft Titanic
heading iceberg... Lettuce-
bẹgin in the mouth & finish
South of the Atlantic, ex-
ploding volcanic🌋6-6-6!
Cock-rrring, you heard???
I'm dick-dialin' drunk, all
hung up in you frantic☎️
bottom top-shelf on tap,
and driving eṛratịc;🚢🥴
😈S.S. Warship Satanic!
...Helvetic-poking holes
like a fully-autømatỉk 🔫
MPX on sabbatical- in ur
Burmuda...
pussy👜 in a panic;
she hijacked my dick
like it's grandtheft Titanic
heading iceberg... Lettuce-
bẹgin in the mouth & finish
South of the Atlantic, ex-
ploding volcanic🌋6-6-6!
Cock-rrring, you heard???
I'm dick-dialin' drunk, all
hung up in you frantic☎️
bottom top-shelf on tap,
and driving eṛratịc;🚢🥴
😈S.S. Warship Satanic!
...Helvetic-poking holes
like a fully-autømatỉk 🔫
MPX on sabbatical- in ur
Burmuda...
#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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We Bought A Haunted Nursing Home In Iowa
PUBLIC NOTICE:
Cait and I finally bought that haunted house in Waterloo, Iowa (with 200+ murders/deaths) formerly known as The Bonorden Nursing Home;
located at: 1020 West Third Street... 50701.
This house is in a state of suspended decay, fleshed-out as a paranormal escape-room bed & breakfast. We're open to visitors.
We've got cursed objects, horcruxes a plenty, death mirrors galore, dolls with attachments, dybbuk boxes, occult paraphernalia, torture tubs, tainted materials, human remains; stained: books, movies, apparel, furniture, etc!
...
Cait and I finally bought that haunted house in Waterloo, Iowa (with 200+ murders/deaths) formerly known as The Bonorden Nursing Home;
located at: 1020 West Third Street... 50701.
This house is in a state of suspended decay, fleshed-out as a paranormal escape-room bed & breakfast. We're open to visitors.
We've got cursed objects, horcruxes a plenty, death mirrors galore, dolls with attachments, dybbuk boxes, occult paraphernalia, torture tubs, tainted materials, human remains; stained: books, movies, apparel, furniture, etc!
...
#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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Waitin’ At The Station
You got rain, people, posters, trains, beetles, holsters, rain again
The band spittin’ out rainbows
The blues playing the blues
You got crowds in and out
All in a hurry or patient but going somewhere
Sun did the same depending on time of day and type of
Cloud took suns shine today
Sun wasn’t around to defend itself
Rain again
But that’s okay
Blues plays like I said before and I had to mention it again because oh did them blues play
No one seemed to notice but I barely noticed everyone not noticing because of
Don’t they hear them...
The band spittin’ out rainbows
The blues playing the blues
You got crowds in and out
All in a hurry or patient but going somewhere
Sun did the same depending on time of day and type of
Cloud took suns shine today
Sun wasn’t around to defend itself
Rain again
But that’s okay
Blues plays like I said before and I had to mention it again because oh did them blues play
No one seemed to notice but I barely noticed everyone not noticing because of
Don’t they hear them...
#rain
#rainbow
#music
#humankind
#trains
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Smoke Screen
Many colors in the spectrum
Not one of them supreme
Conjoining them together
Yields an unconquerable team
It was all just a big dream
Awoke to a burning house
Races on different teams
Fire will never be doused
Not one of them supreme
Conjoining them together
Yields an unconquerable team
It was all just a big dream
Awoke to a burning house
Races on different teams
Fire will never be doused
#dreams
#rainbow
#fire
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Colorado Blues
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#rainbow
#monsters
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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rainbows in the night
climb through, the widow is open..
you bring a storm with you
it turns to gray: my room, these walls
seems it’s true, we don’t like it here
when clouds look over us
and my shadow runs from me
it doesn’t like your cursed company
.. yeah
we claw at skin
we break from within
and it shows
in black and blue
my mirror sees it
..and like a god
it just knows..
..my biggest tormentor, is what’s held inside.
yeah, it’s dark in here
but stay near
and let it settle.. ...
you bring a storm with you
it turns to gray: my room, these walls
seems it’s true, we don’t like it here
when clouds look over us
and my shadow runs from me
it doesn’t like your cursed company
.. yeah
we claw at skin
we break from within
and it shows
in black and blue
my mirror sees it
..and like a god
it just knows..
..my biggest tormentor, is what’s held inside.
yeah, it’s dark in here
but stay near
and let it settle.. ...
#depression
#loneliness
#SelfHarm
#bipolar
#rainbow
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Rainbow Strike
violent rainbows
that's how my mind goes
in beauty
there's fear
the great destroyer coming near
inside
safe and warm
longing
for the next storm
blue skies
are full of lies
there's nothing like
a good rainbow strike
that's how my mind goes
in beauty
there's fear
the great destroyer coming near
inside
safe and warm
longing
for the next storm
blue skies
are full of lies
there's nothing like
a good rainbow strike
#storm
#rainbow
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8 Comments
Evening shopping musings (NaPoWriMo 2022 #26)
The price of petrol
is rising,
but as I
don't have a car
I don't particularly
have a care,
I wonder how
far that'll last.
Hobby stores are vibrant bazaars
brimming with bits and bobs
the colour of rainbows
and even somethings in
black.
The transcending affirmation
of possibilities and creation,
because even humble buttons
can be more
if covered
in glitter
or stuck on
coloured
paper.
is rising,
but as I
don't have a car
I don't particularly
have a care,
I wonder how
far that'll last.
Hobby stores are vibrant bazaars
brimming with bits and bobs
the colour of rainbows
and even somethings in
black.
The transcending affirmation
of possibilities and creation,
because even humble buttons
can be more
if covered
in glitter
or stuck on
coloured
paper.
#rainbow
#cars
#art
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3 Comments
kaleidoscope
passionate life-blood; powerful aggression; loves healing, vigorous anger.
warning: visible neon zeal bursting forth fresh youthful optimism.
bright sun rays happily bathing golden cowards, lighting jaundiced joys;
nature's faithfulness leaves jealous monsters growing renewable energy; giving birth.
calm, truthful clarity dumps doldrums of despair; open skies cry,
darkening dusk spills midnight ink, prophesying
mysterious rare royal luxury, satisfying sensitive spirituality.
warning: visible neon zeal bursting forth fresh youthful optimism.
bright sun rays happily bathing golden cowards, lighting jaundiced joys;
nature's faithfulness leaves jealous monsters growing renewable energy; giving birth.
calm, truthful clarity dumps doldrums of despair; open skies cry,
darkening dusk spills midnight ink, prophesying
mysterious rare royal luxury, satisfying sensitive spirituality.
#rainbow
#art
#NaPoWriMo2022
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Cambodia
Junsin Runi Queen
The mountainous need I gleam
Would be such sparkling
Wife for me but listen
Queen Juni like titties
Still I aluv u bitch
The mountainous need I gleam
Would be such sparkling
Wife for me but listen
Queen Juni like titties
Still I aluv u bitch
#rainbow
#haiku
#ForbiddenLove #bisexual
#ForbiddenLove #bisexual
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DU Poetry : Poems About Rainbows Seeking Honest Critique